Pra, finally caught up with your OS and it's really brilliant.. I read all three parts last night and got completely hooked till end.
First chapter was long enough to rouse interest.. Specially the last two lines.
"Nikki ' Nikita Malhotra " His voice made her jump. She knew that voice and she knew that man . "Abhimanyu Modi ."😍😍
I read last line and couldn't wait to find out what would happen next.. Good that I read all three chapters together otherwise I would have nagged you through PMs to post the next part ASAP.. 😳😆 The second part was truly enjoyable..
I liked the portrayal of young Abhi-Nikki in the second part.. Would like to quote some para's from the second part..
After school , he'll go for guitar lessons , then his taekwondo practice and then the gym . I am tired of telling him that he should have some fun ,hang out with his friends , but he'll never listen to me ." , his mother said a little sadly .
He was dressed in a T shirt and track pants and seemed to be have a really solid build for a 17 year old . He smiled politely though clearly uninterested, at her parents as his mother began introducing them .
So perfect portrayal of "young Mr. Sadu"😃 Reclusive, egoistic, arrogant yet charming😍😍 Simply superb..
"Nikki would never be able to put her finger on that feeling. What was it ? Annoyance , disquiet , anger or just plain hatred ? As hard as she tried , she could not ignore his presence around her . witty
Spot on, Pra.. Superb depiction of chaotic Nikki in this para👍🏼
Loved the entire pool scene.. It was cute, sparkling and beautifully written.. I loved the dialogues where you kept the essence of a taunt in the dialogues.. Their outright rudeness towards each other makes their chemistry so passionate and sizzling.. And Abhimanyu Modi is a master of masters of taunting, sarcasm😳😳
I love the way you showed Abhi was the first boy to kiss her☺️👍🏼 Thank you so much for that.. I second Rucha in this..
He was the first boy to kiss her and as hard as it may have been to accept , that kiss was truly very special and honest . She had been foolish to not understand that. It was almost like they had some connection going on there.
That's so typical Nikki.. First she enjoyed the kiss, then accused him and then the realization of her feelings for him.. Brilliantly written.. That's the "Nikita Malhotra".. Utterly confused😆
Loved the gracious convo between AN thereafter.. Particularly when Abhi asked her why she was still using her maiden name.. When Nikki had no idea why she felt happy when he informed her that he wasn't married either😳😳 How sweet!!
Pra, it's not fair to finish this story like this.. It indeed deserves an epilogue.. Beautiful OS with amazing flow.. Fab!! Glad to know that you gonna give us an epilogue.. Waiting for it😃
You write really well.. I hope you continue writing, no matter it's FF or OS.. Thanks for sharing your talent.. Keep up entertaining us.
@Mitzi, Hatz off to u for coming up with such an amazing idea.. Can't stop from myself from repeating ur words.. You too are in a wrong profession ma'am.😛
@Rucha, Thank you so much for informing me about this OS 😊
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