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Part 65


Nodding Piya looked at the document in her ipad but dropped it the next moment, "Yeah kaise ho sakta hai? Yeah tho Adithya ka mark hai."


"Are you sure Piya?" she nodded, "I am sure, kithni bar dhek chuki hewn main isse, lekin Adithya ka mark ismain kaise? Lagtha hai muje unlogon ko contact karna hi padega. Sid fix a meeting with the hizainess immidetly! Chand vo ladki jo uss thanthrik ki ghar par thi, get her some security, I have a gut feeling that she's next on target. Maya, protect Khabhir at all costs even if it means exposure. I want him alive till the puja."


"Bacha you must go to collage today, Soniya is taking over as consler and we have the new proffesor joining us. You must be there!" Dhanish reminded her nodding she sighed a bit pulling out a cigaret and lighter from Abhay's pocket, "Sidharth fix a meeting after collage hours, I would like to meet them in a conference room and over a good hot dinner served with cold wine."


"And you are not leaving with out brakefast, Abhay your fried eggs and toast by the way we need some eggs and butter."


"Dhanish cut her off placing one of the two plates in his hand in front of Abhay who began eating quickly, "I will get them in the evening on the way back, Piya ek minute zara dhiyao i want to take a look at that mark again."


Nodding she moved the ipad through the air into his arms, "Strange, very strange, maine dheka iss mark ko, lekin kahaan? Ofcourse Vennis dad aap ko yaad hai, uss ek saal vennis main jub humare ghar par bhi yeah mark tha. It was behind the old cottage at that house!"


"Aah you are right Abhay it is the same mark I shall have to ask someone to look into it." Chand replied quickly sketching the mark in a piece of paper and got up, "I will get this trough them, you kids make sure you finnish your work. Your assignments!"


Picking up their assignments they left via the back door and to their respective cars in the main home. None of them noticed the shadow of a man standing there and watching them rush through the place, "Meri Rudhra ithni thaqth bhari ho gay hai, aacha laga raha hai. Soniya, aap ne kaafi aacha kaam kiya hai uss bachi ke saath."


"Shukriya huzoor, saab aap ke dhikaye hue raaste ke wajay se hai." she replied smilling at him, her open hair falling over her face, stepping closer he moved her hair away revealing the green eyes that sparkled. "Nahi Soniya sirf humari dikaye hue disha main nahi balki aap ke pyar bhi ismain shamil hai. Aadhithya ke jaane ke baad vo kithni kamzor hogayi thi sirf aur sirf hum jaanthe hai. Bahoth kamzor hogayi thi, uski ruuh ithni kamzor hogayi thi ki usse bachana kaafi muskil hogaya tha. Kaafi muskil ke baad hii usse bacha paye the aur wapas bhi laaye."


Soniya gently touched his shoulder, "Lekin aap ne unko bachaliya aur na sirf bachaliya usse waapas bhi laya aur aaj, sahib aaj aap unse milne ke liye jaa rahe hai, vo bhi sadhiyon ke baad."


"Yaad maath dihlana patha nahi kaise react karegi vo muje dhek kar. Bhees saal hogaye hai, usse dhuur gaye the aur ek baar bhi humne usse palat kar nahi dheka. Bhees saal se humne sirf apna karam ko nibhaya aur chalthe rahe, aage, kabhi palat kar nahi dheka, kabhi uske haalath jaane ki koshish nahi kiya. Vo saab kuch humne tumhare upar chod kiya aur gaye Yashathosh ko doondne ke liye. Yashathosh aur uska vo Samrat Rajan ko bhi. Lekin humko nahi patha tha ke Samrat ke saath vo thaqth hai jisne chokri ko peheli baar haraya tha."


"Amritha? Aap Amritha ke baare main baath kar rahe hai kya?" she asked pushing back her hair, "Hana vohi thi jisne saab kuch jalakar raak kar dhiya. Na vo humari zindagi main aathi aur na Shehezadi Shayanthini Devi ek kamzor Rudhra Devi baanthi hai. Ek aise ruuh jo sirf aur sirf bulave see aathi thi aur kaam katham karne ke baad chali jaathi thi. Bina koi aasli thaqth, bina ek asli shareer, bina ek rakshak' bina ek wajood. Bulane main aathi thi aur kaam katham hone par chali jaathi thi."


"Lekin uss pure waqth aap uske saath the hai na sahib?" the man shook his head and suddenly began walking, "Saath tho tha lekin kaise? Sirf ek messenger baanke, jahan uski zarurath hai vahi main usse lekar jaatha tha. Sirf ek messenger banke!"


"Lekin aab aap ko aise nahi hona padega, you can be what you are to her, you are really to her. Her best friend, the only connection she has with her father. The closest thing she has to a father' aap ko uske paas wapas jaana padega."


"Vahi tho main kar raha hoon. Lekin uske liye hume collage tho jaanapadega, come on, lets' got I am sure she is waiting for us." he added smilling at Soniya and getting into the red BMW car that was waiting for them. A car that drove through the gates of mount collage and strait into the teacher's parking lot making several eyes turn to it, innitially men and soon women too at the sight of the muscular man who got out of the dirving seat. "Hay vo dheko, kaun hai vo Soniya ma'am ke saath? Kithna hot lag raha hai!"


A chorus that floated through the air and in time caught Piya's attention as well, supprized exclaimed, "Aare yeah tho vo macanic hai jisne muje directions diya."


Krishi

Edited by shakthi04 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hhmmm..nice one krishi..
now wat is the connection between this professor/mechanic with piya's past..
awaiting the next part..
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update...
who was this man now...
lets see what piya did to see him...
cont soon...
thanks buddy 4 pm me...
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why i fill like he is piya's brother..the small one which she love most..
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hey nice yaar.Plzz reveal all mysteries soon & I wnt some Abhiya scenes😳
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Part 66


A chorus that floated through the air and in time caught Piya's attention as well, supprized exclaimed, "Aare yeah tho vo macanic hai jisne muje directions diya."


"Macanic or Soniya ke saath?" Abhay asked turning to Piya, "Uski gaadi tho teek hai na?"


"Ofcourse uski gaadi teek hai, it came out of the show room only two days a go." she replied still staring at the man her eyes wide with supprise and shock, it was Abhay who stepped in for her, "It's time we walk up to them and ask her, I'll do it waise bhi tume jaakar Khabir ko uska medication dhena hoga, remember?"


"Sure!" Piya nodded stepping asside and walked over to Khabir, "Hi aab kaise feel kar rahi ho?"


"Little better Piya, kuch chahiye kya?" he asked, "Yeah Dr. Rakshandha asked me to hand this over to you. Tumhari nayi dhawaye."


"Phir se tume disturb kiya?" he asked with a sigh, "You are my friend Khabir I think I can do this much for you."


"Friend - yeah thanks Piya dhawa deliver karne ke liye." he added tossing it up and down in his hand allwoing Piya a moment to glance at the muscular movement or at least as much as she could under the yellow tshirt he had chosen for the day. She was glad that his coordination was fine and that he was following the insturctions of wearing happy and bright colors to help him get black on track, "Aur yeah dhaga bhi -"


"Dhaga? Dr. Rakshanda Thalwar ne mere liye ek dhaga banakar dhiya?" he laughed in a very hollow and dull way, she shook her head, "Nahi maine kiya, plus tumhare liye ek puja bhi rak liya iss Satterday, early morning due to orders. Something that will help revese the process."


"Hay thanks, listen I needed to have a chat with Abhay it's regarding the project…" he added Piya nodded towards where Abhay was chatting with Soniya and the man when unknown to Kabhir a voice struck in her head, Piya - meeting at the back of the coridoor after our first class today, coffee ka order dhedo, two black and two our kinds.


Got it Abhay! she replied diverting her attention back to Khabir, leading him towards the class room, "Khabir muje tumse kuch puuchna uss rate ke bare main jab tum kidnap kite kage the."


"There was this girl from Poison a dancer, uski gaadi kharab hogayi thi aur maine usse ek lift dhiya tha. Then she had offered a cup of coffe and we went inside, jiske baad main behosh hogay tha. Utta tho dheka ke kuch loog the vahan par, naked except for a strange mask on their faces, all of them adults. Aur patha nahi kaise unlogon ne achanak muje choone lage the and they began touching me like anything. It was horrible when they touched me like anything, even in my personal areas -"


"Khabir were you hanging?" she asked he nodded, "Yeah and there was this horrible smell, like something was burnt it was horrible Piya. Mere zingadi ka sabse lamba aur sabse khatin theen ghante."


The words got Piya thinking deeply, Theen ghante? Hanging? Smoking? Lekin yeah kaise hosaktha hai? Lekin unlogon ne Khabir ko kyun chuna ceremony ke liye? Finally she asked the one quistion that was on top of her mind, "Kabir kya tumne kabhir Rudhra Devi ki mandir gaye ho?"


"Ofcorse gaya hoon kayi baar vo tho humari kul dhevi hai." he replied walking into class and sitting down on the desk behind Piya, "Lekin tume uske baare main kaise patha hai? I thought you were raised a cristian."


"No I grew up in a cristan orphanage, most of my raising was done by a nabour lady I always addressed her as mom. She was the one who taught me all these things. So Rudhra devi tumhari kuldevi hai I never knew she was so deeply worshiped, mom said she was some kind of common goddess." Piya pushed the topic a little bit, enough to make Khabir laugh and open up, "Your right bahoth sare longon ko aisa hi lagtha hai lekin saach tho yahi hai ke vo ek kuldevi mere aur chaar aur pariwaron ka kuldevi hai."


"Char aur pariwaron ka kuldhevi? Rudhra devi?" Abhay asked turning around to face Khabir, joining the conversation, "Yeha Rathor pariwar ka, humari trustiee Jaiswal ka, Ambolkars ka, the Khandhera family -"


"Ek minute Gulvaadhi Khandhera?" Khabir nodded, "Yup the same and almost forgot, Dhoprials bhi. Ajeeb baath yeah hai ke kaafi loog yeah sunkar supprize hothe rehethe hai."


"We and?" Abhay pushed a bit, "A lady we met few years ago on a trip, kaafi ajeeb thi ghungat and all. Oh - good morning ma'am."


"Good morning please be seated." the proffesor replied starting a lesson and cutting the student's ideal chatter, "Aaj ka topic hai rituals, in the old times they felt rituals would were the key…."


Piya and Abhay began taking notes having their own private conversation. Abhay yeah kaise ho saktha hai Khabir ka kuldhevi main? Aur kuch aur pariwaron ka bhi?


I know Piya it is really crazzy. Do you know the significance of this or something? he asked her, Jab bhi main Rudhra banjathi thi main kai logon ki mathath karthi thi, ek waqth maine paanch bachon ke liye bhi kiya orphans. Aur maine unlogon ko bless kiya, something like how they will one day have a family and I will always watch over them. Sirf uss raath, uss ek baar maine apna naam liya - Rudhra, Rudhra devi. Lekin unn paanch bachon main aur aur in paanch pariwar ke beech koi connection hai it's not possible.


Piya there is a posibility! A remote one but there is a posiblity! Abhay pushed, It is there but what is the significance? Why are they targetting Khabir? It seems they have already contacted the Rathor family!


Let us look into it latter Piya aab lecture main focus karo. Abhay instructed diverting her attention back to the lecture just in time, their proffesor was about to start shooting out quistions in a few moments, "Why did they need such rituals in their life? Piya?"


Quickly getting up Piya answered the teacher, "Ma'am such rituals are to help a moment become very significant and special. It is also designed to help the transition become more simple."


"Very good Piya, are there any examples you can quote?" Piya thought for a moment before listing out a few, "Yes ma'am such as godh-bharai rasam, shadhi main hone wale rasam aur rival jays dulhan ki gar pravesh, naam karan vagaira vagaira."


"Wonderful now sit down, let us take the examples Piya just mentioned. Starting with the godh-barai…" The teacher began explaining about the value of the godh-barai and how it helps the child pick up hearing skills as Piya continued writting the notes till a vibration distracted her, SMS? Momka? You are requiered at Jeshaan for a special dinner tonight, come prepared. Yeha kaise dinner hai?


Lunch time main Dhanish ko contact karthe hai, we need to ignore it for now. Abhay inturupted her thoughts making her get back into the class, at the end of which she picked up her mobile again to contact Dhanish, "Maine kaha na Dhanish ko lunch ke time contact karthe hai, we need to go meet Soniya and your machanic. Go grab the cofffes and I will grab the books from the librery we will meet there."


Nodding Piya walked towards the librery and Abhay towards the librery with the note Soniya had given him, "Excuse me ma'am Soniya ma'am asked me to collect these books for her."


"Aah yes she had set them out yesterday it self. One moment, there you go." the librerian handed over the books to Abhay who thanked her and walked out. He glanced through the books as he continued walking noting how odd the titles were. "The Rajput style of life, genitics and inheritence, power of faith, stories of the goddess a collection of stories through out India, volume 5 and 6? Lekin ithne purene kithabon ko kya zarurath hoga? Milne se patha chalega. SONIYA MA'AM!"


Waving to him she called him over, "Abhay yahaan par baito Piya is just on her way."


"Thank you, aah Piya come come, sit down humhari coffee hai na? Thank you, come give it to me." she gently took the coffee from her hands and placed it down along with the books, "Dhananjayan Sahib is just on his way Piya tharasal mujse zyadha vohi tumse baath karna chahathe the."


"Sahib? Matlabh vo macanic aap ka sahib hai aur yeah naam Dhananjayan kai suna hua lagtha hai, lekin yaadh nahi aaraha hai ke kahaan par."


"Ooi chokiri dhemag main zoor daalne ki koi zarurath nahi hai tuje, coffe pithe hai kya? Hume baath karni hai tum dhonon see." the man replied sitting down setting down a dark blue back pack near the seat, "So to start with lag raha hai ke ek asli introduciton ki zarurath hai, main hoon Dhananjayan, lekin tum muje guru ji kehekar maanthi thi."


"Mathalb asp the jinnee mug?" he nodded gently touching her shoulder, "Main tumhara rakwala tha, main thumhara ma ka bai hoon tho mera khoon tumhare liye kaam aayega. Issi liye maine tume…."


"I am so sorry maine asp ko pehechana nazi…" his face showed relief and lightness for the first time, "Mathalb tu mujse naraz nazi hai na?"


"Main asp se kyun naraz rehung mamma?" Piya asked puzzled watching him get up and start narrating the age old story of his life.


Krishi

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey awesome post krishi.I quite liked it.Plz cont..😳
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hei krishi,
weaving plots n secrets koi tum se seekhe..
i really love the way u go on weaving plots..
so now details abt kabir's attack is out..n abhiya have to find out the reason yet..
interesting..rudhra devi aka pia is kul devi for 5 families now..n they r yet to figure out the 5 kids that she saved n the families mentioned by kabir have a connection r not.
the mechanic/prof is her mamma..thats nice..
waiting for more secrets to be solved..
lovel..
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superb update yar
loved ur way of narrating story
so nowabhiya were trying to understand the kabir value yhe kidnapped...
cont soon
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Part 67


"Kyunki jab tum logon ko meri zarurath padi thi main vahan par nahi tha…. Lekin muje judge karne se pehele tume mere pure kahani sunna padega."


"Rudhra jaise tum jaanti ho main tumhara mama hoon, tumhara ma ka chota bai. Aur main tumhare maa ke saath nahi balki apni ma-aur-baap ke saath bada hua tha, ek nahi sheher main jahaan par hum saab chale gaye the. Vahi par humare pariwar ke dosthi hui thi, aana jaana donon pariwaron ke beech tho kaafi common thi lekin ek dhin jaab main attara saal ka tha mere ma aur baap donon mar gaye the, ek aag main." Piya gasped but before she could say anything Dhananjayan continued, "Main bilkul toot gaya tha, bilkul akela padgaya tha thabi unlogon ne muje apne ghar par leliya. Vahi har maine kaafi bure aatheten seek liye, paison ke peeche baagna, sharab, ladkiya kya kuch nahi kiya maine. Aur thabi vo aayi thi, tumhari ma tumhari liye preperatons karne ke liye, lekin mili thi mujse aur humare beech ek bahoth badi ladayi hui thi. Usne muje pehechaan liya tha chokri lekin maine nahi, bahtoh daanti hi muje aur yeah bhi kaha ke main uss pariwar ke liye ek kalang tha lekin jaathe jaathe ek aur baath bhi kahi thi."


"Kya kaha unhon ne?" she asked, he sighed and took a sip of his coffee, "Yehi ki main tumhari rakwala banna padega agar unlogon ko kuch hojayega tho tumhare dusra janam thak tumhari puri responsibility meri hojayega. Aur main uspar haaskar palat liya, mere baahon main leetne waali apsara ko… Any ways, it happened, they left leaving only me your only relative to be with you and I did not even know about this for nearly a week. It took Chandh that long to trace me and get things into perspective. Vo logo kabi mere dosth nazi the, vo logo yeah chahthe the ke hummer pariwar ko pressurize karke tume thodna chahathe the. Lekin tumhare baap ka dhemag ko unlogon se bhi kaafi theez tha, he had created such a complex system that it was difficult to work out a loop hole. Any way - jaise mere in aankon se pardha uttgaya main peecha nahi dheka. Apne aap ko ek dark angel banadhiya, by choice and tumhara khal rakne laga. Dheere, dheere meri so called zindagi main fark aane laga. Mere liye sirf ek cheez constant tha, your coffin… appart from that nothing. It was like a long list of ceremonies and even a longer list of people who wanted your help aise hi chal raha tha till I found Sugandh allowing you the oppertunity to be reborn. Lekin phir bhi main tumhare liye ek aacha gaurdian nahi tha. Kai baar mere raatha maine temptations aaye the, I found my self getting distracted by a lot of things but mostly the power attached to it. I began getting women into my life rather other people's wives into my life, I did not give you the proper attention you needed. Kaai baare main gayab hojatha tha aur sirf thaab vapas aaja jub tume kuch nahi sikaya tha yaa jab tumhare liye kaam aaya tha. Most of the time I would just read out what others would have collected for you! In other words main ek terrible guru tha…"


"Oh! So you were basically the image I had of you was compleately - " Piya asked gently and he answered in one single harsh word, "Fictional, at least till I met Soniya -"


"Umm…. so how did you guys meet?" Abhay asked, voicing the question that had arrived on Piya's mind, "Soniya ke janaam se hi path chala gay tha ke iski destiny main koi tha jiske wajay se uski ma ne usse Rudhra ki maandhir par chodhiya. Jaab main ek kaam ke liye gaya tha thabi hum dhonon mile the aur usse baad main badhal gaya it was instant, quick and smooth. That was when I ended up leaving you again, saalon thak chala gaya tha thabi humari mulakath hui thi Sughand se. Humne Sughand aur Arnab ko observe kiya for nearly years before we chose her. There were a few more candidates but non of them matched up as much as Sugandh and Arnab Dhobrial, you see Piya Arnab was the only member of the five families who matched up with the to what we needed and in nearly all those years."


"Five families?" she asked, "Rember those five kids you saved? Yeah well your theory was right, they made you their kul dhevi but they did more than that… they dedicated them selves and their decendents to your service in a very powerful vow after comming to know that you are suppose to return to the human world. There is something else you need to know Rudhra - you needed the blood of one to help you get alive again. Now what he needs is someone to loose faith in you!"


"KHABIR? They targeted Khabir so that they can brake his faith on me? Uss ladka ko mere upar faith hai thoodne ke liye?" Piya demanded getting up, a pale looking Soniya and Dhananjayan nodded, "Are you sure about this guys?"


"We are more than sure about this, Piya bachpan se lekar aaj thaak har Sunday Khabir ne uss kull dhevi ke maandhir main jaakar dhiya chadatha hai. Even after the incident but he is weeping now when ever he visits!" Soniya added watching as Piya took a deep breath and sighed, "How do we solve this?"


"Continue what we are doing." Dhananjayan replied, "Misha? Kya vo bhi?"


"Shayna umm tharasal Misha tumhari behen nahi hai." Soniya informed her, "Misha is the worst kind of dark flame, someone with a lot of power, a power that is almost equal to yours. Agar Rajan Misha par khaabu paa liya tho samajlo Yashwanth zarur wapas aayega, lekin yeah kaam uske liye aasan nahi hai. Even though he can control his Misha for a short period of time there is no way he can make her give up her powers like that. It is important that she does it willingly so we still have a lot of chances, but we need to focus on Khabir first we need him to be normal if we are going to save Misha."


"Save Khabir jisko almost kuch bhi yaadh nahi hai. The only way we can make things happen, make Piya get closer to him." Abhay replied pulling out the cigaret packet from his pocket handing one to Piya and lighting one him self, "We are going to do that then we might as well tell him who she really is!"


"Abhay!" Dhananjayan snapped up suddenly leaning forward, "Khabir is one of the decendents, he can be trusted, Piya aaj shaam tumhari kaam ke baadh tume jaana padega, Rudhra ke mandhir main. Khabir vahaan par hoga, show your self, a little indirectly and a little directly bracke through his mind get what we need. A simple plan but bound to work."


"ARE YOU BLOODY CRAZY!" she demanded to which Soniya snapped at her, "Shayna! Badon se aise baath nahi karthe and no he's not it's a wonderful idea, you can take Khabir under your wing. It would do wonders!"


Piya thought of it deeply before she finally answered, "Sure today evening, Rudhra ki mandhir main Khabir ka saamna hoga swayam Rudhra dhevi se."


Krishi

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