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Posted: 14 years ago
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I am liking this ff yar and great start...👏

please pm me wen u update...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Waiting eagerly for next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yaar Awesome start.....update sooner😡
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Neet,
Congrates for new SR ff.
Amazing start & awesome update.
Continue soon & thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Dr.Neet!!🤗

new SR ff yay.........
luv uuuuuuuu..................😳☢️
nice concept...........btw know where the story is heading..........😉
Loved the both part........😊 liked Shilpa-Ridz bonding.......👍🏼 which we never got to see in that CMG😡😡😡😡 yyyyyyyyyy eewwman 🥺😡😡😡😡😆.............arghhhhhh.........😡😡😡
Throw that 🤬 soon out of RIDZ LIFE..........😡😆
congrats for new SR ff............🥳 🥳
continue soon both ff's..........😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 3
Recap : The Gupta household is eagerly awaiting the return of the Modi sons and though Ridhdima doesn't show it outwardly, she is the one who is most excited. Over the fifteen years, she had kept in touch with Armaan and they'd fallen in love. Now, he was coming for her and no one else knew about it.

Scene : Next day evening. Gupta house.

Riddhima had just returned from the hospital and she walked into her room. She'd had a hectic day but she did not feel tired. There was nervous energy coursing through her. She was excited and nervous about her impending meeting with Armaan. Maybe she wouldn't meet him today. Papa had said their flight was at 8. That meant it would be late by the time they got home. They would most probably go straight to bed and that too after such a long flight. Nah. She'd probably see him tomorrow. But what would she say to him? How would they greet each other? They'd become more than friends over the years through letters, but how would it be in person? They hadn't seen each other in 15 years. God, there were so many questions whirling in her head, she felt dizzy with excitement. Riddhima shook her head and decided she needed a shower. She put her things away, grabbed a towel and went into the bathroom. She took her time in the shower and when she came out Shilpa was sitting there frowning.

Riddhima : Kya hua Shilpa? Tumhara chehra ithna uthra hua kyun hai?

Shilpa : Dekho na di 6 baj gaye aur Papa abhi thak nahi aaye..

Riddhima : Arey haan, Papa tho emergency surgery mein hai.. Maine nikalthe waqt un ke liye PA system par announcement suna tha.. Sister Stella batha rahin thi ki koi accident case hai jise kaafi severe head injury hui hai..

Shilpa : Lekin Di, ab Armaan aur Sid ko pick karne airport kaun jaayega?

Riddhima : Patha nahi..

Just then Padma walks in.

Padma : Arey Riddhima.. Tum kab aayi? Bathaya nahi, main coffee bana dethi..

Riddhima : Bass thodi der pehle aayi hoon maa.. Wo zara thak gayi thi tho aathe hi shower lene chali gayi..

Padma : Chalo achcha hua ki tum bhi aa gayi.. Tumhare dad ki secretary ne abhi abhi call kiya tha. Wo keh rahi thi ki tumhare dad kisi emergency surgery mein busy hain aur unhone kaha hai ki agar wo 7 baje thak nahi pahunche tho tum dono jaake Armaan aur Siddhant ko airport se le aana. Wo mujhe dinner ki thayyariyaan karni hain na..

Shilpa : That's great.. Aap tension math lo Mom hum yun gaye aur un dono ko lekar yun aaye..

Padma smiles at Shilpa and leaves.

Shilpa : Oho.. Agar mujhe pehle patha hotha ki humme un dono ko pick karne jaana hai tho main nayi dress khareed lethi..

Riddhima : Shilpa!

Shilpa : Aur nahi tho kya Di.. Shopping karne ke liye koi na koi bahana tho chahiye na..

Riddhima : Dekho Shilpa, main jaanthi hoon ki tum unn dono ke aane ko lekar bahut excited ho but the thing is I don't want to see you hurt.. Tum..

Shilpa : Arey Di, yeh tho sab mazak hai na.. Main jaanthi hoon main thodi romantic types hoon lekin main buddhu nahi hoon.. Aap tension math lo.. Ab jaldi se bathao main kya pehenoon?

Riddhima and Shilpa spend a good one-hour trying to decide what Shilpa should wear. Finally, they select a red kurta and jeans. Riddhima goes over to her cupboard and takes out a blue chudidar and smiles thinking that blue was Armaan's favourite colour too. She decided not to wear her specs and wore her contacts instead.

It was 7:15 and since Dr. Shashank was still out of contact, Riddhima and Shilpa set off to the airport. Riddhima felt her pulse double with each passing second. Padma had given their driver a placard with Sid's and Armaan's name so that they wouldn't have any trouble finding them. But Riddhima knew that her heart would feel Armaan's presence. If they could hear each others' unspoken words across the thousands of miles that separated them, she was sure she could hear his heartbeat when he was close by. Her heart pounding with excitement, Riddhima kept her gaze fixed on the road ahead, the road that would take her to her Armaan.

Scene : Mumbai Airport. Arrivals terminal.

Siddhant : I still don't think this is a good idea dude. I mean what's the point?

Armaan : What's the point in anything in life Sid? Life is just to chill and enjoy.

Siddhant : How does any of this come under chilling or enjoying?

Armaan : Where is your adventurous streak man? We are going to head out on our own.

Siddhnat : But this isn't America Armaan, This is India..

Armaan : I know, and that makes it all the more fun.. So chill dude..

Sid pulls off his bag from the conveyor belt. They were standing at the baggage claim area.

Siddhant : I seriously don't see the point in all of this..

Armaan ; That's because you are not Armaan man..

Siddhant : And I'd rather not be Armaan..

Sid lets out a sigh of frustration. They get all their bags and start to walk towards the exit. Suddenly Armaan stops.

Armaan : Oh teri!!

Sid ; Ab kya hua?

Armaan : Wo dekh..

Sid looks to where Armaan is pointing and he sees a placard with his and Armaan's name on it. But what really captures Sid's attention is the girl holding the placard. The placard covered her face but she was wearing a blue churidar and Sid's heart stopped.

Riddhima was feeling highly awkward and embarrassed standing there holding a placard. The driver had asked to go to the restroom and Shilpa had bumped into some old friend and was chatting away. Riddhima had no option but to hold the placard and stand there. She covered her face with the placard so that no one would have to see her. All of a sudden, Riddhima's heart skipped a beat. He is here, her heart told her and Riddhima closed her eyes. Yes, he was here and she could feel him with every nerve ending in her body. She slowly opened her eyes and gently lowered the placard.

Sid stood there watching as the placard was slowly lowered but before he could even see her eyes, Armaan pulled him aside.

Sid : Kya kar raha hai?

Armaan : Abbe tu ne dekha nahi? Wo ladki hamare naam ka placard lekar khadi hai.. Us ne humme dekh liya tho?

Sid : Idiot, humme yahan pandrah saalon mein kisi nahi dekha.. Humme yahan koi nahi pehchaanega..

Armaan : Arey haan, correct.. yeh baath tho main bhool hi gaya..

Sid : Ab chalein?

Armaan : Haan chal chal chal..

As they emerge from behind the wall, Sid's eyes immediately scan the crowd but now, a guy in a driver's uniform was holding the placard. He felt utterly disappointed.

Sid (mumbling to himself) : Yeh Armaan aur iske plan!!

Armaan : Tu ne kuch kaha?

Sid : Nahi tho..

Armaan : Achcha chal..

As they are about to leave the terminal, Sid stops for a minute. A gentle breeze picks up and Sid feels his heart skip a beat. She was here, somewhere. He looks around and just as he turns to his right, a lady blocks his vision and he does not see Riddhima who is standing just a few feet away talking on the phone. When the lady moves away, Sid walks out of the terminal and Riddhima walks in the opposite direction.

Riddhima goes up to Shilpa who is still talking to her friend.

Riddhima : Shilpa..

Shilpa : Haan di.. Wo dono aa gaye?

Riddhima : nahi wo actually abhi papa ka phone aaya.. Papa batha rahe the ki Shekhar Uncle ne bathaya ki unn dono ki koi connecting flight miss ho gayi tho wo aaj nahi pahunch paayenge.. Shayad kal aayenge..

Shilpa (frowning) : Oh.. How sad na?

Riddhima : Hmmm..

Though she was trying hard not to show it, Riddhima was terribly disappointed. She was sure she'd felt Armaan's presence but then if he hadn't come whose presence had she felt? Or was she just so excited she thought she felt something when she didn't actually? She shook her head and heaved a sigh.

Shilpa : Arey dekho aap bhi depressed ho gayin.. Chalo depression kam karne ke liye ice cream khaathe hain..

Riddhima : Shilpa, bahut raath ho gayi hai, humme ghar jaana chahiye..

Shilpa : Ghar hi tho jaa rahe hain, aur waise bhi ice cream waala tho raasthe mein hi hai na.. Chalo chalo chalo..

Shilpa drags a reluctant Riddhima out of the terminal. Riddhima casts one final backward glance and scans the crowd but sees nothing or no one that could make her heart skip a beat. Maybe she'd imagined it all.. She had been so excited.. that had to be it..

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Riddhima's and Shilpa's car pulls up in front of an ice cream vendor on a deserted street. At the far end of the street, close to a deserted bus stop, a taxi comes to a stop. Shilpa gets out of their car and goes up to the ice cream vendor to get the ice creams. Out of the taxi, Armaan, Sid and the driver step out.

Armaan : Kya hua bhai sahab?

Driver : Patha nahi sahab ya tho tyre puncture ya gaadi kharab ho gayi.. Dekhtha hoon..

Sid : Great! So much for your sense of adventure Armaan..

Armaan : Ab how am I supposed to know ki Indian cars and roads are so bad man?

Driver : Oh bhai sahab hamare India ke baare mein kuch math bolna!!

Sid : Arey nahi nahi bhaiyya uske kehne ka mathlab wo nahi tha.. Aap pls gaadi theek kijiye.. Armaan tu chup rahega pls?

Armaan : What's the problem man?

Sid : What's the problem? You are the problem.. Achche khaase Dr. Shashank hamare liye gaadi bhej rahe the.. Lekin nahi.. Tumhe tho sense of adventure chahiye.. Lets explore Mumbai man (imitating Armaan).. Ab karo explore iss sunsaan sadak par..

Armaan : Hey I've heard the guy is a Hitler.. I thought Hitler ke saath travel karne se achcha hai hum khud hi chale jaayein..

Sid : Yeah right..

Just then thunder rolls and lightning strikes. It starts to rain heavily. The driver and Armaan quickly rush back into the car.

Armaan : Oh man! I hate it when it rains.. I hate the rain and I hate getting wet.. God!! Now its getting bad.. Sid, tum..

He turns to the seat beside him but Sid is not there..

Armaan : Sid? Sid?!!

He sees Sid standing outside, soaking in the rain..

Driver : Arey sahab ko bolo ki andar aake bait jaayein..

Armaan : Rehne do.. Mera bhai na, thoda paagal hai.. Usse baarish mein bheegna achcha lagtha hai..

Sid is standing in the rain with his arms open, getting drenched.

Further down the road, Riddhima and Shilpa are having ice cream in the car when it starts to rain. On an impulse, Riddhima steps out of the car.

Shilpa : Kya kar rahi ho di? Bheeg jaogi.. Di.. Di..

But Riddhima does not listen to her. Riddhima walks out into the middle of the road and splashes her feet in a puddle of water. The noise catches Sid's attention. He slowly turns towards her. Riddhima does not see Sid standing further down the road while she enjoys the rain and dances away. (The background score is Love is in the rain from RHTDM). Sid is mesmerized by what he sees. It was the same blue churidar girl. The occasional lightning streaks illuminate Riddhima and he catches glimpses of her face, but never her whole face. She was a vision. Sid couldn't take his eyes off her dancing figure. Riddhima feels this strange sensation of being watched. She stops dancing and turns towards Sid. Its dark, and except for the occasional flashes of lightning, there is no other light and they are standing pretty far away from each other. As she turned towards Sid and their eyes met, it felt as if time had stopped. Riddhima felt her heart pounding away, but she did not know if it was from the dancing or from the way the stranger was looking at her. She couldn't see his face properly, or his eyes, but she knew he was looking at her.

Sid felt that his heart had forgotten how to beat when the girl turned towards him and looked at him. Her wet hair clung to her face and he could not see her face or eyes properly, but he knew her eyes were on him. He had this inexplicably overwhelming urge to walk up to her, hold her face in his hands, move her hair away from her face and gaze into those eyes. Somehow he knew those eyes would be the most beautiful eyes ever. Sid runs a nervous hand through his hair.

It was as if she was in a dream, Riddhima felt. Her gaze was locked with a tall, handsome stranger, whose face she couldn't even make out, except during the occassional strikes of lightning, on a deserted street while both of them enjoyed the rain. She felt a pull towards the stranger. As if destiny had been conspiring for a very long time to bring them together right here, right now, just like this and it had finally happened. They stood there unable to speak or move, as if speaking, moving or even breathing would break the this moment that destiny had orchestered just for them.

Shilpa (her head sticking out of the taxi window) : Di!!!!
The moment was gone. Suddenly, feeling extremely conscious and embarrassed of the way her thoughts were running wild and realizing she was standing in front of a stranger drenched in the rain, she ran towards the car. And just as suddenly as the downpour had begun, it stopped. Sid realized that he'd been standing there staring at some random female in a blue churidar when he had to be concentrating on other things right now. What if she wasn't the same female at the airport? Blue wasn't an uncommon colour, definitely more than one female could have the same blue churidar. But there had been something about her that had held him captive, incapable of looking or walking away. Sid shook his head. He was going mad. Before getting into the taxi, he looked up once again and there was no one in sight. No car, no blue churidar clad female. God, he was hallucinating now!! Love makes you crazy, he thought to himself. He'd been waiting to meet her for so long, it was driving him crazy.
As Riddhima and Shilpa sped home in their taxi, Shilpa went on and on about how she disliked getting wet in the rain and how mom would be upset when she got to know Riddhima had gotten wet in the rain etc etc etc while Riddhima was lost in thoughts of what had just happened a few minutes ago. She was normally a very calm and composed girl, not known to harbor romantic fantasies. No one, except one person, knew of her romantic side - that she believed in fairy tales, in destiny, in soul mates. But today, a few minutes ago, she'd forgotten all about being calm and composed. For a few minutes there, she'd even thought that the stranger in front of her was the very same one that had appeared in her dreams time and again. That wasn't possible, she thought to herself shaking her head. God! she was going mad.. The wait to meet the love of her life, the longing, was making her go mad..
Edited by neet06 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I'll comment after reading
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Hey Neet
It was beautiful. Finally SR met ☺️. Quite filmy but still lovely. HAYEEEE I just can't wait for their official meeting. Neet PLZ don't change his name. I really want this FF the way it is going because I know that at the end Riddhima is going to b Sid's. I don't have any issues. Again I wanna thank U for starting this FF. Now continue soon PLZ😊
Edited by sonia1000 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello everyone!!

Back with another update!! as you can see this FF is just about as filmy as it gets!! So Sid and Riddhima airport par milthe milthe reh gaye but their first meeting (well, though they didn't see each others' faces properly or even speak to each other, this is technically speaking, their first meeting) was complete with all the necessary background effects 😳
I know a lot of you are mad at me about 'you-know-who' being in this FF but he is a very important character in bringing together Sid and Riddhima in this FF. He cannot be excluded guys. Sorry about that.
However, I do know that some of you feel really strongly about him and I was thinking that maybe, I could just change his name to something else. Do let me know how you feel about that.
And of course, thank you so much for your lovely, fabulous comments.. They really keep me going... Do let me know how you like the story so far..
Tc
Cheers
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Neet it was fabulous!!
And dont worry about it being filmy.....I love filmy!😳😆😆
And as for the change of name of sitaraman, well you know my feelings about him but sweetie its completely up to you!
Actually Im really looking forward to the 3 of them meeting cos I want to see if her heart recognises Sid even if her head is telling her something else!
And my one question.....why the heck did Sid sign the letters as Armaan?😕
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Posted: 14 years ago
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as i said in ur other ff also

u always feel me that iam wacthing serial😊 it was to gooooooooooooooooooood 👏 wow loved destiny dialog😃

update soon and pm me 😊

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