maneet ff-meri nanhi dulhan-thread 1

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CookieMonster

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Posted: 14 years ago

#131

Very nice part
Love it
Plz do pm me when u've update

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sweet scorpio

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Posted: 14 years ago

#132

geet is such a kid!

awesome!

continue sooN!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#133

Pls add me to ur Pm list Loved ur ff

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muskaan...

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Posted: 14 years ago

#134

hey......last part was lovely.........

Geet throwing stone to Vicky ...made me laugh...

love the FF....waiting for new update......

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fairyland_1234

@fairyland_1234

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Posted: 14 years ago

#135

Chapter-6

Morning Geet woke up and found maan staring at her lovingly.
Geet, 'why you jumped in pool bacha',when u don't know swimming,
'I dint jumped, someone pushed me',maan was shocked ,who can be so heartless to this small innocent Angel .once I found, will kill him with my bare hands . But, by asking more questions I don't want to scare her.
"You don't worry bacha",but next time never go alone anywhere, Don't tell Mom and Dad about this .they will be worried "ok"
she smiled and nodded.

Before she misunderstand him, he decided, clearing her 'the last night chapter',ofcourse hiding kiss part which he was sure, she dint remembered. As, she was not fully conscious.
Gathering courage He said geet yesterday night after saving you from drowning, I changed your dress to prevent you from cold.Belive me geet I closed light and changed your dress in dark, without seeing you.

Her Expressions changed from blank to excitement. You are just great, expert and seem to be very experienced in everyway.
Maan's eyes widened what? What do you mean by experienced.
See, you are great, as that day, you saved Vicky from falling, and yesterday you saved me from drowning.
And you must me very experienced to change dress in dark. Now close light and please teach me this talent. Let's practice naa, please.
maan rolled his eyes, firstly I am not experienced and It comes naturally when u grow up.
Now get ready we have to leave today for khurana mansion
'Call mama'
why? 'I need to take bath naa'
'you have taken a very long bath, last night' now just fresh up and get ready.
She makes puppy face.
They got ready and reached dining table where all were waiting for them Including Raj and Jaya.they greeted each other. Geet took a bite of sandwich and screamed in pain.
Jaya –what happened beta
mama my lips are aching. All noticed her swollen lips and scratch on corner of her lower lip.
maan was all embarrassed,
geet –mom I think some insict bited me, while I was sleeping. 'Jungly insect'.
Maan-geeeet don't call jungly,
all looked at him puzzled

I mean you should not use that kind of language.
'Are wah' I am calling jungly to that instinct, Not you.
maan was all red now.
Vicky added 'one and one' and understood.everything and said"geet you are so cute baby, may be that instinct had just kissed you" and smirked at Maan .
'Next time sleep carefully dear'.
Maan gave Vicky angry glare.
All others were still confused and worried for Geet.

Maan –Mom just give her sweet soup, It wont hurt her.

After breakfast they packed and left farmhouse and reached khurana mansion.
At night instead of bed time story maan revised syllabus to her and prepared her for next day interview.
Morning jaya dressed geet in pink top and black long skirt,small earings and tied her long hairs in pony, she was looking very beautiful. She took blessings from dada ,dadi and hugged Raj and Jaya .
Maan took Vicky and Geet in his Mercedes ,entering school Maan was walking ahead while Vicky and Geet following him, His tough looks and style was as usual making every girl crazy, including teachers, all were drooling over him. But he dint even even looked at them once.Geet found it wired. Were Vicky was used to it.
Vicky cached up with his friends, while Maan took Geet straight for principal office.
Principal was very pleased to meet his talented and favorite student.
Sir this is Geet, My, he paused for a minute and said my cousin,
Geet- "I am your cousin" you never told me before.
Principal looked at them puzzled.
Maan ignored her and continued, sir, I spoke you about her admission.
Later principal took her test, while Maan waited out of office room .All eyes were on him but his eyes were fixed on office door.

Principal was very much surprised and impressed by her intelligence, instead of 8^th class he promoted her to 9^th class.
Geet, ran out of office, excitingly and hugged maan tightly. He too hugged her back completely ignoring his surroundings. "Kya hua shonna".
I got admission, not in 8^th but 9^th class.
He smiled and was very happy and proud of her.
They broke from hug when Vicky called her.
She went to Vicky and gave good news, he congratulated her and introduced her to prachi,Geet this is prachi, your classmate and she stay next to our house.Prachi loves Vicky silently, and respects maan a lot. Soon they became friends.

prachi- Geet, you Hugged Maan Bhaiji in front of whole school
'So'
Prachi- Can I ask you about your relation to him.
Actually till yesterday, we were family friends, today he is my cousin and I don't know,What he will be tomorrow.
Prachi was confused so decided to ignore. They ended their chat and went back to home.
Geet joined school, her school dress is yellow top and blue skirt,she looks totally adorable in her two plaits.
Few months passed Geet got totally settled in her new family and school, with only one friend prachi,as other girls were jealous of her beauty and hates her,and Vicky never allowed any boy near her, though, He was care less boy, but when it comes to her he was always very protective .
She also spoke to Mahindra and Rano, earlier she was angry on them but now she is good to them also.
Sunday morning, it was a day when Dev Rahul and Ashlesh were going back to their homes, But before going Ashlesha decided to try one last time. She went to Gym and found him practicing his tai chi .

Ashlesha- Why are you taking your frustration on all this silly exercises?
Why don't you give me a chance to fulfill your desires? She said seducingly, running her fingers on his well toned chest.
maan jerked and pushed her back, saying 'Don't cross your limits' I am tolerating you just for the sake of bua. Stop trying, and stay away from me, otherwise I will expose your real face to entire family. Now get lost.
Vicky and geet very watching all this, hiding behind pillars. Vicky enjoyed Ashleha's insult, but ran away seeing his brothers anger.Geet was still there watching secretly, but was unable to understand any thing. And felt very sorry for Ashlesh for maan's rude behavior.
Ashlesha- theOne, for whom you are insulting and rejecting me, is very childish
and will never understand your feelings.
maan- It wont effect on my love for her.

Ashlesh- she can't give you anything .
Maan - she is giving me everything, more then I needed or desired.But you can't understand all this, so don't stress your dirty brain and leave from here.
Ashlesha felt very must insulted and left crying.

Maan was about to start his tai chi when he noticed white fabric behind pillar.Kaun hai?
She ran to other pillar, making sweet sound of her payal echoing in room and seducing him. He went looking for her, and after few minutes of hide and seek, he found her, in full white frock with open hairs looking very angelic. He indicates her to come to him.But she shook her head in denial, He smiled and laid facing floor and doing push ups.
she silently came and sat on his back,
Continuing his exercise he asked, bacha are you not eating properly ,you are very light weighted. She was still quite. He turned making her sit on his stomach.
ky hua 'shonna'?

Why are you always rude to Ashlesha di,
he smiled at her innocence,
She is not a good girl,shonna,I don't like her. And I want you to stay away from her,ok
she nodded ,and traced her finger, on his chest. As Ashlesha did.
He closed his eyes to feel her touch, which was driving him insane.

"Kitna sweat hai"?
She took scarf from her neck and wiped his sweat.
Which brought him back to his sence,he helped her getting up from him and left for his room.

Precap-Maaneet separation for 6 months.😭.

Hi friends,Here is part 6,hope you like it,will be waiting for your comments
and sorry for mistakes.😊

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

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Posted: 14 years ago

#136

geet is so adorabel and maan is such a sweetheart...

the precap is 😭 .. why separation .. how will Maan survive...i hope Geet also starts to miss him ...

continue super soon

love

Sana

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Eva Shah

@maanujaanu

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#137

give us 1 more update plzzzz

dis was an amazing update

luved it

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Kinjal

@Angel.Khushi

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#138

she nodded ,and traced her finger, on his chest. As Ashlesha did.
He closed his eyes to feel her touch, which was driving him insane.

"ye ladki muhje pagal karoonga"...this line suits him🤣

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582204

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#139

why the separation?!?!?!?

noooo dont do this :'(

loved the upd8 though, love how maan and vicky love geet

she is so innocent bless her

update soon plz!!!!!

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Tinker ;)

@TinkerBella

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#140

OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH YAR I LIKE YOUR STORY VERY MUCH AWSOME YAR I LOVE SWEET MANEET VERY MUCH. AND PLEASE UPDATE NEXT PART SOON.LOVE YOU MAANEET.😳😳😳😳😳😳

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