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cutiedevil1

@cutiedevil1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#691

That was really goood.
It was so sad when armaan finds out she's avoiding. Ouch!:(
and I feel really sad for riddhina. I'm an all for armaan kinda person but at times like these Im like 'ouch that's gotta hurt'
and I loved these lines 'whole parts, because I knew there were a few parts of those whole parts which could make every part in my body ache!' lol real nice :)

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Munchkin.

@Munchkin.

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#692

Chapter 22 COMPLETED on Page 84!

REQUEST:-

I need BIG COMMENTS, like BIG BIG BIG COMMENTS, on this one at least, because I've put in my level best in it, and it's by far the most important scene of this story! Please leave BIG COMMENTS! With analysis, criticisms and praises! Whatever! Just tell me if this part lived up to your expectations/ didn't live up to your expectations! Thanks! 😳

Edited by Dmg8594 - 14 years ago

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Usha

@alaipayuthey

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#693

just read the complete part!

as expected ridz has finally blurt it out, properly!

luved the part! i am so happy for ridz, she has finally let all her emotions out to the person she should let it out to! now she doesn't need to hide anymore!

overall, i luved the whole part!

finally, the much awaited part is next!

continue soon if you manage to get time!

Edited by dashingtusha13 - 14 years ago

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ARCaskettFan

@ARCaskettFan

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#694

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Atlast she confessed!!!!!!! YIpeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!

plzzzzzzzzzzz update da next part soon!!!

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Zarqaa

@cant.be.assed.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#695

comment edited on page 92 =D

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Anokhee

@Anokhee

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#696

Hey....

Finally, I caught up with your complete FF...

You must be wondering why wasn't I commenting, but I hadn't read the entire thing, I wanted to read everything before i comment... I had read parts here and there but not the whole thing from the start....

Anyway, the last whole of RIdhima's depression was killing me... I just could'nt take it but now, it finally seems like its over...

And somehow, I just know that Armaan's engagement with Andrea is just an act... He's probably doing this to make Ridhima jealous and confess...

However, Im damn curious to know what happened when Ridhima was drunk... I think she confessed but doesn't remember....

And I love the whole cupcakes thing with PMS... That was really really cute...

And girl, you cant end the way you ended... You should have put in the entire confession together... That would have been better, I guess...

I hope you put in one more installment about the complete confession and end it...

This just looks incomplete...

It'll just make the part better...

But thats only my opinion....

Love,

-A

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Nina

@Stupidcupid1234

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#697

Hey I'm not good with writing words but all I can say is that it was amazing
U jus made my day
Please update fast

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558278

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#698

wow! omg completed part was amzing! LOVED ridz exploding and revealing her feelings! finally! and next part is armaan right? yay!

cont super super soon! sorry can't manage to write a longer comment! health isnnt really permiting... if you're curious as to why... (and no i didn't have the energy to retype all this (see below) i just copied and pasted what i sent someone else...)

basically i've been sick and really weak for almost like 2 weeks now, thought it was like the flu or something, i was getting better too (well thought so anyways...) but then friday morning i was getting ready for driving practice and class afterwards but then i full on passed out twice! like i felt strange but i thought it'd pass, instead i passed out! the second time i fell pretty hard and banged my head on a corner...toh phir my parents got really worried as i've never passed out before. i was in the hospital since friday morning...

apparently i have a stomach infection, urinary tract infection, extremely low number of electrolytes, extremely low blod pressuree ect. but the worst and main reason is stress...doc told me to take everything easy as too much pressure or stress is dangerous for my right now... i'm home now but taking it easy/slow....

to make things worse i have a major presentation tuesday, and 3 major essays due friday that i haven't started yet!

i feel soo weak and tiredd all the time like i can't sit and do something for too long...my head starts hurting a lot then my mom gets really worried and such...

docs were worried if it was something serious, but alhumdullilah no brain tumors, anemia, diabetes, or cancer!

i guess doctors/everyone is super worried b/c the brain is such a fragile thing and mine is under so much stress/other problems - low bp, low electrolytes,infections in body, ect ect ... so doc warned me that if it gets worse/i dont take it easy it may be dangerous for my mind...

also like i normally have a lw appetite, par now EVERYONE is force feeding me! its so icky! like not only my parents, but my friends and aunties keep coming and force feeding me more and more and i'm like guys stop i'll bust! par nobody listens to the sick girl....haha

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stuts88

@stuts88

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#699

wow.....its just simply wow.....i cnt wait for the next part.......amazing writin......simply love ur fanfic

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anushkajain

@anushkajain

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#700

omggggggggggg did she confessed her love to him or m i dreaming .............................😲

wow wow last installment was like amazing one of most imp part of this ff 👏😃⭐️
the way she pent down her frustration in starting in those lines like