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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey tashu 🤗

yar your to good at this another fabulous fantabulous update ❤️
I loved all of sajan and mayur talk
haha the irls ne toh boys ki band baja di by saying the guys arent handsom
ab un larkio ko toh woh dikha ke rahe gain that how handsom they are😍😉
bu i really hate sams dad i feel so bad for his mom and sam and nupup sucks to hve a dad like that 😔
ab jaldi update karna
mujhe or parna hain
love ya
tanzeel
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update

thanx for pm

continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Tasfiii
plzzz update this FF.
i m waiitng for mayur special party sequence in ur next part
plz update soon


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Posted: 14 years ago
waiting for Mayur moments please update soon...!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
hello everyone!🤗
thanks to everyone for their sweet and lovely comments
really means a lot to me😳
i am overwhelmed with your response...thanks a ton guys
i wish i had enough time to reply them individually..but trust me i just dont get enough time..but truly they mean a lot to me🤗
again thanks a ton❤️

now pls scroll down for the next part
hope you all enjoy it as much as i enjoyed it while writing😳

love
tasfia

Edited by vampire_girl - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
part-3



Gunajn and mayank both were looking at the door impatiently… "pata nahi kya kamal dikhane wala hai jo itna der laga raha hai… ajeeb ho tum bhi samrat"…gunjan thought in her mind… she knew when smarat say something he surely fulfills it..and she was eager to see how he's going to fulfill his promise this time..she smiled at her own thoughts… "tum ne to mujhe badal hi dala smarat"…she blushed unknowingly…

Mayank was talking with someone but his eyes were fixed at the doors…only nupur bhsuhan have the ability to distract mayank's mind… "kahan reh gayi yea..ayi kyun nahi abhi tak…phir se kisi se larai karrahi hogi"… he smiled st his thoughts… "ab abhi jao nupur..akhir tumhe dekhna bhi to hai ki mayank Sharma kitna handsome hai"…a big smile crept on his face…

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samrat looked at nupur who was taking deep breath in every half minute…he was shocked to see her like this ..this was the first time she was nervous like this…they stood infront the gate…samrat again looked at nupur… "kya baat hai nups tu to aaj kal nervous bhi hone lagi..baat kya hai?"… he said with a wink… nupur gave him a angry glare… "arey bata na..kya baat hai"…this time he said in his normal tone which can comfort nupur…nupur smiled… "I am wearing India dress for the first time"…she said looking down….smarat gave her a side hug.. "and trust me you are looking like an angel..blaki mai to kahunga..aaj se Indian hi pehna kar..you look like a doll"…nupur smiled and nooded… "ab andar chalein?"… nupur asked him.. "haan sure kyun nahi..ab tujhe to kisi aur ke compliment ka intezar hai na"…he winked at her..this time nupur played his game on him.. "haan usi ke bhai ka jiski behen ka compliment ka intezar tumhe hai"…she said and went inside leaving a shocked and stunned samrat behind…

nupur went inside and stopped at the door…all the girls of their school was thir and also boys…she looked at them …all in western…she smiled…. "as always nupur bhushsan sabse alag lagrahi hai"…mayank was now restless so he thought of going to the door and checked…he came and stood there..he didn't realize that nupur was standing beside him…he started lokking outsie…until he felt a tap on his shoulder…he looked at her and was supried plus stunned… he couldn't believe his eyes…how can anyone look so beautiful..he always knew that nupur is beautiful…but today something was different…maybe because he had never see her in Indian clothes before and he felt blessed to see her like this…today he realized that nupur was truly god's sened angel…his angel

nupur was feeling embarrassed …she never felt something like this before…she was amazed at herself…she should have called mayank normally…but again..today something is different… it took some time for mayank to realize that he was actually starring at her and that too in a party..well that was not something mayank sharma's style…he came back to the earth… "nupur yea tum ho?"… he said scanning her from toe to heed… nupur cast an angry glare to him… "nahi nupur ka bhoot hoon!..kyun mai achi nahi lagrahi kya?"..she said making a puppy face…maynak came near her and bend down a little and whispered in her ears… "aaj se pehle maine itni khubsurat ladki kabhi nahi dekhi"… and he got back to his place… nupur blushed unknowingly…nupur bhsuhn was actually blushing and that too for the first time

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samrat came and directly went inside ..he had seen mayank and nupur but thought of meeting gunjan first…today he wanted to know gunjan's pov first and somehow he managed to find her…she was standing at the croner…typical gunajn type..he smiled looking at her..the party was in her house only but still she was nervous…she's truly an innocent girl…no one can be like her… firstly he didn't notice but when he realized what was he looking at he knew that today something was really different…he was stunded to see her…she was looking so beautiful..purity was clearly visible in her face… she looked like a goddess…how can someone be so perfect…her eyes her lips …smarat could look at them for hours and hours…and white…he never liked white but from nowonwars its going to be his favourite… "beautiful"… he whispered..without wasting much time he jumped where gunjan was standing… gunajn got scared and was about to fall because of the sudden presue but samarat hold her by her wrist…

gunjan was totally lost in his eyes..his eyes could say how crystal clear his heart is! ..they both were lost in each other ..samrat got his sense back and helped her to get up…. "tum theek ho?"… he asked her… "hmm..haan mai theek hoon"… the atmosphire was going quiet embrassing so smarat thought of getting in back to the track… "waise tum kuch bhul rahi ho"… he said trying to show her how "handsome" he was looking…gunjan looked at him understood his meaning… "nahi mujhe to nahi lagraha mai kuch bhul rahi hoon"… she said looking here and there… "chashmish itna handsome ladka tumhare samne khara hai aur tum idar udahr dekh rahi ho?"… he said with a shocking expression… "handsome?..!!"…she said with equal shock… "kahan hai handsome..mujhe to is puri party me mere bhai ke ilawa aur koi handsome ladka dekhai nahi de raha"….she said with a big smile…samrat hold his hand and pinned her aginst the wall… "samrat..kya karrahe ho?..!!"… she said in a scared tone… "apne chasme se nahi dil se dekho to jarur nazar ayega"…he said whispering which forced gunjan to close her eyes…but on the very second minute she found smarat 5 foot away from her… "she was shocked with his guester … "is her opinion means so much for him?"… "samrat ruko.!"… she called him… samrat smiled at her..he knew that she will stop him for sure… "bolo chashsmish ..mai sun raha hoon"… he said not facing her… gunjan came to him… "is party me koi hai jo sabse jyada handsome lagraha hai…aur uo mera bhai bilkul bhi nahi hai"… she said and winked at him…samrat was shocked… "this girl was surely crazy"… he smiled like a fool

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"hello aunty"…both samrat and nupur hugged shilpa aunty…from the day these four have met ..the had shared a special bond with shilpa auanty…she too loved them as much as mayank and gunjan… moreover mayank's father was manager in bhushan industries… so the families had a cordial relation… but after the death of mayank's fahther the relation is now taken care by the childrens

"aunty ke bacho..aj waaqt mila tumlogo ko mere liye?"… she said holinding both samrat and nupur's ear with her both hands… "sorry aunty uo hum bohot busy the"…samrat said placing a kiss on her cheeks..nupur instantly placed a kiss on her another cheek.. "yea meri taraf se sorry"… all of them smiled at her… "nupur yea tum ho?".. she said analyzing her… "haan jee aunty..yea apki nupur hi hai..socha is bar kuch alag try karoon…kyun achi nahi lagrahi kya?"… she said with pout.. "arey nahi nahi bacha tum to duniya ki sab se pyari bachi ho… aur aaj to tum pari lagrahi ho"… she said truly..she has lawys loved nupur… she could see her chilhood time in her…same mischivious eyes…same talkative nature…

"aunty ab meri bhi thodi si tareef kar do"… smarat said getting back the attention towards him… "haan haan kyun nahi…waise tum sabhi aaj itne taiyar shaiyar??…baat kya hai"… she said with a wink… "arey aunty mai to apke liye taiyar hua hoon ab is nups ka mujhe nahi pata"… he said with a mischevious smile… "jhoot mat bolo bhai..tuhine to kaha tha ki tum gunji ko bata doge tum kitne handsome dikhte ho..aur ab baat palat rahe ho?"… nupur blabbered…without realizing what she was saying and who was standing there…she closed her eyes in fear as soon as she realized her mistake… "acha to yea sab meri beti ke liye tha..waah ! kya azamana hai mere samne hi meri beti pe line mari ja rahi hai?..!!… she said showing fake anger… nupur burst out into laughter… samarat cast an angry glare to her… "aunty iski kartut bhi sunlo..apke bete ke liye yea Indian doll banke ayi hai"… he said angrily… now this was nupur's turn to be shocked…shilpa glared her.. "nahi nahi bilkul bhi nahi"…she tried to defend herself… shilpa aunty understood the cheesy teen age mentality… "koi baat nahi"…she said with a smile and left from there…still smiling in her mind…nupur looked at smarat and shot an disgusting look… "bhai kya bol rahe the tum?"…she said in a loud voice… "maine??…shuru tune kiya tha samjhi"…he said in a mocking voice… "dekho tum…they were about to continue their fights when gunjan and mayank joined them

"yaar yea fights ghar jake karna…yahn enjoy karona"…mayank said putting his hand around nupur….samrat noticed that…and he also put his hand around gunjan… gunjan was shocked… "oye meri behen se door reh"… maynak said in a strict tone… "haan haan jarur..tu meri behen ka picha chod mai teri behen ka chod dunga deal"… samrat said indicating mayank to remove his hand from nupur… mayank instantly removed it… "chashmish chalo ..mujhe tumhe kuch dikhana hai"…he said holding and dragging her… "par smarat suno to…gunjan tried to say something but samrat was samrat after all… "mayank chalo na hum bhi bahar chaltein hain"… nupur said holding mayank's hand… "par party chodke?"…mayank said not sure with her idea… "pls na mayank chalet hain"… mayank couldn't refuse…how could he! "thik hai chalo"

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"samrat..hume party se is tarah nahi an chahiye tha…uo bhi ihan park me"… she said setting her glasses… "arey chashmish fikar not… mai hoon na"…samrat said with attitute… "aur mujhe usika dar hai"…gunjan said with a giggle… "kya chashmish..kabhi to meri tareef kiya karo"…he pouted like a child… "mai to kabhi bhi kisi ki tareef nahi karti"..she said normally… "par meri kiya karo na"..he said taking a seat on the bench…gunjan also sta beside him… "samrat ab bolo ihan kyun ayen hain hum?"…she asked directly… "date pe ayen hain"…he winked at her… "kya??!!"…gunjan got up with shock… samrat pulled her hand and made her sit again… "uff chahsmish itna serious kyun hoti ho mazak tha baba"… he said with a giggle… "tum pagal ho smarat"…she shook her head in disbelief… "acha chasmish yea dekho"…. He said showing her his guiter… "arey yea tumhara guiter…ihan kaise aya?"…she again got up… "arey chahsmish tum yea baat baat pe khari kyun hojati ho..guiter hi to hai..koi bhoot thodi"… samrat said with irritation… "haan haan samajh gayi…par ise ihan kyun laye ho?"… she asked looking at thhe guiter… "arey tumhe nahi pata..hum cricket khelenge..tum ball karna aur mai guiter se bat karunga what say??"..he said with mocking expression… "samrat..!!

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"mayank hum bik pe chalein?"…nupur said cutely… "noways! Humare paas lisence nahi hai..kahin koi garbar hui to?"… mayank said as if he could imagine himself going to the jail…nupur face hung down… "nupur acha chalo walk pe chalet hain"… he said pulling her… the walk was going silent…nupur was feeling strange.. she has been alone with mayank many times..but today..she was feeling as if her heart beat was going faster… she was scared wht if mayank hears her hear beat…she never felt this way before… she used to think all this cheesy ..to get ready for someone… "someone special"… was mayank really special?..many questions and no answers..was this just friendship or was it more than friendship… but how can anyone fall in love at the age of 17…no this is not the time to fall in love right… nupur was quiet so mayank thought of breaking the silence

"nupur tum itni chup kyun ho?"… mayank aksed not sure wat was bothering her… "hmm..nahi.mayank mujhe tumse kuch puchna tha?"… nupur said with difficulty… "WOW!! Nupur tumhe kuch puchna hai aur tum permission le rahi ho..dress ke saath dimag bhi change kar liya kya"… mayank said with a laugh… "shut up mayank! Tum na..mujhse baat hi mat karo..humesha ba smera mazak hi urao bas!"… she said with annoynce… "arey sorry baba… acha batao na kya baat hai"… maynak said trying to cathch with her speed… "nahi jao ihan se!"… nupur said walking more fast… mayank came and stood infront of her…. "yahi janna hai na..tum in kapdo me kaisi lag rahi ho?".. mayank said with a smirk… nupur looked up with shoc,,this guys was crazy how can he know everything about her..whatever she thinks..does! gosh!… "sach bataun?"… mayank said coming closer to her… nupur nooded as she hadn't the courage to look back into his eyes…. Mayank started his never ending shayrai habit…

Aapke deedar ko nikal aaye hai taare
Aapki khushboo se chha gayi hai bahare
Aapke saath dikhte hai kuch aise nazare
Ki chhup chhup ke chand bhi bas aaphi ko nihare

Nupur was totally red like tomato… maynak was smiling at her… she was surely a master piece..for the first time he saw her blushing and that too on his compliment… he somewhere felt really happy… sometime he feels that nupur is more than a friend but then again..its not a time to fall in love.. and mayank sharama had to acchive many goals.. but he prayed in his mind that nupur may get the true love of her life who can take care of her like a flower

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"samrat..mujhe nahi sunna koi gana..mai ja rahi hoon ghar"… gunjan turned around but stopped soon as she heared the sound of smarat's guiter…

tumko paya hai to jaise khoya hoon
kehna chahoon bhi to tumse kya kahon
kisi zabaon mein bhi woh labaz hi nahi
ki jeene mein tum ho kya tumhein bata sakun


she turned around to see him lost in his world..gunjan couldn't believe her eyes..suddenly the place looked more beautiful…she was a girl and like any other girl she also has a wish that someone praises her…and if samrat actually was singing for her..than nothing can be better than this

main aagar kahoon tumsa haseen,
kaynaat mein nahi hai kahin
tareef yeh bhi to sach hai kuch bhi nahi
tumko paya hai to jaise khoya hoon..


mayank forwarded his hand …and winked at nupur ..at first nupur was shocked..but than mayank was unexpected… she gave her hand and mayank pulled her closer..though they have been friends for many years and she ha sbeen cloe with him many time but today…something was different..something has changed..


shokhiyon mein dooobi yeh aadayein,
chehre se jhalki hui hain
zulf ki ghani ghani ghatayein,
shaan se dhalki hui hain

samrat bend down on his knees and took gunjans hand..he was samrat..he doestn need anyone's permission to touch his chahshmish… gunjan was lost..for the first time someone was maiking her feel so special

lehrata aachal hai jaise badal
bhaahon mein bhari hai jaise chandani, roop ki chandani
main agar kahoon yeh dilkashi, hai nahi kahin na hogi kabhi
tareef yeh bhi to sach hai kuch bhi nahi
tumko paya hai to jaise khoya hoon..


the happiness was clearly visible in their eyes..nupur and mayank both were so lost in each other… mayank snag those from the bottom of his heart…true nupur was the most beautiful girl in the whole world… and she innocence she has..noone else can ever have that

tum huye meherbaan, to hai yeh dastaan
abb tumhara mera ek hai karwaan, tum jahan main wahaan


this was the best words to describe gunjan's feelings…she was thankful to have smarat in her life…

main agar kahoon humsafar meri apsara ho tum ya koi pari
tareef yeh bhi to sach hai kuch bhi nahi


mayank was lost in nupur's beauty… was he actually falling for her?…or is it just an attraction?..whatever it was..it was beautiful

tumko paya hai to jaise khoya hoon..
kehna chahoon bhi to tumse kya kahon
kisi zabaon mein bhi woh labaz hi nahi
ki jeene mein tum ho kya tumhein mein bata sakun
main aagar kahoon tumsa haseen, kaynaat mein nai hai kahin
tareef yeh bhi to sach hai kuch bhi nahi


life was beautiful…with friends with family…a perfect teen age life… little bit flavor of love..which was consist of friendship… the smile was pure.. the happiness was true… everything smiled as they smiled…
happy with their perfect life with some not so perfect and unknown feeling they heeded towards home..smiling ang giggling to thierselves unknow to the truth of tomorrow!

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Edited by vampire_girl - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome updt tasfia..loved it..sajan's cute nok jhoks were fantastic.loved it..cnt. soon and thnx fr the pm..
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg buddy😍
it was so beautiful😍😍
beautifully written👏👏

~jiya~
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update by u tasfia👏..
i loved it.❤️
sajan's cute nok-jhoks were soo good😍

thanks a lot for the PM dear🤗

love
swetha
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Posted: 14 years ago
dis ws truely da best part tasfia...
loved it alot

tczzz
Edited by cutiepie12 - 14 years ago

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