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Mrs.MSKForever

@Mrs.MSKForever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#701

OH EMM GEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Lovely lovely update... n even though I know that at the end of the story it will always be Riddhima and Armaan together forever...YET!! I cant believe you stopped where you did in this chapter of yours!!! You stopped at Riddhima's confession?? Why??? What abt Armaan?.... isnt he part of the story??... yes his POV can come later.... but a simple positive inclination wouldnt hurt!?!? n then you have said at the end of the update that the next one is not gonna be anytime next week.... that makes a hell lot of wait!!!! I know you'll make the next one for an interesting read but well I am a sucker for good sweet untangled reads... cliffhangers make me comment :( :D

I am sad-happy coz I know the big confession is coming soon... but I also know that this part will be followed by the next one only after another week or so... I am desparate to read the next one... you are an amazing writer to put in mildly :)

I love the way your thought flows... wishing you many more stories in future!! :)

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ARKJ_4EVER

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Posted: 14 years ago

#702

omg...wow!!!! finally she'd said it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

awesome part....can't wait 4 Armaan's reaction to dat now!!!! hope he tells her dat he also loves her!!!!

oh bt atleast one confess,it's superb nw waiting 4 Armaan's POV!

cont very very very very soon.........................😊

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Parneet

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Posted: 14 years ago

#703

Hey My comments for 2nd installment is EDITED on pg 86
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1635191&PID=40755765&#40755765

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Munchkin.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#704

Guys I have a lot of replying to d, but mainly all of you'll asked me why I didn't include Armaan's confessions in this chapter itself, well it was because Armaan doesn't have A confession...he has several other confessions and explanations to make and his PoV is gonna be one LONG chapter in itself! And I'm not gonna out the next part up in instalments because the entire chapter is gonna be in the form of a single dialogue, so it has to have flow...the next part only has Armaan's PoV with certain flashbacks as well, si it would've been impossible for me to include it in this chapter itself...+ I ned to think it out first, every line has to be planned , so yes, it is gonna take some time! But I'll try my level best anyway! I'll reply to all ur comments tomorrow in detail because I can't type so much through my phone! Lol! Thanks a tonne! Tomorrow! x x

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Nina

@Stupidcupid1234

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Posted: 14 years ago

#705

Jus out of curiosity wen will there be an update
I'm dying to read

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Sej

@SejN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#706

Ooooooomg woooohoooo party wow this part was the best it's the hihglight of this ff loved it.....I don't no y but Iwas sooo nrevous while reading this and when she said it I was at ease love you ur awesome I would give you like the biggest hug right Now if u were in front of me :) ur the best and now I can't w8 for the next part makeit good like this one :) awesooome loved it :)

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cutiedevil1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#707

OH MY GOOOOOOOD!!!! I'm screaming right now well not actially cuz I would wake d whole neighbour hood then. But aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh!! (screaming in my pillow). THAT was mindblowing, mind numbing uh Any more adjectives that I can use...!!!!!! WOW! it was sad when armaan said tht he has no value in her life. The lull b4 d storm *eeeeee*

One BIG part is done Now THE MOST AWAITED PART EVER to come!!!!!!!

Awesome. Again!

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nyxx

@nyxx

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Posted: 14 years ago

#708

Comment for the last installment:

OMG OMG SHE CONFESSEDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!

Seriously, this has got to be the BIGGEST cliffhanger EVER! I cant believe you left us like that, but again, the waits going to be very exciting and the next parts going to be EVEN BETTER! I hope! And i absolutely enjoyed the outburst from Riddhima and Armaan as well, and im just so so glad that it has come to an end. And now, either things are going to get awkward or BETTER...im so confused as to if Armaans going to confess as well or ignore her...hmmmmmmm lots of questions and ONLY YOU can answer them with the next update..and oh wait...chapter 23 is Armaans POV riii? I seriously cant waitt...:D

Also, about BIG comments....i read todays part, well each installment...once in the morning..then...late afternoon and now in the night :) And ive commented each time with HUGE ones..lol so i hopee youre happy :) And youre a great writer Shru...you definetely deserve a pad on the back..no wait..thats too little...atleast an APPLAUSE...:D ovation even as well LOL Keep up the awesome work Shru! And i hope you updatee the next part soonn....like reallyy sooonn..or alteast an installment since youve left us asking for SO MUCH MORE looll!

Take care!

Update soonn!!!!!!!!!

Edited by Armaan-KSG - 14 years ago

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armaans_desire

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Posted: 14 years ago

#709

omg wow i frikken loved it!! ur sucha amazing writer!! i wz having sucha crappy day n den i read dis n it totally made me smile!! finally ridhima confessed..i cnt wait ta c armaans reaction. honestly, for sum reason i think he loves her 2 but was waiting for her to confess..i cant wait till the nxt part

plz plz plz continue soon!!

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Aanya

@Aanya.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#710

OH MY GOD.

That was like, abso-frikkin-lutely AWESOME! She confessed her love for him? Yay!!!

I loved the way you showed her despair you know, those emotions that she portrayed when she learnt he [supposedly] spent the night with Andrea were intense and very, very intense but at the same time they were believable too!

And the end. It was so EXHILARATING. The way she confessed!!!

I CANNOT wait to read moreee!!!!!!! Next part is from Armaan's PoV right?

Continue super soon!

xoxo

Aanya

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