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Posted: 14 years ago

despair 45

Kumkum: wake up Geet pat her cheek.
Geet: where am i ?
Kumkum : Bangalore
Geet: hmmmm... self thought now you will never be able to find me. i am very far from you.she try to get up... her head spin.
Kumkum : aram se kya huwa..
Geet; i am fine
Sumit: chalana ha yeh nai...
Kumkum wait.
Sumit : who is she?
Kumkum: my sister
Sumit: pull kumkum... kon ha yeh i never saw her in last 12 years of our married life.
Kumkum: is it must we should have blood relation. some time we do have relation of pain .
Sumit : why don't you open an ngo.?
Kumkum: not a bad idea
Sumit: don't dare try .
Kumkum: ok but Geet is coming with us.
Geet: was just standing looking at their faces.
Sumit: looked at her don't look like this every husband & wife fight like that.
Kumkum : pull Geet in her car..
Sumit : I didn't said ok.
Kumkum: i am either asking you, home is mine too so i can keep guest.
Geet: didi If he does not like i will stay some where else.
Kumkum: pagal ho where you will go in night. ..Sumit sit .
Sumit: if you is a thief then
Kumkum: i have eye to judge people
Geet: bhai i will go tomorrow.
Sumit: murmur yes after stealing.
Kumkum: don't listen him... check her forehead you are still warm.
Sumit: now open hospital.
Kumkmu: If driver aur Geet was not there i would have sort you out.
Geet; looked at them ...
Sumit:smiled.
Kumkum: dekha he is ok now.
They reached home Kumkum kids were waiting for them...
Aashka: who is she ?
Kumkum : your didi take her in your room i have to talk to your papa.
Aashka: come didi...
Geet: walk in.
Aashka: you freshen up i will come ..
Geet; look around"what i have done ? how much Maan would be worried Kumkum didi & sumit bhai was too fighting,every husband & wife fight,i will call him ? she search her purse for cell... she take out was about to switch on,"no i have done right, he really hurt" me she kept it back. walked to wash room splash water on her face. looked her self in mirror. self thought .. i did wrong, dadi beejee would be worried i will call them. she walk out... "but if i will call them they will tell him i am here , i will not...she was feeling tired & stress out just sat...


At Maan place.
ADI: sir it is rain if you stand like this you will get sick
Maan: Geet ko kidnap tou nai kiya.
ADI: sir brij is in jail..
Maan: may be some one else
ADI: lets us inform police
Maan: no if she her self gone somewhere then ..
ADI: we should then wait.. he pull Maan In
Maan: meri Geet ... he look around every thing was lying like that ..
ADI: sir you change clothes .
Maan :looked at his shirt ..he could still feel her touch , he recollected ... in morning when he was going out.. Geet shouted "Maan suna tou you have closed wrong button... what people will say how is his wife can't help him in dressing up.. "she closed it correctly. a smiled came on his lips... self though" they will not say you ,they will say me who didn't look after his caring wife"
ADI: sir coffee
Maan: ADI thanks ...he kept mug on table
ADI: sir please take it,
Maan: i will
ADI:Sir i will go to my cottage will be back in ten mins
Maan:Adi please i want to be alone..
ADI:sir you are.
Maan: please, i will call you if i need your help.
ADI looked at him
Maan: was very down ..
ADI: ok he was about to go out ,SIR we will find her.
Maan smiled.. yes we will.
ADI: left .
by Shiwani Singh
Maan :Looked at the table there was a sketch touch it with his hand... try to feel her touch.. he turn on Tv...
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZyZ2bA0aJmg&feature=player_embedded[/YOUTUBE]
tere bin / besides you
sanu sohnia / my love
koi hor nahio labhna / i shan't find another
jo dave / who'll give
ruh nu sakun / peace to my soul
chukke jo nakhra mera / and indulge me
Echo in empty room...
Maan: smiled so true.. he taken out his cell started looking at Geet pictures... (do check the slide video pic.)
he look at the first picture which he capture , when she was asleep . he smiled..My sleeping beauty kissed the pic..he saw all her pics again and again .."why you left me Geet? i am feeling so empty ...you have spoiled me , now i am feeling how much i need you . i came to know that in 5 hours time.

Maan:he picked up her diary sorry Geet ... he open the page where her pen was...read" what is the pain of losing some one ? how it feel ? only those people can feel who had seen life closely ,it is easy to love but very difficult to see your loved one ignoring you,or trying to push you away from himself. pyar ka daard or daar kya ha ????
Maan : what you wanted ti say Geet? he just closed the diary he try to call her ..again and he got same response.."Powered off". Geet open it if you ever loved me...he try again
at Geet placed KUMKUM daughter was playing with Geet cell...
Geet: give me that please ..
Aashka: didi charging khatam ha let me charge it.
Geet: no need.... she accidentally press cell open ... Maan ring came... Geet uff ..she looked at it her hand shiver with strange kind of feeling...
Maan: smiled you LOVE ME ....
I will find you ....he just keep on dialing..... on other side Geet keep on listening his song which he played for her ..she many time switch on cell to see if he sms, and many time cell vibrate with his miss bell, both played hide and seek for the whole night.


To be cont...
Any Guess how they will find each other?
someone asked me why i waste my time my energy in writing FF's what i gain ? "I love the smile on my readers face when they enjoy , that is least i can do for humanity . if only one person is relaxed from her stress out life , i gain my energy was not wasted , may be i will not be there it will be there , for readers to come . money is not every thing ..right....
do comment.
Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

Hmmmm I'm very confused. Geet is the one who was playing this game to fix maan. She purposely showed him that she has started to like veer so maan in jealously would start to be the same strong man again . And just when he started to do exactly what geet had planned..... She left him.
I don't get Geet here .... Sure maan was angry but what else a person can do when his wife is giving him all clues that she possibly has an affair. That mustve been a horrible feeling for him to realize that since he is now almost paralayized , my wife is moving on.
I can understnad geet mustve felt sad that maan didn't trust her but that was the game.
I don't know , I thought geet was the girl who would stand with him through thick n thin. ..... Besides I really thought that whn maan would go back in the evening to their cottage, geet would have it all decorated to celebrate his health again and then in her musical laugh would tell him how wrong he was to fall for her gameplan. She would prove to him that if he thinks , he is smart..... Then geet is smarter

sorry to confuse you as both are now showing ego not listening their heart ,,dear if they had meet then it would be end sorry for dragging the story a little....
Maan is dumb head ....
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Posted: 14 years ago
Gud update dear...luved it..continue soon..Hope they find each other soon..n luv the hide n seek..!!

Rohini

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Posted: 14 years ago
Ur ff defiantely made me smile awesome update
Love ur ff
Pm me ur updates :)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ayu14

Ur ff defiantely made me smile awesome update
Love ur ff
Pm me ur updates :)

add me as buddy dear 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
"someone asked me why i waste my time my energy in writing FF's what i gain ? "I love the smile on my readers face when they enjoy , that is least i can do for humanity . if only one person is relaxed from her stress out life , i gain my energy was not wasted , may be i will not be there it will be there , for readers to come . money is not every thing ..right...."---exactly

thanks for writing the ff for us..........i hv always enjoyed reading ur ff....

well this update.....i feel sad sad as they r away..........but i am sure they will get back soon...........jab dooriyan badegi tabhi toh pyar badegi.........loving it...........waiting for the next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow great maan missing her now its good geet ka bhi wahi haal hai bechare dono i wish sumit ans geet phone and call maan tab aayega maza...sumit and kumkum sweet fight so sweet .

Love it dear thank you for pm sweetooo
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update. How much Maan is missing Geet. Do continue soon.? Do you plan to update your other FF "Simply Love?"
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Posted: 14 years ago
nic update
thanx nadiya 4 al ur efforts & time 4 providing us such a beautiful ff
thanx 4 pm
do continue soon............................
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Posted: 14 years ago
fabolous update
waiting 4 nxt

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