Mayur FF - Magical Complications. - Page 69

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Posted: 14 years ago
okay i'm back to comment on the rest i have read...where should i start from, how about the fact that you are a AMAZING writer and i love reading your stories cinderella...you should write a book once you graduate...i would love to read it!
I love the fact that Nupur is staying away from alcohol and the reason being is mayank, finally her someone whom she wants to live her life for ...wants to breathe in every moment of life. I hope she can also bring into his life the happiness and joys he needs because he is one cranky and sadu person!😆
was kind of expecting this outburst reaction from him, i think he won't give in that easily or maybe something is holding him back...but nice to see nupur ...falling inlove with him. i hated when he told her not to intrude in his life...when shes already become a part of it...
Mayank is such a sadu but he ate the muffins which is the cutest thing ever, meaning he has feelings for her also...and nupurs constant worry about him liking the muffin or not...was uberly cuteeee. loved Gunjans bond with her sister, it very sweet.
Nupur is such a sweetheart helping and caring for him even though he is constantly rude to her... she knows him sooooo well.gosh i hate the cranky mayank i liked it better when he was queit...in the begining!😆 its just sometimes he becomes really rude and i hate that....but than again jisse hum pyar kartein hain unhi pe gussa hote hain!😉😆 .....
I love the phase of wanting to meet each other and restless nights it brings forth the truths sometimes we want to avoid in our lives....just like that mayank even though on face remains stiff and angry inside he is soft like a candle...melts at the sight of nupur...😳
the kiss scene was heartwrenching but breathtaking...seriously i was reading it with aweness..they both are sooo cuteeeeeeeeee..but mayank still being resistent so like him...but he likes or maybe loves her..and he knows that also but he is still running away!!😕
Okay this mayank is seriously nuts, i was soo shocked when told lets get married tom and just like nupur i was in damage shock..like is he okay??😆 but i guess sometimes these quick judgements lead us to our true destination.. and they got married...which was so unexpected but i accepted it...because i know they are meant to be together forever.😳
okay after marriage shocks,, mayank is romantic?? behind that saduness lies a gentle heart...which i loveeeeeeee about him , they both are so different yet the fit sooo perfectly with each other...thats the most beautiful part of their story...Cinderella you are such a romantic, i was blushing soo hard reading the last two parts....you know what strings to touch and just how to touch them also😉😆...and mayanks behaviour is shocking me every moment..whats up...is something wrong did he marry for some wrong reason or what?? or is my brain just overthinking it!😆
Anyway update soon.
Sajjal
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow Mehak.................it was so cute yaar.............Nupz is so much in love with Mayank....shy at every step........... Mayank is so authoritive over her😆😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey.......dat was amazing.......throughout reading...i was blushing..................blush....blush.................................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
& i had big smile on my face.............................i hv read ur update 4 atleast 4-5 tyms.................................................awasome.........................!!!!!!!😍😍

the couple is truely UNIQUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.they r jst adorable....................the 1st couple on hte earth. who r creating complicated romance.....mayu is 2 much much much romantic..................................loved each & every bit of it.............................!!!!!!

if i can see mayu's expressions when nupsi is hurt & sad...i ll be greatful.........!!!!

cant wait 4 the next......!!!!
thnx 4 pm....

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey it was jus mindblowing.....
waise toh in evry comment of mine i say dat i soooo love dis mayank,bt in dis update also he is just so sweet...oh i soooo love dis mayank😆
i loved evry gestures of him....i just pray dat dis couple remains alws like dis....
n i dont think dat mayank has married nupur 4 some other reason...!!
n my nupsie is just 2 cutiieepiee....mayank is so lucky 2 have her in his life n vice versa....
n kinza u dint pm me...😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow so romantic!.....i love this mayank!......so great to see them happy in their life....wait so nupur doesnt know where his second job is huh?....im wondering what will happen when she finds out becuz she will then realize how he came to know about her problem.....i loved the part about choosing pictures to send diya....and how she imagined mayank would react....the ending was so sweet.....cant wait for the next update....reading your updates at the start of the day really makes my morning!......naina
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Posted: 14 years ago
u left me blushing once again 😆 I like this hatke romance by Mayank 😆 Loved this part!! Well written...!! continue soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Kinza i am gone..☺️
what can i say now...it is out of the world...
i am truely loving it....
Mind blowing..........😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
super duper update once again...........
loved the cute romance and mayank is a different romantic guy....
i so love this guy...

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow..amazing..!!!
really i dnt hav words..
awesome..!!😍😍
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update.
love mayur romance.
update soon.
thanks for the pm.

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