MG FF Jaisi karni waisi bharni Pt 6,7,8 Pg 26 12/6 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Mariam94

sounding interesting
do continue
and plz do aad me to ur pm list

Thanx a lot
Will surely Pm u
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: sharmake11

love it it sounds interesting & amazing concept pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn pls do pm me

Thanx a lot
Continue soon so shorry im lazy 😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
Le taali hehehehehe
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: preethia

intro is interesting..............

tit for tat sounds interesting..........
pl add me to ur pm list

Thanx for the view
Thanx a lot
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: siroilily

interesting😍

plis start soon n add me to ur pm list😳

Thanx a lot
Strt soon im lazy sho shorry for that😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

"my stimulus" or "stimulant" can b a the title

.... i mean if they react to eachother.
ofcourse it's just a suggestion and i don't expect u to take it unless it goes with u'r story's idea.😉

since u r still working with the idea..can u think about this.... i wud like to have sum personality of her own. this kinda is strange that if u r luvd u'll luv back but if sum1 is angry then instead of understanding the underlying anger...u just get angry. that won't b a good trait..it's as if sum1 still needs to make a person outta them.

Really unique title
Thanx for that
I got ur point sumwhr but i wuld love if u get more clearer
Im mean in simple words wat u meant
I wuld surely use it di
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: luvabbybaby

AFSHA! You r officially a ff writer! Muwahh mera bacha! tOTALLY PM ME AND i CAN NOT WAIT!

Love
Liz

If ur ready to be my mother n keep ur hand on my head im ready to write this FF longer Well thanx a lot Liz
It means a lot wen it cums frm u😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: MaaneetLuverr

awesome intro
Du add me 2 PM list plz
Love the name TIT FOR TAT!!
Cont soon Xx...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: macho_muffin

heyyyy afsha jaan OMGGGGG this sounds soo interesting!! and i love ur idea of her giving it back to him...there have been too many ideas on the hero playing prank on the heroine and then they fall in love later on so we won't use that....u don't worry, tom we will think of something hatke😉 count me in ur pm list already😉 p.s. i have an idea but i don't wanna talk about it here so will discuss in our thread tom!

Hi my shweeheart Thanx
Ab hum hain toh hatke toh hoga hi
I knw ull be there in my pm list if i write worst also😆😆😆
Frnds hote kis liye hai😉😆😆
PS noted that😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
1st Part

Unfaithful
Rihanna

Story of my life searching for the right
But it keeps avoiding me
Sorrow in my soul cause it seems that wrong
Really loves my company

He's more than a man and this is more than love
The reason that the sky is blue
The clouds are rolling in because I'm gone again
And to him I just can't be true

And I know that he knows I'm unfaithful
And it kills him inside
To know that I am happy with some other guy
I can see him dying

I don't wanna do this anymore
I don't wanna be the reason why
Everytime I walk out the door
I see him die a little more inside
I don't wanna hurt him anymore
I don't wanna take away his life
I don't wanna be...a murderer

I feel it in the air as I'm doing my hair
Preparing for another date
A kiss upon my cheek as he reluctantly
Asks if I'm gonna be out late

I say I won't be long just hanging with the girls
A lie I didn't have to tell
Because we both know where I'm about to go
And we know it very well

Cause I know that he knows I'm unfaithful
And it kills him inside
To know that I am happy with some other guy
I can see him dying

I don't wanna do this anymore
I don't wanna be the reason why
Everytime I walk out the door
I see him die a little more inside
I don't wanna hurt him anymore
I don't wanna take away his life
I don't wanna be...a murderer

Our love, his trust
I might as well take a gun and put it to his head
Get it over with
I don't wanna do this
Anymore
Uh
Anymore (anymore)

I don't wanna do this anymore
I don't wanna be the reason why
And everytime I walk out the door
I see him die a little more inside
And I don't wanna hurt him anymore
I don't wanna take away his life
I don't wanna be...a murderer (a murderer)

This is my fav song you know why because this song changed my life
It was tym when i got to know he wasnt faithful to me and say it in filmy style this song played in my FM hahahahahaha yeah im feeling lik laughing as it gives pain to evn think about that, a rememberence of that also kills me to death but its life and we should move on
From that tym this song is my fav you konw why because this song gave me the idea if he is unfaithful evn i can be
He made me go through the pain even i have the right to do the same with him
Our relation was just like that if he gives me sumthg i would always return that wit my extra touch
So when he gave me pain i jus culdnt sit back and take it
Lik i always do i had to give him that back and i did that
I knw i was stupid i could jus confront him make him relaise his mistake and get back to my happy life
But NOPE i wanted him to feel the same i went through when i saw him in sumone else arms
I wanted him to clench his fist till his knuckels get white when he sees me kissing someone
I wanted his heart to pierce when i say I Love You just fakely to him but wit emotions to someone else
I wanted him to wait for me but i cmme and sleep in next room without his knwledge
I wanted him to see me get ready and go for the date wit someone else in frnt on him
I wanted to do all this as these were the things he did to me
I like mad use to thnk he is telling me truth and use to trust but nope he was toh making me idiot
He was using he was taking me for granted It hurted a lot
I wasnt a girl who could trust anyone or fall in love
But as they say we do make mistake adn trusting n falling in love wit him was the biggest mistake of my life
Love it strted so awesumly
I was on seventh heaven with that feeling but somewhere my mind had said please be careful
But in love who listens to the mind and i also did that and here im alone telling ull my stry
Ull hav bumpy ride
It has funny moments, love, passion, romance, desire and the most give n take of our relation
Relation oops hehehehe do we hav that
I jus dnt knw
Hope while telling u my story i get my answer for it

Ok guys
Here is my 1st part
My updates will be weakly
Shorry im lazy
PM list can be messed as im nt gud at it samjha karo im new in to this😉😆😆😆
Wat ull want in the stry plz tell
Be frank viwes ideas comments criticism all are allowed
Plz be truthful
PS Muffin meri Jaan thanx a lot for the support Love u
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