best frnds (MG) Part 10 updated PM L8R

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lovelife21

@lovelife21

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

hey every one ... thnx for liking intro... will try to update today....

and about maan .. umm let see .... what impact and place he had in geets life ....😉

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krati

@krati5

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

liked d intro.

do continue

aas well as plz add me to r pm list

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lovelife21

@lovelife21

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

part 1

On the other end of world.....

Boy - What's my fault if we were childhood frnds... whats my fault ifi love her unconditionally... why she doesnt loves me... she was my bestest frnd but she never understood me or my love ... all she could see now is her love ... ok i know she cant love me ... cant be mine ..... but she could talk to me atleast.... she know that i cant live without talking to her.. still its more than 8 months she hadnt talked to me... never replied to my mails.....

girl - calm down .... you know her na... sheis like this always.... abhi tu uske saamne nhi he isliye she is nt talking to you .... ek bar hum wapis india chale jayen she would behave normally.... you know her right.... and about talking to you... you know she wants Crack GATE... she is studying 4 it... even she talks to me once in a week... wo b 10 min se jyada nhi ... and she always talks about you....

Boy - i want to talk to her right now... i have a feeling that something is nt right.. she is nt right... i feel like she is in trouble.....

girl - are mene usse subah hi bat kari thi ... uska aaj last paper hai na ... wo abhi college me hi hogi..... hum sham ko bat karenge usse

Boy -bus ekbar plezz.... plezzz pari.....

girl - shut up Maan just shut up.... why dont you understand .... she doesn't wants us to disturb her... she will call us .... aur vese we are going back after 15 days.... and we have our final term from tomorrow .... if you will nt study ... it would nt clear it.. and which means ... you will go back India after 6 months and i m sure you don't want this ... or do you ????

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Back in india.....

Brij was at home ..... riya told him everything ... they planed 15 days tour to Goa ... and informed Geets family who were out of town for a marriage... however brij didn't told them about geet's attempt of suicide ..... brij was siting on geets side.. caressing her forehead.. and remembering how they met first time .....

*Flashback *
4 years ago

brij saw a girl crying .. and a guy shouting on her ... he knew what the seen was .... of course Ragging again ....

brij - Abhishek ... she is my sister leave her alone ......

Abhishek - whats this yar brij ... jab bhi me kisi ki ragging leta hun .. they turned out to be your lost brother or sister....

brij - just leave her alone....

abhishek left the place ... brij goes near the girl and wipes her tear ....

Girl -- thnx ..

Brij -- its okk sweetheart... now common give me a smile .. (girls gives him a teary smile)....... i knew it .. you would look gr8 when smile... so keep smiling okk.. ab koi b pareshan kar to come to me ...

Girl nodes her head and turned to leave....

Brij -- ooooooooo my long lost sister apna naam to batati jao ....

girl - (smiling) Geet .....

*Flashback Ends*

Brij -- i want to see you smile... i always loved your similing face... i a nt a gud bro... i shouldnt have left you alone .. when you needed me the most ... ishould have refused to the offer of going US for 2years....

Geet - bhai .... agar aap nhi jate to isne saare gifts kese milte muze hmmmmmm.. aap b na ... jara si bat pe emotional ho jate ho ...

Brij -- R u okk ... chal uth we will go to the hospital ..

PART 2

Edited by lovelife21 - 14 years ago

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preethia

@preethia

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

nice update................looking out for brij-geet relationship.............i think its gonna b very nice to read something gud abt them..................

well i think maan is talking abt geet....................cant wait to read more.............cont soon

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Awesome update

Loved it

love geet-brij relation

is maan talking about geet

Can't wait 4 da next part

Con soon

Thanks 4 da pm

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known

@mitzi11

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

amazing update so Maan loves Geet dont know wrong her she doesnt love him interesting story pls cont soonnnnnnn thanks pm

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Maan was talking abt geet... Ryt.... Looking 4rward to maan cmbk.

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lovelife21

@lovelife21

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Hey frnds ...
thank you so much for ur support .....
loved ur commnts....
will update tonight aur tomorrow for sure ....
take care

love you alll

RINKI