Core of My Existence(AR Story)Nextthreadlink150 - Page 21

Originally posted by: TheMelody.

Ankuuuuuu! I'm finally here to edit my spot, sorry I'm late! :( Anywho, I am SO glad you started to write because trust me, you are an AMAZING writer! I love the way you write hun! <3

The first part was an amazing introduction to your story and I loved the way you unravelled the characters without rushing into things. How you showed such a caring side to Armaan is commendable, I can actually relate him to the same Armaan in DMG and this is a good thing 'cause as you said, this is a continuation from Sept 21st. Without a doubt I love the way you have portrayed him so far! His confusion and dilemma is completely justified because of Ridhima's state. As for Ridhima, my heart goes out to her, she's going through a lot, I can totally feel her pain because of your writing and the way you show things in such great detail!

I love how you showed us AR's past and the things that had taken place after 21st Sept, it was heart-wrenching yet interesting to read, I enjoyed reading it a lot! They fact that Ridhima holds so many fears, in a way is definitely reasonable, she doesn't want Armaan to be stuck with her forever, especially 'cause she's paralysed and will need a lot of support throughout her life or at least until she's better. I honestly hate Shashank! He is always the bad guy and they way you've shown him in this FF, he just looks monstrous to me. But I'm sure he'll play an important role in getting AR together perfectly well. Despite whatever Shashank said, I am SO glad that Ridhima stood up for Armaan! It's something I've always wanted to see in DMG..a real confrontation between Ridhima and Shashank! You did an amazing job by showing that. :D I am glad that AR have sorted out their misunderstandings and I'm sure this will be the beginning of a beautiful journey ahead!

Muahhhhh! Continue soon <3

My comment on Page 1 is edited :))