Opposites Attract- maaneet ff thread # 1 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Amazing concept. Loved dadi's plan.
Maan u wont regret it :D
Do update soon please.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome concept oh love Dadi trap Maan into getting married pls cont soonnnnnnn pls do pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
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love the character sketch!! n the first part was superb!!! do continue n oh ya i think i lik the positive side of naintara n dev. cannot wait for more updates!! plz cont soon diiiiii!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Maaneet_09

love the character sketch!! n the first part was superb!!! do continue n oh ya i think i lik the positive side of naintara n dev. cannot wait for more updates!! plz cont soon diiiiii!!!!


thanks dear.NT has negative streaks but not as devil as she is in the show.😊
will post next update tomorrow.
Edited by sanjeevani09 - 14 years ago
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amazing add me to the om list
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nice story, love ur self talks between dialogues
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Posted: 14 years ago
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"Maan- can i refuse after seeing? No. so i dnt want to see her.u can even tie a cattle wid me.he lost his temper and shouted. Go i will marry right away. " 😆 🤣

Loved it 😆
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plzz add me to PM list
awesome ff
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PART 1--- page 1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1631786/opposites-attract-maaneet-ff-thread-1


Part - 2

Daadi convinces daarji that a shadi today is much better than a post dated lingering marriage.nothing certain of my life...Handa's were easier to convince with her emotional drama.much easier than maan. They conceded for a small ceremony at haveli wid all close relative and acquaintance from the pind..and registered shadi then and there. They will take geet to delhi tonite.

Bride meets Groom

Shadi prep on the go every1 is hurriedly moving to make the best possible arrangements. Registrar was to come at 5pm.

Maan was perplexed. he thought of going out for a walk to think straight. #walking thru the corridor he was thinking....kahan phaas gaya subah utha to malum nahi tha aj shadi ho jaegi vo bhi kisi HP ki larki se....things never happen in my life out of the blue but daadi....# SMASH

A pillow landed on his head. Followed by a vase. He bend down and picked the pillow for safeguard.

Geet yelled from the room- mein ye nahi pehnungi...and out came the flowers of the vase.

Maan- flowers..

Geet- pasand nahi aye..ye le meri jutti...out came her jutti.

He saw a tailor saving himself from the wrath outside the door.

At such short notice a new wedding dress cudnt be arranged for geet so she was being pacified to wear Rano's wedding dress. Tailor had come for alterations. All of geet's dresses were simple salwar kameez which won't suit the wedding and the relatives' wud mock them for not arranging something bright for her. Read bright as gaudy. Rano's dress was too gaudy and outdated according to geet. She was already angry as she hadn't met the guy she was marrying. And tantrums were part of geet. She never liked to compromise.

Out came a gaudy duppata which covered his face. Maan was fuming by nw. He pulled down the duppata of his face with his long fingers nw turning into a fist.the girl was on his nerves. Geet comes out stamping in anger with a daanda in her hand. Her curls all spread all over her face.

Geet handa wearing yellow suit, hair all open in a mess, eyes speaking anger.

Geet holds maan's hand and pulls him in the room.

Maan- hw dare u?

Geet- oye, mujh pe angreji mat jhaar.pointing the danda at him with the other hand. Kapre ache pehen liy to kya hero ho gaya hai??...bulau brij veerji ko ya mera danada khaega? Hai to tu masterji ka chela hi na???

Maan stunned still trying to comprehend what the girl was shouting..#pagal hai shayad#

Geet- m apne pasand k kapre pehnungi....2hrs mein mere kapre nahi sile to m tera khoon karke hi shadi karungi....

Maan stunned to see daadi's choice..#maan- daadi ne ye masterpiece khoja hai mere liye. He checked her out her features were good but what a mess she was. She had turns the whole room into a dress shop....big brown eyes filled with anger continuously blinking, stray strands of hair covering her face, clumsy and out rightly spoilt brat...hw im gonna manage her.....y me daadi will do it..#

Geet- kya dekh rahe ho...aise dekha to ankhe phoor dungi.

Geet was out of control after seeing her dress...and just didn't give anytime to maan to speak. She stood with her hands up and said.

Geet- jaldi naap lo...masterji bhi kahan se batameej chokre bhejte hain..khud nahi aaa sakte the naap lene.....ab muh kya dekh rahe ho naap lo varna brij veerji aa jaenge fir vo tumko naap denge. She kept blabbering....ek to shadi ek din mein, vo bhi us ullu ke pathe se aur ye bewakoof darji...

Maan- tumne mujhe ullu kaha?????

Geet- tumko bewakuf kaha duffer...apne dulhe ko ullu, aur gadha bhi....

This was the last straw. Maan shouted- hw dare u??? Tum pagal ho......daadi..he shouted.

The whole handa family came running...by that time geet cudnt decipher her mistake and said- u want a shouting competition look she shrieked.........aaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwww.

Rano and tayiji were stunned and embarrassed.dev and NT also came down and silently witnessed.

Rano pulled geet down. by nw she was standing on her bed.

Maan glanced across the room it was decorated wid different vibrant coloured cloth. Curtains were a combination of pale lemon yellow and ochre. Bed posts had red cloth tied over them. In a corner was a big mirror wid a dressing table almost filled with bangles of all possible colours. The only thing which lacked color was the ceiling...it was white...every other thing in the room was colourful. It was so much unlike maan, who loved white and maximum indulgence was to light shades of blue.

Rano- sorry ji...geet niche aa aur sorry bol...

Geet- kyu bolu..rano cuts before she gives another stupid question.

Rano- ye maan hai, tailor nahi...

Geet- ye tailor nahi hai to yahan aya kyu?

Tayiji- jhali ab bas kar..refering to maan....vo ji jaldi mein shadi ho rahi hai na to larki ghabra gayi hai..galti se aapko darji samajh baithi..uske taraf se hum sorry kehte hai.

The whole family started talking to him at one time saying it happened by chance. To stop the chaos.

Maan- BAS....ye pagal hai ya ise dikhta nahi??

Geet was nw eyeing her dress..#aj to tu gaya ab veerji mujhe nayi dress banvane nahi denge..babaji is maan ko bhi abhi tapakna tha#

Rano- ye thora dress k liy pareshan thi..she was pointing at her wedding kurti.

Maan had seen geet's sadness in her eyes just by the mention of her dress and he bagged the chance and said- it is nice...whats the problem with it...the sequence and gold colour makes it fabulous...she must wear it. it suits her personality.#tumhare jaisa outrageous #

Geet- ye....mm....nahi...vo...par...but darji cuts off geet and gives the finalverdict- geet yahi pehnegi.

Maan gives geet a smirk and she shows him a weird face and turns around.

Maan went out and wished #kash ye pagal isse gussa hok shadi se mana kar de#

Geet was looking at the bright pink kurti with sequence and gaudy gold work and weeps-i wont marry him...he has a bad choice..Thinks i will wear this kurti.

Rano and papaji persuade geet that they will come wid best dresses possible and 20 of them when they visit her in delhi. tayiji tells her u will get the best clothes in delhi...girls in the pind are jealous u marrying such rich man. Finally geet is ready wid the suit but she swears that i will show him.



PRECAP-

Maan- bhag rahi ho...acha hai..mere sath rahna waise bhi mushkil hai...tum bhag hi jao...

so hw was it? waiting for comments.


PART - 3 --- page 10

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Edited by sanjeevani09 - 14 years ago
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