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blueopal

@blueopal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#671

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was superbbbbbbbbbbbbb update............
please update sooooooooooon.........
looking fwd..........

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RAJSHREE

@raj_202

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Posted: 14 years ago

#672

no matter she is growing physically😉

now its high time to grow mentally😉

in class 10 every thing is clear in syllabus😊

as she has entered in 10 will learn soon 😊

n what will happen if she goes to maan n ask him to buy a pack of w******😆(after knowing every thing n maan embaressed as he is unaware of the reality that she knows about their marriage)😊

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CookieMonster

@heycookie

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+ 12

Posted: 14 years ago

#673

Very nice update
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Fantastic job
Thanks 4 da pm
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fairyland_1234

@fairyland_1234

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+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#674

Chapter 17

Morning:

Geet woke –maan enter with a tray of breakfast

Good morning mishiti
Geet --Good morning

Maan-- How r u feeling now
Geet --Good
she get conscious of stains on dress and bed
maan noticed her discomfort…
jaaoo naah kar dress change karlo,U want me to help U.
she got scared …(what if, he or Mom notice my mangalsutra while giving bath).nahi nahi babaji aaj se mujhe khud hi nanha hoga..she answered nahi aab main badi ladki hu khud naah sakti hu…

maan raised his eyebrow aacha
tu jaao..
He handed her dress and other needed things.
she went and tried her first bath alone
meanwhile maan changed her bed cover and waited for her
she came wearing yellow nightly looking pure as usual
and sat on his lap--- aap khilaaoo
He fed her admiring both, her beauty and innocence.

Later he helped her sitting on bed and tucked blanket
now, take rest and no more playing or running.
Geet--Main bore ho jaungi
Maan--nahi hoge main office nahi jara hu

tumhare paas hi hu
she nodded with wide smile.
He sat on sofa working on his laptop and looking at her now and then
she is busy watching him. His physic his eyes…his lips.. And felt attracted.

Her intense look was distracting him; he can feel her attraction towards him.
He smiled and felt honored seeing admiration in her beautiful eyes, but got scared of loosing himself again….. Aise dekhege to kaam kaise kar paunga….
he kept his lappy aside
took remote opened tv and played her fav cartoons
she got busy with tv
he went back to his work….

After few hours Raj jaya and Vicky returned.
jaya was very happy, she hugged her and went to maan, kissed his forehead saying thanks for handling everything…
Evening:
Samera came to maan's house
maan introduced her to Raj and jaya
then took samera to Geets room where Vicky and Geet were watching cartoons
Samera-- hi Vicky remember me?

Vicky—oh so, U are the reason…and left room angrily.
Maan and samera got confused by Vicky reaction.

Samera looked at Geet –'wow' who is this angel.
Maan smiled
Samera-- let me guess 'Geet.'
Maan-- haaa,aur geet yeh samera hai, mere friend
Geet-- main aapko didi bulaoo
Samera—sure, why not,mere bhi ek choti bahen hai rasika..vicky ke class mate thi, school main aabhi London main hai. par, tumhare jitney pyare nahi hai..
geet smiled thanks di
Samera--par Geet tum bed par kyon ho ,neeche chalo
maan –woh, Geet ki health theek nahi…use rest lene do.

Samera—kya hua?

Geet waived her w*****r packet.
samera and maan avoids each other eyes in embarrassment .
Soon with her innocent talk's Geet won Samera's heart too, and they get so close like sisters..

Few days went :
maan was successful in keeping his words he kept her in little distance still loving her admiring her from far.....
It was a day of celebration of geet maturity
khuranas arranged big function but only for relatives
mahendra and Rano came with dhol baje.
Geet happily ran and hugged them. All danced
geet dragged Maan too for bhangra…

He danced with her. All were surprised seing maan doing bhangra for the first time.

Function ended..
Rano forced Geet to come hoshiyarpur with them
but she refused saying Maa aab yehi mera ghar hai ! main kahi nahi jaaoonge…
she looked at maan who was looking at her amusingly they had eye lock trying to understand each other…while all others were happy by her maturity.

(Here is part 17,Hope U like it.updating part 18 in few min...)