Core of My Existence(AR Story)Nextthreadlink150 - Page 15

Originally posted by: Dmg8594

Res!

And are u updating tonight?? Please do, I'm dying to read further! =)

Originally posted by: sweety7395

Hey amazing part....I really love your writing...the way you express their feelings is very well written....I could actually imagine AR/Kajen doing those scenes....really love this different concept...seeing how Armaan is taking care of her and Riddhima feeling insecure because of her physical weakness...really loved this part...it was really good

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon

Originally posted by: MaitreeluvKajen

I am in Love...I'm in Love..Laallaaa I am in Love !!! <33 With YOU! and Yesh,Yesh,with this FF too...Haayyyee Main Mari Jawa Anku, I am in Love with you,Sacchi Mucchi !! OMG this part was a BLOCKBUSTER,Just made my tears well up my eyes...*sniff* but still,I Love YOU<3

ARMAAN MALLIK!!! Gosssshhhh Armu You are such a sweetheart !! The way he handles her,comforts her...and Loves her,Most importantly,Is SO DAMN Touching!! OMG OMG Armaan!!<33 I Love YOOOUUU!!!😳 The bickering at the first made me smile so hard....The Original AR back on track!! They look the best even when they bicker LOL!!<3 And then she started crying,and he went on trying to comfort her,and that line....That he fell in Love with her heart !! Ah,It had my heart...That is SO true!! Anku,You SO bring out the flavour of ArmaanRiddhima back.....!!! Then the fashback,OMG OMG You made me Cry!! I was like Boo-hoo!! *sniff* The flashback..like,I mean,still feels like a nightmare.And the way you described it all,Armaan having hope for her,he is determined to make her okay..Everything was..Like..I don't know,Perfect? Yeah,but that'd even be an understatement! Love You Anku...!! Totally.

And I know,Whatever happens,AR will make it. And You will Make them Make it <33 Tee-hee!! Lovvvveeeee Yoooouuuu<3

Love,

Maitree

Originally posted by: siddhika_ksg

Ankuuuuuuuuuuuuu First of all I LOVE U 😳 u knw why😉

The part was sooooo damn amazing....anku it was really really gud... I love hw u potray both armaan nd Riddhima's feelings and whats goin on in their minds and hearts...I love hw Mature Armaan acts and how very sensibly and heartedly he takes cae of his love.... Like riddhima i agree he is the most selfless lover ever.....and U knw wht my fav part was....i am so damn sure u knw😆

I love loved loved the way riddhima calls up shashank and just sunaos him the truth cause honestly i have never seen a more khadoos and heartless man as shashank...he so very much needed to hear this from riddhima....😡

I love hw armaan is man...like wen shanky is sunaoin armaan and saying hw armaan took riddhima for his selfish reason when there is no hope left in her case, instead of reverting back on the blames raised at him he is more concerned about riddhima getting demoralised and loose hope in her medical case....awwwww i simply love this guy😳

Originally posted by: -Jessy-

This part was brilliantly written! OMG it was so emotional........so sad 😭 I feel really sorry for Armaan that he has to go through all this and hear all that crap from Shashank :( No comments about Shanky -___- he is just beyond my imagination.......Gosh he's so harsh to poor Armaan :( I'm happy though that Ridhima did something about it and called up her dad......if you didn't write that last part then I would have been all the more sad.....the last part made me so happiessss and now I'm so proud of Ridhima for speaking up to her dad like that Armaan is very selfless indeed and he deserves all the happiness in the world.......and so does Ridhima. Continue soon....can't wait to read what's happening next.

PS. I read your reply and ILY too 😳

Originally posted by: armaania13

Ankuuuuuuu-- your writing and the intensity of AR's emotions that you portray, leaves me Speechless and Spellbound!!
Today, it reduced me to tears!!
ITs just so surreal and beautiful -- the way you portray Riddhima's helplessness over her handicap and Armaan's helplessness and pain over Shashank's taunts!! It was just so painful to see him feel desolate, wanting to share his pain with someone, and having no-one, just cry himself to sleep!!!

Towards the end, just loved the way Riddhima stood up to Shanky for Armaan!
That was simply brilliantly written!

I dont know if I can ever fully explain what I feel, when I read your updates! Its such brilliant writing!!
Love you sweetie!

Originally posted by: Sani-KarAni-KSG

RESSSEEEEERRRVEDDDDDD <3

ANKITA MEHRAAAAAAA :|

Ankurrriiii you;re fabulous! :| ILOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE LO V E D The PART! So Amazing! Super sad! :| So much stuff happened which I always wanted to see! Riddhima going against her Kharooos dad EVERYTHINGG! :D

ARMAAAN MALLIK :| this guy defines PERFECTION man! EVERYTHING he does for Riddhima is just so AMAZING! ILOVE how he takes care for her.. its not even care but SO MUCH CARE! <3 AWW MAN <3333 ILOVE HIM INFINITY! <3

RIDDHIMAAAAA <333 I can SO feeel her.. all the pains all her thoughts :( She's going through so much :( Reading her thoughts was super sad :(:(:( And again Armaan going to her to the window at that "kisi aur ke baare mein soch rahi ho" waali LINE.. AHH ILOVE SO ARMAAAN! <333 All that he DOES for her.. AWW ILOVE HIM! <3 Their convo with Anjie was so sweeeeet <3 AWLE <3

Oh then comes Mr. Kharooosss :| Kameeena :| ARMAAN ILOVEYOUUU <3 This MAN is super AMAZING MAN! <3 he didnot say ANYTHING! If i were there i'd have started a HUGE Argument LOL but he is Armaaaaaan naa <3 -PERFECT! :D And i Love how he stops her with placing his hand- AWWWWWW <3

Okiee the Pasta bit SO CUUUUTE <3 Him after tasting it AWWIIEEEE! <3 So adorable!

And I REALLY Love how Riddhima wants him to be himself and vent and how Armaan is all he CANT because HIS Riddhima will be more weaker :'( AWW MAN

THIS is what I wanted in DMG.. Them not thinking about themselves but for him/her! AHHHH<3

And the living room bit :|||||||||| THAT WAS SUPER SAD MAN :'( him wanting SOMEONE to vent his feelings to :'( :'( and how he takes the cushion :| :'( THAT WAS LIKE SUPER SAD :((( ILOVEHIMSOSOSOSOMUCH <333

Okie now the BEST part! YEAAAAAH BABY YEAAAAH Riddhima gives Kharooos Her piece of Mind! -WOOOHOOO <3 ILOVE it when she does THAT all for HER Armaaaan <33

ILOVE EACH AND EVERYTHING SHE SAID TO THAT KHAROOOS! All so APT- Kharooos deserves to GET this from her Daughter Kameeena :|||

Everything she said SO RIGHT! it made me SMILE so much! <3 She was voicing for Armaan AHH something i ALWAYS love to see/read! <3

ANKUUUU this part was so FABULOUS! <3 ILOOOVEED IT! <3 everything in here was PERFECT! You write SUPER DUPER AMAZINGLLY WELL! <3

AND i cant wait to reaaaad the next part and you say its gunna be a step to HAPPINESSS!

Update SOOOONERRRR! <3 MUAAAAAAH

ILOVEYOU LOTS AND LOTS! <3

Originally posted by: Samiyah258

This part was amazingggggg ankuu!! I lovee how you portrayed how Armaan and Riddhima are feeling, the way you explained it was so beautiful.
Armaan is the most sweetest guy everrr :) I love how he takes care of Riddhima, and understands her.
I'm glad Riddhima talked to Shashank, this was really needed. He was making me soo mad I'm glad Riddhima told him how she feels. I'm proud that she stood up for herself and Armaan and told Shashank what she should have said a long time ago.
It's so sad how Shashank treats Armaan, he doesn't deserve to be treated this way at all, he's soo sweet and considerate!!
Update soon pleaseee I lovee reading your FF and I get very eager to read what happens next lol
Seriously you make me go speechless with your beautiful writing style, and your concept and overall your general FF!!

Originally posted by: KaJenYaianSanju

ankuuuuuuuuuuu, I am speechless and you left me to tears😭

I have read many FFs by now and all are beautiful, like a fairytale, but this one is the most heart-touching and surreal FF I have ever read!!!

How did you do it? I mean really how could you explain every single emotion Armaan and Riddhima are going through so perfectly? honestly, now I am realizing how much attached to DMG and AR we are! Had it not been our understanding of Armaan and Ridhdima's characters and their love, you wouldn't have been able to pin down their love and emotions more than perfectly and we, readers wouldn't have been felt the emotions you are describing and I am actually really really proud of it!!

what shall I say about the update? I am speechless...my heart went out to both Armaan and Riddhima...none of them are wrong at all...they are just thinking about the other's happiness even though it meant hurting oneself and the other indirectly...Riddhima is not wrong at all in hoping Armaan to move on despite the fact that she is aware about his unconditional love towards her because it must hurt her a lot to see Armaan doing so much for her and she not being able to reciprocate it and poor Armaan...he has always kept "her" before himself and I am glad at the fact that Riddhima acknowledges it but shashank😡..I felt like crying at what he said to Armaan and wanted to teach a lesson to shashank...all in all you don't know how happy you made me by making Riddhima stand up for Armaan even though it was meant to go against her dad...he is her dad but she had to do it because sashank has been wrong, in fact too wrong in understanding Armaan, his love, and his motives....loved it yaar...felt so bad for Armaan that he doesn't even have a friend there to share his pain and agony😔...can you please make me, Sanju enter in the story and be Armaan's friend...hehe kidding😆

seriously, you make me feel the world'd emotions every time you update...I am happy that AR are gonna have a happy time now...plz update soon.