best frnds (MG) Part 10 updated PM L8R

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey every one ....
i m rinky...
many of you dont know me ...as a I m a New here..
i was an silent reader... and fan of AR and MANEET...
i have also written an OS on AR

LOVE OF LIFE

plezzz read it once...

i m here again with a SHORT FF on MANEET

writing an small part let me know if you want me to continue it or not .
...



* TRING TRING * TRING TRING*

lady - offo ab kiska phone aagaya ???
Hello ...
person - hello ... is this sharma residence??

lady - yes ... whos dis..??
person - i m arima ... Geets frnd ... she tried to suicide ... luckily i was there when she ate rat kill ... she doesn't want to go to a doc... and asked to call you... plezz come soon she is nt well and unconscious right now...
lady - i m coming there in 10 min plez take care of her....

lady - (rushing out of the house) its all my fault.. it all my fault... muze use bahar jane ko permit hi nhi karna tha... that bloody kutta kamina DEV ... i will kill him ... uski wazah se she is going through all this
..

lady reached Geets collage and brought her home with help of her frnds ....

she called her frnd Aarti who was a doctor and asked her to come home for examining geet ...

Aarti - Riya... she is fine ... i have given her medicine ... she will sleep for 4-5 hours.... dont worry

Riya - thnx Aarti ... agar ise hospital le jana padta to bahut problems hojati... koi problem nhi hogi na..

Aarti - nhi... the poison was nt that strong... aur usne turtant vomit b kar diya ... but still she needs to rest... i will suggest you to take her out for some time... she emotionally week right now... and her college also ended today...

Riya - i will talk to Brij today it self ...



Character sketch

HANDA's, Khurana's and rathore's are childhood frnds ....

THE HANDA'S


MOHINDAR HANDA - a sucessfull buisnessman of dehli... and best frnd with aaditya and sudesh ..... Geets father ... loves Maan and Pari like his own child... loves Brij as his real son

Rano HAnda - Geets mother ... best frnds with divya and sakhi ..... A housewife... love maan more than geet .. loves pari too....

Geet - An innocent girl ... shy , true Indian by heart,respects traditions and customs... completing her engineering.... was in love a GUY named DEV... she call aaditya daddy .. (age20)

Brij - Geets rakhi brother ... lovs her to death ... they met in college as he was her senior... an orphan .. treats mohindar and rano as father and mother... is a self stablished man

Riya - Brij's wife... loves geet .. was her senior in college ... respects handas as her in laws ...

THE KHURANA'S

khurana belongs to a royal family of rajsthan ... years ago maan's dadaji settled in dehli for business...
SAvitri devi - MAan's dadi .... loves mohindar and sudesh as his own son..

Aaditya singh khurana - MAan's father ... a lovely man who loves to joke around...

Divya khurana - Maan's mother .. a socialist..

MAan singh Khurana - Elder son of aadiya and divya... best frnd of pari and geet .. loves geet madly ... (age 22)

Vibhaan singh Khurana - known as VICKY.. loves a girl ... calls geet GIRLFRND... geet knows the girl he loves....(age 20)

THE RATHORE'S


SUdesh Rathore - A businessman.. best frnds wid mohindar and aditya....

Sakhi rathore - A housewife...

PAri rathore - Best frnd of Maan and geet .. She know them more than they know their self's... (age 20 )

INDEX
PART 1 - Pg 2
PART 2 - Pg 4
PART 3 - Pg 5
PART 4 - Pg 7
PART 5 - Pg 8
PART 6 - Pg 10
PART 7 - Pg 12
PART 8 - Pg 14
PART 9 - Pg 16






I hope you like the little intro of the FF...
wese i want you know that this have nothing to do with the original story of geet... its plot is different ....

NOTE :
i was going through an ff and found that it was accused for PLAGIARISM šŸ˜• .... I want to declare that i only post ff's under the user name lovelife21 ... and its my original creation.... till part 9 i m sure i have nt used any idea aur scenes which were used by some other writers.. but as FF section has thousands of stories which i m reading from more than a year ... in future some scene or dialogues could be found similar to other FF's... i would never want to take credit for those scenes ... i would give credits to the particular author for sure ... but if i don't give credit to some scene and you find that it has been copied from some where plezz let me know through PM .. i will appreciate it ... thnx and lots of love
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey contiur
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hiiiiii continue plzzzz love to read more...
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awesome .......... continue.......do PM me 😊
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great start.
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hey dear nice start.................
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Awesome intro
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