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part 22
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Hello again my lovely Maneetians🤗
As you all know, this is the VERY LAST PART... and Epilogue for RKRSPH!😊 I hope you loved it as much as I loved writing it! And Im sad for ending it, but... I've always believed in " some stories never end..." And my FF might have ended here, but it'll be alive in my heart and hopefully yours! And Im done my little emotional speech😆 Enjoy and I want A LOT of comments. 😆 Anyway! Here it is!
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Epilogue
(Raja Ko Rani Se Pyar Ho Gaya)

*********************************7 years later**************************************


" Maa saa!" called a young girl as she picked up her lengha and ran after her brother as fast as she could. " ARJUN BHAI SAA... IDHAR AAYIYE" yelled Payal as Arjun ran with her rag doll.

" Humay pakar kar dikhayiye Payal!" yelled Arjun as he saw his sister struggling to run with her lengha. " ARJUN BHAI SAA" screamed Payal as she stopped dead in her tracks and glared at him.

Arjun didn't stop... he loved tormenting his sister. Suddenly, Geet came running out clutching the side of her duppata and she saw Payal standing there... looking very angry.

Payal turned around to look at her mother who was clearly frustrated with their fights! " Payal!" called Geet. Payal heaved in frustration and she walked over, " Maa saa.. dekhiye naa! Arjun bhai saa ne humari gudiya le li hain aur woh humay waapis nahin de rahe"

Geet put her hand on Payal's cheek, " Payal.. aap doosri gudiya le lijiye"

" Nahin maa saa! humay aapni pehli wali chahiye!" said a frustrated Payal. Geet sighed and she called Arjun, " RAJKUMAR ARJUN SINGH KHURANA... ABHI AUR ISSI WAQT AAYIYE!"

On the other hand, Arjun hid behind one of the pillars and he heard his mothers angry voice. His heart sunk... his mother was angry... What would he tell her this time?

" Humay pata hain kay aap chupe hue hain..." called Geet. Payal only smirked...

Arjun sighed and he stood up and walked out with his head hanging... Geet put her hands on her hips, " Arjun, aap Payal ki gudiya waapis dein"

Arjun nodded and he gave the doll to Payal and she took it away, " Dhanevaad RAJKUMAR" said Payal tauntingly.

Arjun looked at Payal with a small smirk," Abhi maa saa aagiye... warna hum aapko yeh waapis kabhi nahin dete"

" Jayiye jayiye" mumbled Payal as she fixed the doll's clothing. " Apologize to her... NOW" ordered Geet. Arjun looked at his mother with a helpless expression, " Ji maa saa"

" Humay maaf kardijiye RAJKUMARI!" said Arjun with the most sarcastic voice he could come up with. " Maaf kardiya humne" smirked Payal. Geet only nodded her head in frustration, " Aap dono har waqt larte hain!"

" Maaf kijiye maa saa" said Payal sweetly. Geet knelt down and she kissed Payal on the cheek, " Aap sabse sundar hain..." " Aur hum maa saa?" asked Arjun.

" You are my most handsome and strongest son Arjun" replied Geet as she kissed his cheek. He took her hand and kissed it, " Dhanevaad maa saa"

Arjun and Payal were the typical siblings, they loved eachother, fought with eachother and shared almost everything with eachother. Arjun was very protective of Payal and Payal was the same as well towards Arjun. Arjun was exactly like Maan, as dadimaa had described Maan's childhood to Geet. And Payal was exactly the same as Geet, according to Rani Abha. Payal had Geet's aqua green eyes and same features and Arjun had Maan's chocolate brown eyes.

Payal was a daddys little girl, and Maan would turn the ground and sky upside down to get what Payal had wished for. Geet didn't spoil Arjun too much, because she knew the effects of it, he wouldn't grow up to be a responsible, strong and kind young man. Arjun and Payal loved the attention and love of their parents... Arjun looked upto Maan and Paya looked upto Geet... to them, their parents were everything...

Geet kissed her son on the forehead, she loved the respect that he gave her... of course... Maan had taught him that. Since he would often kiss Payals hand in love and respect for her. She always giggled... she felt like a queen around her father.

" Maa saa... pitta jii kahaan hain?"asked Payal. " Woh abhi aarahe hain pari" replied Geet as she walked in between her two children. Arjun told Payal that the royal court was in session and that he was going to come later on.

Payal sighed, " Bua saa kab aarahi hain?"

" Aapki bua saa kal hi aarahi hain Pari!" replied Geet.

Arjun and Payal jumped in excitement! They loved Meera so much and she was like an mother to them and she spoiled them so much. Meera and Tej had gotten married immediately after a few months. The wedding was grand and celebrated with utmost splendor. Meera and Tej were to come to Jaisalmer from Jodhpur to visit their niece and nephew! Meera and Tej also had a 6 year old son, Siddhant. The years had passed by and all four still remembered the times before they had grown from children of their parents to parents of their own children.

" Siddhant bhi aarahe hain?" asked Arjun in excitement. Geet smiled and nodded. Arjun loved the fact that he played big brother with everyone and loved to be protective for Payal and Siddhant.

Payal was about to say something until she saw her mothers expression soften, the same way... everytime... when Maan was about to come. She smiled... she was a little girl, but she dreamed to get married and have the marriage that her mother and father shared. Payal turned around and saw Maan coming in with his usual expression... she dropped her doll and flung into his arms... He picked her up, " humari Pari!"

Maan tickled Payal and she only giggled hard in response, " pitta jii.. nahin kariyee!" Maan stopped tickling her and he hugged her hard... she felt the stubble against her soft cheeks... the comfort that her father was there always.

Maan put her down and Arjun came and hugged him from the waist, " Khambagani pitta jii"

Maan hugged Arjun, " Aap kaisay hain?"

" Hum theek hain... par lagta hain kay maa saa aapko yaad kar rahi thi" smirked Arjun. Maan looked up and Geet with a mischevious glint in his eyes, Geet only looked a way a little to stop blushing... Maan still made her blush the same way he did the first time.

" Arjun!" blushed Geet. " Koi baat nahin Geet" replied Maan as he smirked at her...

Maan knelt down in front of Payal and she looked up and smiled her brightest... he took her hand and kissed it, " Dhanevaad Rajkumari... aap kaisi hain?"

" Hum theek hain pitta jii" replied Payal in the best tone that matched to Geets. " Aap bilkul apni maa saa ki tarah hain" smiled Maan. " Humay pata hain.. humari maa saa iss jahaan ki sabse sundar aur achi maa saa hain...hum baray ho kar unki tarah hi banenge" replied Payal with confidence. Geet laughed... and Arjun felt the need to speak up, " Aur hum..pitta jii ki tarah banenge...!"

Maan and Geet laughed, their kids were too sweet. " Arjun Payal, your tutors are here" said Geet as she saw a man and woman sit in the courtyard in front of Geet and Maan chamber.

"Ji maa saa.. hum jaate hain" said Arjun and Payal in unison. Payal was about to rush off until she almost tripped and Arjun caught her in time, " Payal.. araam se chaliye! aapko kuch ho jaata to?"

" Maaf kijiye bhai saa" replied Payal as she took her brothers hand. Arjun held her hand and they went to the courtyard. Maan and Geet looked at eachother... they smiled... Life was rushing away so fast... their two kids, Arjun and Payal meant the world...

The kids were tutored in their studies for a couple of hours and later they would be learning sword fighting. Geet trained Payal and Maan trained Arjun... It was absolutely delightful to see Payal and Arjun learn how to fight. Geet was to gift her sword to Payal, once she becomes a remarkable fighter.

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" Dehaan kahaan hain aapka!" called Maan as he took away Arjun's sword very quickly. " Maaf kijiye pitta jii" Said a frustrated Arjun. " Dehaan hum par hona chahiye! humay dekhiye!" ordered Maan. Arjun nodded and then Maan gave him a surprise strike, which Arjun quickly ducked from and rolled to the other side.

Arjun quickly got up and he stood in fight stance, he had the same look on his face when Maan was furiously fighting. " Pitta jii... sab kehte hain kay aapne Rajkumar Dev Singh ko talwar baazi mein haraya tha..."

Maan looked at Arjun surprised, " Yeh kisne bola aapse?"

" Woh...humnay chupke se aapki baatein sun li thi jab aap maama saa se baat kar rahe thay" said Arjun with guilt in his voice. Maan only nodded his head, " Yeh achi baat nahin hain Arjun... aap doosron ki baatein kyun sunte hain?"

" Maaf kijiye pitta ji, hum ainda kabhi nahin karenge" replied Arjun. Maan ruffled his hair, " Chaliye... humse lariye... aapne humay haraana hain naa?"

" Jii" nodded Arjun.

The two men began the same stance and Arjun stepped slowly towards Maan, thinking of the many tricks he could do whilst being tiny and his father being bigger. He was definitely faster.

Arjun pretended to strike him and Maan tried to block it, but he ducked down and quickly rolled to the other side where Arjun put the sword against his neck. Maan dropped his sword and Arjun walked around still pointing it to his neck.

The tip was at his neck and Arjun looked at Maan with his own triumphant smile, " Pittaj ii?"

Maan smiled at him encouragingly, " Shabash Arjun!"

Arjun took the sword away from Maan's neck and he stabbed it into the ground... Arjun touched Maan's feet and Maan blessed him, " Jeete raho Arjun"

From behind, the two heard claps...

" Shabaash Arjun!" called Geet as stood beside Payal.

Arjun slightly bowed his head in a thankyou to his mother and sister. Maan ruffled his hair, " Aisa hi karte rahiye Arjun... humay pata hain kay aap humsay bhi zyada achi talwar baazi karenge"

Arjun smiled... he loved hearing a compliment from his father. Maan ever forgot to appreciate his son and daughter equally.

Geet walked over and Arjun quickly touched her feet and Geet blessed him, " Jeete raho Arjun"

Arjun smiled, beaming at his parents who were clearly proud of him.

" Chaliye... aab khaana lag gaya hain..aap dono jayiye jaldi se" smiled Geet. Arjun and Maan nodded, they all went off to the private dining area outside.

As the kids were walking up front, Geet mentioned something that was lingering in Maans mind for the last couple of years, " I named Arjun because I knew that the day would come where he would learn how to fight for himself, how to respect, love and honor his family... and he would protect us all, just like you Maan... Arjun is exactly like you... I knew that he would be like that, because you're his father..."

Maan was touched at her reply to his question, " Geet... sach mein?"

" Ji haan Raja sahib" smirked Geet as she used the same tone with him when she refused to give up fighting with him during her swayamvar. Maan chuckled a little... " Rani... aisa ghazab kabhi mat kijiye... warna aapko pata hain kay kya ho sakta hain naa?"

" Maan...!" blushed Geet. Maan took Geets hand into his and walked on towards their destination...except he turned her the other way... towards their chambers.



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"Done!" yelled Geet. Geet was relieved to be done her short story, that she would be sending to her publishing office. " My ultimate masterpiece! haye rabba! Its taken me over two months to carefully construct it and pen it down!" smiled Geet as she saved her last page.

Geet played around with her long mangalsutra while she shut all her programs and saved all of her work onto her flashdrive.

" Geet? are you okay?" asked Maan from the washroom, where he was washing his face. " Yeah hun, Im okay! Im just done my story!" explained Geet excitedly. " Oh right..." replied Maan as he dried his face with a towel.

Geet loosened up her hair that was in a bun and took her glasses off... she smiled at her husband that was getting out of the washroom. Maan looked at her, " What are you smiling about?"

" Im smiling because I love you" replied Geet. Maan smiled, " I love you too mishti"

" Come to bed naa.. missing you! Mr. MD of Khurana Constructions!" winked Geet. Maan laughed, " Coming baby..." Geet put her laptop away into the drawers and pushed all the wires onto the floor...

Geet opened her arms out wide and he took his shirt off and climbed into bed and into her arms. " Mmm.. I missed you too mishti.." said Maan as Geet snuggled into his large arms.

"I can't believe I have such a gorgeous husband" whispered Geet. " I can't believe im married to the most beautiful woman in the world" replied Maan as he kissed her forehead.

" Its been... 4 years and I think its time Maan" said Geet. Maan's ears shot up and he looked at her amusingly, " Really now?"

" Of course... I want a baby Maan..." replied Geet shyly as she hid herself in his arms. " Actually... funny you said that... I was just going to mention that" whispered Maan.

" And... by the way... I haven't been taking birth control pills... for the last two months" said Geet. A smile crept at Maan's lips, " Then..."

" Bring it on" replied Geet. " Are you sure?" asked Maan. " Its not my first time... and this time, I promise I won't complain that my body is all sore..." replied Geet with a hopeful smile. " Im ready anytime baby... I just wasn't sure of you" smiled Maan.

" Oh My dear Lord... please... can we start? I could use my hot husband to caress me with his strong body.. that I always drool over when you are doing tai chi" whispered Geet impatiently.

" Then stop being all shy... how can I love you up when you're hiding?" replied Maan. Geet unhid her face and she smiled at his bedroom eyes... they were devouring her right there. " Besides... I love seeing you naked..." replied Geet.

" Same here babe..." said Maan as he moved a strand of hair out of her way. Geet was about to say something until Maan put his lips on her to shush her up before she spends the whole night talking... and not loving him up.

Geet responded with equal passion and she ran her fingers through his hair... She felt his manhood harden against her... she slipped off his shorts and boxers and he slipped off her shorts...

Maan kissed her neck, face... eyes... and all the way down.. until she moaned out his name, " Maaan..."

He loved it... he loved the sound of his name on her lips... "Tell me the end of the story... I mean after they go to their chambers" whispered Maan. Geet pulled him up and kissed him madly, " This is the end of the story... right now.. here" replied Geet breathlessly as she ran her hands down his rock hard abs. They reached the highest point of pleasure and desire, devouring their bodies and making themselves one body, one soul, one love.

Aur phir?

Aur phir...

Raja Ko Rani Se Pyar Ho Gaya


*tears* 😆 I hope you liked it! Comment and Please... Like

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lovley update dear ...first one to comment ...love it
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It was indeed an amazing journey...hope to see more gems of writing coming from you
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simply beautiful
epilogue
i'm real going to miss
reading it
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing! I am going to me RKRSPHG a lot, but thanks for such a beautiful ending! <3
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow what a lovely epilogue :)
I'm gonna miss this FF so much :'(
Loved reading every bit of it tho :')
Thankyou :)

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