MAYUR FF: U BELONG TO ME (EPILOGUE pg # 47)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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YOU BELONG TO ME

Hi Guys I am not new in IF but new to write any thing.This is My first FF on my One and only Love my jaan Mayur.

The concept of this story is taken from the story which i had read many years ago in some magazine .I loved that story and thought to write on Mayur .

So here is the story .as this is My first attempt to write some thing so may be U find it boring but as the story proceed U may liked it.

Before starting the story I wanna Thank Annie always my halping hand in IF.Thank U so much dear.

This Story is about the War between Love and Hate .Lets see who win.

CHARACTER SKATCH:

NUPUR BHUSHAN: 21 year 0ld. Study in college. Lovely, Naughty, Full of life girl. Little bit arrogant want every thing according to her will. Love her Nano (Grand mother) and Hate Mayank So much.

MAYANK SHARMA: 24 years old. Electrical engineer. Working in well reputed company. So handsome and intelligent Guy .Respect elders and relations. Love his Father and Nupur so much.

RATNA SHARMA (RS): Nupur's Nani and Mayank's Dadi.

SAMRAT SHARMA: Nupur's Cousion and her best friend. They both share so strong bond.

GUNJAN SHARMA: Nupur's and Mayank cousin. Like real sister to nupur and always do care her.

SHEENA RATHORE: Nupur's Mom.

INDERJEET SHARMA: Mayank's Father.

Other character will be shown as the story proceeds.

INTRODUCTORY PART:

I want divorce Nano.

RS: Nupur tumhara dimagh to kharab nahi hogaya.Tumhari us sa shadi hoi ha.

Nupur: I don't know any thing Nano .I just don't wanna live with him or Koi mera sath Zabardasti nahi kar sakta.

RS: Nupur tumhara sath kisi na koi Zabardasti nahi ki thi .Tum na ye shadi apni marzi ki thi or ab wo tumhara pati ha ab tumha usa accept karna hi para ga.

Nupur: No never ever in my life .ma usa kabhi apna pati accept nahi karo gi. I hate Him.I hate Mayank sharma so much.


NOTE: Plz Guys do comment and Press Like tab .If U like it then I will gonna procede.

If U want Pm for this FF .So plz add me in Your Pm list

With Love.

GUL 😊


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Posted: 14 years ago
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INDEX:
Character Skatch & Introductory part Pg:1
Part 1 Pg:3
Solutions for all confusions pg 5
Part 2 pg 6
Part 3 Pg 7
Part 4 Pg 9
Part 5 pg 11
Part 6 pg 13
Part 7 Pg 16
Part 8 Pg 18
Part 9 pg 20
Part 10 Pg 22
Part 11 pg 25
Part 12 Pg 28
Part 13 Pg 31
part 14 Pg 35
Part 15 Pg 39
Part 16 Pg 42
Last part pg 44
EPILOGUE pg 47
Edited by DhanakZ - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@Dhankz
congratssssssss sisšŸ¤—šŸ¤—
wow u started FF..
CS n concept very interesting.....
do continue soonšŸ¤—
add me in ur pm list..😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Divorce in very first update😲......................interesting....................do cont soon n thnx for pm..........................!!!
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After reading the character sketch, I thought - he would make her fall in love with him etc etc etc and then BAM!! Divorce in the prologue - I was shocked!!!

Really interested to know the Curious Case of MayUr Wedding or should I say Divorce???

Congratulations for attempting to write for the first time 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey congrats on ur fist ff... And the concept seems very interesting... I was reading the CS and suddenly divorce... That was fast forward...I'm relly curious to read on, continue soon and add me to the pm list.. 😳
-Laiba
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OYE HOAY CONGRATS
gr8 concept...cont it ....u'll rock for sure
Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Congo on ur first FF🄳

kool CSšŸ‘šŸ¼... and shocking Intro😲
thnx a lot for the pm
and do update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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she wants divorce and she hates him. then why did she get married?
one small thing- shouldnt nupurs moms name be sheena bhushan, if she used his husbands surname or sheena sharma, if she used her fathers surname?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi GUL
congrats dear for ur first ff
the concept and CS seems really very interesting
pls do cont it
update first part soon
all the best

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