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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: drashsree100



That was so sweet 😛
Geet falling for Maan's pranks again & again 😆 😉
*I know in your story Maan is a charmer thereby gets all the female sighs ; but you know you can introduce a guy similar type like Geet who befriends her . Geet also spending some time with him & we get 2 c an uneasy Maan who feels weird when Geet is talking or laughing with that guy 😉* ..... just a suggestion 😊

Loved the update ..... 👍🏼


thank you..your idea is really nice..and it will happen in the story in future but not now..actually the story is definately not going to be like most of readers are expecting it to be..there are going to be leaps and Maan-Geet are not going to come together easily..the entire idea of this FF has come from real-life..many people can relate to this FF and feel like reliving their school life-the reason for this is that all the incidents have happened in reality..lol..it might sound weird but its the truth!..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

I will try to update it by tomorrow..thank you for your patience😊

Originally posted by: seemamary

I liked it,plssssssssssssssssss add me in your PM list and plsssssssssssss PM the next part and update soon.


added you😊..thanks a lot for liking it..I will update soon😊

Originally posted by: cutee987

awesome updates.

thanks for pm.


thank you😊

Originally posted by: cool_gal17

i lovvv it plzzzpm me......its remindin me of mah skwel lovstryyy hwu gt irratd whn ya teacher chnges ya place..n thn 1 day u lov ya techr fr doin that muhwwwwww....plz updatesoon n pm mee


exactly..the inspiration for the story is real life only..😊..its something which I have seen in real-life and all the incidents also are real😆..although some incidents in coming updates will be reality+imagination😃..thanks for liking it..I have added u!

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Posted: 14 years ago




thank you people😃..I am glad yo are liking it so far!..thanks for ur appreciation!

Originally posted by: Rohini20

lUVED IT.....GUD UPDATE...N DO PM ME IF POSSIBLE..!!

ROHINI


thank you Rohini..I have added you and will pm you when I update next😊

Originally posted by: dollie16

awesome update!!😉
thanks for the pm..😃


your most welcome and thanks to you for commenting and liking😊

Originally posted by: preethia

enjoyed the update.............

oh god geet ko maan ne 3 baar fool kiya..............
come on geet u hv to do something to get it back on him................


glad you enjoyed😃..lets see what is in future for these two😉..thanks for commenting😊

Originally posted by: blueopal

hey nice maaneet FF yaar.............
n maaneet friendship was becoming stronger day by day.........i really enjoyed while reading each part.........looking fwd................. please add me in ur PM list.............


thanks dear..their bond is becoming strong definately😊..very happy that you enjoyed the FF and I have added you😃


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -dia-

Beautiful part
loved it


thanks😊

Originally posted by: sharmake11

brilliant update

pls cont soonnnnnnnn thanks pm thank yuuuuuuuuuu so muchhhhhhhhhh


thanks a lot dear😃

Originally posted by: Maaneet.Lover

nice update!! =D

cant wait to read next part


thank you😊will try to update soon😃

Originally posted by: puth

lovely updates dear


glad you liked😊thnx for commenting!

Originally posted by: nazsij

cute one.......maan prank khelne me maahir hai....aur humari innocent geet us prank pe girne pe maahir hai...lol.....


thanks..😆true😉

Originally posted by: ashfire1001

nice work continue soon


thanks😃

Originally posted by: pickachu

Loveeeee ur ff.

I really like Maneet friendship.
Continue soonnnn.
Can u plzzz add me in ur pm list?



Fatima


thank you Fatima😃..I have added you and will try to update asap😊

Originally posted by: sdtashin

LOVED IT..................UPDATE REGULARLY PLZZZZZZZZZ....................


THANKS😃..I will try my best to be regular..its just that I have exams coming up so have to prepare and work hard..but still I promise to try my best😊


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: nahtani88

superb update
cont soon


Originally posted by: XXXYYYZZZ

Awesome part.... loved it



Originally posted by: shah10

amazing update.

love it
thx




Originally posted by: maanujaanu

brilliant update

luved geet n maan's friendship


many many thanks to each and every one of you!..I am indeed very happy that you are liking my FF and even appreciating it😃..I will try my best to update as soon as possible😊..thanks a lot once again🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: MaaneetLuverr

lovely update
Poor geet alwaiuz falling 4 maans tricks
Love their friendship
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM


thank you😊..Geet is not that innocent but her concern for Maan overpowered her intelligence😆😃 ..your most welcome and thanks again for liking and commenting

Originally posted by: sindu555

loved the update ,.


loving their nok jhok , their bonding

continue soon

love
Sana


I am very happy that you loved it😃..I willl continue soon..lots of love to you too Sana🤗

Originally posted by: punjabi.princes

cute part

maan is such a prankster
con't soon!


thnx😳..I will continue soon😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
superb ff............please add me to your pm list and count soon........
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: anisharoy1

superb ff...please add me to your pm list and count soon...


thank you..I have added you😊

Originally posted by: millie_maaneet

cant wait to read next part


Originally posted by: ridhz21

Waiting...

Waiting...

Waiting...


my sincere apology for the delay..plz forgive me😳..thanks a lot for waiting😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Chapter 9

It has been weeks since Maan had got injured and Geet has bee

n helping him like the perfect friend😃..something Maan was very sure of😉!.. For Geet,it was her responsibility to help him and being an over-concerned😉 and extremely caring friend😉 she never left him alone..during games period also,when Maan will ask her to join her friends she would simply deny..and after months of knowing her,Maan had understood that once Geet Handa decides something,its no point arguing with her!..Not that it stopped him from arguing with her at every possible occasion;)..just like when they were all alone in class during dance period as the entire class had gone to senior hall for dance practice!

Maan-Geet,it was no cheating..Hulk Hogan is far more strong than Undertaker!

Geet-Are u KIDDING me!!!..I mean how can u even say that..dont you know he has been reborn 7 times by now..thats why he is called DEAD MAN!!..

What could Maan possibly say to that..Geet was right afterall(😆)..getting no good comeback he simply said

Maan-that all I know..but Hulkhogan always defeats him!

Geet-in your dreams…,and PUHLEEZ get your facts clear..Undertaker won the last match against him and your hulkhogan was nowhere near him..uski chatni bana di undertaker ne..haha..bechara apni ankhen bhi nahi khol pa raha tha!..*laughs*

Maan*irritated*-its nothing like that..he was just unlucky that day!

Geet-oh..yeah..of course..it is like that!*giggles*

Maan-argh😡..yeah it is like that!..

Geet*proudly*-Maan,why don't you accept the truth!

Maan doesn't know how to win the argument..

Maan(in his head)-this girl is crazy..she watches WWF more than me I think..I mean I thought I will win the argument by wrong info. ,but this girl is following it so closely..is she even a girl ..she watches WWF !! girls watch sweet romantic movies and she watches undertaker beating the crap out of hulkhogan..DAMN😡!!..what am I saying..I like hulkhogan more than undertaker..and I definitely can't let her win like this..now what to do..think ..think..*idea*

Maan-you are right Geet,but you know what..I feel bad..*makes a sad face*

Geet*giving that winning smile*-finally you understood..better late than never..I also feel bad for you but kya karen my favoraite is way better than your so called hulkhogan,..

Maan-no..no,you didn't understand..I am not feeling bad for that..they are players yar..i don't take it too seriously ..forget about them..I am concerned about my dearest friend here and feeling bad for her!

Geet*confused*-huh!😕..arre hamare conversation mein ye teri dearest friend kaha se aa gayi?

Maan-vo to ayegi hi na..aakhir mujhe uski fikar jo itni hoti hai!

Geet*confused and irritated*-which friend?

Maan-YOU!

Geet-ME?..why are you feeling bad for me!*confused*

Maan-ab bura to lage ha ni..why GOD why..why my Geetika*dramatically*

Geet makes a face when he says Geetika and is now irritated for obvious reasons!

Geet-now what is this new joke Joker Singh Khurana?

Maan*again dramatically*-joke..u think I am being funny here..I don't know about you Geetanjali but I think of you as a very dear friend and am very concerned about you!

Geet-Mr. Dramebaaz ..will you cut the crap out and come to the point?

Maan-kya din aa gaye hain..ek to dost ki fikar karo and they think you are joking..nahiii*hema malini style*

Geet gives up!..(in her head)ye Maan kabhi nahi sudhar sakta!!

Geet*faking a nice/concerned tone*-mujhe kya hua hai Maan and why are you sooo concerned for me?

Maan-Geet,..don't be sad after hearing this..and always remember one thing-I am ALWAYS there for you..no matter what!

Geet gives him I-am-so-bored-with-ur-drama-look

Maan continues-Geet,bhagvan ne tere saath bohat bura kiya..*fakes a choking/sad/crying voice*..unhone ladki ke sharer mein tujhe..I mean ek ladke ko bhej diya!!*turns his face to hide his fake sad state*

Geet was shocked and hell irritated!

Geet-WHAT?

Maan-don't worry Geet,..I told you na..I will be always there for u!

Geet*stands up*-MAAN!..what the hell do you mean?

Maan-arre..chillax..*makes her sit*..I know..its hard to take this truth but you have to show courage..

Geet eyes were showering fire at Maan..if looks could kill Maan would have been long dead!😆

Maan-see..I will explain..have you ever seen any other girl watching WWF and discussing about it?

Geet-no..so what?

Maan-because they are GIRLS and girls watch Cinderella,Snow White,DDLJ,DTPH not WWF!!

Geet*in a stern and unaffected voice*-so you mean I am a boy because I watch WWF?

Maan*consoling*-yes..Geet..finally you understood..!*puts a consoling hand on her*

How Geet was keeping her temper down,..only she knew..😡😡😡

Geet*spat angrily*-If only you were not injured Maan,I would have shown you stars in the day!!

Maan-dekha..thats why I call you lady Sunny Deol..*again dramatically*why GOD why!*fakes crying and wiping his INVISIBLE tears*

That was the final nail in the coffin!

Geet*coolly*-Maan,you know I feel bad for you too!

Maan*surprised at her changed tone*-why?

Geet-because soon not only your hand would be injured but your entire body would be paining badly!

Maan was not stupid😆 and with that declaraion from Geet,he didn't waste a second and ran away from Geet and Geet obviously ran after him..!

Their classmates returned and saw the usual cat-mouse chase of Geet-Maan,which was a very normal and regular scene for them by now🥱..

One of the classmates-someone is gonna hurt real bad today..

Everyone laughed😆!

Another classmate exclaimed-true yar😆..afterall these two will NEVER change!!😃

End of Chapter 9!

First of all I apologize for the delayed update.I had promised to give two updates in a week but I am facing some personal problems(exams,exams and exams😆) and thats why not being able to be regular..Plz bear with me till end of may😳..after that I promise to be more regular😊
Well for this update those who don't know WWF(now WWE) is World Wrestling Federation!..Hulk Hogan and Undertaker have been very famous players of this competition.Since I am writing this story starting from 4-5yrs back,it might not be very common to everyone..but at that time WWF/WWE was a great craze among teenagers mostly guyz(and exceptions like Geet😆)!
PS-Do leave your comments and hit the like button if you like it!..Also let me know my negatives😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
me to love WWF geet & maan never change love there conv awesome update pls cont soonnn thanks pm thank yu so muchhh

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