FF Pyaar Ka Woh Pehla EhsasTHRD2-NOTE/90 - Page 23

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I stared at his arm in shock.Maan turned to look at me.

Maan:Whats wrong?

Geet:Your arm... What...??

Maan:Whats wrong with my arm?

He looked down at his arm and smiled a radiant smile,Shocking me.

Geet:Youre smiling? WHAT did that? It must hurt so much,OMG!! Why didn't you say anything? And you say i hide things from you? Whats this? Huh?

He carried on smiling,infuriating me.How could he be so happy in pain? I had no idea!! He was weird,But i suppose i fell for weird people.He shifted my body so i was lying with my head on his lap and my feet on my own chair.

Geet:Dont lift me,You'll hurt you arm more,Idiot!!

Maan:I wont.Now look at me.

I looked up at him,(which wasn't hard as i was lying on him so i had no other option but to look at him) and he looked around before continuing.The sweet lady was sleeping.

Maan:Guess how it happened.

Geet:I've tried.I cant, so spill.

Maan:Ok,So which persons stratch wouldn't hurt me? Affect me at all?

Geet:I don't know,Just tell me Maan.

Maan:YOU did it.

Geet:No,I didn't.Why would i scratch you? I love you.

Maan:Sometimes,Youre quite slow.Think carefully.And I know you love me but some marks are made out of LOVE.

Geet:No,Their not. Now tell me.Maan,Please.

Maan:I'll break it down.What did we do at the hotel?

Geet:Ermm...Check in,Go to our room,Take my shoes off,Talk,You went to the bathroom,I fainted,You looked after me,I woke up,You were annoyed but were fine after,Meera rang,We slept,I had a shower,Met Angad,we checked out.THE END.

Maan:So you remember everything apart from what you need to remember? The thing i thought you'd say first.

He smirked at me.Was he annoyed? No,He just hugged me,Hes fine.And finally,I clicked on.I pulled his head down and whispered"We had sex as well ".He smiled even bigger this time.

Maan: Oh No,Geet!! You don't say!!! Finally,You click on.Wow!!

He burst out laughing and so did i.I was so slow sometimes,He was right.

Geet:But what does that have to do with anything?

Maan:Thats when you scratched me.

Geet:But..? How..?

I cast my thoughts back to this morning,And i blushed.Still.Anyway,I remembered hugging him,Pulling him closer and...Digging my nails into his back and arms.I did do it,Oh God!!! I buried my face in his arms,I was so embarrassed.He rubbed his hands against my back.

Geet:When did you find out?

Maan:This morning,When i got dressed.

Geet:And you didn't tell me?

Maan:There was no need.I didn't care.

Geet:You didn't care? Right,Until it heels and disappears,Youre not wearing half sleeve tops!!!

Maan:But Geet...?

Geet:Sshhh,Im saying this as your WIFE.So you have to agree.

Maan:(smirking)Anything to hear you calling yourself my Wife.I must be the luckiest person ever.

Geet:No,Just weird.

Maan:Geet,What are we going to do when we land? I mean my family don't even know were married.

Geet:Mine do, so im fine.I think we should stay there when we land,Itll be evening and then,in the morning you can go talk to them about it.

Maan:Hmmm...Thats fine but...

Geet:Annie? Hmm...I know.What should we do? You said you'd talk to her.

Maan:I know.But i need to be careful.I don't want to hurt her.I like her,As a friend.

Geet:Maybe we made the wrong choice.We shouldn't have got married.

Maan:(hurt)You regret it?

Oh God,What was i saying? That was stupid of me.

Geet:No,No.I would never regret it,No matter what happened.But it would make things alot easier with Annie.

Maan:But then,When we did get married in India,Wouldnt she come? Shes your BFF.Atleast this way,She wasn't there and wont have to see us together.

Geet:College? Wont that hurt her? When we're together there?

Maan:It will but...Oh god,I don't know.I'll tell her somehow,Carefully.Without hurting her feelings.Lets not think about it now.

Geet:Ok.Lets talk about something else.So,Where are we going to stay in India? At your house or on our own?

Maan:Errmmm...I don't know.I didn't think about that.What do you want to do?

Geet:I don't mind.Unless you have an evil stepmother and 3 dogs.Then,its on our own!!!

Maan:(laughs) No,I don't.We'll stay at mine for a bit then look for our own house,I think.

Geet:Ok.You know,Im so going to fail my A-levels because of you.Ive had a month off in New York and exams are in 3 weeks.

Maan:So am i.We study together,Remember?

Geet:But youre clever.

Maan:I'll tutor you.

Geet:Yeah.Right.You wont have time.

He lay his head on my lap and smiled at me.

Maan:I'll always have time for you.

Geet:I know.This flights taking ages.

Maan:Go to sleep,Itll help.I am,On your laps,How relaxing!!!

Geet:Goodnight.But im not tired.I'll stay awake.

Maan:Ok.

He closed his eyes and went to sleep.I could tell because his breathing became erratic and hollow.I gazed outside and watched the sun disappear and the moon take over.Time passed,4 hours.He still slept.I flicked through the channels,Only one program was worth watching:Geet-Hui Sabse Parayi and that ended quickly,Half an hour flew past with their cute bickering and passionate romance.I wished it was an hour special!!! How Funny,It was even named after me.The person sat behind me had their Ipod on way too loud,I could hear every word.It was a song i liked and was obseesed with at the moment,Te Amo from the new film Dum Maaro Dum.I'd take Maan to watch it,I promised myself.A few minutes later,I found myself singing to it.

SONG SEQUENCE: Te Amo from the new film Dum Maaro Dum.Maan-Geet Both sing the song in parts,Maans blue,Geet pink.,Annie Red.Pls play the song whilst reading.From 2:11 onwards.

Geet:Kabhi Lage Raaton Mey Mein Khaabon Se Baatein Karo,

Geet Strokes Maans Hair

Subho Ho Bhi Khaabon Ko Mey Kaaboo Karoo.

Geet Blinks And Rests Her Head On Maan

Kabhi Lage Taro Se Hi Uchey Uraahney Bharoo

Maan Wakes And Looks At Her

Kabhi Lage Baadalon Se Jeybey Bharoo.

Geet Looks Out Of The Window.

Maan:Te Amo,Me Te Amo Taare Ghinoo Tere Liye.

Maan Gets Up And Hugs Geet Around The Waist.

Te Amo ,Me Te Amo Saare Chunoo Tere Liye.

He Points Outside To The Stars And Strokes Her Cheek.

Khab Saare Bhunoo Tere Hi Tere Liye

He Looks At Her Longingly.

Falling So Crazy In Love.

He Kisses Her On The Cheek.

Geet:Te Amo,Me Te Amo Taare Ghinoo Tere Liye.

She points to each star and looks at Maan.

Te Amo ,Me Te Amo Saare Chunoo Tere Liye.

She Hugs Him And Rests Her Head On His Chest.

MUSIC BREAK:MAAN-GEET GET OFF PLANE,WALK OUTSIDE.ANNIE IS STOOD WAITING.THEY LOOK AT EACH OTHER.

Annie: Kabhi Lage Miliy Nahi Tumse Mey Khaabon Me Bhi

Looking At Maan

Kabhi Lage Kahey To Hai Rishta Koi

Looks At Maan-Geets Hands Together.

Kabhi Laghey Choun Tumhe Yu Hin Khayaalon Mey Hi

Runs Towards Maan Crying

Kabhi Lage Nahi Nahi Chorey Nahi

Hugs Him.

Maan:(Looks At Geet Whilst Saying This)

Te Amo,Me Te Amo Tu Paas Hai Par Door Hai,(WHAT HE MEANS IS,SHES CLOSE TO HIM IN HIS HEART BUT IS STANDING AWAY FROM HIM AND ISNT LOOKING AT HIM.

Looks Upset

Te Amo,Me Te Amo Jaata Nahi Yeh Noor Hai,

He looks at her lovingly

Tere Chori Bhi Yeh Manzoor Manzoor Hai. Falling So Crazy In Love

Geet peeks at him out of the corner of her eye,He smiles.

Te Amo,Me Te Amo Tu Paas Hai Tu Door Hai,

He reaches out to her.

Te Amo,Me Te Amo Jaata Nahi Yeh Noor Hai.

He remembers her smiling on the plane.

SONG ENDS

As she'd wrapped her arms around him,Our hands had separated,Broke apart violently.Was this a sign that separation was looming, it was imminent on our horizon? That this new relationship we'd made didn't have a long future,It would break easily? The thread that tied us together was weak,Not strong enough to withstand others or problems that faced us? Or was this just me overreacting?

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