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Part 62


"Nahi Shehezadhi, aap bagwaan nahi hai, uss dhin jo kuch bhi hua ussmain aap ki koi bhi galathi nahi hai." she insisted rubbing the younger girls' shoulder firmly, "Nahi dhaima maine khud apne ladla ko unlogon ke hawale kar dhiya." She replied suddenly going away from the group trying desperately to hide her tears….


Tears that reflected in a pair of green eyes that watched her hidden behind a tree, "Aap ki dhil tho aaj bhi ek phool ke thara masoom hai Rudhra. Lekin iss maasumiyath ke pehechan tho kisi ko nahi hai, humare siva… That reminds me Soniya hume ek bar Abhay se milna hai, a face-to-face meeting please."


"Aap ke khwaish tho thodi dheer main pura hojayega sahib, lekin aab aap ko kai aur tho jaana chahiye, hai na?" Soniya pressed him gently with a smile, "Haan jaana tho padega warna hum Piya se kaise mil payenge?"


A smile was enough to have both of them transported out of there in thin air as Piya went across the same lands wiping her tears and her eyes filled in anger. Anger that suddenly made her brake into a run across the jungle's path and down the path that she knew would lead her to the thantrhik. A mad dash that finally lead her to the main road she was forced to cross without using her powers at the sight of a tea vender. Calmly walking up to him Piya gave her sweetest smile and asked, "Suniye yahaan par Gulvaadhi Khandhera ki ghar kahaan par hai?"


"Gulavaandi ki ghar? Lekin aap vahan par kyun jaana chahathe hai? Aap khaafi sharif khaandhan se bhi lagthe hai aur vo tho thodi si paagal hai maimsaab." Piya's eyes flashed with triumph but camly repied the man, "Dhekiye aap please muje bathayi ke vo hai kahan, vo issi area main hai muje patha hai lekin kahaan muje nahi patha."


"Aap tho ithna paas aagaye hai tho kyud uss madhoos ghar ke patha jaan lijiye, mere saar par vo paap lagane ka koi irada nadi hai." this made Piya really loose her temper, how dare that thantrhika play her pathatic trick on her, "Dhekiye main ithni paas aagayi aur aap keherahe hai ke muje uss ghar ke raastha nahi bathayenge?"


Someone called out from across the road on the side, "Aay Babu ho kya rahe hai vahan?"


Piya turned to her right to see the owner of the voice behind the wired fence. He himself was seated on a large tier working away with his tools on what looked like a party of the white car that was behind him, a car that was partially covering the beautiful cream wall that was behind it. He himself was dressed in a simple black jeans. His hair was set in a slight side parting but largely left a mess along with a slightly unkept beard that was threatening to grow beyond the rugged stage, but what truly caught Piya's attention was his green eyes. Eyes that shone beyond his busy eye-brows and soft skin…. even beyond the beautifully decorated tattoo on his left arm, "Aare koi pagal ladki uss madoos gar ke path maang rah hai. Muje nazi sheen kiss ki ma baap ke sharp ko."


The man laughed at the statement and walked up to the tea stall bending across the fence at one particular spot, "Tu math kar miya lekin hum tho kar skate hai, khud ke ma baap ka shrap ne muje kuch nahi kiya tho aab isski ma baap ke shrap kya karega muje? Aay chokiri suno tume baas thode aage jaana padega, phir left lelena vahan par ek ghar hai, aajeeb si ghar aur deed sari peed paudhe. Patha nahi kya karthi hai vahan par lekin tume zarur maza aayega. Hai na sweethert? Tu tho lagthi hai ek gusse waali - shakal se!"


Winking at her he placed the glass back on the store, "Tu tho khud jaa sakti ho na?"


"Ja sakti hoon." she nodded, moving towards the direction that was showed by the man compleately ignoring the eyes that followed her as she walked up the road and into the very house that was clearly the home of a thantick. Plants seem to create a compond more than the walls, the trees were ones that grew fast and provided even more when used correctly. Anger pulsed through her body as she dashed up the steps and right inot the dimly lit house that was set all over with charms, magical instruments and manny more magical instruments and a younge girl not older than fifteen standing there dressed in simple white dress. "Suno, tumhari malkin kahaan hai?"


The girl snapped her dark eyes speaking a tone her pale skin and growing features could never express, "Andhar hai Shehezadi, aur haan vo malkin nahi behen hai meri, zabaan dhyan se chalana."


"Mere dosth kahaan hai?" Piya asked looking at her with even more anger flowing through her veins, "Hai andar ek cup chai aura deed sari kithabon ke saath. Tuje kya chahiye?"


Piya sighed and rubbed her forehead, "Mere dosth, aur kya jao aur unko bulakar aao."


"Aathi hoon." she turned with a snap and began shouting, "Aare ooh didi algayi hai vo chamkili apnea pair ka tha tha thiya karthe hue."


The response was a young lady dressed in a dark blue sari with a yellow pall folded over her shoulder making her already fair skin shine even more against the dark color. Her simple silver jewelry clicked against her wrist and neck, or at least from the point Piya could see. The lady had pulled ghungat so low that not even her neck could be seen, "Shehezadi merri choti been ki pagalpan ko maaf kijiye, aap humare iss chota sa gar pe aye hai, hummer liye bath bad baath hai."


"Hogi… hog… suno Guru ma Jayanthini Devi aur Senik Chand ko beejo humko jaana hai." she snapped to which the lady responded softly, "Ji maaf kijiye lekin unhone yahan kuch khithaben lene ke liye aaye hai, mere gyaan nahi. Humare aankon main itna thaqath nahi hai ke hum vo saab kuch dhek sakte hai jaise aap soch rahe hai."


"Aacha hua nazi hai. Kahaan hai donna?" Piya demanded once again, "Sorry Rudhra…. hum donon tumhari aagya ko thoodna nahi chahathe the lekin sif Nandhini ke paas humare vo saare materials hai jo hume chahiye."


"Chand aap ne aise kyun kiya?" Piya demanded, "Aap mujse matterials ke liye joot bolne ke kya zarurath tha?"


"I know how you feel -" he got cut of by her, "No daddy, aisle kuch bhi nazi hai, mere feelings se baadkar hai humara karma. We have the lives of those innocent people in our hands, please don't do such a thing ever again."


"I'm sorry beta, this shall not happen again. You have once again proved your worth!" he replied gently pushing Piya's hair back from her face. She responded with a smile and muttered a good by before leaving from the place and going back to the hideout where she found Abhay waiting for her holding two mugs of coffee…. "Hi Piya…"


"Abhay? I'm sorry I really should not be running around like that." she replied sitting down next to him on the swing and picked up her cup, "It's ok Piya lekin kam se kam yeah tho bathao ke tum ithni stressed our depressed kyun ho?"


"Aise kuch bhi nazi hai Abhay." she replied looking away, he gently turned her face towards him with a finger under her chin, "Tume tho jhoot bolna nahi aatha tho kosish kyun karthi ho? Bolo!"


Sighning Piya begun the story that started it all… the story of her past. "Jaab main Shehezadi Shayanthini Devi thi tho maine bahoth kuch kiya…. sirf training hii nahi. Kaai bar mug Yashathosh ka minions ko deal karne ke mauka mila aur unko maaarne ko bhi. Lekin mere liye vo saab sir ek vaccination tha and jo bhi mere saath the unko ache there path tha ke yeah saab mere liye sir ek vaccination tha. Ofcource initially I never took such things seriously, pehele muje tho apne powers ek mazak laga. Aur jo logo muje maarne ke liye aathe the unpar pranks pull kiya karthi thi…. Har bare aisle hi hothi thi, main unlogon ko kuch stupid si prank main phasakar bagathi thi aur daima mere peach pad jathi thi. Lekin mere pehele real assignment main muje apne aasli thaakath aur use jude hue sari baathon ka path kiya. Thabhi main uses mili thi… vo ladka jisse maine ek chota bhai ka jaga dhekar bada kiya."


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haaa krishi..
i was one of ur regular readers n u never PMed after updating part 59..the prev post of urs i have liked na..
no problem..i dont know how i missed the change in title..just today i noticed the change in title..
ok..let me read all the 4 updates..
hope u r regular in updating now..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hay that was actually my fault... I did not change the title... do keep liking them so that I will PM when I update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update..
last abhiya scene was gud
cont soon
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Index continued:

Part 63 - Page 61

Part 64 - Page 61

Part 65 - Page 62

Part 66 - Page 62

Part 67 - Page 63

Part 68 - Page 63

Part 69 - Page 64

Part 70 - Page 64

Part 71 - Page 65

Part 72 - Page 65

Part 73 - Page 66

Part 74 - Page 66

Part 75 - Page 67

Part 76 - Page 67

Part 77 - Page 69

Part 78 - Page 69

Part 79 - Page 69

Part 80 - Page 70

Edited by shakthi04 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 63


Sighning Piya begun the story that started it all' the story of her past. "Jaab main Shehezadi Shayanthini Devi thi tho maine bahoth kuch kiya'. sirf training hii nahi. Kaai bar muje Yashathosh ka minions ko deal karne ke mauka mila aur unko maaarne ko bhi. Lekin mere liye vo saab sir ek vaccination tha and jo bhi mere saath the unko ache there path tha ke yeah saab mere liye sir ek vaccination tha. Ofcource initially I never took such things seriously, pehele muje tho apne powers ek mazak laga. Aur jo logo muje maarne ke liye aathe the unpar pranks pull kiya karthi thi'. Har bare aisle hi hothi thi, main unlogon ko kuch stupid si prank main phasakar bagathi thi aur daima mere peach pad jathi thi. Lekin mere pehele real assignment main muje apne aasli thaakath aur use jude hue sari baathon ka path kiya. Thabhi main uses mili thi' vo ladka jisse maine ek chota bhai ka jaga dhekar bada kiya."


"Chota bai?" Abhay asked looking at her suprized, "Haan mera chota bai, Aadhithya. Lekin main use chote bulathi thi, very cute kid kaafi chubby aur cute tha, very cute green eyes and dark thick hair, chubby' aur bahoth ziddhi. Jiss din maine usse bachaya tha ussi dhin se mere paas chipak jaatha tha. Pure thara, khaana sirf thab kaayega jaab main ussi kilathi thi. Main jo kehethi thi vo kartha tha, gaay ko sambalna, goodon ka kyaal rakna, saaf safai kuch bhi karne ke liye thiyar hojatha tha. Lekin sirf sirf thaab jaab main use karne ke liye kehethi hoon. Mere muu se nikli hui har shab uske liye sirf shab nahi the, balki uska zindagi ka maksaath banjatha the. Uska zindagi ka sirf ek sachai ha, ek hi maksath thi main. Mere aage usse kuch nahi patha tha aur na mere peeche, bahoth pyar kartha tha vo mujse."


"Tumhare paas ithna pyar karne waala chota bai tha?" Piya nodded, "Haan aur mere liye vo sirf ek chota bai nahi tha, he became a source of happiness for me. Someone I grew to love and care for, I was just seven but I begun taking good care of him. Main uska khyaal ek ma ke thara lene lagi thi, aur jab bhi bimar paadjatha tha main apna saara karma choker ussi ke paas bait jaana chahathi thi lekin daima kabuki mug chotdhi nazi thi. Humesha mug bee thi thi training ke liye lekin jab paddy karthi thi main use pas bait jaathi thi. Patha hai Abhay, Aadhitya mere liye sir ek responsibility nazi tha, balki mere maksath ka jeetha jaagtha symbol ban gay tha. A truly wonderful child lekin ek waqth aagayi thi jab hum dhonon alag hogaye the, it was two days before the ceremony. He was near me almost the whole time, mere kapde chuna, mere liye gehene chunna, mere liye puja ka saaman ikkatha karna aur mere liye khaana pakana, saab kuch khud kartha tha. He left with out saying anything to me' aur mere attack ke baad hi muje patha chal gaya tha ke - ke vo aandheron ka shikar ban chuka tha. It really hurt me Abhay, bai tha mera, mera vo chota bai jisske bagair main ek dhum kamzor pad chuki thi."


At this point she began weeping like crazy and Abhay wrapped his arms around her shoulders and allowed her to lean on his shoulder. The tears flowed down her eyes as she recalled the person she loved like her brother. "I understand Piya, even I had a brother mera bhi ek bai tha jisse main bhi aise hi pyar kartha tha. Lekin tume bhi samajna hoga ke issmain tumhari koi galati nahi hai, on the conterary tume tho patha bhi nahi tha ke vo aise gaya kyun."


"Lekin Abhay' he was my brother bhale khuun ka rishtha nahi tha humara lekin tha mera bhai." Abhay gently wipped her tears and kissed her on to top of her forhead, "I know Piya - lekin hume aab apne zimidarion ke baare main focus karna hoga. We are in a very difficult position now and there are several innocent lives who are in danger and we need to help them now. Humara existence sirf aur sirf unlogon ke liye hai Piya, not for our selves."


"I know Abhay lekin main kya kaurn there is nothing I have been abble to do." she replied and began sobbing once agian, years of suppressed pain and anger suddenly errupting like a dam. A pain that got inturupted by the gate once again opening and Dhanish's car getting driven in with, "Maya? Maya wapas aachuki hai Piya!"


"Oh my god Maya?" Piya happily jumped down and gave her friend a tight hug, "You are a sight for sour eyes!"


"It's good to see you too Maya. Tum teek tho ho na? Your health is fine right? Tumhari health?" The girl laughed out loud and replied, "It is wonderful to see you too Piya, Rajbeer sir ne mere health ka kaafi aacha khyal rake the. The wearwolves coun -"


"Maya pehele brakefast fix karthe hai phir hum kaam ke baare main baath karthe hai." Abhay inturupted, Dhanish too backed him up, "Abhay is right girls, pehele brakefast then report, lekin pehel tum donon jaao aur nahakar aao, thab thaak main brakefast banatha hoon. Coffee, french toast and frusts ok?"


The girls nodded and rushed to get read yfor the day as Abhay quickly briffed Dhanish about what was upseting Piya so much. "Really - ithna saab kuch hoagaya hai? No wonder she was so upset. Dheko Abhay Piya aab bhi kaafi choti hai lekin bahoth kuch sehen chuki hai she needs to build her confidence, jithni himath vo hum saab ke saamne dhikathi hai vo saach nahi hai. She is really very week and she needs us to help her get back on her feet and espeically with Misha in all this danger - it's not safe for any of us Abhay."


"Main jaantha hoon Dhanish lekin main kya karun? Piya ko ithna waqth hua mere saath apni aatheth ko share karne main. I see her brakeing in front of my eyes, bahtoh roo rahi thi. I just can't seem to understand whats happening with her - uski transetion bhi shuri ho chuka hai and I just cna't get head or tails of what is happening in her mind. I just can't read anything." He snapped pushing the knife through the appele with anger, as Dhanish continued with the french toast, "Coffee lagado na!"


"Sure - bai? Kya hua ithna tensed kyun ho?" he asked Sidharth who walked in still dressed in his black track sute, "Abhay, Mr. Arnap Dhoprial ne Piya ke baare main patha lagane ke liye ek dedective lagha diya tha. He was the one who was following her around all those days jab vo dharne lagi thi tho usse redirect kiya gaya tha. Into her history!"


"Aur yeah baath aap ko kaise patha tha?" Piya asked from behind them!


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lovedd it the bonding btw abhiya was too gud...
lovely update...
cont soon
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Ur ff is really gud pls pm me next time u update
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Part 64


"Sure - bai? Kya hua ithna tensed kyun ho?" he asked Sidharth who walked in still dressed in his black track sute, "Abhay, Mr. Arnap Dhoprial ne Piya ke baare main patha lagane ke liye ek dedective lagha diya tha. He was the one who was following her around all those days jab vo dharne lagi thi tho usse redirect kiya gaya tha. Into her history!"


"Aur yeah baath aap ko kaise patha tha?" Piya asked from behind them! Sidharth was the one who was most shocked to see Piya there dressed in a simple red short skirt with small red flowers printed on it and a red sleaveless tshirt. She accessoriesd it with some simple red bangles on one wrist with her watch on another, her wet hair still tied in the towel she used to help her hair get dried. Kithni kubsurath hai yeah ladki, kithni thaakath chupi hui hai iske angar ek paal ke liye muje aisa laga ke main apni mom ko dhek raha hoon. Bilkul uski thara hai yeah ladki bhi, powerful and strong. His momentery meditations though got disturbed by his younger brother speaking up, "Piya! Please guss math hoajao, he is your father Piya, he loves you. Usse tumhare chintha ho rah tha thats the reason he wanted to make sure your fine."


"Abhay unko support maath karo! Muje unke support main kuch nahi sunna hai the kind of treatement he gave me has made me feel terrible." she snapped folding her hands in front of her chest and turning away from the boys angrily. Abhay looked the other in a helpless way, when she got into a temper there was nothing that can be done to pull her out of it, but as if was an answer to their quistions the one person who never came to their hide out. "Chand? Mr. Dhobrial ne -"


Sighing he took her hand and pulled her to the couch, making her sit down next to her as she pulled a yellow cussion on her lap, angrily, "I know Rudhra, lekin issmain unke galathi nahi hai. You must understand that he does not know your not human. He does not know your reality, usse tumhari ma ke baare main bhi kuch nahi patha hai. He does not know that he was actually the master of a powerful magical creature, an elf! He acted like the human he is, the father he is Rudhra, tume apni pitha ke baare main nahi patha tha, na uss waqth aur naa iss baar. Your parents loved you Rudhra, espeically your father, bale vo ek vampier tha lekin uske dil main tumhare liye bahoth saara pyar tha. He was always there for you, when you were young he would stay up for long hours just to take care of you. Aur tumhari ma, vo bhi kaafi thakath bhari thi, she fought through everything for you Rudhra only for you. Aur iss janam main bhi tume ek aise pitha milgaye the jo tumse bahoth pyar karthe hai, he loves you a lot so much that he wanted to even to give you his name but he was not allowed to do it. Please Rudhra, zara socho tum ek insaan tho nahi ho lekin Mr. Dhoprial ek insaan hi hai ek aise insaan jo apni iss beti se bahoth pyar karthe hai. He loves you a lot Rudhra aur vohi pyar ne usse majboor kiya aise ek step lene main don't punnish him for this Rudhra."


"Teek hai baba aap ki Rudhara uss duffar ko saabak nahi sikayegi. Khush?" she asked looking with a smile at Chand, "Good girl aur wase uss duffer ko sabak ki zarurath bhi nahi hai."


"Wow - ek minute hum Rudhra type ke sabak ke baare main baath kar rahi thi. As in janaab ke pitai nahi karungi." she added, "Lekin Piya types ki sabak sikaungi."


"Piya types ki sabak?" he asked supprised to see the smile on her face but it was Dhansih who reacted to it, "BILKUL NAHI TUM UNPAR KOI STUPID SI PRANK PULL NAHI KAROGE. Tumhari harkathon ke baare main Mr. Raichand ko tho nahi patha hai lekin muje tho zarur patha hai Sid ne dhikaya vo saari reports muje. Bechare Mr. Dhoprial nahi sambaal payenge tume."


"Karna padega, ithna thang nahi karthi main unlogon ko." she replied sitting much more comfertabily next to Chand, "Sir aap samjayie na iss pagal ko, she is going to pull a prank upon Mr. Dhoprial."


"Dhanish is right Rudhra, tume Mr. Dhoprial ko maaf karna padega." she rolled her eyes at the statement, "I know that he was never the best father but he is certainly not so terrible."


"Your right dad! Now gulp down this coffee, Maya perfect timming your brakefast is ready' wow your looking very beautyful." he added taking in the sight of Maya dressed in that beautyful light blue shirt with her dark blue jeans, her hair pulled up in a ponytail. The mild make up swept across her face gently giving it a gentile glow to her face, "Thank you Abhay, Piya we need to talk its' important."


"Tumhari breakfast ke baad." Piya insisted nodding towards the tray Dhanish just brought in holding two stacks of french toasts, one mug of coffee and two glasses of juice. Grabbing the juice she sat down on the seat nearest to Piya, "You were right about one thing, he is still under lock and key. Aur sirf ek cheez hai jo usse vahaan se nikaal payenge - khoon."


"Meri?" Piya asked biting into her toast, "Tum dhonon ki, yours and your other halfs!"


"Abhay ka khoon?" she asked, Maya shook her head simultaniously pulling her phone out and pushed through a a few images before handing one over to Piya. "Isse dheko! Recogonize this document?"


"Some kind of prophacy record?" she asked summoning her ipad using another hand, "Send it over to me, I want a better look."


"Its not just a prophesy Piya its a detailed record. Aur haan vo dharwaza ka details jo maithili ne tummy die, it was only a part of the legend. Uss dharwaze ke bare main bath kuch hai."

Nodding Piya looked at the document in her i.pad but dropped it the next moment, "Yeah kaisa ho saktha hai? Yeah tho Adithya ka mark hai!"

Krishi

Edited by shakthi04 - 13 years ago
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hai krishi,
finally caught up with the last 4 updates..
u never fail to weave suspense in ur writing..
u should try writing some thriller..
loved it..
awaiting ur next update..

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