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Posted: 14 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: ananya95

wonderful updt yaar but i think its lakdi ki kathi
is the kidnapped guy maan?
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm


thanks for pointing it out
corrected😊
plz point out my mistakes in future too...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
awesome update .........👍🏼👏
i loved it .......do continue ❤️

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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
interesting start
hmm is it maan?
con't soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
pliz continue soon n add me to ur pm list😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
awesome update.
loved it.
interesting one.
update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
Really interesting so far, I wonder who gets kidnapped & whose behind it! Update soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27

Part 2

Maan's narration

I was waiting near a park for my girl friend simran...

My happiness grew no bounds...

But god planned another awesome surprise for me...

A girl was batting nearby and was asking a kid to bowl soon...

N as soon as I saw simran I started walking no running towards her with red roses bouquet in my hand...

Simran was too waving at me to come soon on the other side of the tiny road'...

Meanwhile that girl hit a sixer'...all the children started shouting to catch it..

That ball hit the golf car's glass'...the driver lost the control and hit a motor bike coming in the opposite direction'...

In order to save himself from the disaster the driver of a sumo diverted his vehicle on which I was running'...

That sumo hit me'...I flew in the air hit the ground and became unconscious uttering simran's name'...

At last I opened my eyes in the hospital'...

In the hospital

As I was regaining my consciousness bit by bit

I heard two nurses talking'...

Is Dr.Anand coming for rounds?

No dear'he is already having rounds with simran

Who is this simran?

This patient's girl friend'

Oh toh abhi isko chodke doctor ko jaal mein phasa liya??

Hey don't be loud'he might feel bad if he is conscious'...

What can this poor fellow do even if he's conscious?? He is helpless'...

Saying so they left the room'...

I opened my eyes and saw simran and anand talking close to each-other and giggling'...Anand was giving simran the same flowers which I took for her'...

I felt very bad..frustrated with myself I closed my eyes and covered myself with blanket...

Maan's narration ends

After 3 months

In a news channel'...

A news reporter says'...

This afternoon in kukatpally's KPHP colony'...a 10year old girl was found working in a famous doctors' couple house'...this was strictly opposed by DEEKSHA CHILD WELFARE ASSOCIATION chairman Mrs. Savitri Khurana'...

That child was physically assaulted and wasn't even given food..

The chairman coulnt bare all this violence against a small child and even filed a complaint against them in police station'...but the doctors claimed themselves to be innocent'...

A dog named chocolate was found watching this news'...

News reporter to savitri khurana..madam what message do you want to give to the society regarding this pathetic situation?

CONDENM CHILD LABOUR

In the kitchen of that home

Don't you know this is also a sort of child labour? I too will put a case on you'...

Maan spoke with teary eyes cutting onions'...

Savitri came and put a hand around his neck and with the other touched caressed his stubble and said

Child? Aur tum? Tumhare diaper badalna maine 20 saal pehle hi band kar diya tha maan'...

Maa..!!!

Kya maa.. saying so she sat on the dining table outside the kitchen

Accha who chodo..kal tumne kya kaha tha? Kaha jaogi tum? maan too joined his mother

Tumhari behan ke ghar..

Than what was that social service and child lobour? You go and do whatever you want'...but apne sehat ka khayal karo na maa...'itni dhup mein who sab karne ki kya zarurat thi?

This is iron body maan'...don't worry about it'...

Haan haan darling tabhi toh breathlessness and joint-pains bas din mein chaar paanch baar hi aati jati rehti hai'...

tumhara khayal rakhne ke liye main hoon'...agar tumhe kuch ho gaya toh mera khayal kaun rakhega??

Khayal se yaad aaya..Mr. Tv 5 you got a wedding invitation'...

Wedding invitation? Mere liye? Kis useless fellow ne bheja hai??

Simran



thank you so very much for reading this part...
i hope you like it if you are proceeding with the next part...
please dont forget to comment at the end...😊


Edited by millie_maaneet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
very beautiful part.feel sad 4 Maan
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
awesome update
Awww feel bad 4 Maan as dat Simran cheated on him
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
awesome update di
loved it loadz
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
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