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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART -- 2

Geet - Bhai i m sorry ... i m really sorry .... meri wajah se aap aur bhabhi itne pareshaan hue....(started crying)

Brij - tu aisa bol rhi he ??? life me muze jab kisi apne ki jarurat thi u was always there... Hum dono kabse ek dusre ko sorry aur thnx bolne lage hmmm....

Geet - Nhi bilkul b nhi .....

Brij - we r nt going to talk about it okk... u r my strong sis ... u will get over him ..... or vese b we r going Goa tommorow... mene uncle se b bat karli he ...

Geet - sacchi .. (hugged him ) i love you bhai .. u r the best ....

Riya - hey ... saara credit apne bhiyya ko hunnnn... Plan to pura mera tha ...

Geet - are bhabhzzz aap bestest ho tabhi to bhai best ho paye na ... ..


Next day they boarded flight for Goa... although In the starting geet was quite and sad... but after 2-3 days she was back to her normal self... loving caring bubbly geet... Brij and Riya were happy for getting their little angel back but little did they know that she is pretending for their sack...

while Maan and pari were back to India ..... they expected that Geet would come to receive them .. but she was nt there.. it was so unlike her ...

They rushed her home and found it locked.. they were tensed... they called on her no but it was switched off.... finally they have to call Geets parents .... they informed that she was in Goa with Brij and riya ... they left for their houses.... everyone was out of town .. Pari and Maan thought to surprise everyone by their sudden appearance ... they were busy in their exams so didn't called home from last 15 days... but they have informed geet ...

Maan entered his house.. servants were pleased to see him back.... he went to his room .... and smiled sadly ....
everything in his room was according to Geets choice... colour of walls, painting, curtains , furniture everything.... she had arranged everything... Maan smiled and turned towards a wall which was filled with pictures of Geet,Pari and himself. of course Geets picture covered most of area... he was smiled seeing different picture of her .. every pic had a story behind it.... his smile widened while seeing a pic of Geet in which she was making an angry face ....... he still remembered that day ...
she fought wid boys of the colony and had beaten them badly.... their parents came home for complain....


*Flashback*

parent - bhabhi ji aaj to geet ne had hi kar di dekhiye kitni buri tarah se maare he bechare shivam ko...

Geet - wo muze chida raha tha ... aur bol raha tha ki Maan mere dadaji ei tarah behave karta he.....

Geets mom - geet chup karo .. chalo maafi mango shivam lse...

Geet - Par mammi .. usne muze chidaya ..

Geets mom - GEET...

Geet - sorry ...

and she ran away to Maans house...

DADI - aaj meri ladli gusse me kyun he ???

Geet - dadima .. aaj mamma ne fir se sorry bulawaya huh ... hamesha muze hi sorry bolna padta he .. me nhi jaungi ab us ghar main....

Dadi smiled at her innocence.. and maan clicked a photo of her angry face.... Geet turned towards him ....

Geet - Meri pic kyun li tumne ?? aur ye camera kahan se aaya tumhare pass..daddy ka liya tumne ...?? wo yahan hi he tumne unka camera liya ?? ... ruko aane do unhe me bata dungi unko sab...



Hey frnd ...
howz you all doing ???
hope you liked part -2...
All of you gussed it was Geet about whom maan was talking...
i will update character sketch ..



Edited by lovelife21 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey lovely update...plsssss update ASAP....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update
loved it
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice concept....loved it.....
plz do cont soon.......plz add me 2 pm........
tanx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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amazing part but pls next longer sorry i'm turning greedy but love it pls cont soonnnnnnnn thanks pm
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Awesomeeeee update
loved it
Gr8 part
continue soon
thank u

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hiiiii
Interesting start
Poor geet
Can't wait 4 more
Con soon
Plz add me 2 ur pm list
Thankssssssssss
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved the part..................hope maan gets to know abt geet's suicide attempt...............
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
hey Every one....
thank you sooooooooooo much for your comments .......

here is the next part

PART 3

Dadi smiled at her innocence.. and maan clicked a photo of her angry face.... Geet turned towards him ....

Geet -
Meri pic kyun li tumne ?? aur ye camera kahan se aaya tumhare pass..daddy ka liya tumne ...?? wo yahan hi he tumne unka camera chua ... ruko aane dounhe me bata dungi unko sab...

Maan - bata dena... wo hi to laayen he ye mere liye ..

Geet - daddy wapis aagaye ??? (she rushed towards maan's parents room ) DADDYYYYYYYY aap agaye wapis... mere liye kya laye ??? pata he aap nhi the na to mamma ne muze danta aur teen bar sorry b bulwaya ...

Daddy - ohh ... my princess.. hum mamma ko datenge okk....

"Flashback ends"

Maan -
Kash meri wo geet wapas aa sakti ... but now she doesn't want to talk to me ...

After 2 days

Pari went to meet Geet at Brij's home... she was shocked to see a pale and weak geet ... although she pretended to be normal... but later she asked riya about her health and a sudden trip to Goa.... Riya told her everything... Riya was hoked ... geet didnt told her any thing about her Breakup with dev .. She broked up wid him 8 months ago... and she didn't told her bestfrnds anything.... riya told her about the suicide attempt too..

PAri -
geet why did you do this.. tune muze batana b jaruri nhi samza..

geet -tu pareshhan ho jati na isliye .. aur vese b i m fine.. but promiss me to ye bat kisi ko nhi batayegi maan ko b nhi....

Pari - par geet ... he is your best frnd too...


geet -
par i don't want him to know any thing ....

pari nodded... they spend their day chatting ... in evening pari informed man that geet is fine & was happy to ...

Next day

Geet -
(on phone)why don't you understand i don't want to talk you ... i don't need any one plezz stop calling me plezzzz.........

riya -
(she came running as she heard shouting )kya hua geet ...

geet -
bhabhi can you tell maan that i don't want to talk to him ....

riya -
par kyun ?? he is your best frnd ....

geet -
bhabhi ... he loves me.. and i dont want to hurt him... and i dont want to talk him ..why ?? .. i don't know bhabhi ... i dont know.. bus bahut hogaya ye pyar mohabbat... ab aisa kuch ni chahti me apni life me .....
plezzz bhabhi (she starts crying)

Riya -
geet ... stop crying plezz ... i will tell him okkk....

later in the evening

riya was working in kitchen when door bell ranged....


Riya -
geet plezz open the door...

geet opened the door and was shocked to see the person

Geet - YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Hope you all liked the part ...
pleezz hit the like button and comment


love

RINKI


Edited by lovelife21 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice part
cont soon
thnx for d PM

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