My First Serious Crush:Maaneet FF:Ch10 Pg35 - Page 8

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Posted: 14 years ago
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its so nice story line..........i lovd it...............update soon.....................
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Really awsm ff wanna red more plzzzz add me to ur pm list plzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: MaaneetLuverr

awesome update
Wow Luvvd Maaneet fite
Dey both beating da crap out ov each other LOL
Dey both fink & speak alike especially wen dey sed *BREAK TYM* Awww
Yayy atleast der frends
Cont soon Xx...
Thanks 4 the PM


thank you dear😊I will update next part soon!

Originally posted by: preethia

loved it so finally dosti toh ban gai chalo.................


..ya...they are finally official friends😆..thanks for loving it!😊

Originally posted by: Semarnk

omg loved it

its sooo cute


thnx..😃

Originally posted by: maanujaanu

luved Maan's Woah!!!!! n also luved how Geet addresses Maan Item Boy

ROFL


😆I am glad you liked it!😉


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Posted: 14 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: sharmake11

that was super hilarious

my dear pls cont soonnnnnn
love it each part
thanks pm


thank you dear!..I will continue soon!

Originally posted by: cue1

Haiiiiiiiiiiii😃

Awesome dude
Update soon and add me to your pm list
I cant wait for more!!!!!!!!!😃


😃😃😃..will definately add you..thanks a LOT😊
😃

Originally posted by: Paingel

I just started reading this ff today it is reallllyyyyyyyyy interesting and fun! Can you please add me to the pm list.😛 Good Job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


very happy that you are liking it!😳thanks a ton!🤗

Originally posted by: shah10

awsome update.

love it..


thanks for loving it😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75

thank you!😃

Originally posted by: sindu555

it was adorable ....


loved their fight ...

continue soon

love
Sana


thanks a lot for appreciating Sana!🤗I will update very soon!

thanx!

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

just toooo funny n super coool


good to know that you are finding it cool and funny😊thanks😃



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Posted: 14 years ago
#76


😳thanks😊

Originally posted by: XXXYYYZZZ

Gr8 part.... loved it


thanks for loving it😃

thank you😳

Originally posted by: Shalve

awesome update... loved there fights....


thank you dear!..

Originally posted by: gawdygory

LOVED THE BINDAAS MANEET 😛






Nice Update 😳 Dear !!!


thanks a ton dear for loving my Maaneet and appreciating!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I will continue soon!..thanks for commenting!

Originally posted by: cutee987

amazing ff......

loved their journey till friendship......

plz add me to ur pm list....

and continue soon.


😳😃..added you..thanks a LOT😊

Originally posted by: sdtashin

so nice storyline...............i m just going through all d part..............


Originally posted by: sdtashin

its so nice story line..........i lovd it...............update soon.....................


thank you for taking time and going through my FF!..I hope you find coming parts also interesting!😃

Originally posted by: surbhijn106

Really awsm ff wanna red more plzzzz add me to ur pm list plzzzzzzzzzzz


THANKS a LOT..😳..added you!😃




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Posted: 14 years ago
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First of all..thanks a TON for appreciating and liking the FF..It makes me feel great to see appreciation on my very first attempt to write😆😃!..thanks once again!🤗
Chapter 4

Next Day in School!

Geet comes to the class along with Prachi. Geet noticed that Maan was not in the class and was quite surprised as he always reached the class before her!She guessed he might not be coming to school today as he was not regular with coming to school. She thanked her babaji and gave a sigh of relief thinking one day without that irritating item boy is something she deserves after tolerating him non-stop for two weeks😆.

But her happiness was short-lived 😆😉as Maan entered the class and moved to his place after listening to a small warning by their class teacher about not being late next time.

Maan saw how Geet's face fell as she saw him and couldn't help but chuckle at her reaction😛.

Maan-Geet,your such lovely expressions on the beginning of the school is such a perfect reward for all the hard work I put to irritate you*chuckles*

Geet gives him a fake smile and moves her attention back into the book murmuring" irritating item boy" under her breath😆!

Next period was free for Geet's bad luck!

Maan switched places with Gaurav so he could talk to(ok..irritate😳) Geet!

Maan-Geet ,you know somebody bitched about us to my girlfriend and she was all speculating me and getting jealous!

Geet-OH..really!.. *She faked a shocked expression and opened some random notebook as she was least interested and started reading it!*

But Maan is Maan Singh Khurana afterall..he doesn't give up😉

Maan-Ya,..and I told her that she should not be because C'MON its you afterall!*he started laughing*

Geet(in her head)-ya..ya..its ME afterall..who is not pretty or sexy…argh..WHATEVER!😡

But Maan didn't mean it in the sense Geet took it! He never saw Geet less than any other girl, even though she was not that pretty! He always took her as an equal😃..Infact,more than any other girl he considered her as an equal because she was not fake,she was not show-off types and she didn't give a damn to what others think about her!.Looks is not that all mattered to him..hmm..quite contradicting to his DUDE image😆😉

Well,somehow he understood from Geet's face that she took it in the wrong way, so he continued!

Maan-I mean she shouldn't be jealous of a lady Sunny Deol.right!..haha🤣

Geet-WHAT!!😡

Maan-not WHAT..you should say "true!"*laughs😆*..I told her that its kind of wrong to count you in as a girl..you know..!😉😆*faking a serious tone*You do look like a girl but deep inside your hidden identity is of a guy!..AM I right or am I right?*chuckles*

Geet*highly irritated says tauntingly*-I think with such detailed analysis on me,you can get a PHD !!

SERIOUSLY Mr. ITEM BOY.. don't you have anything else to do??

Maan-GEET,..you promised not to call me that in front of all*looking left-right to see if anyone heard her*..I have a reputation to maintain!

Geet-ya..ya..how can I forget your fake reputation and your constant effort to show-off yourself to be someone who you are so NOT!

Maan-what do you mean?*confused*

Geet-you don't really except me to buy that you really are like what you pretend to others?..do you?

Maan-care to explain?😲

Geet-I don't really care to explain but if you request me ,than I might think about it!

Maan-GEET😡,..OK..I don't want to know!

Silence for 5 minutes as both ignore each-other.

Maan wants to really know what she meant so he finally breaks the silence.

Maan-OK,..PL—E-SE explain Geet!

Geet* giggles*-when you are requesting so cutely,how can I refuse!

Maan-don't take too much footage..tell fast!!

Geet-ok,..so you behave all gentleman types in front of other girls but I have seen your real-self and with your face expressions I can tell you with 100% percent confidence that how irritated you feel sometimes when they are talking trash to you!You just pretend to be goody-goody –listening to what they say types but I bet that you don't even listen to 1 word properly of what they say! Your entire attention is on the other guys who are watching you with girls and getting jealous rather than whom you are talking to..In short, you just want to prove to others that you are a DUDE!..You don't have any close friends and you don't really care about your GF!..you are with her probably because you want to be talked about among people and tagged as"DUDE who dates a Senior!"..You think too much of yourself and you very well know that! I don't get what will you gain by putting all this fake-ness in front of all! What should matter is not what others think or will think about you..what matters is what you think about yourself and who you really are!!

Geet just said all that in one go and couldn't just believe what she said😲😲😲!She felt that she went bit too carried away and crossed her limits😒!

She hesitantly looked at Maan who was completely shocked! Before Geet could say anything or apologize, bell rang and Maan instantly went out of the class. He bunked all the classes and therefore Geet couldn't talk to him. She was restless all day and cursed herself for talking too much. School ended but still there was no sign of Maan. Geet picked her bag and walked dejectedly to her home along with Prachi😔!

End of Chapter 4!

Do leave your comments if you like the chapter!😊


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Posted: 14 years ago
#79
amazing update
can't wait 4 d nxt prt
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Posted: 14 years ago
#80
hi... came across ur ff....
its amazing yaar.....
it feels so refreshing reading them....
loved d concept n d way u portrayed maaneet....
plz add me in ur pm....
thnx...

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