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Raja Ko Rani se Pyar Ho Gaya...
Hi guys! its me again! Im back with another FF about our lovely Maneet. This is a new concept that I'm still trying to perfect and I hope that you like it as much as I am right now. If you do not like it, I can always discontinue it like I always say in my other FF's. Thanks for reading and Enjoy!
-Desigirl144
Character Sketch
Geetakshi Sumer Singh Rathod:
Geet is the rajkumari of Jodhpur and a young fiery 18 year old princess who is brave, bold and isn't afraid of swords or battles. She is a calm girl who has patience, but when it comes to her family or herself, she is very protective and stubborn. She is extremely beautiful and raaja's from far and wide come to ask for her hand because she is so beautiful. She is a stubborn girl and she rejects each and every proposal because she believes in finding one of her choice and liking.
Ranimaa (Abha Sumer Singh Rathod): She is Geet's mother and a very lovely lady. She has a soft heart for Geet and she is a very kind woman who is very beautiful like Geet. She dresses in the utmost splendor and she is very graceful. Although, she can be very emotional and protective towards Geet, she always listens to her daughter's opinion. She is loyal and very friendly.
Maharaja Sumer Singh Rathod: Geet's father and the Maharaja of Jodhpur. He is a tall and handsome man. Although he appears to be stern and strict, he has a soft spot for Geet. He loves his daughter so much and could do anything to make her happy. He is a brave and stubborn man. He is an excellent military commander and an excellent father.
Tej Sumer Singh Rathod: Geet's older brother and the future king of Jodhpur. He is a very protective brother and a protective son. He is mostly out with the military and he get;s less time to spend with his adorable sister. He is a handsome young man which every Rajput princess wants to marry. He is comical and light hearted, although when he gets angry, even Geet steps out of his way. He is extremely loyal with his father and wants to be like him when he becomes a king.
Maan Singh Khurana: He is the Raja of Jaisalmer and what can we say about Maan Singh Khurana. Almost every raaja... maharaaja fears him a. He has one of the most powerful Rajput armies. He trains them and he of course settles political issues very cleverly. He is a young man who is 25 years old and very handsome. He is very tall and his built is very strong. He knows that he's very handsome but he never lets it get to his head. Every mother dreams of marrying their daughter off to Maan Singh Khurana. He rejects everyone of them because he is not interested in getting married yet.
Bari Rani saa ( Savitri Devi Singh Khurana): She is Maan's grandmother and she is a sweet lady. She loves Maan so much and she treats him like her own son. She is soft spoken but a very graceful lady. She wants Maan to get married soon, but she is tired of explaining it to him. After the death of her son and her daughter in law, she took care of Maan. She is a clever lady whose only aim is to find the perfect daughter in law for her grandson.
Chapter One
(Humari Shart)
(Humari Shart)
" Rajkumari Geet!" called one of the servant girls. " Rajkumari Geet!" said another servant girl. " Rani maa aapko bula rahin hai!" said one of the servant boys. " Unko kehdo kay mein aarahi hoon!" called Geet as she was in the courtyard where she practises sword fighting with Tej bhai saa.
" Tej bhai saa! aap mere se bach nahi payenge" said Geet as she walked up in her pure white anarkali and she put a turban on her head and covered her mouth only revealing her eyes. " Are you challenging your teacher Geet" said Tej with a smirk. " Yehi samaj lijiye" said Geet as she was in position. Tej laughed and he looked the other way for a second and fooled Geet into thinking he wasn't paying attention.
She ran towards him with her sword and she spun her sword almost against Tej's neck and then Tej ducked down! Geet looked at him frustratingly but she kept her patience... she was afterall challenging her older brother. Geet and Tej were fighting sword to sword combat and Geet ducked at his every blow. Tej grabbed his shield and blocked Geet's blow.
" Bhai saa!" said Geet as she tricked him by ducking and quickly somersaulting to the side and standing behind him and she put her sword against his neck... " I win" smirked Geet as she was breathng hard. Tej laughed and he said, " Geet, ek baat batao...tum mujhe itna bewakoof samajti ho kya?". " Bhai saa... apne to yehi mujhe sikhaya tha" said Geet as she felt a little sorry for him.
" Acha ek baat suniye... don't ever lose your concentration or else someone will kill you in two seconds" said Tej as Geet's sword that was against his neck loosened and he quickly ducked and she sort of tripped. He was smirking, " Geet?". Geet got angry and she was a fiery young princess of 18. She ran towards him and they had sword to sword combat with Geet ducking and flying behind him. He was a strong guy too.
Tej laughed and then a servant boy came and said, " Rajjkumari Geet... rani maa aapko bula rahi hain". Geet got distracted and then suddenly Tej came up and took her sword from her hand by his sword. Geet realized and she got angry, " Bhai saa! thats not fair!". "Life isn't fair Geet" said Tej as he was spinning the sword around with his sword. " Don't ever lose your concentration" said Tej as he stopped spinning the sword and gave Geet her sword back.
Geet was a little frustrated and Tej walked upto her and he said, " Meri pyari si behn, aap jeeti hum haaray". Geet smiled," No... not like that Tej bhai saa... main aapse jeet kar dikhaoongi!". Tej laughed and he patted Geet on the head and said, " Jao.. Rani maa bula rahin hai.." Geet frowned and she hugged Tej. " Main aapse baad mein milti hoon bhai saa". Tej nodded and Geet ran off towards her chambers.
The servant girls quickly filed behind her and said, " Rani maa bohot ghussay mein hain..." " Haan haan.. pata hai humay..." said Geet as she took her turban off revealing her long light brown hair. She walked into her room, that was literally one whole part of the palace. Geet quickly dressed in a green lengha with a matching choli and the servant girls made her hair. They tied the dupatta around her waist, covering her stomach a little and back.
Geet put it on her head and she put her jewellry on and she walked with her two head servant girls almost running behind her since she walked so fast. Geet went into her mothers chambers and Rani maa stood up frowning, " Kahaan thi aap Geet?" asked Rani maa. Geet smirked, " Tej bhai saa aur mein bahar angan mein thay... " " Acha jo bhi hai... Geet beti, idar meri paas behto" said Rani maa. Geet nodded and she sat beside her mother.
" Geet.. ab aap bari ho gayi hain... aur apke pitta aur mein yeh soch rahein hai kay aapka swayamvar kar wa dein" said Ranimaa. Geet looked at her surprised, " Maa.. kyun?!!" " Beti, aap bari ho chuke hain... aur hum aapka vivah karna chahthay hain" said Ranimaa. Geet looked at her feet and she said, " Nahin maa.. hum vivah nahi karna chahtay". Ranimaa sighed," Geet... aapko vivah karna parega..." Geet sighed, " Maa... ..." " Kya?" said Ranimaa. Geet rolled her eyes and said, " Agar aapki kwaish hai kay hum vivah karlein to hum ek shart rakte hain". Ranimaa was a little shocked, " Kaisi shart?".
" Hum swayamvar mein beheteinge... par hum yeh shart rakhte hain kay jo bhi raajkumar aayega...He has to verse me in sword fighting and if he wins, I will marry him and if he loses then he will have to go back to his home" said Geet. " Geet!" said Ranimaa. " Maa! no one can force me to marry and you can't force me either and this is my challenge to all those rajkumar's who think that they can win me over!" said Geet as she stood up with anger. Ranimaa sighed, " Main aapke pitta se baat karti hoon". Geet turned around and smiled, " Acha maa"... Rani maa smiled and she hugged Geet, " Hum apki koi baat nahi taal sakte... aapke pitta bhi aapki koi baat nahi taal sakte". Geet laughed, " Humara naam Rajkumari Geet hain maa". " Woh to humay pata hai beta" said Ranimaa. " Maa.. main chalti hoon..." said Geet as she went towards the door.
Geet was in her room, when her father, Sumer Singh Rathod entered with a frown on his face. He was a tall man, still quite young looking even if he has a 23 year old son and a 18 year old daughter. Geet stood up, " Pita jii!?". The servant girls stood up and they stood behind Geet. " Ekaant" said Sumer Singh. The servant girls exited out of the room to leave Geet alone in the room with her father. " Hum aapki maa say kya sun rahe hain?" said Sumer Singh. Geet looked down and she was a little afraid of her father.
" Humay jawaab dijiye!" said Sumer Singh. " Woh pitta jii" said Geet. SumerSingh walked upto his daughter and she was very short compared to his tall figure. " Yeh kaunsi shart rakhi hai aapne?" said Sumer Singh a little more softly noticing his daughters discomfort. Geet looked up at her father with her aqua green eyes and said, " Hum swayamvar mein nahi behtenge agar humari khwaish nahi poor hogi" said Geet. Sumer Singh sighed, " Geet!". " Pitta ji, aapko pata hai kay koi bhi raajkumar aajata hain aur humara haath mangne aata hai aur humay yeh cheezay pasand nahin hai" said Geet as she crossed her arms and she was clearly angry.
Sumer Singh sighed and said, " Agar yeh aapki khwaish hai to humay manzoor hai". Geet smiled and she hugged her father, " Pitta ji! dhanevaad". Sumer Singh laughed. " Aapko pata hai kay aap humari ladli hain..." " Ji, aur main aapse sab se zyaada pyar karti hoon" said Geet she broke out of the hug and Sumer Singh patted her on the head. "Hum chalte hain.. aur aapka swayamvar agle hafte hoga.." said Sumer Singh as he left her chamber. Geet nodded, " Ji pitta ji".
" Ek aur baat...Tej ka dost, aur ek aur rajkumar bhi humaray mehel mein rahenge... aapki maa aapko sab kuch samjha dengi" ssaid Sumer Singh as he left. Geet nodded and she shrugged... she rolled her eyes and she laid on her bed. The servant girls came in and they all giggled, " Yeh to bohot achi baat hai!... Geet... agar aap apne rajkumar se nahin mili to?" said Soni one of her close friends and servant girls. "To hum vivah nahi karenge" said Geet as she played with her necklace. " Agar Rajkumar Tej ne sun liya to?" said Soni. " To hum wohi kahenge unse" said Geet. " Aur unka dost aur Jaisalmer ka Raajkumar bhi aarahe hain.. agar woh aapke rajkumar ban gaye... to?" teased Soni. Geet rolled her eyes, " No one can beat me... and I won't let them beat me... not even Tej bhai saa's dost". " Jo bhi aap kahe" said Soni with a smirk
I hope you liked it! Enjoy and Comment!😊
Chapter 1: Page 1
Chapter 2: Page 5
Chapter 3: Page 10
Chapter 4: Page 14
Chapter 5: Page 19
Chapter 6: Page 25
Chapter 7: Page 28
Chapter 8: Page 31
Chapter 9: Page 36
Chapter 10: Page 41
Chapter 11: Page 46
Chapter 12: Page 51
Chapter 13: Page 58
Chapter 14: Page 63
Chapter 15: Page 68
Chapter 16: Page 73
Chapter 17: Page 77
Chapter 18: Page 82
Chapter 19: Page 87
Chapter 20: Page 91
Chapter 21: Page 97
Chapter 22: Page 102
" Tej bhai saa! aap mere se bach nahi payenge" said Geet as she walked up in her pure white anarkali and she put a turban on her head and covered her mouth only revealing her eyes. " Are you challenging your teacher Geet" said Tej with a smirk. " Yehi samaj lijiye" said Geet as she was in position. Tej laughed and he looked the other way for a second and fooled Geet into thinking he wasn't paying attention.
She ran towards him with her sword and she spun her sword almost against Tej's neck and then Tej ducked down! Geet looked at him frustratingly but she kept her patience... she was afterall challenging her older brother. Geet and Tej were fighting sword to sword combat and Geet ducked at his every blow. Tej grabbed his shield and blocked Geet's blow.
" Bhai saa!" said Geet as she tricked him by ducking and quickly somersaulting to the side and standing behind him and she put her sword against his neck... " I win" smirked Geet as she was breathng hard. Tej laughed and he said, " Geet, ek baat batao...tum mujhe itna bewakoof samajti ho kya?". " Bhai saa... apne to yehi mujhe sikhaya tha" said Geet as she felt a little sorry for him.
" Acha ek baat suniye... don't ever lose your concentration or else someone will kill you in two seconds" said Tej as Geet's sword that was against his neck loosened and he quickly ducked and she sort of tripped. He was smirking, " Geet?". Geet got angry and she was a fiery young princess of 18. She ran towards him and they had sword to sword combat with Geet ducking and flying behind him. He was a strong guy too.
Tej laughed and then a servant boy came and said, " Rajjkumari Geet... rani maa aapko bula rahi hain". Geet got distracted and then suddenly Tej came up and took her sword from her hand by his sword. Geet realized and she got angry, " Bhai saa! thats not fair!". "Life isn't fair Geet" said Tej as he was spinning the sword around with his sword. " Don't ever lose your concentration" said Tej as he stopped spinning the sword and gave Geet her sword back.
Geet was a little frustrated and Tej walked upto her and he said, " Meri pyari si behn, aap jeeti hum haaray". Geet smiled," No... not like that Tej bhai saa... main aapse jeet kar dikhaoongi!". Tej laughed and he patted Geet on the head and said, " Jao.. Rani maa bula rahin hai.." Geet frowned and she hugged Tej. " Main aapse baad mein milti hoon bhai saa". Tej nodded and Geet ran off towards her chambers.
The servant girls quickly filed behind her and said, " Rani maa bohot ghussay mein hain..." " Haan haan.. pata hai humay..." said Geet as she took her turban off revealing her long light brown hair. She walked into her room, that was literally one whole part of the palace. Geet quickly dressed in a green lengha with a matching choli and the servant girls made her hair. They tied the dupatta around her waist, covering her stomach a little and back.
Geet put it on her head and she put her jewellry on and she walked with her two head servant girls almost running behind her since she walked so fast. Geet went into her mothers chambers and Rani maa stood up frowning, " Kahaan thi aap Geet?" asked Rani maa. Geet smirked, " Tej bhai saa aur mein bahar angan mein thay... " " Acha jo bhi hai... Geet beti, idar meri paas behto" said Rani maa. Geet nodded and she sat beside her mother.
" Geet.. ab aap bari ho gayi hain... aur apke pitta aur mein yeh soch rahein hai kay aapka swayamvar kar wa dein" said Ranimaa. Geet looked at her surprised, " Maa.. kyun?!!" " Beti, aap bari ho chuke hain... aur hum aapka vivah karna chahthay hain" said Ranimaa. Geet looked at her feet and she said, " Nahin maa.. hum vivah nahi karna chahtay". Ranimaa sighed," Geet... aapko vivah karna parega..." Geet sighed, " Maa... ..." " Kya?" said Ranimaa. Geet rolled her eyes and said, " Agar aapki kwaish hai kay hum vivah karlein to hum ek shart rakte hain". Ranimaa was a little shocked, " Kaisi shart?".
" Hum swayamvar mein beheteinge... par hum yeh shart rakhte hain kay jo bhi raajkumar aayega...He has to verse me in sword fighting and if he wins, I will marry him and if he loses then he will have to go back to his home" said Geet. " Geet!" said Ranimaa. " Maa! no one can force me to marry and you can't force me either and this is my challenge to all those rajkumar's who think that they can win me over!" said Geet as she stood up with anger. Ranimaa sighed, " Main aapke pitta se baat karti hoon". Geet turned around and smiled, " Acha maa"... Rani maa smiled and she hugged Geet, " Hum apki koi baat nahi taal sakte... aapke pitta bhi aapki koi baat nahi taal sakte". Geet laughed, " Humara naam Rajkumari Geet hain maa". " Woh to humay pata hai beta" said Ranimaa. " Maa.. main chalti hoon..." said Geet as she went towards the door.
Geet was in her room, when her father, Sumer Singh Rathod entered with a frown on his face. He was a tall man, still quite young looking even if he has a 23 year old son and a 18 year old daughter. Geet stood up, " Pita jii!?". The servant girls stood up and they stood behind Geet. " Ekaant" said Sumer Singh. The servant girls exited out of the room to leave Geet alone in the room with her father. " Hum aapki maa say kya sun rahe hain?" said Sumer Singh. Geet looked down and she was a little afraid of her father.
" Humay jawaab dijiye!" said Sumer Singh. " Woh pitta jii" said Geet. SumerSingh walked upto his daughter and she was very short compared to his tall figure. " Yeh kaunsi shart rakhi hai aapne?" said Sumer Singh a little more softly noticing his daughters discomfort. Geet looked up at her father with her aqua green eyes and said, " Hum swayamvar mein nahi behtenge agar humari khwaish nahi poor hogi" said Geet. Sumer Singh sighed, " Geet!". " Pitta ji, aapko pata hai kay koi bhi raajkumar aajata hain aur humara haath mangne aata hai aur humay yeh cheezay pasand nahin hai" said Geet as she crossed her arms and she was clearly angry.
Sumer Singh sighed and said, " Agar yeh aapki khwaish hai to humay manzoor hai". Geet smiled and she hugged her father, " Pitta ji! dhanevaad". Sumer Singh laughed. " Aapko pata hai kay aap humari ladli hain..." " Ji, aur main aapse sab se zyaada pyar karti hoon" said Geet she broke out of the hug and Sumer Singh patted her on the head. "Hum chalte hain.. aur aapka swayamvar agle hafte hoga.." said Sumer Singh as he left her chamber. Geet nodded, " Ji pitta ji".
" Ek aur baat...Tej ka dost, aur ek aur rajkumar bhi humaray mehel mein rahenge... aapki maa aapko sab kuch samjha dengi" ssaid Sumer Singh as he left. Geet nodded and she shrugged... she rolled her eyes and she laid on her bed. The servant girls came in and they all giggled, " Yeh to bohot achi baat hai!... Geet... agar aap apne rajkumar se nahin mili to?" said Soni one of her close friends and servant girls. "To hum vivah nahi karenge" said Geet as she played with her necklace. " Agar Rajkumar Tej ne sun liya to?" said Soni. " To hum wohi kahenge unse" said Geet. " Aur unka dost aur Jaisalmer ka Raajkumar bhi aarahe hain.. agar woh aapke rajkumar ban gaye... to?" teased Soni. Geet rolled her eyes, " No one can beat me... and I won't let them beat me... not even Tej bhai saa's dost". " Jo bhi aap kahe" said Soni with a smirk
I hope you liked it! Enjoy and Comment!😊
Chapter 1: Page 1
Chapter 2: Page 5
Chapter 3: Page 10
Chapter 4: Page 14
Chapter 5: Page 19
Chapter 6: Page 25
Chapter 7: Page 28
Chapter 8: Page 31
Chapter 9: Page 36
Chapter 10: Page 41
Chapter 11: Page 46
Chapter 12: Page 51
Chapter 13: Page 58
Chapter 14: Page 63
Chapter 15: Page 68
Chapter 16: Page 73
Chapter 17: Page 77
Chapter 18: Page 82
Chapter 19: Page 87
Chapter 20: Page 91
Chapter 21: Page 97
Chapter 22: Page 102
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