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.Dalisay.

@.Dalisay.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#291

OMG OMG...wow... 😍😍

Im so loving this fic...:))

AN in their teens awww... 😳⭐️ very cute.. 😆

My fav part has to be.

A light breeze passed around them and her hair fell across her face , partially covering it . But before she could push them aside , his hand had found its way to them . She felt a very slight shudder at his sly touch on her face and her eyes closed for a few seconds . When she opened them , his hand was still holding onto her hair and his eyes still piercing into her.

⭐️⭐️😃

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mitzification

@mitzification

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#292

Pra u were born to be a soulful writer ... now u have to write one os per day for us 😛

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cherry

@cherry_an

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#293

Originally posted by: mitzification
Hi cherry , though I dont like sad AN stories , I absolutely love sad VM's on them ... and I have seen quiet a few of ur VM's and love them a lot too !!

oww thats so sweet of you mitzi..

i am truly glad to see your comment..

m so haapy u love ma stuff😳 it really means a lot to me..

thanx a tone mitzii 😃

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cherry

@cherry_an

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#294

mitzii..😊
m so late m sorry but m glad i gt to catch up wid ur os..😃

you guys dont pm thats why i am always unaware of any new stuff on AN!

not ur fault though.. m really very less active theze days on IF

oky enough of ma drama.. let me come to the point..😉wow i mean first of all i love the
idea of changing profession of AN
and love the way u started ur os..

abhis rude insulting statement n nikki heard that.. lol 😆

all the things happend between them without saying much but instead by their actions
i always love abhis style.. showing as if not intrested too much , seying horrible words
but actions tel something completely contradict..

same wid nikki love him lik crazzy but awesome at hiding her true feelings...

par ankhe dhoka de deti hai.. their eys tel their true feelings for each othr..😳

i always sey somtimes it necessary to say something to express our feelings but seriously AN are exceptions no need to utter evn a single word..
its beauty of these two..
n specially love how they interact with their eys..
they wil even sey bad wordz to eacother n fyt each other but in next moment
they wil be lost in their passionate world..
n m just so crazzy about this thing the passion they share 😳😃

i love this para , who wont 😉 their pent up emoz..

Abruptly he turned and caught hold of her, pulling her in his embrace and then his lips descended on hers. He was kissing her all over , her eyes her cheeks ,her lips ...all the months of longing culminating into this, his dam of restraint having broken.

i always love how he tries not to do nything but mor he tries to restrict himself more he goes closer to her..😳😃😃😃😃

waise; if you have given the details of *what happense in modi house* when nikki goes in pink formal dress, toh meherbani hoti mujpe.. 😆

i mean common atleast somthing .. nything..😉

and i love this para to the core awesome... very excellently written👏

What she felt for him was beyond the limitations imposed by this stupid society. Had the society come to her rescue when her parents had died, would they take care of her when she was ill , when she was lonely and old. Was the stigma of society bigger than her feelings for him ? She searched for the answers to these questions as her heart cried at the loss of another loved one ... one she held closest to her heart.

i love abhis this statement.. lol..

I am used to luxury and security of wealth you know
that is so abhi..

and nikki is so nikki that no matter wat no matter how much time he waznt there.. dint tel her
nything n moved away from her.. but when he came bak there was no questions or
nything in her eyes but love.. n joy ..that he was back to her ..for her..😳
thatz called pure love..😳

him sacrifising his everything for her.. n her waiting for him without expecting anything.. fantastic.. i love AN more n more.. hmmm..⭐️⭐️

the only thing i wana sey is.. u rock
n jus love it mitzii..
keep the good work up..
n ya like others i too wanted you to split it in parts.. so that hungry greedy people
like me wil get chance to read mor n more stuff on them😉😃😃
its fabulous..i really love this os..

thanx a ton..
and write more plz...

thanx

-cherry😃

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cherry

@cherry_an

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#295

hello pra..😊
wow another AN stuff i am reading today back to back..😃n that too minie ff 😃 woah .. it means some more updates..now thats sounds intresting and fabulous*yey* m so happy😃😃
your *to b continued* it self brings broad smile on everyones face..
coz every one is hungry for more n more AN stuff..
so first of all thank u so much for this.. 😃😃

now coming to the update
i mean now its completely different story , not like DMG..

i lik the way you started ur ff..

the way you described nikkis passion about photography.. her emotions behined it.. how she enjoys it n try to get happiness from that thing..truly awesomely written ⭐️

you potrayed her inner feelings , memories she always cherish ; with nice and different way..

i must sey..really fantastic job n i love it to bits..

and specially the last para..😃 ANs meeting..

i have so many question why they wer apart til now wat happend in their life.. n many more..

but i know as story progresses you wil ofcourse unfold every answer..

really intresting story n beautifuly described..

thanx a ton for posting..

waiting for next part..

update soon..

thanx

-cherry😃

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cherry

@cherry_an

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#296

pra u even updated 2d part?? 😲😃😃

woaah aj to barsaat ho rahi hai an stuff ki mujpe..😆

m sorry but ma like button not workin..😕😡

but super like to ur update...⭐️

aww ma god both of them are childhood frndz..??

err friends word is not appropriate for them though..😉

they are either enemyz (fake enemys😛) or loverz 😳 but not friendz..😆

woah i jus love 2nd part..⭐️
i mean thats so sweet to describe their childhood story..

its always intresting subject that how nikki n abhi must be in their child hood..
n m just loving it the way u described nikki and abhi..

nikki is cute lil beautiful angel and abhi introvert but dangerously handsome dude.. purfecto..⭐️

they are so diffrent yet compliment eachother soo soo well😃

i love their first meeting..

and love nikkis thoughts about him😆

an almost 18 year old with no friends , a complete loser 😆

haha thats so nikki..😆

i love all the things.. she not evn smiling at him.. him not evn seying hiee.. then avoiding her and leaving fom there.. and nikki thinking about him low things like ill mannerd looser.. 😆

just so AN and i jst enjoyd it too much.. i can clearly visualize this scene😆

i dont have words to tell u how much i enjoyd it..

ahh i love their style i mean they dont talk eachother in school whole thoze months n then strted talking at farewell party .. and only these two can strt their first proper convo wid lots of sercasm n taunts.. 😆

n then suddnly abhiz thoughtfull statement and surprizingly nikki liking it..😳 sudden change of atmosphere,mood swings, suddn change of their feelings for eachother.. suddn sweetness towrdz eachother..

hayee i dnt have wordz to tel u how much m lovin young abhi nikki n their childhood (romance 😉) story..😳

whethr as children or like mature people their feelings are not so different..😉

these two are just made for each other..😳⭐️

i alwaz love it when he pushes strand off of her face.. always adorable to see them like that..
and now evn more az imagining them so young..

i request you to please write some more chilhood scenes as they are diffrnt pure innocent
beautiful..their love, if love word is big for that age then atleast crush or attraction.. i just thoroly enjoyed ur writing and the whol part..

please some more flashbaks.. 😃 only if its possible nd if going well wid ur story

thanx a ton n ur minie ff is fabulous

love it to the core..
eagerly waiting for next part

thanx

-cherry😃

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.Dalisay.

@.Dalisay.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#297

LOL cherry I love ur comments 😎😆

spl this...

they are either enemyz (fake enemys😛) or loverz 😳 but not friendz..😆

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NEHU

@Glitter_In_Eye

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#298

Ok, I'm not editing my previous post.Posting my precious comments on your both parts in the same post.😉
First of all thanks a ton for starting this mini ff and thank you Mitzi or putting that idea into Pra's mind.
First part was kind of short and mysterious too given the entire new and different angle of the storyline though very interesting at the same time.
"Abhi , that boy hardly stays in the house . After school , he'll go for guitar lessons , then his taekwondo practice and then the gym . I am tired of telling him that he should have some fun ,hang out with his friends , but he'll never listen to me ." , his mother said a little sadly . So , an almost 18 year old with no friends.
Thank God, you kept the character that way. I love him like that only, simply The Abhimanyu Modi.😳

The whole conversation between AN near the pool was so like ummm AN...lol...Loved that to the core.

A light breeze passed around them and her hair fell across her face , partially covering it . But before she could push them aside , his hand had found its way to them .
Ab me aur kya kahu? I'm all 😍

When she opened them , his hand was still holding onto her hair and his eyes still piercing into hers .
What happened next? I wanna know, right now. Jaldi update karo.😡😆
Seriosly, waiting or the next part. Update soon Pra.

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cherry

@cherry_an

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#299

Originally posted by: ANrucha
LOL cherry I love ur comments 😎😆
spl this...

they are either enemyz (fake enemys😛) or loverz 😳 but not friendz..😆

hehhe thank u thank u apu😆😆

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pra19

@pra19

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#300

Originally posted by: ANrucha
OMG OMG...wow... 😍😍
Im so loving this fic...:))

AN in their teens awww... 😳⭐️ very cute.. 😆

My fav part has to be.

A light breeze passed around them and her hair fell across her face , partially covering it . But before she could push them aside , his hand had found its way to them . She felt a very slight shudder at his sly touch on her face and her eyes closed for a few seconds . When she opened them , his hand was still holding onto her hair and his eyes still piercing into her.

⭐️⭐️😃