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Posted: 14 years ago

#681

still waitinggggggggggggggggggg........................ plzzzz gv us a lng updatee

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fairyland_1234

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Posted: 14 years ago

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chapter 18

next day:
samera--- Geet plz help me dear
Geet -- kya hua di

Samera --Main maan ko date par lejana chahte hu..

Geet-- Yeh date kya hote hai.?
maan ---I mean,maan ke sath dinner karna chahte hu akele.
Geet-- toh kya problem hai.
Samera --poochne se dar lagta hai, maan naraz hogaya toh?
Geet-- koi baat nahi di, main aap ki help karungi.
Samera-- par hum maan ko bulange kaha
Geet-- out house, aur main arrangement karungi mujhe unki pasand malum hai..
Samera-- thanks dear. aab tum office jakar yeh flower bouquet dedo

ispar maine message likh diya hai
(message--sharp -7 pm-- out house –I will be waiting).
geet took bouquet and went to office.
shasha looked at her angrily

Geet--Mujhe unn se milna hai !
shasha -- sir imp meeting main hai !
geet directly went in …
Maan was very busy with foreign clients
geet rushed in with bouquet
All clients looked at her admiring her beauty
seeing everyone gaze on her, maan felt fire in him.
he turned to Geet…. Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?.,
jakar mere cabin main wait karo he said angrily
Geet— sab bilkul theek kehte hai … "aap bahut hot ho"
maan jaw fell open, what?
All clients were smiling.
maan excused him and took geet to his cabin
Geet yeh sab kya hai..
And what do u mean hot?
aap kitna gussa karte ho is liye sab aapko hot bolte hai …
he chuckled….Geet who mere mental nahi physical appearance ki baat karte hai
Geet-- kya?aap ko bhukhar hai, babaji puri duniya ko malum hai aur mujhe hi nahi malum.
Maan--kya ?
She checked his forehead..
aap hi ne kaha aap physically hot ho, toh bukhar hua naa.
maan rolled his eyes leave it .Geet, main theek hu.
tum yaha kyun aaye?
Geet-- aapko yeh dena tha
she quickly gave bouquet and left.
Maan was surprised she is asking me for a date?

My heart was right, she not only likes me but also love me!
He felt very happy….his happiness and excitement was increasing every passing min…..
7 pm
Out house was fully decorated with white orchids and candles
and a table for two in corner with slow music. Every thing was so romantic…
Samera wore sexy black gown and came…. wow Geet perfect
Geet was busy lighting candles, thanks di..
Samera--tum maan ko bahut aache se jante ho naa..
Geet---haa…woh mere sab kuch hai.
samera looked at geet shocked? Matlab?
Before Geet answer ---maan enter in black suit…and was mesmerized by Geets beauty she was wearing white boat neck top and full length black skirt, open hairs and no make up as usual. her beauty is pouring out in candle lights, he dint even noticed samera and went to Geet with a smile
yeh sab tum ne kiya hai.mere liye?

she nodded with a smile haaa
samera -- hello mere date hai, aur mujhe, hay, bhi nahi
maan's smile vanished hearing this
He looked back at Geet shocked
Geet heart ached seeing pain in his eyes....
aacha di main bahar hu.

maan was hurt he kept quite..

she left place and went out It was raining, she stood in rain feeling it and maan's pain.
Samera asked maan to join on table
he sat, yeh sab kya hai samera?
Samera--maan main bahut time se tumhe yeh kehna chahte thi that I love U
Maan was already hurt nothing seems to bother him more now.
Samera U R my friend, I didn't expect it from U
I respect U as a friend but nothing else...
and most Important truth is I love someone else.

With that he got from seat and went to window watching her lovingly. She is fully drenched in rain.

Samera followed his gaze and was shocked….Maan "Geet"?
Maan---Haa samera I love her
I love her madly.
Samera smiled How I didn't noticed it before.
Then she remembered Geet's word " woh mere sab kuch hai"
I think she too loves U,
she just don't stop talking about U
She knows every thing about U, your likes dislikes everything. She really likes U maan

I knew she likes me and I am her first crush, He smiled. I can feel it in her every act..
But, only crush, it can't be love. Just now she gave me evidence by arranging a date for me with some one else.
Samera--nahi maan aisa nahi hai
Maan--I love her and I can't see her with anyone else then how could she?
Samera--Maan she is innocent, and her heart is pure, unaware of jealous.
Maan-- I am talking about possessiveness not jealousy.

Samera--Theek hai maan you won

aab atleast friend ke sath dinner kar sakte ho..
Maan-- sorry samera par mujhe jana hai..woh bheeg rahe hai bemar ho jayehe
and by the way tomorrow I am leaving for US bye….
samera smiled at her luck but was happy for her new sister Geet
yes, She deserves him and he deserve her….made for each other.
Maan went to geet Chaleee.
they were walking side by side in rain
she was quite, his pain was hurting her, maine sab unki khushi ke liye kiya phir unki aankhon main itna dard kyun hai ?
Her tears were flowing with rain,maan saw her tears ,he stood there, she didn't notice she was still walking in trace, he pulled her toward him and hugged her. Both knew their love is in pain but still not able to understand the reason of pain. They didn't spoke any word as they don't need it any more…….they hugged feeling peace in each other's arms…

Next day maan left to US without informing her…………

(precap maan return after 2yrs leap/most awaited scene,maan knowing geet was always aware of marriage )

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Hi friends here is part 18.hope U like both parts17 &18.I have taken 2 yrs leap,as it was needed to show Geet meaturity.
from now on there will be no leaps.sorry for mistakes and plz comment.
will try to update next part on sunday.

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heermeher

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Posted: 14 years ago

#683

Hi There thanks for adding me to ur pm ye kya tha geet arrange a date for maan and sameera thats bad feeling sorry for maan and then what is this maan left her without even informing geet thats bad how can he do that. He could atleast tell her or atleast a note.

I know now geet will be more beautiful lets see how maan reacts to her beauty. Please sweety one more update please atleast let maan and geet meet

Edited by heermeher - 14 years ago

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Adithi.M.S

@msrt809

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Posted: 14 years ago

#684

beautiful update..love d way u write:)

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pushpi

@pushpi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#685

Awe how could he leave without informing her? :-( Its for the best but still that would hurt

Can't wait for the leap...ahhh can't you update part 19 today?! The wait for the next update is going to drive me up the wall!

Edited by pushpi - 14 years ago

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#686

Awesome update..... But y ain't u taking 4years leap she will 18 then it will more easy to began proper love story......

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scorpiodreams

@scorpiodreams

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#687

Both are amazing parts and took the story ahead in neat pace. Excited for maan geet meeting after 2 yrs...especially when maan know geet is aware of their marriage.....waiting for sunday now😉