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* PART 58 *

maan romantically - fir se kaho na...
geet romantically - ? JAAN ?...
maan - fir se kaho...
geet smiled - jaan...
maan - fir se..
geet made a frowning face now - maan aap bhi na...
maan - achha sirf ek baar...
geet smiled - jaan plz na...
maan smiled...
he himself was amused dat how chilish he is behaving...but he loved too...
he loved like anything wen she called him jaan...
geet - achha mujhe aapki help chahiye...
maan - kaho na..
geet - actually mujhe aapka suggestion chahiye...ke hume veerji ke wedding me as a return

gift kya dena chahiye...
maan - gift...ab mujhe kya pata ke shadiyon me kya gift dete hai...
geet - kuchh soch ke batayiye na...
maan - geet ye sab auraton ko samajh aata hai...
geet angrily - me 15 min baad fir call karungi..aur tab tak mujhe answer ready

chahiye...
maan - geet please suno na...
geet - byeee...
n she cut t call...

MAAN MADE A BABY FACE

wat m i suppose to do now...
oughhh...GEEET

he again got msg...

"...mujhpar gussa karne ke bajay..jaldi se solution dhundiye...u still hav 14 min..."

...
maan immediately checked his time...
ohh goddd...she is actually unpredictable...
ab MAAN SINGH KHURANA...ye kaam karega...shadi me gifts kya dete hai...m i a wedding

planner...

he immediatel called adi in thinking..he might help...
adi came in..
adi - yes sir...
maan - adi..wo actually i wanted to ask sumthing...
adi litle confused thinking.."ye sir ka bolne me kab se prob hone lagi.."
adi - sir kisi file ke bare me...
maan immediatel - no adi...i mean..sumthing not related to work...
adi - he he he...
maan - adi...
adi scaringly - so..sorry sir..puchhiyena...

maan made himself litle confortably thinking how to ask..while adi waited patiently...
maan - adi...wedding me return gift kya dena chahiye...
adi coughed - kya...
maan litle stirnly - ek baar kaha suna nahi..
adi - so..so..sorry sir..i mean..wedding gift...sir aap ne bataya nahi aap shadi kar rahe

hai...
maan stared at him angrily...
adi lowered his eyes getting scared...
maan - mene ye kab kaha me shadi kar raha hu..mene ye puchha ke agar koi wedding special

banani ho to as return gift kya dena chahiye...
adi - ji sir..let me think...
adi started thinking...maan waited impatiently..loll..he hav only 12 min now..
maan - adi fast..
adi - sir mujhe in baton me kuchh samajh nahi aata...me nanna munna rahi hu sir..
maan - wattt
adi - i mean..me bal-bramhachari hu sir...
maan - ok..sent neeva in..
adi - ok sir...

...
neeva entered wid a pen n notepad...
neeva - yes sir...
maan - neeva..i wanted to ask u sumthing personal...
neeva felt she vil faint any moment...
" sir mujhse personal baten karna chahte..m i dreaming..omggg...omggg...kya baat karna

chahenge..."...her thouts
but her thouts got interupted by maan's voice...
maan - r u listening neeva...
neeva - yes sir..i mean..kahiyena..kya kehna hai apko...
maan - neeva...wedding me as a return gift kya dena chahiye...
neeva's eyes widened...
n she fainted straight away...

maan rolled his eyes...
maan..." ese kya ho gaya...ohh...who vil help me now...godd 8 min bache

hai...dadiii..."

maan immediatel called dadi maa...
dadi maa - kahiye bete..aaj office time me hamari yaad kaise...
maan now understood how difficult it is to ask dadi such question...GEET ko hamesha me

hi milta hu na...pagal karne ke liye...
dadi - hello...beta u dere...
maan cuming out of his thouts - ji dadi...actualy i wanted to ask u sumthing..
dadi - kahiyena kya huva...
maan - umm..wo..haan actually mere ek frnd ki wedding hai..so he was asking me for

suggestion ke wedding me as return gift kya dena chahiye...
dadi smiled - bas etni si baat...
maan sighed in relief dat dadi didn't doubt...
dadi - mujhe lagta hai kr as return gift GANPATI ji ki ek pyari si murti deni chahiye...
maan alkso liked d idea...
maan - ok..thnq dadi..dats perfect i guess...
dadi smiled n hang up...

maan immediately called geet...
while geet too received d call in 1st ring...
geet - owo...u hav 3 min yet...
maan - i did it in time...so wat vil i get now...
geet - humne ye kab tey kiya tha ke agar aap ne time par solution dhunda to i vil give u

sumthing...
maan - abhi tey now..now tell me...
geet - maan dis is cheating...
while maan put an evil smile on his face...
geet - achha pehle batayiye...wat is d idea...
maan - mene dadi se puchha to dadi ne kaha ki GANPATI ki murti deni chahiye..it vil a

good sign...
geet got excited - woww..dats perfect idea...dadi is d best...
maan smiled n shook his head for his childish sweetheart...
maan - to ab batao..mujhe kya milega...
geet - kuchh nahi..ye idea dadi ka hai..apka nahi..to apko kuvhh nahi miklega..aur dadi

ko dheri sari kissi meri taraf se...
maan - dis is unfair geet...mene dadi se puchha...
geet - haan toh kya..idea to dadi ka hai na...
maan - par geet...
geet - par war kuchh nahi..office me hai to kaam kijiyena..phone par baten karne se

office nahi chalega...
maan listened her words in disbelieve...
she is actually impossible...
usne mujhe phone kiya...aur ab khud hi...
geet - kaam kijiye kaam...
wid dose words geet smirked like winner n hung up...
maan put d cell down...
knowing..how much she likes to win...
he smiled.shook his head
n went back to his work...

...
n here...
d moment she hung up...
she ran out to kitchen...
jumping on rano...
rano trying to control her - kya huva..kyu pura ghar sir pe utha rahi hai...
geet started dancing - i got d idea..idea mil gaya...
rano - kaise mila...??
geet - dadi ne diya...
...
geet immediatel stopped dancing realizing wat she just said...
rano smiled at her childish daughter...
rano - kiski dadi ne...
geet - dadi..kaun dadi mumma...
rano held her ear - mujhe natak mat kar...mujhe sab pata hai..janti hai na...
geet winced - ouchh mumma..chhodo na...unki dadi maa...ab kaan chhodo...
rano left her ear..kissing her forehead.. - tune baat ki unki dadi se...
geet - nahi mumma...unki tabiyat bhi aaj kal thik nahi hai..wo thode pareshan bhi the is

vajah se...
rano - woh..ab thik hai na...
geet - haan unhone kaha ki ab dadi thik hai...aur mene unse suddestion manga..aur unhone

apni dadi se puchha to dadi ne kaha ke GANPATI ki murti gift karni chahiye..its a good

sign...
rano loved d idea...
rano - hmm...mujhe lagta hai yahi saho hoga...
geet - achha mumma ab me ja rahi...bahot write up baki hai..
rano - ok bachha...dekh barish bhi shuru ho gayi hai..me sab ke liye garam garam pakode

banati hu...
geet excitedly - perfecttt...
pushing rano in kitchen - jaldo karooo...
rano - arre baba..bana rahi hu..dhakka mat de...
geet ran to her room...

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aftr office...
maan made his way to KM...
only to find...
dadi annie n dev sitting near window..enjoying spicy pakode wid rain...
maan angrily - wat is dis dadi maa...
every1 looked at him wondering wat happened...
maan - dadi maa...apki tabiyat thik nahi hai..aur aap ye oily pakode kha rahi hai...
dadi rolled her eyes...
dev - dadi maa...bro is right...let me enjoy it...u n annie go n hav sum rest...
annie n dadi waked him...
maan - dev..stop cracking jokes...
dadi was about to pick 1 more pakoda...
maan - no single more dadi...leave dat...
dadi made baby face...
maan - dadi said no..leave dat pakoda...
dadi left it...
dev immediately picked 2-3 thinking..wat if bro vil scold him too...
dado pouted her lips n made her to bedroom...
maan rolled his eyes on dadi's childish behaviour...
dev n annie giggled...
maan gave dem angry look to which both kept quite...
maan - u too...enough of it...its too oily...leave it
annie n dev made baby face n looked at each other...
maan - ok..finish it..no 2nd round...
dev n annie jumped - thnqqq brooo

...
maan made his way to bedroom...
got freshened up...
n rested on bed...to call geet...
...
geet - eyyoo...
maan didn't understand...
maan - kya...
geet - kuyy yayii...yap boyiye...
maan - geet kya bol raho hai...mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha...
geet looked up still holdiing cell to ear - yey babaji...yiye..ye yi yamay yayi yata...ye

ye yayode ya yahi yuh...
maan - geet..jo muh me hai...use finish karoo..n den speak...
geet fastly finidshed d pakoda which was relishing in her mouth...
geet - hmm..ab boliye...
maan - kya bakbak kar rahi...
geet - kuchh nahi..me keh rahi thi ke me kha rahi hu..esliye aap baat kijiye...
maan smiled - kya kha rahi ho..chocolate...
geet - naho..pakode...
maan - wattt
geet wondered wat just happened to him...
geet - maan pakode kha rahi hu...RDX nahi...aap kya huva...
maan rolled his eyes...another pakoda member...
maan - geet...tum oily pakode kha rahi..agar tabiyat kharab ho gayi to...
geet rolled her eyes - maan aap konse planet se aaye hai...pakode khane se kaun bimar padta hai...(geet excitedly)..dey r so tasty...(putting another pakoda in her mouth..)
maan - wahan tum aur yahan dadi aur sab...sabko wo oily pakode khane hai..abhi sabko datake aaya hu tumhe bhi daat khani hai...
geet made baby face - yayi...
maan rolled his eyes - finish dat,..n den talk...
geet immediately finished it...
geet - boliye...
maan - no more pakode now...leave dem on table...
geet - maan...
maan - geet no..leave it...
geet put d plate on d side table...
geet slowly - rakh diya
maan - jaan plz..dnt make dat baby face..its oily na...
geet smiled - ok baba..m not sad..i hav already eaten two plates..im full...
maan shocked - wattt 2 plates...dare u touch another pakoda...
geet smiled - ok baba..m not eating...
maan - how can u be so careless jaan..agar cough ho gaya to...
geet - nahi hota hai maa...aap ke ghar aapko chhodkar sab normal honge esliye barish me pakodon ko maza le rahe hai...
maan - dnt argue wid me...
geet pouted her lips... - duffer
maan rolled his eyes - smile now...
geet - no...
maan - yes..smile...n 1 more thing...tumne 2 plate pakode khaye..how vil u feel like eating dinner now...
geet - i vil not hav dinner now..im full...
maan angrily - ofcorse u vil hav dinner...no more discussion...
geet - ok..
maan - ok...let me go n check dadi..she also hav eaten too much pakode...i hav too give her cough syrup...
geet smiled - ok...take care...
maan smiled - hmm..u too...
n hung up...

...

00:45am
maan was in deep sleeep...
his cell started ringing...
he picked up d call inhalf sleep..."hello..."
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* PART 59 *

maan - yes..smile...n 1 more thing...tumne 2 plate pakode khaye..how vil u feel like

eating dinner now...

geet - i vil not hav dinner now..im full...

maan angrily - ofcorse u vil hav dinner...no more discussion...

geet - ok..

maan - ok...let me go n check dadi..she also hav eaten too much pakode...i hav too give

her cough syrup...

geet smiled - ok...take care...

maan smiled - hmm..u too...

n hung up...

...

00:45am

maan was in deep sleeep...

his cell started ringing...

he picked up d call inhalf sleep...

...

maan - hello

geet - maan

maan opened his eyes straight away...

maan - geet kya huva...tumhari tabiyt to thik hai na...kya jarurat etne pakode khane

ki...koi prob hai kya...tum kuchh bol kyu nahi rahi..

geet rolled her eyes..

geet - aap chup rahenge tabhi me bol sakungi na maan...

maan relaxed a bit...

maan - hmm bolo...sab thik hai na..

geet - haan baba..sab thik hai...sivay mere...

maan again panicked...

maann - kya huva jaan...tumhe cough to nahi ho gaya na...

geet - maan please...

maan - achha batao..y r u not well...

geet - mujhe ning nahi aa rahi...

maan rolled his eyes - din bhar soti rehti ho to raat ko nind kaise aayegi...

geet puted her lips...

geet - aap so rahe the...

maan - nahi nahi..me kahan sota hu..raat me mujhe patang udane ka bahot shauk hai...

geet - jayiye mujhe nahi baat karni aap se...har waqt tana marte rehte...

...

maan smiled at her chilish behaviour...

made himself comfortable undertable...knowing no sleep now...

maan - achha ab gussa mat karo...

geet smiled - maan aap ne bahar dekha...(geet excitedly)..barish ho rahi hai...kitna

achha climate ho gaya hai na...

maan smiled knowing how much she loves d rain...

maan romantically - hmm...jaan...tumhe barish bahot pasand hai na...

geet blushed a bit...

she alwz feels like goosebumps wid dis romantic voice of his...

maan softly - bolo na...

geet softly - haan...

maan lovingly - jaanti ho...pehli baar mene tumhe barish me hi dekha tha...

geet listened very surprised...

geet - par hum to pehli baar lift me mile the...

maan smiled - nahi..wo 2nd time tha...usi din..par kuchh der pehle..tumhe yaad hai tum

barish me football khel rahi thi..us ground par...tab...

geet just remembered how madly she was playing dat day..

...

geet smiled - to fir mene apko kaise nahi dekha ??

maan - kyunki me caar me tha...tumhe yaad nahi mene tumhe us din wo story sunayi thi...

geet - haan...wo mere bare me thi..??

maan - nahi..rajji ke bare me...

geet - maan...

maan - mujhe pata nahi kya ho gaya tha...par jab tumhe rajji ne awaz di aur tum jane

lagi...ek ajeeb sa dar..aur dard paida ho gaya tha...

geet smiled - maan..

maan emotionally - nahi geet..aaj kehne do mujhe..shayad dobara na keh pau...jab tumhe

mall me firse dekha..to meri jaan me jaan aa gayi...tum meri ho geet...i hav claimed u to

b mine forever...

geet had a small tear in her beautifull eye - me sirf aapki hu...hamesha ke liye...

maan knew..her eyes hav got wet...

so he tried to ease d situation...

maan naughtily - dekho tumhari naal firse red ho gayi,...

geet made baby angry face..watching herself in mirror..if actually her nose has bcum

red...

maan laughed knowing she must b checking her nose in mirror...

geet more angry - its not funny...dnt laugh...

maan - aur kya kya karu...

geet - dnt make fun of me...

maan - ok..aur..

geet - make me smile...

maan - hmm..aur..

geet sweetly - maan...

maan knew sumthing is going to cum now...

maan - hmm bolo...

geet - bahar barish ho rahi hai...

maan - hhmmm...janta hu...

...

geet took a short breath...

geet - mujhe abhi drive pe jana hai...

n closed her eyes..thinking wat vil say now...

maan knew sumthing impossible gonna cum...

maan - get ready..m cuming in sum minutes...

geet excitedly - m all ready..tabhi to apko call kiya...

maan shook his head at his unbelieveble angel...

maan - to tumhe pehle se hi pata tha ke me haan kahunga...

geet - ofcorse...

maan shook his head..knowing she is right...

he pulled himself out of bed...

n went to washroom...

maan - i want pay back for dis...

geet - aap kitne dhire dhire kar rahe ho...barish khatam hone ke baad aayenge kya...

maan - arre aa raha hun na...keys to lene do...aur waise bhi barish aaj puri raat hone

wali hai...

geet - aapko kaise pata...apko wo climate ki information dene walon ne call kiya

tha...

maan - ab tum isi tarah bakbak karti rahogi tp mujhe aur de ho jayegi...

geet - aye lo..aap muh se chalte ho kya jo der ho jayegi...

maan - geet..m accept my defeat...keep quite for 2 mins now...

geet - kyun...

maan - kyun..me room ke bahar aa chuka hu...aur dadi maa ko meri awaz sunai di..to wo

jaag jayengi...

geet - to apko kaun baat karne ko keh raha hai..chup chap meri baat sunaye na...

maan - ...

geet - aye lo...ab jawab bhi nahi de rahe...

maan - ...

geet - aapko meri baat samaz bhi aa rahi hai ya nahi...

maan - ...

geet - ek me u jo bole ja rahi hu...bole ja rahi hu...aur ek aap hai jo maun wrat liye

baithe hai...

...

maan reached car park...

maan - i dnt believe dis...geet tum kitna baat kar sakti ho...hav u ever timed it...

geet - joke hai..??

maan - achha me bas 15 min me pohoch raha hu...

geet - kyu yahan pe shadi hai kya...dhire chalakar aayiye...abhi to sirf 1:15 huva

hai...

maan - haan baba...ab phone rakho...

geet - kyun..aap muh se gadi chalate hai..??

maan gave up..as alwz...

maan - ab mujhe pata chal gaya hai ke tumhe sach me nind nahi aa rahi...aaj se tumhara

din me sona band...

geet - right...

maan - im serious...

geet - so m i..

maan - achha..ghar me sab so gaye...

geet making annoying face - haan sab so gaye...aur me ullu ki tarah ankhen khole baithi

hu..mujhe nind hi nahi aa rahi...mene rajji ko bhi uthane ki koshish ki..lekin usne

mujhe bed se kick out kar diya...

maan - achha me aa raha hu na...

geet smiled - aap ke ghar so gaye sab...

maan - yes..including me...tumhara call aane se pehle...

geet - dekha fir se tana...

maan - tana kaha maar raha hu...just bata raha hu...

...

geet - maan aap gadi chala rahe hai..ya bail gadi...

maan whisperedb- tumhe kya lagta hai...

geet - mujhe toh..

maan - tumhe toh...??

geet - maan mujhe lagta hai..

maan - kya lagta hai geet...

geet - maan me...

maan - geet tum kya...

geet - mujhe apki awaz etni clear kyu aa rahi hai...

maan - kyunki me tumhare pichhe khada hu...

...

geet suddenly turned on bed...

while her sudden turn made maan loose his balance...

n he landed on top of her...

both looked at each other...

...

maan was wearing white transperent shirt n blue geans...

while geet was in baby pink plain perfectly fitted top till her knees n white legins

...

trying to gain waty just happened...

dere skin touch made dem realize about deir proximity...

deir skins were almost sticked to each other...

maan's body was resting on geet's body...

...

it was maan who 1st regain his senses...

while geet was still lost in his eyes/...

maan naughtily - aise ghoor ghoor ke kya dekh rahi ho...

geet suddenly came to her senses...

feeling emberresed for d way she was staring him...

maan suddenly romantically - bolo na...

geet looked back into his eyes...

his eyes were filled wid so many emotions...

geet - meri marzi..mujhe jaise dekhna me waise dekhungi...

maan brought his fingers near to her face...

as well his thumb carrased her cheek gently...

loving d pink shade of her cheek...

maan - achha...

geet - ab uthiyena...aap kitne mote ho...

maan - tumne mujhe mota kaha..ab to me bolkul nahi uthunga...aur btw..kis angle se me

tumhe mota nazar aata hu...

geet - aapko meri chapati banane ka irada hai kya...aur aap har angle se mote ho...

...

instead of paying attention to her stupid talk...

maan was more interested in nuzzling her nose lazily on her cheeks...

...

geet's cheek turned into darkish pink shade as she felt him nuzzling his nose lazily n

naughtily on her cheek...

geet - maan...

maan was too busy - hmm...

geet - uthiyena...

maan still busy..nuzzling near her jaw line..

maan - nahi...

geet - maan dekhiye 1:40 hoagye...mujhe drive pe jana hai...

maan still busy - geet..tumhe kabhi bhi kuchh bhi sujhata hai na...

geet - haan ab chaliye...

saying dis...she pushed him on side-by place on bed...

n stood up..giving him hand...

geet naughtily - chale mr-i-m-so-sleepy...

maan stood up..without taking her hand...

maan - well ms-i-m-so-smart...m not sleepy...

geet - ha ha...

maan smiled loving her childish behaviour - ab chale...

geet - ek min...par me niche kaise aaungi...

maan - window se...

geet - kyaaa...aur agar me gir gayi toh...

maan cupped her face lovingly into him palm...

n kissed her forehead lovingly...

maan - me tumhe kabhi girne nahi dunga geet...maan ke hote geet hamesja safe hi

rahegi...

geet smiled - i trust u...

maan smiled...

n both made deir way out...

...

both running in rain to reach d car...

dey sum how reached d car...

rain started pouring to heavily...

both were almost fully dretched...

maan's already transperent white shirt was now nun of use to him..as its was all

revealing his toned body...

while geet looked cutely sexy in her pink top n white legin..which was hugging her

perfectly...n her half dretched curly hairs...

both looked at each other for sum min...trying to captures each other in deir

memories...

both again looked away..pretending to watch rain from window...

finally maan decided to break d silnce...

maan - achha batao..tumhe kahan jana hai...2 baj gaye hai...

geet - hmm..kahin bhi...mujhe barish enjoy karni hai..

maan smiled n started driving...

geet immediately opened d window of her side...

maan - geet..pani andar aajayega..tum bhig jaogi...

geet - wohi to..me pehle etni bhig chuki hu..thodi aur sahi..(geet excitedly..enjoying d

water droplets which were cuming in wid cold winds) kitni achhee hi hawa aa rahi hai

na...

maan - par me bhi bhig raha hu...

geet - to aap bhi bhige huye hi hai na..

saying dis geet moved to his side to open d window of his side...

maan shook his head smiling...giving up to his childish princess...

...

geet excitedly - wowww...kitna maza aa raha hai na...

maan just smiled - hmm...

geet - mujhe na barish me drive par jana bahot achha lagta hai...kabhi kabhi veerji leke

jate hai...par i wanted to cum wid u...

maan smiled - kyu...

geet naughtily looked at him...

b4 he could undetstand...

she started spreading water drops on him..collecting from rain...

d process was so fast...

...

maan sumhow stopped d car n held her both hands..stoping her...

geet laughed at him cutely...

while maan just kept staring at her angrily yet naughtily...

which made geet laugh more...

maan - bahot maza aa raha hai...

geet nodded in no..still laughing...

maan felt like pulling her cheeks pampering her for her chilishness...

but he controlled his urge...

maan - me aise kaise chalunga jaan...haan...

geet - achha ab mere hath to chhodiye...

maan - tumne dobara shaitani ki toh...

geet - maan me koi bachhee hu kyu..shaitani karne ke liye...

maan smirked - harkate waise hi karti ho...

geet twisted her lips..looking away...

maan slowly let go her hands..instead turned her chin towrds him...

geet looked at him..n tried to hide d smile dat was about to ooz out of her pink

lips...

maan whispsred - apni muskan ko rokne ki etni koshish to me bhi nahi karta...

...

not able to hold anymore...

geet's eyes twinkled wid a beautifull smile igering on her lips...

maan smiled n started driving again...

geet - waise maan..sabko mera search work bahot pasand aaya...

maan - tumhara work...right...

geet - haan mera...ab search aapne kiya ho ya mene..kya fark padta hai...baat to ek hi

hai na...

maan straight away looked at her...

how simply n lovingly she accpted dat dey r 1...

things can never b difficult wid her...

coz she understands d things...d truths of life..n cherish dem...

wid so simple words..she stated dat dey r 1...

...

maan vame out of his thouts wid her voice...

geet - maan..mumma ko dadi ka idea bahot pasand aaya...

maan - idea se yaad aaya..u havn't given me pay back for dat..n for dis 1 too...

geet - uske liye to pay back nahi milega...kyunki woh dadi ka idea tha...not ur...and

for dis...hav sum patience...

maan - interesting...

...

aftr reaching sum distance...

dey stopped at 1 place wid very good veiw...n d raining was complementing it

perfectly...

both were in d car..as d rain was too heavy...

maan - geet...tumhe thand to nahi lag rahi na...

geet was lost in beautifull climate - nahi baba...mujhe bahar jana hai...

maan - jaan..barish kafi tez hai..u vil catch a cold...

geet making baby face - plz...maan...plz plz...hum bahar chalte hai na...

naan holded her hand gently...

she looked at him puzzled...

while maan brought her hand near to his eyes...n touched d back of her palm to his both

eyes...one by one...

like he was giving her SAJDA*...for cuming into his life...

like he was lowering his head to d love of his life...

...

geet looked at himin amuzement...

she knew..how much he loves her...

but to dis extent gave her d most pleasurable surprise of her life...

...

he slowly moved her hand from his eyes to his lips...

n kissed her palm lovingly n gently...

hile geet too moved her lips towrds him..n kissed his both eyes one by one...

maan closed his eyes d moment he felt her lips on his reyes...

...

dey both closed deior eyes feeling d moment to d core...

n also opened deir eyes mutually...

...

maan looked at geet while geet at maan...

in next second...

maan came out of her car...

d rain poured on him heavily...

he didn.t care...

geet watched him in amusement...

maan walked in rain keeping her captivated in his gaze...

n came to her side...

geet just kept staring at him..way is he up to...

he opened d door of her side...

n in next second...

she found herself in his strong arms...hanging in d air...

geet didn't protest..

she never did...

both were lost in each other's eyes...

while d rain was lost in deir love...making dem completely drentched...

maan walked towrds d bonet...

n made her sit on it...

making himself sit by her side...

dere was complete silnce between dem...

...

both shifted back till dey reach d glass...

n rested on it...

d rain was continuously pouring...

while d silence n lonesum place was complementing it...

...

dere fingers slowly made deir way to others...

n unknown to dem...

deir fingers got entangled into each...

holding d strongest string of deir love...connecting dem for ever...

...

both were not looking at each other...

instead dey were feeling each other...

dey were filling deir lungs wid aroma of deir love wid d combination of rain n beautifull

smell of earth...

dere heartbeats were too calm...not tension,..no stress...

nothing...

its just dey too...

no1 else...

geet slowly whispered - maan...

maan - hmm..

geet - ? ? ? I LOVE U ? ? ?

MAAN IMMEDIATEL LOOKED AT HER...

his heart suddenly filled wid millions of emotions

like he won d whole world...

d words for which his heart was dying to listen...

he finally listened dose magical words...

even in his best dream...

he never thought his life vil b dis much beautifull...

...

he must hav done sumthing very good in his previous life...

dats y got gifted her GEET...his geet...

...

he just kept staring at her without blincking...

while she kept staring at d rain without blincking...

he understood how heartedly she hav uttered dose words...

wat dis 3 words mean to her...

like alwz said...

how much he loves her...he wants more n more to love her...n still he finds his love less

compare to hers...

he could thnk god all his life for bringing dis angel into his life...

...

he knew...

she doesn't want answer for dose words...

she knows d answer better dan him...

she just wanted to pour her heart like d rain..which was pouring so purely...

...

a small tear drop of happiness rolled out of his eyes...

making his way on his cheeck...

n eventually fell on het finger which were encircled into his...

geet's unblincking gaze finally came to end...

she looked at her fingers...

and in next moment..he found his tear drop...dissolved in her lips...

...

maan being mute suspector...

just kept staring at her..n let her do...

watever she want...

geet encircled her fingers tightly into his...

n both stood up...

d rain was still pouring woth same force...

like he also was pouring his blessing to dis most beautifull couple...

dere clothes were totally drentched...

geet;s curly hairs were set at places...

while her lip stick of getting fedded slowly slowly...revealing d real pink color of her

lips...

her white milky skin was making perfect combination wid her wet looks...

maan was nowhere near less...

his toned body was almost revealed...

...

everything was happening automatically...

dere senses were no more in dere control...

dere sudden confession..brought a new flavour of love in deir relationship...

...

aftr standing up...

both started walking..matching each other's footsteps...

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dey didn't knew where r dey walking in dis rain..

neither dey cared...

dey r wid each other...

dat was more dan enough for dem...

...

n dey kept walking...

in search of deir dream life...? only dem two ? ...

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aftr standing up...

both started walking..matching each other's footsteps...

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dey didn't knew where r dey walking in dis rain..

neither dey cared...

dey r wid each other...

dat was more dan enough for dem...

...

n dey kept walking...

in search of deir dream life...

...

geet was just walking senselessly...holding his fingers into hers...

while maan was just following her...staring at her continuouely...

letting her go wnerever she want...

aftr walking for 10 min...

geet stopped so did maan...

...

geet turned back to face maan...

maan was still staring her without blincking..lost in dose 3 magical words...

geet looked into his eyes..so did maan...

both caught each other into an endless gaze...

like dere is nothing left in d world den watching each other...

nothing more importnt dan it...

...

geet getnly whispered - ? I LOVE U MAAN ?

...

maan came to his senses...as dose 3 magical words inserted in his heart once again...

her serious eyes were evident of d deepness n truthness of dose words...

maan didn't say anything...

neither she wanted him to say anything...

dere unspkoen words...deir silnce was itself singing d duel of love for dem wid d music

of RAIN...

...

maan slowly n gently started decreasing d distance betwenn...

walking closer n closer..he walked around her..n stood behind her back...

deir body..mind..heart..was far away wid d reality of dat heavy rain which was pouring on

dem for past more dan half hour...

...

a beautifull music started...

***

[ aue ahista..kijiye bate..by pankaj udas..do hear dis song..while reading it ]

***

...

d moment he stood behind her...

he tightened his fingers wid hers..

while his other hand snaked over her stomach..moving further to her waist...

pulling her close from back...

geet looked sideways to meet his eyes...

" Aur aahista kijiye baatein...dhadakane koi sun raha hoga - 2 "

d moment deir eyes met...

d beautifull lyrics released from his lips...

both stared at each other..wid unlimited emotion playing on deir eye-lashes...

" Labj girane na paaye honton se...waqt ke haath inako chun lenge "

het heart pounced inside as dose words met her breath directly from his lips...

he loved d way her breath caught his words...

" Kaan rakhate hain ye darodiva...raaj ki saari baat sun lenge "

" Aur aahista kijiye baatein "

maan lips slowly moved towrds her earlobe..carassing it getnly wid d skin of his lips...

while d moment his lips touched her ear...a shiver passed out her lips..making him

shiver...

dey scared if any1 may hear deir words...

its not dat dey scare of world...

its dere private talk..just dem two...

no1 has d right to here deir love talk...

no1...

it just maan whi has d right to hear dose words from her lips...

n its just geet..who can say dose words to him..

coz..like alwz said..dey hav owned each other...forvever...

" Aise bolo ki dil ka afasaana...dil sune aur nigaah doharaaye "

maan hand over her waist tightened...while his chin slipped over shoulder..

dere bodies started moving in rythm..dancing slowly...meaning each n every word..

" Aise bolo ki dil ka afasaana...dil sune aur nigaah doharaaye "

like d rain was telling dem d story of love..

dere hearts were listening n eyes were reflecting in anticipation...

" Apane chaaro taraf ki ye duniya...

Saans ka shor bhi na sun paaye...na sun paaye "

maan turned her in a jerk...

making her body hit his...

his sudden jerk made her collide in his chest...

dere breaths mingled into each other...so dat no1 can hear even deir breaths...

while his both hands..slipped over waist...n her around his neck..

dancing gently...

like sumthing most beautifll in d world was happening...

rain was too poucing here n dere..enjoying dis beautifull moment to d core...

" Aur aahista kijiye batein..."

geet head which was resting in his neck..

suddenly moved away to meet his eyes...

" aaa...aaa..."

a sudden blash ran through her spine...

an in 1 jerk..

she successfully moved out of his grip...

running away in d rain...

while maan ran behind her in d excitement to catch her again...

" Aayiye band karale darwaaje..raat sapane chura na le jaaye.. "

geet just stood near d car...a hand resting on car roof...

while maan just few steps away..in front of her...

both were panting wid heavy breaths...

" Aayiye band karale darwaaje..raat sapane chura na le jaaye.. "

maan raised his both hands in air...

like his heart was calling her to cum n melt into him...she looked at him wid all

affection n love...

n in next second...he founf her running towrds him...

she pounced on his chest..snaking his neck wid her arms...

while his hands instantly locked her in his arms...

like he was closing d door of his heart..so dat other dan her...

no1 could ever b able to cum in dis heart...

" Koi jhonka hawa ka aawara, dil ki baaton ko uda na le jaye, na le jaye "

dey hugged each other...as tight as possible...

wid d fear of lossing each other..wid d fear of sum1 may snatch deir happiness...

like dose storng winds may snatch dose 3 magicals words from dem...

no..dey cnt let dat happen...

dey hugged each other...tight enough...

dat even a breath cnt pass through dem...

maan's face was long hidden in her neck...

while her waist was completely hidden inside his arms...

geet tried to hide him inside her neck..so dat no1 could see him...

he just hers...

" Aur aahista kijiye baatein... "

maan slolwy n gently put her down...rubbing her body wid his...

tell deir eyes came at level again...

both looked at each other..wid urge n desire...

like dey were not even able to breath proerply...

so dey had to swallow deir breaths making litle sounds at throats...

letting each other know dat dere urges hav over powered deir minds...

" aaa...aaa "

maan lips gently kissed her wet chin..drinking dose constistant droplets which were

falling from sky...

while geet raised her face up in anticipation...

giving him nice access of her chin..

while dose doplets staright fell on her face...running down to chin to meet his lips...

" Aaj itane karib aa jaao , duriyon ka kahi nishaan na rahe "

maan lips on her chin started to deepen as d kiss turned into lick session...

his passion was too much for geet to handle...

t touch of his tight arms over her waist...

d touch of his lips over her chin...

like slowly slowly his body was lossing his wt on her...

...

" Aaj itane karib aa jaao , duriyon ka kahi nishaan na rahe "

geet tried to move her face...to increase her passion to match up wid his...

but her sudden turn of her face..

made his lips hit her ear...

he possessively bite her earlobe...

geet let out a shiver of pain n pleasure...like d feel of sumthing completing her...

maan lips soon soothed d bite part..followed by kisses...

" Aise ek dusare me gum ho jayen, faasala koi darmiya na rah jaye

na rah jaye "

as geet let his do watever he wants...

soon his lips ran from earlobe to meet d white milky skin of her neck...

maan burries his face deep inside her neck...

while geet nuzzled her face..to make him comfortable inside d hollow of her neck...

d moment maan's lips touched her skin...

d flashback of d old memory of rain made dem shiver once again..

d same way maan kissed her neck dat day...

dey were totally lost in d urge of each other's skin...

geet's dupatta was long fallen in one corner of her hand..

while her remaining body was in maan's control...

her skin started to burn as d hot n full mouth kisses of maan started to take place...

soon his toungue was replaced wid his lips...

n maan was tasting her skin like d tastiest chocolate in d world...

" Aur aahista kijiye baatein...

..."

maan's continuous kisses started to decrease...

n slowly slowly maan let out her skin from his mouth...

both tsraed at each other...

maan was heavily panting due to short of breaths...

...

geet slowly took one corner of her dupatta...

n d ends of his lips gently...which were wet wid raindrops n his saliva...

maan smiled...

n in jerk..picked her up in his arms...

geet looked at him surprised...while her hand again snaked over his neck for support..

both moved towrds car...

maan gently layed her on d bonet...

geet rested her head n back on glass..laying properly on bonet...

while maan layed biside her same as her...

...

dere fingers again unknowingly encircled into each other...

geet was flushed as well her cheek were tunred into dark pink shed...

she was not able to match her eyes wid his...

while he was naughtily staring at her...

loving her blush...

she blushed more...

n hide her face in his chest...while her free hand ran to his eyes..

n she hided his eyes under her palm..not letting him see her pink cheeks...

maan smiled at her childish behaviour...

n didn't move her palm...

...

maan - geet..mujhe kuchh dikhayi nahi de raha...

geet mocking funnily - really...mujhe to pata hi nahi tha..

maan - achha ab haath hatao...

geet - nahi..

maan - geet...kafi der ho gayi hai..hume chalna chahiye...

geet - par abhi barish khatam kahan huyi hai...

maan - to jab tak barish khatam nahi hogi tab tak hum yahi rahenge..??

geet - thik hai..agar aap itni zidd kar rahe hai toh hum barish rukne tak ruk jate hai...

maan - geet mene puchha..bataya nahi...

geet - ohh aap ne puchha..mujhe laga aap bata rahe ho...

maan rolled his eyes..

geet - thik hai..to hum barish rukne tak ruk jate hai...

maan - par barish subah tak nahi ruki toh..aur..

geet - agar apko meri baat nahi manani to aap ne puchha kyu...

maan - jaan..i mean..t\hum kab se bhig rahe hai..m sure u vil get cold..

...

geet annoying removed her hand from his eyes...

n making baby angry face...

moved back to her place...

maan shook his head at her stubborn behaviour

maan moved litle to her side...

but geet moved her face away from him...

maan smiled...n moved a bit more near...

geet moved her face further away..

maan gently took her hang in his n kissed it lovingly..

geet didn't protest...but looked at him from d corner of her eyes to see wat is he

doing...

maan knew she is watching him...

so kept kissing her fingers gently n lovingly...

geet started to get tickled on d tip of her fingers due to his seducing lips...

but maan didn't stop...

geet - mujhe gudgudi ho rahi hai...(still looking away)

maan - to me kya karu...

geet looked at him making angry face...

maan made naughty face n continued kissing her fingers...tickling further...

geet started giggling...slowly..not able to bear dose tickling anymore...

geet - maan plz...mujhe gudgudi ho rahi hai...

maan didn't reply...

soon geet's giggled exchanged into heavy breaths...

as maan's kiss started to dippen...

geet closed her eyes in anticipation...

n rested herself on d glass...

...

her breath caught in her throat as she found hid breath fanning her lower lip...

d way his heavy breaths were falling on her lower lip...she could feel deir proximity at

dat moment...

her heart missed a beat...as a cold hand encircled her wet waist sensuously...

while his other hang mingled wid her...holding her tight...

a small whispered left her lips - maan...

it felt like an urge...like a slight moan of acceptance...

maan's throat went dry d way she uttered his name...

her so close lips were making him go insane...

not able to control anymore...

he gently put her upper lip on her lower lip...

geet let out a heavy breath..which sounded like a non-lyrical music wid d sound of

rain...

both didn't sure wat to do...

dey were caught in an uncontrolled desire...

maan gently pressed his lip on her...to which geet to responded...

maan heart missed several beats wid d touch of her lips on his..

...

both didn't go further...

d touch od deir lips..made dem statue in dat position...

both totally lost deir senses wid dis new feeling...new flavour of deir love...

both just remained in dat position for dnt know how long...

...

hours passed..since dey hav left d home...

but dey couldn't gain dere senses...

it was geet who 1st got her sense...

geet came to her senses when a deadly cold wind passed through dem...

geet shivered wid d touch of cold wind..bringing maan back to his senses...

geet gently let go her lower lip...

but didn't move away...

both looked at each other...wid unlimited emotions...

maan tried to search in her eyes..how she felt...

and as answer...

geet gently pressed her lips on his forehead...

maan smiled wid d touch of her lips on his forehead...

his mind immediately ran to time...

he knew..its very much late...

he immediately stood up from bonet..n picked geet up in his arms...

n in next moment..she found herself on n sit nxt to driver sit..

maan gently kissed her forehead n moved to his side...

...

as dey reached gett's bedroom...

it was almost 5:30 in morning...

maan - geet change karlo...aur haan..aaj AC on mat karna...otherwise u vil definitely catch cold...

geet smiled - haan baba..ab aap bhi jayiye...kafi der ho gayi hai...

maan lovingly cupped her face...

maan caringly - achha suno...gar tabiyat thik na ho..to mujhe call kar dena...

geet smiled - haan baba...ab aap jayiye...mene aapko sone bhi nahi diya...

maan naughtily - dnt worry...it vil b payed back 1 day...

geet knew wat he meant...

she slapped on his chest blushing...

geet - maan aap bhi na..ab jayiye na...

maan smiled...

kissed her forehead n left halfheartedly...

while geet made her way to change...

...

SPOILERS : hmmm...keep guessing..:P :P

Hey Mishty, thanks for the 4 updates. Have not still read them, will comment after reading.

Now that you are not going to PM for each update, just wanted to know how frequently will you update? So that I dont miss the updates as I did yesterday..

Part 57

Lovely update dear. There is something wrong with this Hameer, was he talking to his GirlFriend? Good that Ranbir heard their talk and smells something fishy. I really loved the way the whole gang looked excited about Brij's marriage. They are so close to each other.

The dadi-pota conversation was heart touching. Dadi felt so happy seeing Maan smiling.

Maan Geet convo was too good. Geet sometimes speaks so maturely. How well she explained it to him that there is no place for any other ehsaas other than love in between the 2 of them. Maan must have felt so happy that his ANGEL has accepted their relation full heartedly. They did not propose each other, neither confessed their love to each other, just understood what the other felt. They do not even need any confirmation. Wah kya pyaar he..

Ye Geet bhi na, Maan ko return gift choose karne ko bol diya. Ye sab MSK se sirf Geet hi karva sakti he.. Hai na

Hey mishty plz send me your facebook id i want u add as my friend

Superb
Amazing, mind blowing love it
Live maan and geet and hate hameer
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