M/G SS: Blind Love (last ch, pg 69) July 12 - Page 10

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Reya...I m sorry i hadnt read this earlier but its good in a way..now that ur exams are over, i will get an update sooner than others....😆😆
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Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Hey Reya...I m sorry i hadnt read this earlier but its good in a way..now that ur exams are over, i will get an update sooner than others....😆😆

u are done exams too...the joy of finishing exams😃....i am planning to start a update too...let's see how fast i finish....
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Hey peeps..well on popular demand...another OS of mine has turned to a SS...so if anyone is interested in PMs..Do let me know...

Be happy diamond buddy aka Esha...i updated pretty fast..i wrote almost non-stop. 😃

Chapter 2

Two months later

Misiti and her Beach boy seem to have developed a routine. Everyday, Maan would be at the beach at around sunset time'.They would perform their sunset ritual with a closed eyes and smiles on their faces but the only change was that since the confession day was that they sat as close as possible with their hands entwined.

They would say goodbye at the beach as Geet's brother Yash picked her up. As soon as Maan got home and said his greetings to his family, he dashed off to his room to call her'they would talk for hours nonstop always discovering something new.His mother was too busy with her high society gatherings to notice that her only son had fallen deeply in love; a love that gave him joy everyday. His Dadi on the other hand was quick to notice the change and demanded to meet the girl who had changed her grandson. When Maan had denied such a fact. She had merely laughed in response and had said that she knew her own grandson too well to know that he had never been this happy and it was because of a girl. A girl she often heard him talking on the phone well into the night. Maan had been caught and now his Dadi never missed a chance to tease him.

Dadi knew the love story of Misiti and Beach boy, including the fact that Misiti was blind but that made no difference to Maan. Dadi had told him that she already accepted Geet the way she was as long as her grandson was happy. He had told her that she would meet the most beautiful girl very soon.

Maan Singh Khurana was a new man, a man who now had the ability to smile...that was only because of one woman: Geet Handa who was the most precious in his life. He remembered how she complained that he didn't flash his killer smile often enough. He didn't even attempt to ask her how she knew. He still hadn't solved the mystery of how the woman knew his every move despite the vision fallback. Often, Geet would run her fingers along his lips just to feel his smile. But her fingers had a different effect on him but we won't go into the details of that for now..

Geet Handa even though she now preferred the name Misiti from the lips of a certain someone, sat in her garden swing waiting for time to pass so Yash would get home and take her to the beach. Geet had told her brother everything about her Beach Boy and he had happily accepted because she was the most important in his life; and her happiness was the only thing he wanted and the fact that Yash and Maan had become close in a short span of time. She wondered how she had ever found such a man like Maan Singh Khurana; she felt truly blessed. She closed her eyes content with life. Her phone started ringing in her lap, she felt the buttons to find the accept button.

"Hello Maan", she said, as she knew it was he.

"I guess someone is missing me", he said with a chuckle.

"Yes, I am'I am missing you very much. Can't we meet a little earlier at the beach? You could pick me up.", she said with hope.

Maan sighed on the other side, "Oh I wish Misiti but I called to tell you that I can't make it to the beach for sunset, I have an important meeting today."

"Oh..it's okay..don't worry..you focus on your work. We will see each other tomorrow", she said hoping he wouldn't catch the disappointment.

"No way..i can't stay away from you that long. I am going to take you out tonight.", he said. Panic hit her.

"No...no maan, we can't go out'."

"And why not? ", he asked.

"because...because..", she trailed off unable to finish her thought.

"because what Misiti?", he asked anxious to know.

"Because, I don't want to embarrass you. I have no problem navigating places I know well but I don't as well in newer places", she mumbled

"In this darkened world, he is my guiding light", he repeated her words back to her. When she said nothing, he went on, "Firstly, I am never ever going to be embarrassed to be seen with you. Instead I would be proud to have the most beautiful girl by my side...and secondly why are you afraid when you have me with you? Do you trust me?"

"of course, I trust you.",she said even though they both already knew the answer.

"Good then, it's settled. I will pick you up at nine.",he said pleased that he had gotten his way.

"But I have to ask Yash bhayia first", she said hoping he would save her.

"Don't bother, I already asked Yash and he said he has no problem." Damn, couldn't her brother side with her for a change ? Geet sighed knowing she lost the battle.

"Ok, I will see you at nine", she said.

"Love you Misiti", he said with a smile.

"Love you too", she said

She paced from one end of her room to the other..She had a major crisis...a major major crisis...she had to go out to dinner with one of India's well known business tycoon who was obviously in the eye of the media. And he wanted to take her... a blind girl on a date...the media would have a field day'.Oh Babaji..help her...she had no problem at the beach; she knew it as well as she knew her house. At the beach they were Misiti and Beach Boy, Maan was only her Maan not the internationally famous business tycoon Maan Singh Khurana.

And her dressing was never a problem when she went out casually; her best friend Pari had matched all her outfits and hang them in the closet'she just had to decide what type of outfit she wanted to wear, the color never really mattered because the colors would be coordinated. And now she had to find a outfit which would look good and do her hair..and put makeup on, whatever girls seemed to spend hours on. In short..she had to look decent enough to be seen next to him in public. she knew he wouldn't care..she could wear a paper bag and the man would say she looks perfect...it was other people she was worried about'

Just then she heard the wind chimes at the entrance and she knew her Yash bhayia was home.

"Hey princess", he said as he came over to give her a hug and light kiss on the forehead.

"Oh bhayia, why did you tell Maan it was ok with you if he took me out?", she asked. Yash gave her a confused look at her sudden outburst

"Thanks for saying hi back",when she ignored him and waited for a answer. He continued," Because it was okay with me, I trust him and I know he takes good care of you.", he said as if stating the obvious. Geet slumped on her bed

"Yes, that's true...but you do realize that he wants to take me out a public restaurant where they are going to be other people..and you told me yourself that there is always media around him...and when they see me with him...",she trailed off hoping her brother would understand.

Yash sat next to her and reached for her hand," Princess, what matters to you more? Him or other people?"

"Obviously him", she said not knowing exactly where her brother was going with this.

"And what do you think about him. What matters to him the most? You or other people."

"Me", she replied

"So clearly you two mean the most to one another then why are you worrying about other people sweetie? Just go and enjoy your time with him." She knew her brother was right but still her nervousness wouldn't leave her

"Ok..i guess...but I still need to look good for him. Can you call Pari and tell her come over? I need major help." Yash quietly laughed at his sister's nervousness hoping she wouldn't hear him. "I heard that bhayia", she said angrily.

"Oops..my bad, anyway, I already called Pari knowing you would need her help"

"Thanks bhayia", she said as she gave him a quick peck on the cheek.

"Pari is here", she said as she rang the entrance wind chimes. She came in the room with a bright smile ready to get to work. "Hey Geet..Hey baby", she said as Yash came to hug her.

"Hey..now the second princess of my life is here too." He pulled her closer as he brought his lips forward to kiss her lips. Geet waited for a few moments before interpreting them.

"Ahem..Ahem..love birds, you do realize I am here. And here I have a major crisis and you two are getting all lovey-dovey."

"Sorry honey", Pari said as she tried to come out of Yash's embrace but Yash held her tight.

"Bhayia, let her go", she said her voice full of authority. Yash held her by the waist as she tried to wiggle out of his hold. Her efforts went in vain, but she still tried as she smacked his arms playfully.

"Oh come on, don't be jealous just because I am spending time with my second princess.", Yash teased while he held on to Pari

"That's it", she said as she marched up to them. "Bhayia, let her go" and he let go at once afraid of a tantrum that could be thrown his way soon. Geet held her hand to take her away. "You can spend all the time with your girlfriend when I am gone.", she ordered.

"Do you need help? I could help you two," he said in hopes of staying close to Pari.

"Bhayia!!", she said in warning.

He held up in hands in defeat, "Ok..Ok..i am gone", he said as he walked out.

Once Yash was gone, Geet instantly turned to Pari. "Pari, please help", she pleaded.

"Don't worry honey, I will make you look breathtaking. Your Beach Boy won't be able to take his eyes of you.", she said excitedly. She sent Geet for a quick shower while she began to take out clothes, accessories and make up items for her. Soon Geet was out of the shower and Pari sat her down on the chair. And the fun began.

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Maan pulled up at Geet's place at exactly 8:55 pm; clearly the man was more than just punctual. He held a bouquet of red roses; he knew she couldn't see them yet she would like the softness of them. At 9:00 sharp, he rang the doorbell and Yash opened the door with a smile. "Hey buddy, what's up?", Yash said as they gave each other a shoulder bang or whatever guys do whenever they see each other.

"Hey,just excited about tonight.", Maan said with a smile

Yash laughed, "I wish I could say the same about Geet. She is a nervous wreck."

"So am I man, I just do everything goes well and she likes her surprise.", he said as he crossed his fingers

Just then Geet stepped out of her room and Maan was at a loss of words. He just stared...and stared..and stared. His Misiti was the most beautiful girl he had ever seen, the fact he had accepted since day one. But today; her beauty had been magnified to make her look like an angel.

Her slim frame was draped in a white saree with sliver work. He had never seen her in a saree before but he couldn't help but notice how she looked so graceful in it. Her hair was let down to let her tresses fall over her shoulders. Her face had minimal makeup because she was already beautiful and the fact that she never did any makeup. She wore light sliver earnings on her earning and few sliver bangles.

Yash elbowed Maan to snap him out of his dreamland; because Geet had walked up to him and was waiting for him to say something. "Ouchh..oh..Hi Geet. You look beautiful", he said in short unable to describe it. Geet smiled her sweetest smile knowing he always struggled to express his emotions. "Here, these are for you', as said as he held out the bouquet for her. She took them, felt the softness of the petals and buried her face in the flowers to smell.

"Thank you", she said as she tip toed to kiss his cheek. Yash and Pari watched from a distance with smiles on their faces. Maan and Geet bid their goodbyes as Maan led her out of the door. Pari looked up to see Yash teary eyed, she reached up to wipe the corner of his eye.

"Today is going to one the happiest day of her life." Pari nodded in understanding.

"I thought that you were suppose to spend time with your second princess but you are too busy thinking about your first one", she said in mock anger with her arms crossed.

Yash grinned "Come here, I will show you my love"

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Maan led her to car and opened the door as she stepped in. They drove off to their destination. Geet sat in silence, as she was too nervous; she played with the petals of the roses. Maan glanced at her more than once but decided to give her space. But he did reach out to hold her right hand and squeezed it lightly. He played with her bangles with his hand as he ran his fingers along them. She gave him a light smile before going back to her roses. She pulled one of the roses out leaving the bouquet on her lap. Suddenly, she realized the stem of the rose was too smooth, that there were actually no thorns of the roses.

"Thank you Maan", she said suddenly.

"The evening didn't even start yet. You can thank me at the end if you enjoy your night out with me."

"I meant it for the roses..i just realized the stems are too smooth.", she said.

"Oh that, I had them take all the thorns off, I wouldn't want you getting hurt", he said as he picked up her hand and kissed it. Maan stopped at their destination but Geet didn't notice.

She turned towards him, "Just like roses, you have pulled out all the thorns out of my life.", she said as tears of happiness threatened to hit the works.

"No..no Misiti, please don't cry.",he said as he held her face to wipe her tears. "Come on, your makeup is getting ruined.", he said in attempts to making her tears stop.

Geet reached up to wipe the mascara that she felt running. "That's why I don't wear this stupid makeup." Maan laughed lightly and reached over to wipe the black marks and kissed her cheek.

"Do I look okay Maan?", she asked as she tried to make sure her hair felt right, and her saree was still in place. Maan held her hands, "Don't worry Misiti, you look perfect."

"But where are we?", she asked having no idea where he brought her.

"Don't worry, you will find out soon." He walked around to the other side to help out.

Geet tried to gag her surroundings and one thing was so sure, that this place was familiar. He held her hand to led forward.

"Maan, where are we?" This place seems too familiar." Geet felt the wind in her hair and it finally dawned to her where they were. "Maan, we are at the beach!!", she said in panic as she tried to pull his arm to stop him. Maan stopped and turned around.

"Yes, we are at the beach" Geet's panic hit full mode,

"Oh Babaji, Maan you brought me to a public beach in a saree for a date!!", she exclaimed.

Maan held her shoulders to clam her down, "Geet, listen closely. Do you hear anyone else?" Geet listened and she could hear nothing other than the wind. She looked at him with questioning eyes. Maan bent down to pull her flats off and his own shoes as he led her across the sand. "That's because this beach has been closed for the public today."

"Really, how can that be ? This is a public beach", she said as she was utterly confused.

"And I am Maan Singh Khurana", he said in return as even that explained all.

Geet immediately relaxed knowing that they were in their regular place and by themselves. They walked farther and suddenly the sand started feeling softer. Geet stopped and bent down to feel soft petals of most likely roses as they were her favourite flowers. She let go of Maan's hand and walked farther to realize that there was actually a path of roses petals. Maan hugged her from the back, "you like it?"

"Of course, I like it but there was no need for you to do all of this. I can't see anything, and you wasted your time for nothing." Maan was angered by her response.

"So you can't see me either then why are you wasting your time with me? Huh, you said yourself that you don't need your vision to see me. If I am your guiding light then what made you think that I would not let you see how I got this beach decorated for you. You say you have faith in me but you don't show it to me ", he said as he walked a few step ahead.

Geet knew that she had upset him. " I am sorry, really sorry.", she said as she walked farther until she felt his back and soon as she did, she wrapped her arms about his waist kissing his back in the process. "I am super sorry Beach Boy, won't you forgive your Misiti?", she asked in her sweetest voice clearly knowing that he had a weakness for it. He turned her around to hug her, which meant that he forgave her.

She wrapped her arms around his waist to hug him tighter. "Thank you", she said as she placed a kiss over his heart on his shirt.

"Woman, you have to stop saying these two words, I will take the kiss but I don't want the thanks." Geet laughed lightly and smacked his chest. They swayed gently their bodies right to left, dancing in the sand with the wind as their music.

"Won't you show me around the beach?"

"Of course, I will Your Highness", he said as he held her hand to lead her. " On the sides of the petal roses, there are luminaries. I didn't want to use candles incase you got hurt. After the path of roses petals, we come to the center of the beach where there is a table for two. Around the table, we have some tiki torches for light. On the table, we have some rose petals of course, a centerpiece bowl with candles and shells and the usual dinner items. Pretty simple, I am not great with romantic stuff", he said as he waited for her response

"You are great with romance Mr. Maan Singh Khurana but I won't say thank you incase you get upset again", she said joyfully as she locked her arms around his neck and placed her head on his chest.

"Come on, you must be hungry. Let me serve you dinner. It's your favourite: Italian ", he said as they pulled apart.

" You made dinner too." , she said with surprise

Maan laughed as he led her to the table. "No darling, I actually want you to have dinner and if I cooked then clearly both of us would go hungry. I got it catered from Frankie Tomatoes", he said mentioning her favourite restaurant. A restaurant Yash and him got take out from almost on a daily basis because Geet refuse to go with them; he would take her to a restaurant sooner or later. He had let her off the hook today because he wanted them alone for what he wanted to do. Geet felt the round table, and the items on the table to familiarize herself while Maan walked to walk to get the dinner. Soon, Maan served and fed her dinner and Geet couldn't have been happier.

After dinner, Maan asked, "Do you walk go for a walk Geet?". In response, Geet smiled and held out her hand for Maan to take. They walked at a slow pace arm and arm with each other. While walking Geet tiptoed to give Maan a kiss in gratitude for such a pleasure filled evening since he refused to take her thank you. They continued to walk in peaceful silence when Geet suddenly yelped, "Ouchh..something just poked my foot." Maan bent down to pick it up.

"Oh, it's just a shell. You are not hurt, are you?, he asked as he put the shell in Geet palm.

"No..No I am fine", she reassured him as she felt the smoothness of the shell. "It's odd, in the years I have been coming here I have never found any shells at this beach."

"Maybe this is your special shell", he whispered into her ear before kissing it lightly. An expected shiver went down to her spine, which wasn't from the cold.

"What do you mean by special shell?", she managed to ask as she controlled her desire. Maan said nothing in response but instead opened the shell for her. He brought her other hand forward to feel the content inside the shell.

She felt it as confusion slowly cleared and then she stared at it before she whispered, "Beach boy"

She gasped as she felt his body movement and she knew he was down on one knee proposing to her ! She felt her heart pick up speed as he started.

"Misiti, today I have brought you to the place where we meet everyday. The place where I met the love of my life and since the day I have met you; my life has changed, you have taught me how to smile and laugh. You have taught me to look at life differently. With you my sunsets have become even more beautiful. Will you do me the honor of sharing every sunset with me hereon as my wife? Will you marry me ?", he asked as he held out a diamond ring. Tears of happiness spilled from her eyes and for once Maan didn't try to stop them.

"So tell me Geet Handa, will you become Geet Khurana?", he asked as he held out the ring. She brought her hand forward to touch the ring Maan was holding and merely nodded as words failed her. Maan didn't need anything more. He slipped on the ring and kissed her hand. "Yes, Yes, she said yes", he said delightedly as he picked her up and spun her around. She put her arms around his neck she laughed from joy. The joy she thought she would never get.

They were both breathless from the joy when Maan finally put her down. "Thank you", he whispered as emotions laced his voice.

"So you can say thank you and I can't", she said in mock anger. Maan merely laughed in response before he kissed her nose to brush off the anger. He hugged her tightly not wanting to ever let her go. Geet tightened her hold as she was telling him never to let go. Maan kissed her forehead, gave her feather like kisses on her eyes, ran his hand along her crimson cheeks before dropping a series of kisses on them. He then hovered his lips above hers just inches away asking her for permission silently. She brought her hands to his cheeks to answer and Maan understood. He brushed his lips lightly with hers. He then deepened the kiss as he felt the soft texture of her honey tasting lips. This was their first kiss, a kiss sealed with promises of happiness and togetherness.

Precap: Maan held Geet's hand as he introduced to his Dadi, "Dadi, this is Geet, my Misiti who I am going to marry"

"What!!!" a voice exclaimed from the back as all three of them turned their heads to look at the person.

Ok peeps..i don't know how it was...i am not great with the romantic stuff but i tried..so tell me how it was...

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REYA <3

next ch: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/41717988

Edited by maankigeet4ever - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Geet saree...of course the ever famous saree...


And a look at the beach decor...
Tiki torches


luminaries (imagine the same thing with the rose petal path and luminaries on the beach rather than the room



Table center piece

The shell with the ring



Edited by maankigeet4ever - 14 years ago
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lovely
plz pm me
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Awww, it was an adorable update lol😃
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Awwwwwwwwwwww Reya that was a super super beautiful update!! I was smiling from ear to ear the whole time. Loved reading about how their love blossomed for each other, and how she put so much trust in him .. as well as Yash! Yash and Pari were so cute :)!
Loved the entire date... I could already imagine her wearing the KH saree before the pic :P ... but the way you described everything was fabulous!!
Yayyy he proposed .. and their first kiss .. awwww 😳
OMG... I think it's Maan's mother who will have a problem right :O?
Can't wait! Please do PM me when you continue. Thanx!
Lovely update!
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super mindblowing

lovely & sandwich beautiful love it love it i'm sure its maan mother that person in the precap maan & dadi have such cute & sweet bond its love is blind pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnn thank yuuuuuuuuuuuuu so muchhhhhhhhhh thanks pm
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awesome udpate dear
loved it
update soon
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Awesome...awesome...awesome update Reya...plain wowwwww....B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L.... I totally loved it....the way you showed their bonding..friendship between Maan n Yash, Yash's acceptance of Maan n Daadi's acceptance of Geet......I loved the emotions that connected such random people...Pari is also nice...so Yash n Pari are a couple.... great.. n the date.....I can't find words to describe it....I was reading all the date part so carefully and I felt "aisa bhi kahi hotha hai sach mein",really I thought the same when I read it.....the care he took be it regarding the roses or any other thing that may hurt her....the way he proposed...oh so beautiful....there's no other word for it... they truly are made for each other....and I sense some trouble from Maan's mother in the next update looking at your precap....but I'll leave that for now as I'm veryyyyy happy with the update....Thank You so much for such a wonderful update..... your hard work paid off real well.....

Blind Love Is Beautiful n Lovely !!!
Edited by esha143 - 14 years ago

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