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Avani

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Posted: 14 years ago

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welcum back 2 IF di...n congo on ur new thread..lub ew....
wooow di i loved it....maaneet romance...thnk god old MSK is back n love his GEET yeyeyye m jumping in joy bt u didnt give precap....now waiting 4 nxt part...update soon...

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Radhika

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

congrats for new thread ..........nice update dear.......

ur all ff's r awesome.....actually i was a silent reader...

pls add me to ur pm list

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maansee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

congrets for new thread and welcome back

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maansi007

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Posted: 14 years ago

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thankgod u came bak m so happy thanku thank u n amazng part

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gunjar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

Congrats...... on ur new thread Thanks alot naddiya Awesome update......love it

waiting for ur next update.........

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Nadia

@naddiya26

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: sindu555
Congo for the new thread .,... who says u cant write romance ... i loved the romantic maneet moments ....

loved Geet's mischief .. i hope Maan realizes his mistake soon... and speak up to Geet about it

continue super soon

love
Sana

i think my self ,that i cannot write romance ... 😳

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saba

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

me happy
naadiya u r d bst plzzz cont vvv soon

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zaara2212

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Posted: 14 years ago

#38

congrats on the new thread..

thanks for the update

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Mamatha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#39

Awesome update..............& congrats on new thread🥳

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Nadia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#40

despair 42

Geet felt shy ..
Maan: whisper "you look so cute when you blush"
Geet: hide her self in blanket.
Maan: where were you when i called you?
Geet: i was out Adi came to get hot pot..
Maan: oh he was the cat
Geet; cat...
Maan: yes i called you as i heard some noise when didnot got reply i thought there is a cat in kitchen.
Geet: laughed..ADI got so sacred he ran out.she came more close to ...to kill the shiver
Maan: are you feeling cold?
Geet; yes
Maan: who ask you to get wet?
Geet; bus smiled..
Maan:pagal ho wear something warm.
Geet: i was changing you pull me..
Maan: naughtily smiled "did i"
Geet: you close your eyes i will go
Maan: why?
Geet: sneeze again...
Maan: ok you go see i closed my eyes
Geet: smiled ....pull the blanket wrap around her walk to washroom
Maan: i can't keep my self away from her.
Geet: was not finding any warm clothes she wore Maan sweater. ..was about to walk out make coffee for her self
Maan: where are you going?he got up
Geet: you go & freshen up i will make coffee ...
Maan: why you are wearing my sweater ? he pull it
Geet: i can wear it . you go..
Maan: it will charge you.
Geet: ok charge right now i will become ice-lolly if i don't wear this.
Maan: smiled.you & your example .
Geet: kulfi is correct word Maan rub her hands.walk out..
Maan: pat her.. went to freshen up.
Geet: quickly made Coffee ,warm their dinner... placed all thing in tray walk to bed room.
Maan:wah meri mrs is very fast..
Geet: : dry your hairs.. picked up towel
Maan: why ?
Geet: aap ko bhi bemara hona ha ...dry his hairs.
Maan: smiled ... "if i will, you will take care of me that why it is not a bad idea"
Geet: sneeze.
Maan: you look so cute ..
Geet; aap bhi na Maan... grab tissues wipe her nose
Maan: really looking kuchi kuchi... pull her cheeks.
Geet: uff you were better when you were angry... ?
Maan hug her kon tang kar raha ha mera baby ko
Geet: aap
Maan really
Geet: yes .. she tuck in blanket again.
Maan ok i will give you a surprise .... lets have dinner first.
Geet: kya surprise .
Maan eat first gave her plate.
Geet: oh i forgot to show you some thing she jump out of bed ran to living room brought painting.
Maan: wow Geet this is really beautiful
Geet: for you gave him
Maan please do me a favour get my laptop bag
Geet: sure she got
Maan: thank you
Geet: you are saying me thanks are you ok
Maan: ok sorry baba.
Geet what you are up to?
Maan was searching something in his bag."you finish your dinner"
Geet: why you are scolding me?
Maan: i want to give you surprise & you are just looking at me.
Geet: ok she turn her face to tv with her plate.... "happy"
Maan: yes...
Geet: pata ha DEV bhai shifted to Delhi?
Maan: how you know?
Geet: i called home
Maan: thats good.
Geet; didi is very angry from you.
Maan: why ?
Geet:she said you are so busy that you didnot called at home..
Maan: you did not told her that i was trying but it didnot connected.
Geet: no why should i tell ? acha ha you get some scolding..
Maan: theek ha theek ha..
Geet: & she said tomorrow dadi & beejee are coming here..
Maan: why? shocked..
Geet; ask them
Maan: you didnot stop them ..
Geet: why should i ?
Maan: bolti na it is our . paused ..heard Geet laughter.... you ... pull her..
Geet: kya ha .. if i will see then you will shout...
Maan: i will not come here.
Geet; kya ha ?
Maan as you have hobbies i too had few.
Geet: what?
Maan: i use to make music .. years back i made this never put words to it today i will ... he played on his laptop....
sing

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rdcp1KEXrXE&feature=channel_video_title[/YOUTUBE]

You're the angel in my dreams i see (made her sit next to him)
I wanna be with you forever and ever
You're the angel that i need
Who makes me so complete
I wanna be without you never
Beauty in grace (grace)
Fashion of your smiley face
Dat's all enough my bright sun days

Geet: wow Maan

Maan: placed his finger on her lips .
he sing
Ek pari paagal si, aur kuch nadaan si (pull her ears )
Door pardes se aai mehmaan si ( kissed her cheek)
Baarish mein bheegti( kissed her head)

Sab se alag, sab se juda, anjaan si..

Geet : looked at him ..murmur...Sa ni sa pa ma ga re ma

Sa ni sa pa ma ga re ma
Ma pa dha pa ga re sa re ma ni pa ma

Maan... sing

Mahuve ka pee ke utara, mausam bhi dol raha tha

Geet: Sing

I need a something, i need a sweet something
I feel just sayin' in my heartbeat

Maan: smiled Aa ke kaanon mein us ke kuch to bhi bol raha tha (whisper in her ears.. I love you)
Lag ke seene se mil rahe thy aise ( pull hug her tight)
Jaise barson ki puraani pehchaan thi ...

Geet :Murmur

Sa ni sa pa ma ga re ma

Sa ni sa pa ma ga re ma
Ma pa dha pa ga re sa re ma ni pa ma

Maan: sing .. took her hand in his

Waqt ki shaakh se zindagi jorr rahi thi
Lamhe jo ninda, gin gin bator rahi thi
Hoti yahaan wahaan titliyon ki tarah
Saawan ki rimjhim badmaashiyon pe mehrbaan thi

Maan: hug her tight...
Geet i never though you are so romantic.
Maan: smiled you made me...
Geet; if i same for you.. by the way why you didnt became a singer.. she again sneeze
Maan: smiled i just sang for you ...
Geet; so sweet mere kuchi kuchi ... but i am not pagal
Maan: you are now lay down you are bit warm... pull her more close
Geet; i am still dreaming... she played her cell... Maan voice ego...
Maan: you recored
Geet; how could i miss it .... hug him tightly
Maan: Geet i will not run.. or i can't..
Geet; kissed his chin: shhhhh... I love you bus .. hide her self in his arms.
Maan: kissed her fore head ... sleep ...
Geet; your tablets
Maan; i will eat.
Geet; promise
Maan: yes...
Geet; closed her eyes... she slept as she was having temperature...
Maan: took her cell as he was about to keep ... a sms came.. sorry geet it is bad habit but i am reading.
Veer... "I love you sweet heart sweet dreams see you tomorrow as we decided "
Maan : read the sender name again ... he delete the sms....looked at geet... he try to make her lay down but he could not as she was hold him very tight ... he just switched channel ... "what is this? " he was not getting ... he many time look at Geet .. He just got all silly thoughts , ... he wanted to wake her up but didnot "let her play this game " gave a weak smile.. just watching Tv he too slept....

to be cont..... are you guys not liking the story tell me i will end ...do comment

Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago

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