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Posted: 19 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: jjknrokz

You write well Saamiya Paagal 😆 Love the concept of the story continue soon!

Lotsa Luv

Rav Paagal 😆



aww rav soo sweet... but itna bhi acha nhi hai 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
#52
Great story so far! can't wait to read the next part. Plz Cont soon !!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: jjknrokz

You write well Saamiya Paagal 😆 Love the concept of the story continue soon!

Lotsa Luv

Rav Paagal 😆



ok ok guys stop, you all right so well....i am the only one who doesnt!!😭

Pooja Paagal😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Pooja922



ok ok guys stop, you all right so well....i am the only one who doesnt!!😭

Pooja Paagal😆

Are you kidding Pooja Paagal, I love ur fan-fic. Bas ek kami ham sab mein, all the paagals waste too much time doing silly things then come up with the bahaana I was bzy, isliye I couldn't continue😆😆😆...Agar kissi ko yeh sab samjh me aaya let me no😆

Rav Paagal

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Posted: 19 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: jjknrokz

Are you kidding Pooja Paagal, I love ur fan-fic. Bas ek kami ham sab mein, all the paagals waste too much time doing silly things then come up with the bahaana I was bzy, isliye I couldn't continue😆😆😆...Agar kissi ko yeh sab samjh me aaya let me no😆

Rav Paagal



wow ravv kya pakday hai reeeeee 😆 after alll tum humari gang say jo ho 😆 i know yesterday i was sooooo busy bugging natu i didnt even write my fan fic ...😆 Pooja tum ko padhay gi...😡. u r fan fic is awesome ..😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: princess1_43



wow ravv kya pakday hai reeeeee 😆 after alll tum humari gang say jo ho 😆 i know yesterday i was sooooo busy bugging natu i didnt even write my fan fic ...😆 Pooja tum ko padhay gi...😡. u r fan fic is awesome ..😳

Thankoo😉Waise all the paagals are ekdum mast people. We all right good (yea I am praising my self😆). Humari Guru Neha and Natasha Hain😉 aka hum 3 paaglon ki doctors😆!

Rav Paagal

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: jjknrokz

Thankoo😉Waise all the paagals are ekdum mast people. We all right good (yea I am praising my self😆). Humari Guru Neha and Natasha Hain😉 aka hum 3 paaglon ki doctors😆!

Rav Paagal



Rav..... 😆 i know humara Masterminds doctors humko encouragement dey rahay hai ... 😉

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 3
~*Flashback~*
We are taken to place where u can see Palace....outside the gate we see to people whispering about something that happened few days ago.... cut to we see a small girl with light medium brown curly hair .... riding a pony with a muscular man who was a best friend to that young girl and also was a care taker ...... the man asked the small girl who was on the pony to gett off.... but the girl wined and said "Can i please please stay on it for long .... i dont want to go inside" she pulled out her lips and made a baby face and rite at that moment the guy's heart melted and he says"Ok but this ur last ride for today or else we wont get a chance tommorow" .... little did the man know what was in store for both of them".....
~*Flash Back End*~

Kripa and Sahil were still in their car
Sahil suddenly puts a brake on the car and wakes Kripa up .....
Kripa startled with what just happend ..... looks up worried at Sahil
Kripa: Sahil kya hua
Sahil: Kripa kuch nhi... iam sorry maina itni zoor say brake mara...
Kripa knew Sahil was lieing something was bothering him....
Kripa: Sahil kya chuppa rahay ho ...
Sahil: Kripa sach main kuch bhi nhi hai
Kripa: Sahil... mujhse se behtar tumko koi nhi janta.... mujhe pata hai kay tumhay koi cheez perashaan kar rahi hai .... abb jaldi bolo kya baat hai
Sahil knew kripa wont give up.... but he also knew how shot tempered she was ...
Sahil:Kripa bolna kuch bhi nhi ...
Kripa gives Sahil a stern look and turns around and looks out the window....
Sahil smiles to himself ...and say "Kripa mera bass chalay to main tumko duniya kay sara taaara(stars) sari khushiyan de doon" or shayad ek din yeh dey bhi sakon.... thinks about something and again hits the brake
Kripa annoyed looks bak at Sahil...
Kripa: Sahil tumko rukh rukh kay chalnay ki bemmari hai kya
Sahil: Kripa tumko itna shauq hai to tum chalo na
Kripa: Sahil maazak band karo aur bolo kya hua
Sahil: Kripa tumhe gadi chalnay say kyu daar lagta hai ... and then bites his tongue...
Kripa looks down gets a tear in her eye: Sahil.... choro
Sahil... shoot yeh maina kya kar diya .... n then gets a wicked smile...
Sahil: Kripa wasia tanya kay baad hum tina say milna chalay...
Kripa: Sahil kuch to sharam karo...
Sahil.: Lo besharamo ko Sharam kasi kripa..
Kripa smiles now and hits Sahil. lightly on his arm...
Sahil is happy to see the Smile bak on and decides to irratate her more ....
Sahil: starts to sing "Do Dil mil rahay hai magar chupke chupke"
Kripa: sahill kyu tum is ganay ko barbaad kar rahay ho....
Sahil: Kripa meri koyal jasi awaz ko tum bura keh rahi hoo
Kripa: Koyal itni besuri nhi hoti Sahil
Sahil: kya kaha ... theek hai ... abb main TIna.. Meena.Tanya... sab ko date karunga
Kripa again hits him... hogaya .... abb chalo ...

~*Flashback*~
We see a 16 years old girl who is terrified, trembling in a dark room ... but no one is there to help her .... she is alone in that room ....wishing to be saved...... wishing for someone to open that door and come running to her .... wishing for someone to open that light ..... wishing that someone would save her ..... the girl is dressed up in white.... and is clinging on to a small object....
~*End Of Flashback*~

hope u liked it 😕
Edited by princess1_43 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#59
it was a great part please con. soon can't wait to read next part 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#60
look intereasting! Cont soon! Cant wait to read the next part! 😛

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