Dil,Dosti etc~MG~THREAD 1 - Page 14

😭 Still no Maan,

But anyways, nice update! thanks!!!

Oye Choti kya awesome FF likha hai tumne! I am stumped.... please cotinue soon! rest discussion in AM😆 Please PM me choti! 😳

shikha kiddo,,,good job han,,,sorry dear i know iam late,,but now i hv read ur whole ff except part half 8, 9,,,will read it later han..ok now my comments-

character sketch was really nice

story is interesting, n d every part n their life n circumstances that u hv connected wid real lifes things ,i really liked that idea.

in starting i was a bit confused wid d characters,,,but not now ,,,
account hack issue n over involvement in cyber world of NT n Rajji,, this things happnd in real life too,,,,
damnnn that NT was a real wamp, n that was d reason why she was always after geet...,,,poor geet, take my advice choose right friends n do d right decisions,,,yeah she has always done d write things i was laughing when i wsa reading NT n Rajji cyber story,,,online bf.... acchha h yaar....

now cum to maan,,,i haven;t read 8 part fully,,but rockey is maan na,,,but he;s looked like change person,,i mean at a time u hv describes him like a very similar to msk, anti social person then why he is showing so much interest in geet n wo bhi like a teanage guy.....didn;t look like a mature one,,rokey n maan both r same person but seem likae wid different personality,,,,

chalo gotta go,, will read rest part later,,n i think this comment is longest,,,,,rofl

hey darling . . . we have a phichle janam ka connection . . . i am always the first to comment . . . ok . . . the update as usual was confusing . . . she deleted him again and again and added him again and again . . . is she sitting free for doing that . . . tell her to stop irritaing maan . . . aww . . . pari is not geet . . . he chatted with geet but he dated pari is it something like that😆 as he wanted to meet geet but geet sent pari instead😆 i better stop confusing others as i know its something else . . . well i will wait for the next update . . . btw i updated BSLS go read i am not sending PMs for the time being😆