-truly magical- MAANEET FF THREAD 20..new link add - Page 88

UD is gud....... but u noe we need a BIGGGGGGGGG one.......

Awesome!!!!!!! u r too good........................

Ok I am new to the forum but have been reading your ffs for a while now. They are just awesome. Great job. Have you ever considered writting novels..???

mini tm two more parts

Next:-

Maan come out side to recevd raj when they heard some loud cry.

Maan and raj look at each other then runs to that direction , they see mk standing in the middle of the corridor and sameera's hair all stand up and she is in the pull and annie's face with something,

Maan and raj looks at them then burst out a laugh when geet said aap dono ko saram nehi aaraha hain they r facing problem, one of them drowining and mk what r u doing and maan , raj both of u r laughing.

Naina:- men r complicated things, and forget their curtesy also.

Raj and maan control their laughter then said ok we r helping them , ok

But naina said pull is less water, she is standing their firmly then y need of help.

Geet:-yes and oh yes that is sameera , that , maan, rukiye , then called nakulllllllllllllllllllllllll

Maan :- kya akr rehe ho , ahista geet,

Raj:- look gudiya she is drwoingin and we should help her

Raj smirked at maan and maan winks at raj then both of them goes close to pull when annie said dekhiye na bhai mk ne kya kya.mere pura muh make up ka kya hogaya.

Naina murmur pura make up ki dukan hain

Geet siged iyepehele aise nehi thi

Naina:- company dekh kiska mila hain

Geet:-ohi toh

Then suddenly geet said look raj is helping sameera .

Naina looks furious at raj and said aaj aao ghar mein phir dekhna

Next:-

Raaj help sameera and suddenly sameera try to hug him and raj just taken aback and said kya akr rehi hain aap?

Sameera sniffing and said oh mein.. mein na dub rehi thi

Naina greeted her teeth and said aacha hota agar dub jati , nehi hua toh mein hoon na aur raj u, wait .

Raj push sameera and said ok , then tunrs and said maan , let's go

When geet shouts mk, come here.

Mk twisted her lips and push her curls behind her ear and give a glare to annie and sameera then runs to geet.

Geet take her in her arms when naina said m going to out house.

Geet nodded then give a angry glare to raj and said coldly maan aapko iha rehena hain aapke dost ke sath iya unhe lekar andar aana hain.

Maan gulped his saliva to hear the tone and said jaan m coming ,I mean we r coming then to raj chalo, bahut social work kar lia aab manao jake naina ko.

Raj rubbed his forehead and said karne gaya tha kuch aur ho gaya kuch.

Both r still standing there and taling when geet shouts maaaannn.

After hearing this Maan pull raj with him almost.

Raj and maan enter the farm house when raj said so grt msk jaru ka gulam ban gaya

Maan give him a deadly smiles and tum bhi banoge, waise don't u scare of naina's anger.

Raj gulped his saliva and said oh ha, and runs to naina.

When geet said kya baatein ho raha tha

Maan give her a smile and take her is his arms and said kehe raha tha aapne biwi ke baat maana kaise chaiye, new new hain na raj, samajh jayga, har koi mere tarah thori na hota hain.

Geet :- r u joking or serious.

muski special request for you

hi msukan dear
I'm with sana we want more UD of khamoshi
Iye Dil Mange More
we love ur writing skill and jitna bhi paro utna hi dil karta hain aur aur paru
pls pls give us khamoshi 's uds
and now waiting for TM UD
Maaneet and maansi 😍

nice update...😊

MUSKIIIIIIIIIIIII

Pls update karo naa!!!!!
N Di.. I just read Khamoshi....that 2 in one go..... It is superb.... The way U portrayed their love was just amazing..... Di.. U really hav the hunar to play with words......
U proved that love doesnot need words to express itself..... Hats off to U!!!!!