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update soon............waiting waiting.............. open a new thread and update soon,
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hey itx been almost 160pgs open a new thread wid a lng n amazng update
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open a new thread dear
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nice update..
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Here is the link - thread-2 of FF meri nanhi dulhan

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please add me to ur pm list. i loved this romantic story, so cute. thanks.
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WOOOW found your FF and readed the thread in one go!!!!

Keep it up, because I loved it dear!!!!!!!!!!!!
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huh...back to your FF. My last chapter which I left was chapter 15...Sorry yarr...dont know how I missed to read the updates even though its one of my fav FF
Just started with chapter 16
A long but not at all a boring update...loved each and every sentance.
Geet's masterpiece of innocence and Maan's masterpiece of restlessness
Huh...geet attained puberty...COOL...a turning point in the story line..
Going to read next updates and keep you posted

Originally posted by: fairyland_1234

Chapter--16

Night
everyone left leaving maan and geet behind
Maan went to his room, rain started...
she knocked his door, as soon he opened door she rushed in wearing a two pieces night dress cute pink top and bottom'
Maan'tum yaha?

Geet ' Mujhe room main akele daar lag raha hai.
Maan 'kyun pahle baar akele so rahe ho
Geet 'nahi,pehle baar barish main akele soo rahe hu,mujhe badal se dar lagta hai
maan'theek hai jaao bed par soo jaoo
he left door open, as no one is there at home
Geet ' hai rabba,Door khula nahi rakhte
Maan 'kya?

Geet---haan aapne kabhi maa --papa ko door khula rakh ke sote dekha?

Maan sensed there is something wrong coming, He didn't argued and closed door
he was about to close lights.
Geet-- nahi nahi itni jaldi nahi'
sab log thode time baad light off karte hai..
his jaw fell open'..
kya matlab, tum yeh sab dekhte rehte ho'..
Geet--haa main sab kuch sikhna chahte hu '''
Maan-- kyun?

Geet --Mujhe ,mujhe she searched for an answer...Haan mujhe
Maa jaise banna hai''..
mujhe yeh bhi sekhaaye, ki'. ladka ladki akele door bandh karkar kya karte hai.
(Maan heart skipped a beat) ''he felt an urge to take her in his arms and answer all her question. but He can't its not a right time'.Geeet bahut hogaya..
Jab dekho ulthe phulte sawal poochte ho,aur yeh sawal tumne kis kis se poocha hai?
Geet-- sirf Vicky se. usne kaha aapse poochu'

maan--- Geeet bachpane ki bhi haadh hote hai.
She fell on bed crying'
aab maine kya kar diya jab dekho gussa karte rehte ho. aap mujhse bilkul bhi pyar nahi karte'
he closed his eyes'''her tears were melting him.
he slowly went to her, turned her to face him, Now she is on bed with him on top
he wiped her tears I am sorry'.
sorry nahi saza milege'
his gaze turned into passion.
she inched up closer to his lips, his self control was turning in to restlessness as he is, impatiently waiting for her next step His heart started pounding and begging her '..
" Go On, Kiss Me, Love Me".
She backed off with out touching his lips and said teasingly'. jaaoo nahi dete saza.As if she know He likes saza .
His jaws tightened and gaze turned into fury,
she tried to get up pushing him away,
but he brought her back to same position holding and pulling her by her hairs
she moaned in pain he ignored it and captured her lips into his lips. Nibbling it, sucking it roughly, rudely, telling her how dare U to tease Maan singh khurana.. She closed her eyes and gave in. while, slowly innocently caressing his chest to calm his anger, which instead turned him on. Her every caress is boosting fire in him. '.his one hand is on her hairs stroking it and other hand was busy in making patterns on her belly .he slowly let go her lips and came to her belly and sucked it '.she clenched bed cover tightly trying to absorb his anger turned passion. Which is now giving her pleasure''''.. Divine pleasure.
A huge thunder sound brought them back. He got up and looked at her messy form'''.She looked at him questioningly.. He ignored her gaze .and said''so jaoo.,main couch par hu.
And left'..
He lay on his couch thinking''' Why I did it? She is nave unaware of her own acts but Iam not'. and why, Her attitude changed towards me? Is she getting attract to me, is she?
No, It was my decision to stay away from her and now it's my responsibility to protect her and her innocence from Me, at any cost''..
Morning
maan got ready for office

He wore white short sleeves shirt with few button's open and blue jeans. Came downstairs. And asked one of the servant..
Geet kaha hai.

Servent'madam,Kitchen main cooking kar rahe hai.

He went to kitchen and found her struggling with dough (Atta)
tum kyun kar rahe ho, cook kaha hai, he asked rudely
Aapko nahi pata hamare ghar main cook nahi hai Roz .Maa khana banati thi,ab main banaungi.
He looked at dough it was so watery ',aise roti nahi banti
she makes a baby face'.kal mama ne aise hi,banaya tha., maine dekha tha .
he rolled his eyes,'.hatto main breakfast banata hu,tum jaaoo aur haath saaf karo wash your hands. She quietly went and did, and watching him'

He Quickly made some pasta and served her
they ate in silence, He didn't looked at her at once, finished his breakfast and
was about to leave...
Geet-- aapne yeh kapde kyun pehne hai, main tie kaise bandhuge
Maan-- office main koi khaas meeting nahi hai, toh aise hi theek hai' aur haan lunch mat banana main bhej dunga..
and left hurriedly...

Whole day Geet felt low his changed behavior was bothering her. She went to maan's room, arranging his cupboard when she saw her mangalsutra .Her eyes filled up, "he took it back"! Why? She hugged it close to her heart and cried its mine only mine. She wiped her tears and wore it back under her dress hiding it.
Later Maan sends pizza to her for lunch.
Evening:
Maan returned home wore his track and black vest. Busy on his business ph call in his room.
Geet knocked door
he opened keeping ph on silence, kya hai?
Geet---mujhe computer kaun sikhayaga?
Maan---come in,'. ek kaam karo.woh raha computer, jaaoo aur syllabus google karo main aabhi aata hu...
she went and sat on his chair , feeling bored, she got an idea, instead of syllabus she goggled maan singh khurana,to know more about him ,his likes dislikes everything.

Screen appears with his latest photos and ''.interviews etc'''..
The youngest business man and the hottest eligible bachelor in town.There were many thing about him and khurana empire even his latest interview.
And His some photos written too hot on it.
she was drooling over his photos when Maan came and leaned on back of her,
he got anger seeing her wasting time on him instead of syllabus
Maan--Geeet
tum yeh sab kya kar rahe ho,
she get scared and stammered Je.ee wo..ma..in
His anger raised ... Geet main kuch dino se dekh raha hu
tum kuch badli badli lag rahe ho,kya ho gaya hai tumhe ?
sab ke sath naa jana, studies par dhyan na dena.
yeh sab chal kya raha hai, jawab do?
she stood pale...
mere peth (stomach) main dard ho raha hai.
Maan-- aacha ek aur bahana'.
nahi pardna hai, toh chali jaaoo yaha se '... and don't think, U can sleep here tonight. Get out'
she went out crying running to garden, it was still raining she fell on ground''


Maan went to window 'yeh maine kya kar diya ,mujhe itna over react nahi karma chaye tha ,.uski kya galti thi,'. he looked out its raining heavily, his eyes widened in shock seeing her laying on ground and crying in pain.
He ran out to garden, found her holding her stomach. And crying in pain. Her legs covered in blood. He quickly picked her in his arms and ran to his car. Laid her on back seat. and drove madly.
His hands were shaking in fear. he some how reached hospital,
he picked her again and ran in calling'
dr aunty,dr aunty'.Dr naina family dr of khuranas came out
and saw maan and a girl in his arms, covered in blood.
She took them to her cabin,
and asked maan to lay her on bed and wait outside.

Geet was scared she held maan hand tightly .

Maan assured her he will come in few min, then kissed her forehead and left with filled eyes.
After few min Naina came out

Maan --- kya hua usse, aunty kaise hai who?

Naina smiled at his concern don't worry maan nothing serious.
maan got confused here she is bleeding and dr is saying nothing serious.
Naina--It's natural. And it happens with every girl in this age. . Have U not studied in your syllabus?

Maan realized it is something feminine..
Naina ---By the way who is this girl? Seems very close to you..
Maan-- haa ..She is Geet-- my relative.
Naina-- ok, where is jaya I need to inform her.
Maan dialed jaya number and gave to naina
Maan-- aunty kya main usse mil sakta hu,
Naina --haa maan I gave her pain killer. Also hospital gown to change. and
.If U want U can take her home too.

Maan went in and saw her changed in gown but still pale he hugged her tightly. Taking out all his fear in hug..
she hugged him back .aap daro mat main theek hu,
dr aunty ne kaha mujhe kuch nahi hua hai.

she freed herself from hug and handed him a pack of w****r Explaining its uses
He turned pink in embarrassment .
Night
He took Geet home laid her on bed made soup and fed her, told her bed time story she fell sleep on his lap he caressed her lovingly then laid her on bed and went to his laptop learning more about her condition and relaxed after knowing she will be fine soon.


(Precap---everyone return)

Hi friends,First of all sorry for keeping U wait,got struct with something.
here is part 16.hope U like it.plz comment and sorry for mistakes.
most of U asked my name--Me-- Aimen .

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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 17:
Highlights I loved:
Geet taking her first shower alone😳
Geet admiring her husband in a different way...oye hoye 😳
Geet-Sameera bonding...she waves w*****r packet to both Sameera and Maan when sameera enquired about her health 🤣... she will go pink red and blue in embarresment once she learns what she had actually done this will happen for sure😆
Geet telling her parents...ab yahi mera ghar hain...👏...Geet is innocent but still matured in her relationship bonding
Part 18:
Sameera taking help of Geet to take maan for Date and Geet helps her out innocently
Geet calling maan Hot...as he is angry...her version of HOT is amazing 🤣
Oops Sameera understood Maneet relationship...but maan mistook it in a different way when he comes to know Geet helped sameera...oh no..😲...Thank god Sameera understood Geet's innocense.
Maneet understood each other's pain eventhough they didnt know what exactly hurt each other.
Maan leaving to US next day..without telling Geet...no no no😕
Part 19:
Maan back ...Geet arranges for their wedding anniversary without anybody knowing...how much she loves him... Atleast maan realised it now.
She is angry with Maan that he didnt tell her before leaving...understandable
Part 20:
Geet angry on Maan
Why Maan's parents want to arrange for Geet's marriage again? No ways
Geet, Vicky and Rohan team up for horror night session...🤣. Loved Geet playing Bhangra as a bhootni...Rohan getting scared to go back home and he being dressed as bhooth.
Geet is very smart now...can handle tricky situation when cought with Maan.
Amazing update...had a big big laugh 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Vaidhumom

Part 17:

Highlights I loved:
Geet taking her first shower alone😳
Geet admiring her husband in a different way...oye hoye 😳
Geet-Sameera bonding...she waves w*****r packet to both Sameera and Maan when sameera enquired about her health 🤣... she will go pink red and blue in embarresment once she learns what she had actually done this will happen for sure😆
Geet telling her parents...ab yahi mera ghar hain...👏...Geet is innocent but still matured in her relationship bonding
Part 18:
Sameera taking help of Geet to take maan for Date and Geet helps her out innocently
Geet calling maan Hot...as he is angry...her version of HOT is amazing 🤣
Oops Sameera understood Maneet relationship...but maan mistook it in a different way when he comes to know Geet helped sameera...oh no..😲...Thank god Sameera understood Geet's innocense.
Maneet understood each other's pain eventhough they didnt know what exactly hurt each other.
Maan leaving to US next day..without telling Geet...no no no😕
Part 19:
Maan back ...Geet arranges for their wedding anniversary without anybody knowing...how much she loves him... Atleast maan realised it now.
She is angry with Maan that he didnt tell her before leaving...understandable
Part 20:
Geet angry on Maan
Why Maan's parents want to arrange for Geet's marriage again? No ways
Geet, Vicky and Rohan team up for horror night session...🤣. Loved Geet playing Bhangra as a bhootni...Rohan getting scared to go back home and he being dressed as bhooth.
Geet is very smart now...can handle tricky situation when cought with Maan.
Amazing update...had a big big laugh 🤣

Thanks for taking time to comment in detail ...loved it thank U dear

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