Jung Ke Dhasthan (An Abay Piya FF) PT80 - Pg 70 - Page 8

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Posted: 14 years ago
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He quickly typed the reply but thought about the statement as he got ready, "Aathama ke saay? Lekin yeah kaise ho saktha hai? Koi bhi aathama tho gaurdian nahi ho sakti hai? Gaurdian angel? Lekin kaun hai yeah gaurdian angel? Chintha ki tho koi baath nahi hai bure saaye tho uss hawan main nahi aasakthe dikne tho dur ki baath hai."

wow great part and superb writing dear thank you for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Krishi Gr8 Part.. Seems Panchi also is falling for Sid.. Now whoz dis Aathama or Gaurdian Angel.. So Chand n Hassena know abt Shehezadi's return as per her promise.. Hope they 'll know soon dat its Piya.. Amazing.. Its getting more n more intresting.. Eagerly waiting for d next part.. Continue soon.. n u didnt pm me yaar.. Do pm when u update d next part..lol..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I did check your inbox again 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hei krishi,
continue soon..will leave comments later

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so maya n danish striked a deal..as sid said to forgive him maya did it..really i'm confused thinking whether sid is good r evil..now he seems to be good..n abt the aathma they talked wud that be haseena's..not sure abt it but i feel so..really waiting to know all abt that..
Edited by RB81 - 14 years ago
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Hey I checked d inbox.. I didnt get d pm.. Der must b sum promblem..let it b.. So m waiting for d next part as usual.. Update soon..lol.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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umm looks like! I told you along with a reply that could be the cause!
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Part 15


Piya on the other had was having great fun playing in the shower and getting dressed humming the whole time. She felt so much more stronger and better it was as if something had opened up within her. She felt so light and happy after a long time, may be for the first time after the day her 'father' had left her at such a tender age. The after which she came to know about her inheritance and since then worked hard in everything! Picking up her dress she smiled, "Sidharth aap tho aaj muje dhekthe hi rehejayenge."


That was exactly what he did when she walked out of the place room dressed in a soft blue halter neck dress that reached till her knees. She topped it up with very simple white meatel earings with matching glass stones, some of her own creations along with some bangles. Her make up too was very soft and light just enough to highlight her features, "So how do I look?"


"I must say very ravishing." he replied taking her hand, "You clean up very nicely Shay! You want to drive again?"


"Haan muje practice ki zaurath hai." she replied, "Vo tho hai tume, come on! Aur haan theez chalana. It's not a problem!"


Nither of them saw Abhay watching them from afar hurt in his eyes as he watched Sidarth's hand on Piya's shoulder. Nor did they see him drive following them to the restaurent. Sidharth quickly ordered the meal and along with it some wine, "So kya puuchna chahathi thi tum mujse?"


"Aap ke company ke baare main..." she replied sitting down, "Aah yes company ke baare main bolo kya jaana chahthi ho?"


"How about what's my roll to start with?" he laughed, "Your role is to become the next MD in training - seriously Piya, T's job is towards the company image thansk to you. Maya will be taking care of the technical research for now and your job is to look into the improvements and developments. Usske baad tume chote chote projects ko bhi sambalna padega, I am sure you will enjoy them."


"Ok.. that sounds cool!" she smiled, "Aah khaana I'm starving."


"Then din in, aur kya jaana chahathi thi tum?" she paused to have a bite of the food before continuing, "Kya vrath ke samai alcohol peena teek hai?"


"Haan bilkul teek hai kyunki main tume vohi alcohol peena ka ijazath deta hoon light or safe hai. Jise nature ka influence hai for example wine, light rum and martini but not pure... it must have either chocolate or some fruit. Drinks like vodka, taquila and rum are out of quistion" he added firmly, "Teek hai tho main vo saab nahi lungi."


"Good girl, aur haan kaane main bhi kuch restrictions hai tume." he added, "Jaise?"


"Jaise mushrooms, tum mushrooms bilkul nahi kha sakti. Lekin haan agar kisi bhi kaaran lena pada then balance it out with some herbal tea." she laughed, "Not very fond of them, aur kya kya cheezen mana hai?"


"Come on have this and then I will tell you." he fed her the food, that was the seen Abhay mannaged to walk into, a seen that disgusted him to the core and filled his dead heart with anger. His temper broke out though only when he reached home, "No, no Sidharth you can not do this to me. Tumne ek baar mujse apna pyar cheen liye lekin baar baar hone nahi dunga."


"What's wrong Abhay?" he sat down tiered, "Piya uske saath hai mom, main laak kosish kar ke bhi usse protect nahi kar pa raha hoon. Na main usse dhuur ja pa raha huun, patha nahi kya karun, I feel so lost so alone. Main phir se akela pad gaya."


"Your not alone Abhay. Your never alone, hum hamesha there saath the aur saath rahenge. Uss waqth bhi humne tume nahi choda jab tumne hamare surival ko bhi kathre main daala. Aab kaise karenge?" Haseena smield at Chand who handed each of them a drink, "Abhay we have lost a lot of people in my life, hum tume bhi nahi khona chahte hai. Issiliye humne Sidharth ke saath uss deal kiya Piya ke baare main.Trust me I am sure she is safe. Vo usse kuch nahi karega, lekin aab waqth aagaya ke tum hamare little family ke liye kuch karo."


"Kya karna hai muje?" he asked sipping his drink, "Humare rulers ne ring ke saath saath ek aur zimidari ke ummedh kar baite hai."


"Kaise ummedh?" Haseena's tone changed, Chand took his time to sit down, "Abhay Shehezadi wapas aagayi hai aur vo aab apni powers bhi obtain karne lagi hai. Jung bahoth jaldi shuru hojayega."


"You want me to fight?' he asked Chand paused searching for the right words, "Nahi Abhay - Hizzainess se Shehezadi ke rakshak ko dund rahe hai, it has to be a male vampier. Ek aise rakshak jo uske har zarurath aur kwaish ko pura kar saktha hai. As in..."


"Ha-haan main samaj gaya." he cut him off too embaresed to have the 'talk' at the age of 220 at least, "Lekin muje kya karna hai?"


"Dhrekandans power use kiya tho fourteen people got secected. Your one of them." he waited for Abhay's tantrum to start only to find him looking at him with mind, "Main kyun karunga yeah saab?"


"Agar tumne nahi kiya tho Jaithandhran phir see jeeth payega." she replied, "Yashatosh?"


"Yashatosh, one of the Dhrekandans and the brother of the Khandhi, he was always jelous of his sister and used to perform the dark arts. No one knew about it but for him the dark arts was not enough and for him. He went and did somehting so terrible that no one could forgive him, but it was too late... he had already become gone underground."


"Ussne aisa kya kia mom?" Abhay touched her shoulder, she had never spoken about her life as a human, "Yeah pucho ke kya nahi kiy. He converted himself into a vampier, Abhay. He did not stop there, he brutelly used several girls and destroyed them. Sacrifices ke liye kabhi tho apne pyaas ko bujane ke liye kabhi, that was when the ring ways created along with the cofin! Bahoth waqth lag gayi thi usse trap karne main nearly a century aur capture tho kiya. She was the barer of the ring... and also my saviour."


"Aap ke-" Chand cut him off with a look there were some details even he did not know, "My saviour, I was one of his sex slaves. Yashatosh ne muje kidnap karke aapne paas hi rakliya aur kaai saari ceromonies ke baadh mujpar apna aag ko bujatha tha. There were ceromonies when ne had to cut the virgins blood but could not enjoy them. He used to cut their blood and take out the heat on me... that was how she found me. Raped, wounded and broken, muje apne saath lekar gayi aur muje teek kiya. Unn logon ne muje bahoth sara pyar diya aur jaab Shehezadi paida hui muje usski daima banaya. Lekin kismath ke wajai se bahoth jald chal basi, uss bachi ko mere paas chod kar. Vo bilkul meri beti jaise bhan gayi... aur aab vo wapas aagayi hai. Meri Shehezadi, uss bachi jis ke liye main ek vampier banne ke liye raazi hogayi thi. Jisske liye main aaj thak thapas kar rahi hoon bina insaan ke khoon piya. All of this is just for her Abhay!"


Even the worst would have broken after listening to them, Abay was certainly not the worst, "Mom... mom aap ne bahoth kuch sehelia hai. Aab aur nahi I sware I will give my best aagar muje aap ke Shehezadi ke liye Piya ko bhi chodna padega tho main use choddunga. I will learn to love her mom."


"Shehezaadi se pyar karna kaafi aasan hai Abhay. Vo hai aisi ek bachi, pyari, natkhat aur samajdar. If you get selected then do tell her about Maithili and Piya. Vo samaj jayegi trust me Abhay... vo bahoth kuch samaj sakti hai." Haseena assured him and for the first time in two hundred years Abhay did something he never did before, he placed his head down on her lap and wept. Wept for his love, wept for the lady he considered his mother and wept for the way his fate constantly pulled him away from what he wanted!


He was certainly not the only one who cried at that moment though, outside the door Piya stood there her hand at the door. Frozen with shock, tears flowing down her eyes...


Krishi

Edited by shakthi04 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Omg Priya heard every thing >????????????what gona now ab aage bataoooo
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wait for the next part trust me totally unexpected!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hei krishi,
that was really wonderful..felt bad for the human haseena..but how come piya reached there?i'm lil confused too..that wud be clarified from ur further updates..if piya is the shehzaadi then will she not know abt maithili?may be she may realise that later..but haseena felt her presence only now not when she was maithili..krishi u better update soon else i'll confuse u too..

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