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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey nice parts Mishty. This Hameer is irritating.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thank you sooo much for your lovely comment...

Here is another update for you all...

* PART 57 *

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HAMEER AT LONESUM PLACE...

hameer - y did u call me...

gal - hameer..u hav to cum...

hameer - i vil..but wen i vil want to..not now..m busy...

gal - u cnt behave like dis hameer..its necessary..u know dat...

hammer - yahan kuchh jyada importnt hai...

gal sweetly - plz hameer...

hameer - i vil think

spating dose words...

he hanged up d call...

n turned...

only to find RANBIR standing behind him...

wovvv

...

hameer shocked a bit...not sure...if he heard d talk or not...

ranbir smiled...

hameer took a sigh in relief...

offcorse ranbir heard everything...

but he too decided to play smartly...

hameer - tum yahan...i mean..kuchh kaam tha...??

ranbir - u forgot ur book in lab...

hameer took d book from him.. - thnx..vil see u soon..

ranbir - yup...

saying dis ranbir left...thinking.."..now v vil see u mr.hameer rizvi..wat r u upto..."

hameer thinking ..."..thnk god esne kuchh suna nahi...y dis gang is alwz aftr irritating me...n dat stupid bakshi...i hav to get ridd of dis all...so dat me n geet could spend our rest of life in peace..."...he smiled...

...

while maan's morning was very nice 2day...

wen he opened his eyes wid a smile...aftr dreaming of geet...

he found dadi sitting beside him wid a smile...

staring at him lovingly...

maan smiled - morning dadi maa...

dadi smiled - morning beta...

maan - aap ne break fast kiya...??

dadi - aaj hume aap ke sath break fast karna hai...

maan immediately got up - dadi maa...to aapko mujhe uthana chahiye tha..u alwz behave careless..u shud take breakfast n medicines on time...

dadi smiled - dats y i came here to take my medicines...

maan confused - matlab..

dadi kissed his forehead lovingly...

dadi - aap ke chehre ki ye muskan hi hamari medicine hai...jo etne salo baad hume mili hai...

maan smiled again - dadi maa..aap bhi na...

dadi maa smiled...while her eyes filled up wid tears...

maan - dadi maa kya huva...aap ro rahe ho na..??

dadi wiped her tears - ye muskan ab tak kahan thi beta...hum etne salon se taraste rahe aap ke andar ek bhi ehsaas dekhne ke liye...aap ke maa-papa ke jane ke baad..

...

maan's heart pinched in pain wid dose words...

he closed his eyes..commandind his eyes..not to get filled...

no no...not at all...

dadsi maa continued - humne kabhi aapko haste huye nahi dekha...humne kiti koshishe ki..ke ek baar fir aap ke andar un ehsaaso ko jaga paye jinhe aap ne apni zindagi se bahar fek diya tha...par aaj hum bahot khush hai..bahot khush hai beta...hum us angel se thnqqq kehna chahenge jisne humara maan hume vapas dila diya...

maan smiled d way dadi called his geet as angel...

kissed dadi's hand lovingly - aap ka maan vapas aa gaya hai...m sorry dadi..aap bahot dard diya hai na mene...

dadi smiled - nahi bachhe...aap 3 ki sahare hi to hum ye zindagi ji rahe hai..aap 3 hamri dil ke hisse hai...hum to yahi chahenge ke aap tino ko har khushi mile...aur koyi buri nazar humare bachhon ke karib tak na aane paye...

maan smiled - i love u dadi..achha me abhi fresh ho jata hu..fir hum break fast karenge...

dadi - okk..make it soon...

dadi left...

while.maan aftr breakfast...made his way to office hurriedly...

...

in library..

annie - kahan chala gaya tha...

ranbir - are wo hameer ka book dene gaya tha...ignore it...

nisha - guys...next two full weeks chhuti...kitna maza aayega na...

geet - chhuti me lene wali hu..aur maza tum log ko aa raha hai...

nupur - brij veerji ki shadi ki preparations karni hai hume..we vil get so busy...tere jaise nahi hai..useless...

geet rolled her eyes...

geet - to fir colge notes n all...

ranbir - hameer sirji hai na...kuchh kaam to aaye humare...akhir unko bardasht karte hai hum...

wid dat...ranbir n nisha gave a high-5...

annie - he is actually too irritating...

geet - y to talk about him..he is a nobody for us...

nupur - right...hume to veerji ki shadi ke bare me sochna chahiye..kitna maza aayega...

geet - mere veerji ki shadi hai...geet made a baby face...

nisha - oyye chup kar...wo humare veerji bhi hai...

annie smiled..loving deir closeness...

dey r not just frnds...but deir r maddd bestest frndsss...

annie - mayank aur kitni der..??????

mayank came near dem...

mayank - kyu tum logon ko chat session khatam ho gaya...

nupur - ha ha...me hasu..?????

ranbir - kaisi pagal hai...hasane ke baad puchh rahi hai...

mayank - btw geet...m impressed by u for d 1st time so much...watever points u hav searched...u hav just made it perfect...in shoertly u havn'y left a single doubt for internals to ask...u hav basically n deeply searched everything...

every1 just looked at geet in surprise...

while raised her invisible collar...giving evil smile...

ranbir - jarur brij veerji ne kiya hoga..

geet waked him hard on chest - shut up...tere jaisi nahi hu...

nupur - kal tu hi to keh rahi thi ke veerji meri help karne wale hai...n all...

geet rolled her eyes - arre..wo to hameer sirji ke liye excuse tha..tum log bhi na...

mayank - alright..cut it...i hav took out all d print out...n d remaining thing is to set dem properly..to make slides...n sum required images..dat i n ranbir vil do in d evening...

ranbir made baby face - y me..??..nupur ko bula na...

nupur - oyye..lovestory 2050 ke harman baweja...kabhi to kuchh kiya kar...

ranbir gave her i-vil-not-leave-u-alive-today expressions for calling him like dat...

for which nupur smirked for feeling successfull in irritating him...

...

nisha - we shud go now...mausam dekh kaisa ho gaya hai...jaldi barish shuru ho jayegi..

geet - yaah..aur ghar jana hai usse pehle...

annie - ok re..lets leave...

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IN KC

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clintes - we were really happy wid d points u discussed in london mr.khurana...in ur busy schedules...u took out 1 week for us...n d way u handled everything...dat was really impressive...

maan - out team is happy dat u r satisfied wid d points v hav discussed...so v can soon strt wid d construction work in d place...n adi vil hav sum trips to london for checking..hows everything going...

adi smiled...

clients - ok mr.khurana..we shud take a leave..its pleasure to work wid u...

maan - same here...

...

adi - maan sir...i wanted to talk to u about handa industry...

maan smiled slightly at d word handa...almost negligible smile...

...

maan - wat is it adi...

adi - sir..dis is our very 1st project wid dat company..we dnt hav idea about deir working style...wat quality of material dey use...n many more points like worker schedules...we shud get everything clear wid dem..so possibly no prob can occur aftrwards...

maan heard to adi words...

maan knew adi is right...he cnt handle wrong things in busyness...let whoever it be in front...

maan - adi..held a meeting wid mr.brij handa..as soon as possiblr..coz by next week..he vil not be available due to his wedding...

adi - ok sir...

maan - anything else...

adi - no sir...

maan - to fir 7 baje tak yahi khade rehne ka irada kya...

adi started laughing - he he he...

maan - adi...

adi - sorry sir...n left...

...

while...

geet reached home from college

d house slowly slowly started getting full wid wedding things...

aftr lunch..

geet made her way to bedroom...followed by rano...

...

rano - puttar..mujhe teri help chahiye...

geet - kya huva mumma...??

rano - me soch rahi thi..wedding me jo jo mehmaan aayenge..sabko kuchh return gift diya jaye...

geet excitedly - woww mumma..wat an idea...par kya dena hai..

rano rolled her eyes - yahi to tujse puchhne aayi hu..tujhe kya lagta hai...

...

b4 geet could speak...

rajji came in running jumping on geet's bed...

geet - mumma is bandriya ko bol do mera pura bed mess up kar degi...

rajji - mumma dekha mujhe kya buaya...

rano rolled her eyes - tum dono ko help karni hai ya nahi...

geet - mumma sabko chocolate box gift karte hai..sab khush ho jayenge...

rano n rajji looked at geet in disbelieve...

rano - brij ka wedding gift dena hai..rajji ka bday gift nahi...

rajji started laughing...

geet waked her...

rajji - mumma mujhe lagta hai..sabko sarees gift karni chahiye...

rano thpout about it...

geet - no ways..its too common...

rano - koi aur idea hai...

geet - mumma me apko 1 ghante me batati hu..ok...

rajji - kyu..ek ghante me tera dimag ki kaunsi light chalne wali hai..

geet - get out...

rajji - not even in ur best dream...

rano rolled her eyes at two...

rano n rajji left...

...

geet dialled maan's no...

but it came busy...

geet made angry face..n slammed mob on bed..rolling on bed...thinking..."..jab dekho busy busy busy...jaise pure sheher ka kaam yahi karte hai...ye insaan hai ya working machine...babaji ab me kisse help mangu..."

...

her blabber was inerrupted by phonr ring...

she watched mob..it was maan...

she picked up aftr 2-3 rings..

but didn't say anything...

maan - kya huva...

geet still didn't say anything...

maan - jaan i was on a importnt call...

geet smiled at word jaan..den twisted her lips for d word importnt call...

but didn't reply...

maan - achha batao..subah phone kyu cut kar diya...

geet - wo sab frnds sath the..dats y...

maan took a sighed reliefe...dat she atleast spoke...

maan smiled - hmm...

she kept silent...

maan got litle conrcerned...

maan - jaan...

geet smiled...

how much she loves wen he calls her jaan...

maan - kya huva..etni chup chup kyu ho..

geet - kuchh nahi..me soch rahi thi..aap din bhar kaam karke bahot thak jate honge na...

maan smiled..loving her getting worried for him...

maan - aisa kuchh nahi hai jaan...mujhe adat hai na..achha ye batao..tumne aisa sad face kyu bana rakha hai...

geet - jab papaji sham ko ghar aate hai..to mumma unki hair massage karti hai..jisse unhe aaram milta hai...par aap to akele hi hote honge..aur dadi ko pareshan karte honge...

maan smiled...

if possible...he would just keep listening her sweet voice endlessly...

maan - jan tum aa jaogi..to tum mere hair massage kar dena..aur me dadi ko pareshan nahi karta ok...

geet smiled - ab dadi ki tabiyat kaisi hai...

maan liked dat she didn't cut d call wen he made a statement of deir aftr mariage scne...

he liked wen she accpted d statemt n smiled...

dey r partners...

n dey can share any taklk wid each other...without any blush...

...

maan - dadi ab thik hai...aaj unka mood bhi achha tha...achha suno..us din tumne call cut kar diya jab mene hamari wedding ka statement kiya tha...aur aaj tum nahi sharmayi...

...

geet smiled - maan...wo 1st time tha..ese mujhe jara ajeeb sa laga..jaisi koi mujhe gudgudi kar raha ho...

maan smiled...

geet - maan sach me..hasiye mat na...

maan - achha baba..batao..

geet - fir mene socha..us din bhi me sharma rahi thi..isliye apko jana pada...tab mene socha..ke humare bich sharam haya..is ehsaason ki kya jarurat...jab hum ek dusre ke bich ek saas tak bardast nahi kar sakte..to ye ehsaas to bahot suraki bate hai...hai na...

...

maan smiled...ha loved d way she started accpting deir relation seriously...

he felt like just go close to her n hug her as tight as possible..keep her in his arms..hiding from world...she is his..just his...

he so much waited for dose words from her lips...

n finally she has confessed dat dere is no need of anu unneccessary emotion between dem...

dey just need each other...nothing else...just nothing...

geet knew..wat is he thinking...

she can read every heart beat of his...

his heart beat exoresses every single thing of his heart to her...

geet continued - jab hume puri zindagi ek dusre ke sath bitani hai..to hum zindagi bhar to sharama nahi sakte na..ek waqta aisa bhi aayega..jab humare bhich koi parada nahi hoga...tab ye sharam vagaira ehsaas koi mayane nahi rakhenge..to mene socha..ke khamkha un ehsaaso ko etni importne kyu du...jo pal taldir ne hume ek dusre ke sath bitane ke diye hai..us waqt me hume ek dusre ko mehsus karna chahiye..samajhna chahiye..na ki sharmakar us waqt ko waste karna...

maan was so lost in her words...

he almost forgot to breath...

how dis gal makes him forget everything...

she never stops amuzing him...

he knew...she is bcuming mature...n understanding wat reelationship dey share...

...

maan could say only 1 word...

maan lovingly whispered - JAAN...

geet understood everything in dat single word...

he need not use words..for making her understand how he felt...

she knew he felt happy...

she too lovingly whispered - JAAN...

his heart pounced in happiness...

he never felt a single word from her can make him feel like dis...

omg...

he couldn't expree wat he felt...

for d very 1st time.his JAAN called him...? JAAN ?...

how on d earth vil he able to stay away from her eve for a second...

maan romantically - fir se kaho na...

geet romantically - ? JAAN ?...

maan - fir se kaho...

geet smiled - jaan...

maan - fir se..

geet made a frowning face now - maan aap bhi na...

maan - achha sirf ek baar...

geet smiled - jaan plz na...

maan smiled...

he himself was amused dat how chilish he is behaving...but he loved too...

he loved like anything wen she called him jaan...

geet - achha mujhe aapki help chahiye...

maan - kaho na..

geet - actually mujhe aapka suggestion chahiye...ke hume veerji ke wedding me as a return gift kya dena chahiye...

maan - gift...ab mujhe kya pata ke shadiyon me kya gift dete hai...

geet - kuchh soch ke batayiye na...

maan - geet ye sab auraton ko samajh aata hai...

geet angrily - me 15 min baad fir call karungi..aur tab tak mujhe answer ready chahiye...

maan - geet please suno na...

geet - byeee...

n she cut t call...

maan made a baby face...

QUESTION - wat vil maan do now...???????????...roflll

As a Friendship day gift... today i will give u 4 Updates... love u alll... for ur support n love...

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MISHTY
Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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😊 Hey Friends... 😊
❤️ ❤️ A very very very ❤️ ❤️
❤️ ❤️ Happy Friendhsip's Day ❤️ ❤️
❤️ ❤️ to u all... ❤️ ❤️
❤️ ❤️ Friendship is not about finding similarities, it is about respecting differences. You are not my friend coz you are like me, but because i accept you and respect you the way you are... ❤️ ❤️
❤️ ❤️ ❤️
Thank u sooo much for all the love and support u have given me and to my FFs...😊 😊 😊
So as a friendship day gift, i will be giving 4 updates today...
So enjoy the updates... 😊 ❤️ 😊 ❤️
And again A VERY HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY TO U ALL ... 😊 😊 😊
I wont be able to pm everytime... so just keep checking here... I will post all the links here... 😊 😊
Part 57 --- Part 58 ---
Wid loads of love... ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
and best wishes to u all... 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
Mishty
Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
pretty awesome n lovely part
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome...

maan n geet...well what to say...love them...love how they understand each other...this is truly beyond love...

that hameer...😡..n who was that girl??

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

n HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY...


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Posted: 13 years ago
😊happy friendship day😊
awesome update👏👏
loved it❤️
is hameer ki to😡😡
continue soon😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
lvd maneet part...continue soon n take hameer out...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow...awesome update
happy friendship day
plzz pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for the update! and thanks for posting 4 updates today! this ranbir is getting on my nerves! ufffo geet why did you cut maan's phone..he might get angry...please update soon the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 56
nice part...
that Hameer is irritating...
only if Maan comes to know about this then he will be sorted out...
cont soon...
thanks for the pm...

accept my buddy invite...

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