Maryada: Vidya-Gaurav FF - Updates. p. 145 (6/29) - Page 97

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Posted: 14 years ago
Why does he want to shut her out devi? At some point they have to talk about salome right? is that because he doesn't want to complicate her life or because he feels like now she will know that he can never ever love again...or he is confusing her feelings are not genuine...

Update super soon and we are so close to thread 2 :)


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Posted: 14 years ago
That was a really nice update! I also believe that gaurav was disappointed that vidya did not know what the memory was of.
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Posted: 14 years ago
👍🏼OMG ... what has the SSP got to do with the story behind G's bruises ????

And G&V ... Sighhh ... so near yet so far ...


Poor V she can barely register what the voices in her head mean ... and now she knows that there's something serious behind that ...

Poor G ... he never gets a chance to be with his wife ... reality aways intrudes !!!!

But I'm loving it all the same ... this now ON now OFF betwn G & V has me swooning !!!

And soon the vrat will be upon them ... and I dont think they will have any privacy in V's house ...what with assorted uncles, aunts and cousins gathered for V's first vrat !!!

Then again, I'm super eager to see just that ... how G manages to get close to V despite the crowds in her house !!!

PS: After readin your last update ... in the office ... I said I'd go home and TRY to put my thots into words ...

Confession - I failed ... miserably ... I dont have the words to say what I felt after reading your update ... you left me like ...😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 ... 👏 ... 👍🏼

Edited by rusha4003 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
He left??
Is he disappointed that she doesn't remember everything clearly or is it something else?
Did he say all this to her thinking she would not remember it while he would be able to share his secrets and relieve his burden?
I don't know why but gaurav's sudden change in behaviour is scaring me...why did he leave?
What underlying motive could the deviant SSP be referring to?

Oh god!! I'm going crazy!!
My brain is all muddled up with questions and no answers at all!
Please update soon...don't leave us hanging like this!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
man...u r driving me crazy now..
what was all that about now??? sigh
nice to see that u r back on the updating spree
something big is coming up ;)
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Posted: 14 years ago
"The White Tiger" sounds interesting.

Well, that was a surprise appearance. Definitely didn't expect the SSP to show up. So Gaurav has found the mole in his group, was that the person who he fought? And what does the SSP have to do with that? Does he know the traitor?

So close, yet so far away. <--- So true. Everytime Gaurav and Vidya get close something or someone has to interrupt. Although, I have to say, I don't mind. This is getting so interesting. When they finally do get alone, truly alone, there's going to be sparks, actually make that a wildfire.

So the white tiger in Vidya's dreams isn't Gaurav? Then who is it? The happenings in her life, written in story form, are
beginning to take place in her dreams. But her dreams don't coincide with her stories. Because in her stories the white tiger is Gaurav, but in her dreams it's someone else.

Now Vidya knows that her hearing Gaurav's voice wasn't just an illusion, but her remembering things that Gaurav said during her "sleep."

"He was leaving her." I have a feeling that Gaurav is not coming back until Vidya leaves the day after tomorrow. I hope that feeling doesn't come true. Gaurav needs to talk everything
out with Vidya, even though he's the silent types. He's not used to having someone to tell all his secrets to, his whole life he's been lied to.

At the end of the chapter, I almost cried reading the last few paragraphs. I don't know why.

Thank you for the amazing update! Love you, Devi!!!! You truly are the best writer on this forum, according to me. :)

Krishna


P.S. I hope Gaurav doesn't get the bright idea of divorcing Vidya.
Edited by Krishnaluv94 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
"and definitely… definitely don't do that!" he pulled her hand away from her where she was attempting to fasten back the two hooks that he had unhooked. " 😳... when will Vidya ever listen to Gaurav! Alway listen to a smart man😉 ..
Weird that both of your previous FFs, The oldest story, and Love and Despair -- Mr. & Mrs. Kapoor and Dadi, never disturbed the couple..while in Maryada.. the family members just can't stop making appearances 😆
though they didn't make progress.. at least the traitor is caught, and seems like Gaurav gave him a good lesson!
3 day fast???? like no eating for three days..or fasting each day for three days?
Amazing update Devi!!


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: arabianpaki

"and definitely' definitely don't do that!" he pulled her hand away from her where she was attempting to fasten back the two hooks that he had unhooked. " 😳... when will Vidya ever listen to Gaurav! Alway listen to a smart man😉 ..
Weird that both of your previous FFs, The oldest story, and Love and Despair -- Mr. & Mrs. Kapoor and Dadi, never disturbed the couple..while in Maryada.. the family members just can't stop making appearances 😆
though they didn't make progress.. at least the traitor is caught, and seems like Gaurav gave him a good lesson!
3 day fast???? like no eating for three days..or fasting each day for three days?
Amazing update Devi!!



Azizah, The biggest complaint about the Oldest Story was that Mrs. Kapoor was always coming in at the most unfortunate times to catch Shiv-Gauri 😉

The vrat requires no eating or drinking for 3 days.

-Devi
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Posted: 14 years ago
After reading again..I am thinking he regrets vidya remembering stuff. He told that in confidence to her unconscious body hoping that he wouldn't have to explain it in person...ever..he wasn't counting on her sub conscious mind to register it.

But where is he going? What was the particular verse that she said so upsetting, he couldn't look beyond it?

Please update soon devi!!!! Otherwise My stupid brain will keep analyzing the chapters you have written again and again!
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Posted: 14 years ago

"Gaurav, I forgot to tell you before, but Vidya is leaving for her home the day after tomorrow."

Is Gaurav not going with her...didn't V's mom earlier call to remind both of them to come home?


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