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Posted: 19 years ago
sorry kajal...i'd already done this part...next one i'll promise there'll be some Adi-Natasha scenes...

Part 52


Suddenly someone whispered, "say yes"

Then it went round and round until everyone was chanting "say yes…say yes"…

Mehika had tears in her eyes and she bent down so her and Rahul were face to face…

M: yes!…

Everyone cheered as he slipped the ring on her finger and she hugged him…

**

After the party…

Mehika, Disha and DK got home to see that Rano and Vedant where still awake…

DK and Mehika broke the good news to them while Disha went to check on Adil…

They stayed up and talked for a bit and then decided to go to bed…

DK went into his room and saw Disha taking of her necklace…

He went up to her and hugged her from the back…

D: let me finish taking my jewellery off first

DK: let me help you…

One by one he started taking off her bangles…then her earrings…

D: DK…

DK: Sshhhhh…

He started kissing her neck and untying her blouse…

He picked her up and put her on the bed and started kissing her forehead…

then her cheeks…and was coming down to her lips when she moved her face to the side…

he moved her hair and started on her neck again…

Disha just melted and hugged him tighter…

And the lights dimmed slowly…

**

As Mehika didn't have any family, Dk, Disha, Vedant an Rano went with her to meet Rahul's mom…

She greeted them and they sat down…

They talked and Rahul's mom like Mehika so they decided a wedding date…one month away!

Saighal house…

Gautham, Sanya, Priya (their baby), Natasha and Adi came over…

D: hi!!!!!!!!

Rano and Disha hugged all of them and played with Priya for a bit

S: so are you ready…

M/R/N/D: yeh!

DK: wait…ready for what?

N: jiju!…Mehika's wedding's coming up so we're going shopping…

R: yup…while you lot baby sit…

DK: umm…actually I can't cause I've got a meeting…I'm sure Vedant, Adi and Gautham can…

Adi: hey no way!…if we're stuck here you're not going anywhere…

V: yeh brother!

Disha came and sat next to DK…

D: DK…

DK: yehhhh…

D: we're going shopping…

DK: and…

D: and…money?

Sanya and Rano started sweet talking their husbands too…

G: hey!…you lot do the shopping with out credit cards!…now…from which angle does that look fair?

S: from the angle that you'll want to eat dinner tonight…

R: and if we don't cook it…

V: ok, ok!…here you go!

Gautham sighed and gave his aswell…

DK: Mehika…stay away from our wives…they're bad influence…

Adi: yup!…except for mine!…she didn't even ask for my credit card!

N: that's because I got it out from you before we even came…

Everyone laughed…

Adi: hey!…you don't even know how much she tortures me…

N: what did you say?!!!

Adi: I said how much she loves me…

N: yeh…you better have!
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Posted: 19 years ago
Jaanu that was too good!!!!!! especially the cooking part!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
that was really funny nibbles wives have total control over their hubbies 😃 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
👏

haha LMAO!!! 😆

fab part!! that was halarious 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
sorry guys...short part today

Part 53


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All the guys were left at home while Sanya, Mehika, Natasha, Disha and Rano went crazy at the mall and brought everything in sight!…

3 hours later…

They came home and all the guys were shocked to see that they were only carrying 2 bags each!…

Adi: OMG!…are you guys looking at what I'm looking at?

DK: I'm looking at my wife…what are you looking at?

Adi: I mean they've only got two bags each…did the government put a ban on how much stuff you can buy?

G: no idea but there's definitely something fishy going on…

The girls came and sat down cause they were absolutely tired from all that shopping…

V: are you guys feeling okay?

R: yeh…why?

DK: no…it's just that you've only got two bags each…didn't find anything you liked?

N: oh…we found a lot of nice things jiju…

A: then?

D: it's just that we couldn't carry the other 63 bags…

G: 63?!!!!!!!!!

M: yup…so they'll deliver it to the house tomorrow…

N: oh…here you go…

She gave Adi his credit card back…

A: is there any point of me having this?

N: yup!…I'm sure there are a few rupees left…

A: a few?!

DK: I'm sure that Disha's left something on my card…right Disha?

R: no chance jiju!…from all of us it was Natashadi who did the least shopping!

G/DK/V: WHAT?!

M: yup!..God I can't wait to get married…

V: yeh…only because you'll have Rahul emptying his pockets for you…

Everyone had their laughs and then Natasha, Adi, Gautham , and Sanya left for their houses while the other four went to sleep…
Jaslove thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
man this girls are too much, i atleasst come home with 5-10 bags 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
63????

u beat my record!!!!! 😆


please cont soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
😆 that was so funny and sweet. i literally laughed out loud!!!!! pls continue!

63 shopping bags? i only come home with about 15-20!!! wow! 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
sorry guys...couldn't continue yesterday cause some stupid virus came up

Part 54

One month later

Mehika's wedding!

Adi's house

Adi was leaning against the door

Natasha was inside getting changed

A: Natasha!!!…can I come in now?

: NO!!!
A: now?

N: Adi!!!..no!!!

A: now?

N: ok…now!

Adi opened the door

And he froze

Natasha was wearing

a dark and light blue embroided sari

she had her hair in a bun

and was wearing gold jewellery

with a bit of blue in

she was fixing her sari in front of the mirror

with her back to Adi

he smiled and hugged her from the back

and rested his chin on her shoulder

A: do you remember that night when I took you to the beach?

N: yes…why?

A: what have you thought about those 10 kids?

N: Adi!!!!

He laughed

and she punched him on the chest

he grabbed her hand

and hugged her

A: I love you!

N: I love you too!…now shall we go?

Bhosle House…

G: Sanya where's my tie?

He stopped when he saw Sanya

She was in a light pink sari

She had something behind her back

She walked up to him

and took out his tie

she put it round his neck

and started tying it

Gautham put his arms round her

G: you look gorgeous!

She blushed

S: thank you…here, done…

He smiled

And kissed her forehead

G: thanks!

S: just promise me one thing!

G: what?

She rested her head on his chest

S: you'll never leave me

he put his arms round her

G: never!!!

Saighal house…

Rano was standing

in the middle of the hall

giving orders

while the servants ran round her

making sure everything was ready

for the wedding

R: careful!!!!!…go help the pandit!!!!

V: hey rano!…what are you doing???

R: Vedant!…I'm making sure everything's ready for the wedding!!!

R: put those ladoos over by the table!!!

V: Rano!!

He took her hand

and made her sit on the sofa

he kneeled down

in front of her

V: listen to me Rano!…now you have to take care of two!!!…so be careful!!!

R: I know…and besides…I'm only four months pregnant!!!

V: Rano!

R: ok, ok!…I'll take more care!

Vedant smiled,

got up

and hugged her

R: I love you vedant!

V: I love you too!

technically i didn't show the wedding...but as i'm finishing this FF in 1-2 parts, i'll continue this part tomorrow!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
nooooooo!!!!!!!! you cant end this one!!!!!!! i love it!!!!!

great part though!!!!!!!

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