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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved both the parts!!!
Yeh Hameer ka sachayi jaldi sabke saamne lana, I am worried woh kahi Geet ko nuksaan na pohunchade😲
Chocolate scene was😳😳😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
till part 55
nice story...
Geet so trusts Maan blindly...
Maan is very possessive of Geet...
cont soon and pm me...
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When next update??waiting waiting !!
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both parts were awesome...

maan will surely kill hameer when he comes to know abt his plans...

loved the chocolate scene...☺️

continue soon..

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved all parts
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Thank you sooo much for your lovely comment...
Here is another update for you all...

* PART 56 *

maan looked at her angry face lovingly...

n taking d advantage..in a jerk..slipped his hand over her waist...pulling her to fall on him...

...

n she found herself falling on him...

maan made himself comfortable on bed while geet half on him...

geet still making an baby angry face looking everywhere else excpet him...

maan just kept staring at his cute n litle creazy princess..

while geet did catch his gaze from d corner of her eye...

geet - me jiti hu aap nahi...

maan smiled a bit...

n pulled her more in a jerk..making her shockingly look at him...

both looked into each others eyes...

maan - tumhari jeet ke liye mujhe 100 bar bhi harana manjoor hai geet...

geet looked at his intense deep eyes...

how truthfull his words are...

his every word..every act..shows a new flavour of love..like belongingness...like

ownership...

sumthing which can not b discribed..but felt...

geet kept looking at his eyes..completely lost in it...

maan - aise kya dekh rahi ho...

geet didn't answer..instead..put her head on his chest...closing her eyes wid d feeling

of satisfaction of having him close to her heart...

she slept on his like a baby...

maan smiled at his childish JAAN...

she is actually a child..he thout...

...

MAAN WAS ABOUT TO CLOSE HIS EYES...

wen geet like a storm banged oopen her eyes...

her sudden movemnt made her fall on bed from his arm...

it was too quick for maan n geet to understand wat just happened...

geet suddenly sat up on bed..wid her eyes n mouth wide open..looikng at maan wid her wide

eyes n baby sad face...

maan too sat on bed - kya huva..

geet - PROJECT !!!

PROJECT banana toh reh hi gaya..ohh godd..

OHH NO !!

maan rolled his eyes...

geet - aap kitni bate karte ho..mene apko project me help karne ke liye bulaya tha..aur

aap help karne ke bajay..bate kar rahe ho...ab project ka kaam kaise hoga..etni der ho

gayi hai...mayank..mujhe kachha kha jayega...

maan again rolled his eyes - geet relax..mene...

...

his sentence was cut by geet..

RELAX

geet - do u want me to relax...how wud i...ohh godd...m s stupid...mujhe bhabhi ke sath

jana hi nahi chahiye tha...ab hum kya karenge maan...heyy babaji..kuchh karo na..wo sab

mere sir par baith kar kathak karenge...

maan - geet aisa kuchh nahi hoga...mene...

geet - apko kya pata...un shaitano ko me janti hu...ek se badhkar ek hai...

maan was trying hard to speak atleast 1 sentence...

but geet was not giving him a single chance..to say...

geet - agar kal project ka kaam pura nahi huva..to fir me next week chhuti kaise lungi...

maan - geet mene project...

geet - wohi toh...aap ne meri help nahi ki na...agar me chhuti nahi lungi to verji ki

shadi kaise enjoy karungi..ohh godd...maan kuchh kahiye na..me ab kya karu...

maan kept quite...

geet looked at maan...

poked his shoulder wid her index finger...

maan looked at her...

geet - aap kuchh bol kyu nahi rahe ho..??..yahan me prob me fasi hu..aur aap hai ke chup

baithe ho..kuchh kahiyena...

maan not finding any other way...

put his finger on her lip to make her quite...

geet stared at him making baby face...

maan - me kuchh kahu...

geet wanted to speak..but maan pressed his finger a lit more to make her stop..

she just nodded her head...

maan - mene project complete kar diya hai...

geet looked at him wid surprised yet angry eyes...

she immediately took off his finger...

geet - kya..aur aap ye mujhe ab bata rahe hai...mene kab se pura ghar sir pe utha rakha

tha..aur aap chup rahe...maan aap ko mujhe batana chahiye tha na...par nahi..aap to chup

chap baith kar mujhe taklif me dekhte rahe...

...

maan angrily slipped his finger in her hairs..pulling her towrds him...

while his other hand's finger ran to her lip..to make her quite...

...

geet could feel d anger in his eyes...

like his eyes were bursting fire..bursting anger...bursting pain...

...

maan was hurt...

how could she think like dat...how could she think her maan can watch her in pain...

on the other hand..he also knew..she didn't mean it...

it was just 1 of her blabber..which she alwz do without thinking...

geet looked at him wid sorry face...

but she still couldn't understand..wat made him angry all of a sudden...

...

she tried to read his eyes...

suddenly her words flashed in her mind...

" aap chup chap baith kar mujhe taklif me dekhte rahe..."

her eyes filled in pain n tears...

a sudden pain ran through her body..like she just squizzed her own heart...

she felt guilty for saying dose words...

maan noticed d layer of tears n pain..dats just formed in her eyes...

his grip over her hairs loosened..n turned into a loving n caring pull..pulling her

towrds him...

maan looked deep into her eyes...

geet closed her eyes..not able to bear dat line of tear anymore...

d moment she close her eyes...

a small painfull tear..rolled out from her eyes making his way to her cheek...

...

b4 it could roll down further...

d tear got caught between maan's upper lip n bottom lip...

he licked d tear..

n den looked back at her closed...

...

geet slowly opened her eyes..as she felt a comforting n warm kiss on her forehead from

mAAN...

maan kissed her forehead lovingly...

maan - geet...me mata hu ke mene kabhi kisi ehsaas ko apni zindagi me shamil hone nahi

diya...kabhi kisi ehsaas ko apne dil tak pohochane nahi diya..mujhe to ye bhi nahi pata

tha ke mere paas dil hai...par ab chaize badal rahi hai geet..me badal raha hu...tumhare

liye...maan kuchh bhi bardasht kar sakta hai lekin kabhi kisi bhi taklif ko geet ke

aaspaas bhi ane nahi de sakta...mere hote huye..koi taklif tumhe chhu bhi nahi

payegi...ye wada nahi mera haqq hai...aur jab tumhari in chhoti chhoti anhkhon me ansun

aate hai na..to mujhe lagta hai ke me haar gaya..MAAN KI GEET ke ankhon me ansun aaye ese

pehle MAAN puri duniya tabah kar de...taki woh pal hi na aa sake jisme tumhari akhon me

ansu ho...

geet was totally lost in dose words...

is dis love...

no way...

dis is sumthing beyond love...

love..only dese 4 letters cnt be enough for d feeling dey shared...

d feeling dey shared is sumthing like most beyond dis world..dis universe...

...

dis feeling has d strength to stop time..just for to feel each other for sum more

moments...

dis is feeling has d strength to destroy world...if anybody ever try to cum between

dem...

dis feeling has d strength to read each others heart..each others mind...

dis feeling has d strength to take decision on each other's behalf..taking each other for

granted...

dis feeling has d strength to reduce every pain...dat could ever be cuased...

dis feeling...

dis feeling has everything...a relation required...

understanding...

like...maa dnt expect to say geet sorry for her words..he wud b more hrut if she says

sorry...not geet vil say sorry...she has d right..even on his pain..only she has d right...ownership...

like...geet cnt shade a tear..coz maan cnt bear it...it maan's decision..whether to shade

a tear or not...n geet had to accept it..as she is possessed by maan...

fight...

like...pillow fight...blabbering to each other...chocolate fight...silent fights...dey

enjoy dat too...

desire...

like...a moment...n dey can drive each other...like a moment..and dey can dye for each

other skin..like a moment..n dey can forget whole world except each other...like

amoment..in which dey wud like tp spend deir whole life...

sensitiveness...

like a single drop of blood dat wiud pain geet..n maan wud go creazy...like geet legs

wud crush into glass peices but she wud not fill it...like he himsle fwud be

injured..but still he vil pick his princess up in his arms..to save her from any hurt...

...

dere in endless list of feeling dey shared for each other...

as d story vil proceed..more feeling vil be explained...

...

geet - me aapko humesha hurt karti hu na...

maan smiled - haan...par etne pyar se karti ho ki wo bhi achha lagta hai...

geet smiled - achha..aap bhi kam nahi ho...

maan - mene kya kiya...??

geet poined her finger at his grip which was on her hairs...making naughty face..

maan gripped her a bit more tightly..pulling her more closer...

...

geet giggled loving his childish behaviour...

maan smiled...

looking his grip...kissed her forehead lovingly...

geet loving accepted his kiss..closing her eyes...feeling complete wid his touch...

...

both opened deir eyes mutually...

maan sitting suppoerted by bed rilling...

while geet resting on his chest...

maan's hands snaked over her waist...

while geet's hands on maan's hands

maan - project tumhare pendrive me copy kar liya hai...pc me bhi saved hai..kal le jate

waqt pen dirve lena mat bholna...

geet nodded smiling...

maan - ab me chalu...

geet nodded in NO...

maan smiled...

maan - tumne dinner bhi nahi kiya hai abhi tak...jao jakar dinner kar lo...

geet - hmm..aur aap bhi dinner kar lena..ab dadi maa ki tabiyat kaisi hai..

maan - haan baba.me kar lunga..

maan paused for a min...n den again...

maan naughtily - dadi thik hai..aur jab tum aa jaogi to aur bhi thik ho jayengi...

geet blushed...hiding her afec..in his chest...

maan smiled..hugging her more lovingly...

life was never beautifull dis much b4...

life was nothing wothout geet b4...

he was lifeless...

now he started realizing...

wat is d importance of geet in his life...

to hurt him...

to love him..

to tease him...

to ask him stupid questions...

to comfort him...

to understand him...

to bear his anger...

to fill his life wid her every emotion...

maan - us din to nahi sharama rahi thi..ab kyu sharama rahi ho...

geet hided more n more...

hugging him tight...

not letting him see her reddish feace due to blushness...

geet - ab aap jao na...

maan - kyu..mujhe nahi jana...

geet - mujhe bhook lagi hai...

maan - to pehle meri taraf dekho..for me jaunga...

geet - zidd mat kijiye...

maan - kyu na karu...

geet - kyunki aap ko pata hai i cnt deny u...n i vil b more blushed..plz jayiye na...

maan smiled - ab tum mujhe chhodogi tab me jaunga na...

geet immediately left him...

straight away..hiding her face in d pillow...sleeping on her stomach...

maan smiled..watching her being so childish...

he kissed her hairs..lovingly saying "take care"...

n left...

d moment maan left...

geet raised her redish face from pillow..blushing to her self...

stood up..n started jumping on bed...

playing wid pillows n teddy bear...

dancing on d bed..

like a small kid...

new morning arrived...

geet entered d gate..only to get bumped into hameer...

both of deir cells fell...

now d bump and falling of cells was intentional or unintentional..dats upto hameer...

coz he purposely picked her mob instead on his..

both were d same peice...so geet didn't notice n picked d only remaining cell from

floor..thinking its her...

...

hameer - m so sorry..i didn't watch...

geet - its ok hameer...its my fault too...

hameer - m going in library..so i catch u ltr ok...

geet - ok..seeya...

hameer left wid an evil smile on face...

while geet moved for her group...

...

aftr two lectures...

d phone which was wid geet..started ringing...

geet looked at number..she din't understand..

but she den realised..its not her phone...

she received d call...

b4 she could say atleast hello...

d gal spoke - hellow hameer...we hav to meet...u cnt deny it..

geet - m sorry but i think..my phone is exchanged wid hameer's...i vil tell him about d

call...

gal - m sorry...tell him to call me d moemt u vil give back his cell...

geet - ok..

hanged up..

geet dailled her no from hameer's cell...

hameer saw d number n smirked...

very innocently - who is dis..dis is my no from which u hav called...

geet - hameer..dis is geet..i think..our cells exchanged by mistaken..

hameer - ohh..m so sorry...can u jus cum in library...

geet - i vil cum aftr lec...n if my cell rings..dnt receive any call ok..

hameer - ok..

geet hanged up..

annie - kya huva..

geet - kuchh nahi yaar..my cell got exchanged wid hameer's..vil get back aftr last

lec...

here...

hameer curiously decided to check her phone...

but it was locked...

he did try sum odd passwords wid guesing...

but aftr trying for sumtimes..d phone got completely locked n can not b open atleast for

30 min...

he got angry n was about to throw it on floor...

he den realized wat is he doing...

its not his phone...

he so much wanted to check her phone..

he sighed

aftr lec...

d group made deir way to library...

mayank - complete kiya tera wala work...

geet proudly - ofcorse...

ranbir looked at her suspiciously...

geet slapped his arm - kya dekh raha hai..mene hi kiya hai...

ranbir - tu bina mare bhi ye bol sakti thi...

nisha - tu ullu ki tarah dekh raha tha..she had no option...

nupur started laughing loudly...

ranbir - oyye chudail..tu chup karegi...

nupur - mayank..dekha..esne mujhe fir se chadail bulaya...

mayank rolled his eyes - mujhe kuchh sunayi nahi deta...

geet - tu part time ke liye ek aur boyfrnd banale...

nupur - kya idea diya hai...

mayank angrily - u liked dat idea..??

nupur - tumhe to sunayi nahi deta na..fir ye kaise sun liya...

annie - guys..stop fighting now...

...

as dey reached library...

geet's phone started ringing...

b4 hameer could pick it...

geet snatched d phoen from his hand..not letting him know she actually snatched it...

geet looked at no...

it was from MAAN...

she immediately d cut d call...

hameer did notice d no was private..so couldn't read it...

geet - hameer..tumhare cell par kisi ladki ka phone aaya tha...she wanted u to call her

as soon as possible...

...

hammer checked d no...

made an irritated face at dat no..n left...

all gave him a weired look...

n announced

IRRITATING !!!!!!

...

HAMEER AT LONESUM PLACE...

hameer - y did u call me...

gal - hameer..u hav to cum...

hameer - i vil..but wen i vil want to..not now..m busy...

gal - u cnt behave like dis hameer..its necessary..u know dat...

hammer - is yahan kuchh jyada importnt hai...

gal sweetly - plz hameer...

hameer - i vil think

spating dose words...

he hanged up d call...

n turned...

only to find RANBIR standing behind him...

SPOILERS : ?????

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Posted: 13 years ago
Maaneet scene was so sweet!!!! they are the best couple!!!
hameer😡😡kuch karo uska
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maaneet scenes r nice...awesome part...cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part
loved it
hameer...😡do something... yaar

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