My First Serious Crush:Maaneet FF:Ch10 Pg35

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MY FIRST SERIOUS CRUSH!❤️

Characters:

Geet-A shy and not so shy-girl

Maan-A cool-dude who shows off like he is casanova types but is he really?

INTRO

Maan and Geet were in the same school for 10 years but both didn't exist for each-other!..Not because of anything else but because of the simple fact that their batch had 250 students in total divided in 5 sections and they never got a chance to know that the other was there.

Maan was a cool dude who was good-looking,intelligent when it came to studies,fun-loving when it came to friends and loved sports-was infact part of his school swimming team.

Geet on the other hand,was simple average girl. Average in studies, average in looks and just an average in life! She wasn't very loud in front of all but with her friends she was bindaas types!..Her one big problem was confidence and one of the reasons of not many people knowing her!..But she was happy being average..she had her family,her brothers-one who was 2 years elder to her-Adi and one who was 5 years younger to her-Yash. She shared everything with Yash..they were like too close and knew each-other's all secrets. She had a big group of friends and had two very close friends- Prachi and Nupur.

Our story starts on the day when both Maan and Geet oblivious to each-other's presence come together in their 10th class when the class sections are shuffled. OK, so its not that they haven't seen each-other by now. But then you see 100s of students in school!!..

Maan had no opinion on Geet-she was an average,not a girl who was talked among guys so obviously why would he have an opinion on HER!

Geet had just once heard about him from one of her friends about how he is the only person in their batch dating a girl 2 years senior to them!..and the only thought Geet had was-argh..the guy is good-looking agreed,..but not that too..puhleez;😉..

Now lets see what Geet thinks about GUYZ..haha..interesting..well she had passed the stage when girls hate guyz and guyz hate girls😆..she did understood the attraction both sexes had for each-other..but she was innocent still😊!..if she liked a guy-she would never tell it to anyone!!NEVER!!..her theory was if I share it with anyone than not only I will think about him but they will also force me to think about him and THAT means TROUBLE!..she knew that the best way to hold infatuation to grow into any deeper feelings was to hide it from everyone and yourself..eventually you get over it😛..smart girl😉!..Another reason for doing so was her family.Her family was old-fashioned or maybe the right word would be traditional!..Boyfriends was not something they would have liked and Geet very well knew it!..Her family loved her and she loved them and for her they meant the world. So,she could never do anything which they might not like. Also ,it was not just about family, she felt the same. When you grow in a traditional environment,you are tend to become traditional too in your thinking. She didn't think too much about marriage stuff and all(hello..she is just in 10th class😆) BUT what she knew was that she would have an arranged marriage and she would never have any boyfriends before marriage..arre not after marriage also offcourse🤣..Call her old-fashioned or whatever-she didn't care..because she only cared about her family and their expectations from her!

OUR STORY IS ALL SET TO START..as you can see I will talk more from Geet's side and her side would be more clear-like her thoughts,her likes,dislikes,her trueself etc. but Maan's character will be discovered as the story moves forward. This is my first time on trying something like writing a story..haha..never did that before..but have been a big fan of FFs on IF(silent one), so always had this thought in mind if I could do something similar..I can't be very good..obviously..its my first time,..so criticisms are more than welcome and so are suggestions..:)..Let me know if you wold like me to continue!😃

PS-the story might not have many or maybe any Maaneet scenes initially because the story is a bit different(I know everyone says that😆but ya..it is a lil different)..not usual romance or anything..they are in school..and they are not gonna fall in love like in 2 minutes😉..so it might look slow to many people but for me story is more important than just romance!..So,kind-off warning people in advance so that they don't throw chappals at me later😆



CHAPTERS:

Intro-above/Page 1

Chapter 1- Page 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/39885258

Chapter 2- Page 4

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/39906598

Chapter 3-Page 8

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/39940635

Chapter 4-Page 12
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/40008970

Chapter5-Page 13
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/40011873


Chapter6-Page 16
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/40157057

Chapter7-Page21
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/41272940

Chapter8-Page25
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/41447003

Chapter9-Page31
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/41745906

Chapter10-Page35
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/42160947

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hey...nice intro. I like the way you have characterized Maneet. Please add me to your PM list.
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lovely do add me to ur pm...
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lovely ff
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Interesting....Add me to ur Pm list
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Its sound interesting, please ,add me to ur PM list
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love it a lot of people can relate to geet :)
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nice

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ADD ME TOO SO I CAN READ MORE OF YOUR WRITING

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Hey lovely intro..nd an amazing concept !!

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