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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 16...
Geet smiled at him for being so kind. and before he could settle back to the seat next to her, geet said maan sir.. hmm geet? thank you she then gave a killer smile, which would have blown maan out of this world but luckily he was all undercontrol! its ok maan too gave his million-dollar smile in return which sent little tingles into her body!

The airplane was just about to take off, Geet fell back into her seat and gripped the hand rest on the side tightly. She she began taking deep breaths. babaji please! mujhe bohot darr lagraha hai! she was whispering to herself. maan noticed geet wasnt looking very comfortable so he decided to ask what was wrong, however get was busy having a flashback

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her and avni were sat in the living room when suddenly their movie was interrupted by breaking news "hamme abhi kabhar ayi hain from Mr Sravath Shorak one of the most well-known and richest people in the whole of europe that there seem to be many faults and crashes occuring during take offs and landing on planes due to the pelitrathger sysem in the planes (guys sorry... i just made that word pelitrathger up! just go with the flow! :P)

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Remembering that awful news, geet screamed Aaahh! noo!! and threw her hands over her face as if they were really about to crash! Maan was extremely worried now and unbuckled his belt to kneel down infront of her geet! kya huwa tumme?! geet? he tapped her arm gently twice and she slowly began to whisper what if the plane crashes? we'll all die !! babajiii her hands were still covering her face and maan was just thinking shes really crazy!

geet.. geet! oyi! maan reached out his hands and gently moved her hands away from her face. She was beginning to sniffle a little and hereyes were still not moving away from the sight of her legs. in a very soothing tone, maan said, geet mujhe dheko.. geet. geet shook her head lightly to say "no", so maan took one hand away from hers and carefully placed his fingers on the tip of her chin and lifted her face to meet his. The sight he saw now has heart-crumbling yet adorable... geets puppy-dog eyes were filled with tears. Aw geet! tumhe cisne ceha ce yeh plane crash carne vala ha and were all going to die? hmmm? geet pointed behind her and said voh news pe.. geet yeh news tumne kab dheki thi? geet took a little time to think last year... winter geet, tum bilcul paagal ho! its been a whole year and just 6 months ago news pe aya tha ce all the problems of the airplanes have been solved... anyway... voh planes india ce nhi the... they were from europe! hammara plane consa hai? umm.. india travelz toh? par mujhe bohot dar lagta hai geets voice had again faded out into mere whispers.

There little one-on-one conversation was interrupted by an air hostess asking for maan sir to please buckle up as they were about to lift-off. maan went back to his seat, but geeet still had tight hold of his hand. He smiled at her and kept his hand there.

All through the lift-off, geet had her eyes tightly closed and she kept hold of maans hand too. now and then he'd hear geet say " babaji!" and he'd smile at her craziness...

Slowly within 1/2 hour geets hold on maan loosened but she didnt entirely let go. Maan turnedto luk at her and saw she was fast asleep, her face was a little wet from the tears she let escape. pagli! maan smiled at her and couldnt keep his eyes off her. Even in her sleep she looked stunningly attractive!

The flight was 5 hours long, one hour had aimlessly passed without them even knowing. With a slight jerk from the plane, geet woke up. She had calmed down a little now. She saw that she had been holding maan sirs hand all that time an blushed a little from the thought. He was sleeping too, so she carefully and gently placed his hand back to him and stood up to go freshen up in the bathroom. She winced alittle from the pain of her foot but didnt make too much noise. She limped slowly towards the toilets.

A few minutes later, maans eyes opened too. He looked next to him to find an empty seat. "yeh geet caha chale gyi?" just as he was about to stand up to look for her, she came inside the department. Maan noticed she was still limping, however she still managed to pull out a stunning smile whilst in pain. They were just making there way towards each other when, another jerk from the plane caused geet to lose her balance and fall forward. Maan fell backwards with geet crashing ontop of him. He was holding her up from her arms gently.

Maan noticed that now geet had her hair open, whilst before it was in a plait. All her hair swooshed forwards and landed on his face. He breathed in her beautiful fragrance. She smelled of roses, fruits and there was a hint of something he couldnt quite lay his finger on that made her smell extra special and "wow". It reminded him of the time her dupatta fell on him...he smiled in the memory..

Geets face was nestling ontop of maans well-built chest. She felt as if there was something special about him that she could feel and hear his strong heartbeat druming away... she liked the sound.. so soothing... she too smiled.

umm.. geet, tum teek ho? geet snapped out of her fairytale and lifted her head up with the support of maan and her own arms. She flicked back her hair in a way that brought maan little sparkles shooting in his body. umm. ji sir.. im so sorry coi baat nhi geet was still sat on the ground whilst maan brought himself up. loh geet, haath dho geet held maans extended hand and tried pushing herself up aargh! geet began crying quitely still on the floor. bohot dard ho rha hai? geet nodded cutely. Without another word, maan went to her and once again sweeped her of the ground and carried her to a nearby seat. yaha beto geet he carefully settled her into the seat and knealt on the aisle way. He picked up the hurt foot and placed it onto his lap. sir aap cya carrhe hai? geet main yeh teek carta hoon, fer tumhe bicul dardh nhi hoga geet became a little hesitant and shook her head. geet? sir agar mari coi hadi hudi toot gyi to? geets face became a little more tensed and worried. geet please... trust me ok? she thought about it a little and with the thought that, "i dont think it can get any worse than this" geet agreed.

Maan gently took of geets punjabi juti and began moving her foot slowly. geet gasped in pain screamed a little too. sorry geet, bas thora sa hor.. she was not able to reply at all since the pain was too much for her. Without having any control over her actions, geet tilted her head forward abit so now her face hid in maans shoulder and she was grasping his shirt in the pain. bas geet.. abh aankhe bandh carlo geet did as he said and suddenly in one go he did something which at first caused a little more pain to poor geet and then he said abh caisa hai? he said it almost in a whisper close to gets ear. She slowly uncoiled her fingers from his shirt and opened her eyes. Slowly she brings herself back to the seat and twists and turns her foot in her delight... wow!! thankyou sir! yeh! ... apne to kamaal cardiya! thank you! in all the excitement, geet hugged maan tightly.. although it was only for a few seconds, they both felt something different and "hatke". Geet ..blushing agen at her silly little self... stood up and thanked maan sir once again. geet, abh tum cini baah cahugi thank you? anyway.. its ok yes? she began jumping up lke a little child and replied yesss it great! maan smiled at her childish behaviour and told her to back to her seat.

They only had 2 more hours left of the flight. Geet decided to sleep all her tiredness off whilst maan went over to adhi and comfirmed a few things.

geet, geet maan was attempting to wake geet up as the plane had already landed and it was time for them to get out of the plane. geet utho maan shook her arm gently. After a few mre nudges from maan, geet had finally woke up. He guided her out of the plane and met adhi outside in the waiting area. After all the checks and regular flight requirments, they got their luggage and set them onto two sutcaise trollies, one had adhis suitcase and one of geets, whilst the other had maans and the remaining of her suitcase. The men took the trollies out and outside was already 2 cars waiting for them. In one car adhi voluntered to go and he took some of the luggage, whilst maan and geet were left for the other car and the rest of the luggage. It was a 1/2 hour drive to the hotel that geet, maan and adhi were to stay in whilt all the project work went on.

The all sat in the cars and drove off. Maan was occupied with his calls whilst geet decided to take this oppertunity to call avni. Whilst talking tears began coming out of geets sad eyes. Maan had noticed this and thought that it was probably because they were such close friends and never were apart from each other for such a long time - he was spot on! Whilst they were both on the phone, maan reached out and pulled a handkerchief out of his pocket and handed it to geet. She looked at it then at maan who gave a little nod gesturing "take it" she smiled faintly at him and accepted it. After a little while, she hung up and wiped her tears with maans handkerchief and handed it back to him, mouthing, "thankyou" and another dazzling smile played on her mouth.

Arriving into the hotel, maan and geet walked into the 5-star place, whilst the staff sorted out their luggage. Geet was so amazed by the sight. Flowers were arranged so beautifully... all different colours in different areas... walking inside, they stepped onto the velvet type carpet. the walls were of an elegent golden colour, with huge paintings that matched the carpet colour. Looking up, geet gasped in delight... the ceiling was made of what looked like glass which gave a perfectly delightful view of the blue sky.

Whilst geet explored the beautiful heavenlt place, adhi had too arrived and he and maan sir were checking in.

Geet challo ji sir. geet skipped along merrily. Suddenly maan got interrupted by a phone call and he told the others to go on. Adhi handed maan sir his room key and left with geet.

After adhi sir left geet in her room, the first thing she did was explore a little more. The room had golden wallpaper with navy blue swirls, the colour of swirls matched the soft friendly carpet. She was feeling so happy in this heavenly, dream place!

Her dream was again unfulfilled by the interruption of knocking on the door. ji adhi sir geet maan sir ne humme abhi bulaya hai they both went over to maans room. He was just finishing his call.

Ok guys, maine dhooje dealers se baath carli hai, and there has been a slight change in plan as the plane that they are in has been delayed, and they will not be reaching until tomorow, so we have some free time in our hands. I was thinking ce hum abhi thora dher fresh ho lete hai, fer shyam co dinner ce baadh we will work on the project final touches and then tomorow you can do whatever you want and again same process of completing any work thats needed and then we'll go for the deal in 2 days as thats when the other companies will be ready for. ok? ji sir ji.

Going back to her room which was opposite maan sirs room, geet was so exited! she'll get to go out and about explore this beautliful place even more! she was so glad they had 2 days to prepare! since everything was pretty much already done, geet was buzzing about the free time!

next: geet and maan on an outing? or is she alone?

hey guys! please comment or like... hope yous enjoyed reading it as much as i did writing it! xxx keep reading! xxx
Edited by chupchupsi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
wow u give dbl updates and that too long ones...
thanks dear...
loved the update...
maan is caring for her and is attracted towards her...
the same with geet...
he is slowly getting to know her...
oh god a news tat she heared so long ago and still felt afraid...
waah maan has magic in his hands that he was able to cure geet's twisted ankle...
hope they will b together when they go to exlplore...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: preethia

wow u give dbl updates and that too long ones...

thanks dear...
loved the update...
maan is caring for her and is attracted towards her...
the same with geet...
he is slowly getting to know her...
oh god a news tat she heared so long ago and still felt afraid...
waah maan has magic in his hands that he was able to cure geet's twisted ankle...
hope they will b together when they go to exlplore...
pl cont soon

Im really glad that you liked it!... the reason to why i did 2 long posts is because i have one exam tomorow.. but then two more in two days so i dont think ill be online much to type up te next bit... so yous'll have to hold it for a bit! 😭 but ill try whenever i can!😛 xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
i just new it the
lazy boss wont come😡
the airport scene super
maan caring geet so sweet
of him❤️
lovely part
love it
waiting next part
thanks 4 pm
this for yu
sweety

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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
what long long updates
thanks sweety
both have attraction to one
another
the lough part is how geet
scared of the plane because
1 yr ago news
maan liking her child side
beautiful simply
love it
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hm.. I think Geet will go for an outing and Maan will, either follow her or be worried because she forgot to tell him that she was going for an outing..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
Beautiful parts!!!
really Sid is such a jerk ...wonderf how he became MD???
loved the updates ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
wow awesome parts dear ...love it geet ka lazy boss nahi aaya so sweet ..maan caring geet so sweet he is getting come to know more about geet this is great ..👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏thank you for pm dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
part 13 off she sat on maan
very nice part
sorry yaar have just read all parts all r extreamly nice
Edited by raj_202 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
wow got to read ur ff in one go !! awsome yaar ...loved it

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