MAYUR FF: U BELONG TO ME (EPILOGUE pg # 47) - Page 15

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Posted: 14 years ago
Gul part 8 was romantic n cute loved mayu's pov on their meeting n last was romantic hope that phone wouldn't ring sorry for the late comment
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 9 mind-blowing n nus being Jealousy n mayu teasing her lovely
awesome update
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update soon n thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely wonderful update both fi8 too good i m waiting ur next update cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice updt...love possessive nupur :-D finaly bt unknwngly addressd herslf as mrs.sharma :-D love their fighting...WWE...lolz...waiting for HOTTT updt ;-) continue soon :-) thnx 4 d pm :-)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mjhtmayursajan

your concept is beautiful i am sorry for late reply but i read the complete story yesterday only i am confused with adhaani and sajan relation because their relation is similar to uday and gunur relationship in mjht so when gunur treated uday as brother how can adhaani and sajan become couple i wold request you to make a small change in cs instead of making uday rs's son why cant you make tamanna rs's daughter then the story will have correct meaning because in our culture cousins are treated as own brothers. coming to mayur relation it is absolutely correct there is nothing wrong in their relation. sorry if i hurt you bye take care very nice update and very beautiful story i like such concepts a lot and i want some good war(conversation) between sheena and mayank for nupur i just want to see how he will save his wife from her sasuma lets see mother will win or hubby which relation is more stronger


Hi Dear Thank u so much for Lovely Comments dear .I am so happy that U pointed this Thing.Yar Actually in Our culture cousions Marriages are Normal Thing .But as this Ff is according to your culture So i will defiantly gonna correct this But Insha Allah in Next part .Hope fully u didnt mind this delay.
Once again Thank U so much Liking this story .😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

ASALAM ALIKUM Guys

Hope u all are fine

So here is the most awaited part of this FF

First time I tried to write Romantic stuff

Plz tell me how it is.

Thank u so much For Lovely Comments.

Really It increases my blood

So Guys Enjoy it.

Sorry For all Mistakes

PART 10

She Came in her room sat on her bed .she was very confused and angry at same time.

Nupur: samajhta kya ha apna ap ko usa kya lagta ha ka aisi gol gol bata kar ka mujha uljha de ga or ma bewakofo ki tarha us kay pichay pichay chal paro gi array Abhi wo janta nahi ah ka nupur kis bala ka nam ha. Per ek bat to hay jo wok eh raha tha us ma kuch to ha .Mujha us ki itni fikar ku hona lagi ha ,agar thori der wo mujh say bat na kara ya mujha irritatae na karay to mujha kuch missing ku feel hota haor usa kisi or larki kay sath dekh kar mujha bura ku laga .Kahi wo jo keh raha thaw o sahi to .nahi Nahi Nupur to pagal to nahi hogai dekha na us na apni bato ka jaal ma tujha phasa lia na .

Bus nupur ab us kay bara ma sochna band kar or soja jaldi say soja Shabash .good Night.

Finally she slept .On the Next Day she woke early Morning and decided to go downstairs to eat some thing but she shouted to see a un believable scene in front of her eyes .Mayank was standing in the Kitchen and try to cook some thing.

Nupur: O my god Mayank tum khana bhi paka leta ho.

Mayank: He he zyada khush hona ki zarorat nahi ha wo to aj servent na chuti kar li ha is lia pakana par raha ha ku ka agar ap say kuch pakana ki umeed ki to sari zindagi hi bhoka rehna paray ga.

Nupur: Excuse me ap say kis nay kaha ka mujha khana pakana nahi ata.

Mayank; Jis larki ko Coffee jasi behterien (bestest) cheez banani nahi ati ha to us say khana ki umeed rakhna to time waist hi ha na.

Nupur; Acha ji (she come inside the kitchen and took spoon from Mayank,s hand) Mr mayank sharma abhi ap na nupur ka jalwa dekha hi kaha ha ab yaha say foran hatto or mujha khana pakanay do abhi thori ha dir ma pata chal jae ga ka kon kina pani ma ha.

Mayank: Oh God save me najanay aj mera kya hona wala ha.

She passed angry glares to him and he went outside the kitchen

After some time Nupur call him for break fast He come and amazed to see a side in front of him

Every thing on dining table was arranged beautifully and lovely aroma of food was spread all over the room .He sat on the table and took a first bite of Alo paratha.

Mayank:O my God Mrs what a delicious food I never eat such Yummy alo parathas in My life. I really impressed.

Nupur: Dekha ma na kha tha na ka abhi tum janta nahi ho ka Nupur kya chez ha.

Mayank: Wo hi to janna ha.

Nupur(in soft tune): Acha Mayank ek bat bato.

Mayank (taking last bite of his paratha): Hmm pocho .

Nupur (hesitantly):wo.. us.. konay walay karma ma aisa kya ha jo ka ma nahi dekh sakti.

Hr suddenly stands from the chair.

Mayank: ma bahar jar aha ho tum dophar ka khana kha lena.

Nupur (in irritation): Ji nahi tum kahi nahi ja raha ho Pehal meri bat ka jawab do.

Mayank(in angry tune): ek abr jub tum say keh dia ha ka tumha waha nahi jana to matlab nahi janna tumha pyar say bat samajh nahi atti kya.

Nupur got scarred to first time see him in such extent of angriness.

He goes from there and she went in her room and start crying.

Nupur's provision:

Nupur to pagal to nahi ho gai to ro ku rahi ha wo bhi us sadu ka lia jis ko pyar lafaz ka matlab bhi nahi pata. har wakt attitude dekhata rehta ha .pata nahi apna ap ko kya samjhta ha.wo bilkul bhi pyar say bat karna kay kabil nahi ha bilkul nahi ha.i just hate him.

Per jab bhi wo mera kareeb aat ha to mujha Ku kuch kuch hota ha. Mera dil flying jet ki speed say ku dharakna lagta ha .Us ka touch mera under shivers ku peda karta ha..Jab wo meri ankho ma dekhta ha to mera dil najanay ku un ma kho janay ko chata ha.aisa us ma kya ha Jo ma us hi taraf Khichi chali jati ho.Kahi ma us sa pyar to nahi karti.

Nahi ye kasa ho sakta ha ma to us say nafrat kart ho her wakt apna ap ko boss Samajhta ha .Ka ma na keh dia to keh dia bara aya kahi ka Prince charming.Dekhna ma to us karma am ja kar hi raho gi ma bhi to dekho aisa kon sa khazana chupa rakha ha.

She got up from there and go towards the room.

On the other side Mayank was standing at entrance of home feeling so guilty.

Mayank; Kya yar to bhi na Phir say usa dant dia.dekha kitna dar gait hi wo .Mujha us ko sorry bolna chahey .Abhi ja kar kehta hoand He went back inside the home.

Nupur slowly opened the door .room was completely dark .she hesitantly opened the Light and stunned to see the site in front of her eyes.

The room was completely filled with her pictures. All the pictures from the day of her engagement till the day before her kidnap. Pictures from her engagement, marriage, College picnic. Pics when she was at party at her friend place .The pictures which portray herwhole life after becoming Mrs.mayank sharma.

She was so shocked cant be able to say even a single word. Her trance was broke by a voice.

Mayank: Nupur tum yaha kya kar rahi ho.

Nupur(in numb voice): Mayank Ye sub?.

Tears were start flowing from her eyes.

Mayank(came near her):SSSh.. (Place his finger on her lips) bus Nupur aj tak tum bolti aie ho or ma suntan raha Per aj sirf ma bolo ga or tum sunno gi.

Tumha kya laga ka ma na aj tuk job hi kia ha sirf apna ego ka lia kia ha.ma to sadu ho na mujha to pyar ka matlab hi nahi pata .Tumhari nazar ma to dunia ka sab say bura insane ho ha na.

She was just staring him didn't utter a single word. He came closer to her.

Mayank (in deep voice): No MRs Nupur Mayank sharma. Do u know How much I love This name .This give me the surety that U Belong to me no one can separate U from me.

U know when I first saw u in our engagement .I felt that my heart stop beating all the world was stop at that moment and when after marriage pandit Ji announces that know U are mine only mine I feel that I am the most happiest person of this world. whenever I think about u my heart filled with joy .I wanna meet u, feel U near to me, wanna smell your sweet fragrance but I cant .That's why I start following U and capture the most precious moments of my life in these beautiful pics. They gave me the feelings that u are still Belong to me.

But the day u said u hate me. My whole world was shattered .I felt at that moment I die.

I don't wanna live but I felt that u still belong to me and no one can separate us that's why I did all that.

She was silent and tears start flowing faster.

Mayank (voice with deep pain): U know what u mean for me.Jab ma subha uthta ho to asman pa pheli hoi lali ma mujha tuumhara galo ki lali mehsos hoti ha.Her mehaktay hoe phol ki khushbo mujha tumharay pas honay ka ehsas dati ha.Samander ki gehrai ma tumhari ankho ki gehrai nazar ati ha.,chamakta hoa soraj ki her kiran tumhara chera pa pheli hoi roshni mehsos hoti ha, Pholo pa para shabnam kay katray tumhara chera pa phela hoa barish ka katro ki tarha Mehsos hota ha. Meri zindagi am mojod her Cheez mujha tumhara hona ka Ehsas dati ha.

Mera awal bhi tm ho akhir bhi tum. Mera hal bhi tum ho Mustakbil bhi tum'meri zindagi ki wajha bhi tum ho or moot ki bhi.tumhara bina meri zindagi aisi ha jeas tapta hoa sehra ma koi pyasa musafir,Jesa dushmano ma ghira hoa nehata(alone and without wepons) siphai,Jesa akhari sans leta hoa insane,Jesa kal kothri ma apni mot ka intazar karta hoa mujrim.

Tumhara bina jina ka kheal hi mujha so motay mar deta ha.

Plz Plz Nupur Mjha kabhi chor ka mat jana. I just can't live without u .I love U I love u so much till my last breath.

She hugged him suddenly and tighten her grip on his waist and crying badly .He hugged her back and also cried. After some time he broke hug and see towards her face. Her eyes were closed and she still sobbing .He whipped her tears with thumb and cupped her face in his palms .her eyes were still closed

He kissed on her for head and then kissed on her cheeks then proceeds towards her trembling lips. She felt his breath near her lips so closed her eyes more tightly

Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loon Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun
Zindgi Ki Shakh Se Loon Kuchh Hasin Pal Le Chun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun


He catches her lips and she responded back with the same passion and the kiss becomes more passionate. Her hands were moving in his hairs and his hands creasing her waist .No one wanna break it both wanna ease each other pain. but after some time they separate to take some air .he stare in her eyes she lowered her eyes due to shyness .But he hold her wrist and pulled her towards him self. With jerk she collide with his broad chest


Jo Bhi Jitne Pal Jeeyu
Unhe Tere Sang Jeeyu
Jo Bhi Kal Ho Ab Tera Use Tere Sang Jeeyu
Jo Bhi Saanse Main Bharoo Unhe Tere Sang Bharoo
Chahe Jo Hona Rasta Use Tere Sang Chalu


Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun

Mujhko De Tu Mit Jaane
Ab Khudse Dil Mil Jaane
Kyu Hai Yeh Itna Fasla...
Lamhe Yeh Phir Naa Aane
Inko Tu Naa Le Jaane
Tu Mujh Pe Khudko De Loota...
..

(He moved her hair on one side and kissed her bare shoulder and turn her face towards him)

Tujhe Tujhse Tod Loo Kahi Khudse Jod Loo
Mere Jism O Jaan Main Aa Teri Khusboo Odh Loo

Jo Bhi Saanse Main Bharoo Unhe Tere Sang Bharoo
Chahe Jo Hona Rasta Use Tere Sang Chalu

He kissed her Neck line .Then kissed every where on her face. She encircled her hands his neck to avoid falling because her knees wasn't supporting her.

Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun


He picked her up in his arms and take her towards the bed and made her lay on bed safely. Then start kissing her again

Bahoon Main De Bas Jaane
Sine Main De Chhup Jaane
Tujh Bin Main Jaaunga Kaha????


He stop and see towards her face for assurance but the beautiful smile on her face give him confirmation.

Tujhse He Mujhe Ko Paane Yaado K Woh Nazrane
Ek Jinpe Haq Ho Bas Mera

Teri Yaado Main Rahoo
Tere Khwabo Main Jagoo
Mujhe Doondhe Jab Koi
Teri Aankho Main Milu


Then he kissed every where on her body and she mooned with pleasure and was breathing very heavily .

Jo Bhi Saanse Main Bharoo
Unhe Tere Sang Bharoo
Chahe Joho Rasta Use Tere Sang Chalu

Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun

He again looked his lips with her and Lights get off (BUS KARO BESHARMO KISI KI PRIVATE LIFE ITNA INTERFERIANCE ACHA NAHI HA 😆) and they whole night make love and become DO DIL EK JAAN (mera favorite dialogue 😉)

NEXT DAY MOERNING:

Nupur awake due to sun razes fall on her face. She lazily open her eyes and the events of last night start recalling in her mind she immediately turn to see the side beside her but not found him any where she become confused. Suddenly door opened and Mayank entered in the room and plainly said.

Mayank: Nupur Dad a gaye han or tumha nechay bola rahay han. After saying this he go back from there.

She was so confused on his sudden change of behavior. She goes to take a bath and after changing dress come downstairs and feel the tension in the atmosphere. Mayank was silently stood at corner of room and his dad was walking here and there in very angry mood.

Nupur: Good Morning Dad.

IS: Ap agai .beta hum ap sa bohat sharminda ha ap huma maf kar da.

Nupur(confusingly): Dad ye ap kya keh rahay han.

IS: Nahi beta such hum nahi janta tah ke Mayank ap ko ap ki marzi ka bagair kidnap kar ak la aye .Huma aj bhi pata nahi chalta agar ap ki Mom London sa akr huma phone kar ak sab nahi batati.Is lia beta ap fikar mat kara ab hum ap ko or pareshan nahi honna da ga or ap abhi or isi wakt wapis apni dao ka ghar ja rahi ha

Nupur was so shocked to here this news and immediately see towards Mayank but he didn't say any word and lowered his eyes. She didn't know what to do.

Is shake her shoulder.

IS: Beta kya hoa ap bilkul fikar na kara ye nalaik ap ko abhi chor kar aye .Jao Mayank Foran jao .or wasa bhi ap ki Mom ap ka waha wait kar rahi ha ap jaey.

Mayank followed his Father's order and go out side the home Nupur also walked behind him and came out the main door and again shocked to see site front of her eyes. It wasn't a area far from city infect it's a center area of city. She was so confused why Mayank lied to me But due to Mayank expression cant be able to asked any single question. Then both sit in the car and go .In whole journey no one utter a single word.

After some time they reached at Sharma Mention .She saw towards him but he wasn't responded back .She came out of the car and start moving towards the gate and he immediately start the car a d goes from there .

She was too shocked suddenly She heard her Mom's Voice .

Sheena (Hugged Nupur): O meri bachi to agai tujha pata ha ma kitni pareshan ho gait hi. jab ma tum sa milna yaha aie or mujha pata chala kay to kidnap hogai ha to meri to jaan hi nikal gai.Arey ma bhi na chal ander chal sab tera intezar kar raha han

Nupur entered In Sharma mention and every one come hugged her. After some time Sheena said

Sheena: mujha pehla hi pata tha kay ye us hi kamina ka kam hoga .Is lia ab kibar ma na paka kam kar lia ha ab wo tera kuch nahi bigar saka ga.

Nupur(confusingly): Matlab

Sheena: Ma na lawyer ka zaria divorce paper us ko bhijwa dia ha jo ka ab tak to us ko mil chukka ho ga.

Nupur Freezed at her place.

Mayank was lying on chair in his room tears were flowing on his cheeks have divorce papers in his hand.

PROMO:

Sheena: Nupur mera sath London ja rahi ha

Ok Ok Guys u Know I need Some new variety of Shows and chapels .So I am ready to accept all of them which will u goanna throw on me.😆

I know no one was accepted that twist but that was imp .Now the story is entering in the second phase.

So Keep reading and Keep commenting its really worth so much for me.

Note: Those who want pm for this FF plz add me in your buddy list.

WITH LOVE

GUL 😊

Edited by DhanakZ - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
part was amazinggg
nupur gusse mein blabber karti hue bahut cute lagi :P
mayank n nupur finally love confess kara :)
aur private life ab private nahi rahi 😆
n ye sheena ufff ye naam hi gadbad hai
mayur ko jaldi milwao
aur bhi zayada cute scn aur private life dikhao 😉 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Gul that was so romantic update mayu confession n everything was amazing ☺️ but the twist scares me didn't expect that hope everything goes well thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
per nupur ne toh koi divorce pape sign nehi kiya tha fir kays bhej dia uski ma ne? pls update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update dear...but dont separate mayur...pls...

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