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Edited by sweetypie_2 - 14 years ago
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PART 24

They both slept geet cursing to maan and maan thinking about revenge

In was midnight when geet woke up to drink water but the jug was empty.She decided to go down and get it.As soon as she left maan woke up

Maan:yeh geet kaha jaa rahi hai

Soon maan also started following her and saw her going to the kitchen.As geet entered the kitchen maan had an evil plan in his mind.She took the bottle from the fridge and started drinking water when the lights were gone.As she turned to see the door were being closed and before she could reached and stop it it was closed.She was scared of dark and the closed doors were also making her suffocated.While maan was smiling like an evil as his plan was successful and soon he left to his room.Geet tried to reach the switch board but she was so scared that she forgot where the switch board was.

Geet:please koi darwaza kholo mera dum ghut raha hai please she whispered

She was not being able to speak also and the mere words which came from her mouth were also in whispers

Geet:koi hai please darwaza kholo maan dadi koi toh darwaza kholo

But no one was there to listen to her.She sat down in one corner hugging her knees and staretd crying her head was resting on her knees.She stood up to drink water and then she suddenly heard some noise from the window

Geet:maaan and fainted

Everyone heard the noise except maan as his room was far away.They came running out

Dev:dadi yeh kiski awaaz thi

Dadi:mujhe toh geet ki lag rahi thi

Vicky:par bhabhi iss waqt kya kar rahi hogi

Then suddenly nakul came running from the kitchen

Nakul:dadi wo..

Dadi:bolo nakul

Nakul:geet madam kitchen hai

Vicky:toh

Nakul:wo behosh hai

Everyone:kya

Nakul:haan

They all rushed to the kitchen and saw that geet was lying on the floor.Her forehead was covered with sweat and her dried tears were also visible

Dadi:geet beta utto

They sprinkled water on her face but she was not getting up

Dadi:dev maan ko bula ke lao

Dev:ji dadi

Dev rushed to call maan.While maan was getting restless in his room as geet did not come

Maan :geet ko gaye hua aadhe ghantee ho gaye hai par wo ab tak nahi aayi maine toh bas ek hi door lock kiya tha kitchen ka dusra toh khula tha

Then maan saw dev rushing to his room and he pretented to sleep

Dev:bro

Maan:?

Dev:bro uthiye

Maan:?

Dev shouted:brooo

Maan:dev kya hua chilla kyu rahe ho

Dev:bro bhabhi

Maan:kya hua

Dev:bhabhi behosh ho gayi hai

Maan:kyaaa

Dev:haan dadi jaldi bula rahi hai

Maan rushed with dev and saw that she was lying on the floor and her head was on naintara's lap.Maan rushed to her and started waking her up

Maan:geet utho geet geet

He patted her cheeks and sprinkled water on her face but she was not getting up

Dadi:maan tum geet ko room main lekar chalo main doctor ko phone karti hoon

Maan:ji

Maan took geet to the room and kept her on the bed.Soon the doctor came and started checking her

Maan thinking:lagta maine kuch jyada hi kar diya hai agar isse kuch ho jaata toh

As soon as the doctor came dadi asked him

Dadi:doctor sab kuch theek haina

Doctor:haan theek hai wo shayad andhere se dar gayi hogi aur iss liye behosh ho gayi maine injection de diya hai kuch der main hosh aa jaega

Dadi:ji dev inhe niche chorke aao

Maan went and sat beside her

Maan:dadi aap sab jaiye main yahi pe hoon

Dadi:nahi

Maan:dadi aap jaiye na bohut der hogayi hai aap ko rest karna chahiye

Dadi:theek hai hum chalte hai aap geet ka khayal rakhiye

Vicky:bro yeh sofa par kaun so raha tha

Everyone turned to see

Maan thinking:ab main kya karu

Dadi:haan maan boliye na

Maan:wo dadi geet magazine padh rahi thi aur use thand lag rahi thi is liye

Dadi:lekin geet ne hataya kyu nahi

Maan:wo magazine padhte padhte so gayi thi aur main uskp disturb nahi karna chahta tha bas is liye

Dadi:theek hai

Soon dadi left the room and maan was going to sleep on the couch when he heard some noises .He turned and saw that geet was saying some thing.He went towards her and listened to what she was saying

Geet:please koi darwaza kholo mera dum ghut raha hai please koi kholo na mujhe bohut dar lag rah hai koi hai please darwaza kholo maan dadi koi toh darwaza kholo

Tears were flowing from her eyes as she was saying those words.Maan was feeling very bad for her and he was feeling very guilty.Soon she started crying in her sleep

Maan:geet geet utho

Maan kept his hands on her cheeks and pushed the locks from her forehead.Geet slowly opened her eyes and saw maan in front of her.As she saw him she hugged him tight and started crying very badly.Maan hugged her back as he knew that she was scared at that moment

Maan:chup ho jao

Geet:wo light '..chali gayi'aur door ..bhi ..band ho and started cryiny

Maan:kuch nahi hoga main hoon na

Geet:mujhe andhere se bohut dar lagta hai

Maan:chup ho jao

Geet calmed down after sometime .Maan cupped her face and lightly kissed her forehead

Maan:ab tum so jao main sofa pe so jata hoon

Maan stood up to go but geet caught his wrists

Geet:please mat jaiye mujhe dar lag raha hai

Maan:theek hai

Maan went and slept next to her but keeping distance.After sometime maan heard her again sobbing silently

Maan:geet

Geet turned his side and hugged him tight .Maan hugged her and rubbed her back.After sometime she slept with her head on his chest and her arms wrapped around her safely

Both slept peacefully in each other's arms

Next morning maan woke up and saw that geet was still sleeping on his chest and her face was covered with dried tears.He pussed the locks from her face which was disturbing her and lightly kissed her forehead.He carefully kept her head on the pillow and went to do his workout.

Maan got ready for his office and went downstairs for breakfast.After sometime geet came

Dadi:geet aap theek hai na

Geet:ji dadi

Dadi:kya ho gaya tha aap ko

Geet:wo dadi main pani peene aayi thi phir achanak light chali gayi aur door bhi lock ho gaya tha aur mujhe andhere se dar bhi lagta hai

Dadi:door kaise band ho gaya

Geet:pata nahi

Dadi:maan hum aapse kuch jarrori baat karna chahte hai

Maan:haan dadi

Dadi:hum aapki shaadi ke liye reception rakhna chahte hai

Maan:kyaaa

Dadi:aap itna chilla kyu rahe hai

Maan:dadi abhi nahi main ready nahi hoon

Dadi:par

Maan:bus dadi

Dadi:theek hai

Maan left for office

Maan and geet would fight everyday like kids.Khurana mansion was full of joys and laughter after geet entered the house.Days were spent with humours and laughters around the mansion and its has been two months since ther wedding.They would not share there bed but they used to fight everyday

Precap:

Geet:maan newspaper dejiye na

Maan:geet yeh English newspaper hai

Prev: PART 23 Next: PART 25

Edited by sweety.2 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
loved it
precap intersting
pls cont
Edited by kahkashansakina - 14 years ago
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update...cont soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
ah! maan not gud Geet ko itna na sattaya karo 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
so maan's prank went bad...
thank god atelast ussey bura toh laga...
cant wait for the next update when maan gets to know something more abt geet
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Posted: 14 years ago
man ne geet ko kitchen me band kardiya...ufff ohhh
nice update...precap is super...

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