SR One Shot-Realization - Page 4

Originally posted by: zeenia

Thankyou so much DJ! Now you are making me blush! And coming from such a wonderful writer like you this is a huge compliment! Thankyou!

I love how you manage to get the characters emotions through to your audience and now realise how hard it is.

Originally posted by: Lennie

Hey Zeenia, glad to see you writing and done a FF, good start - cant wait to see more 😊

Originally posted by: reshusaluja

😲 this was my first reaction when i saw ur pm😆

its beautiful Zeenie😳 u wrote everything so perfectly😳
how could u even say u r terrible writer?😕

Thankyou so much for the compliment.

Originally posted by: nikita_88

Reserved!!

I shall read and comment!!

*unreserved*

When I first saw your Pm I was like 😲, then wow I can't wait to read it!

It was amazing, firstly I loved how you totally removed ... from the picture 😆 Deeply apperciated plus a bonus for you...you never have to mention him again if you don't want to 😆

I have to say when you first started I thought you were going to start post certain events I am glad this is before than 😳.

Aww Sid shirtless and Riddhima making breakfast, you truely know how to make Siddhima cute and adorable! 😳

You are a really good writer, I have loved it so far and I am sure I will continue to love it!

I can't wait to read the few other parts you have in sort!

Awesome work Fedex buddy - you sure you don't want to work on a script for me? 😆

I do hope you enjoy the next part cos unfortunately I had to bring a certain someone back.

Originally posted by: sidma_love

Ohhh my Darlingggggg DQ

Dis was BRILLIANT 👏👏👏

U r too good 😃
Loved d way u ve explained Sid's emotions
It was beautifully written 😳

Now I hav one more name in my fav writers list 😳

Can't wait 4 d next part..
Continue superrrrrrr soon....

PS - As I know dat ur a SR pankha so I am expecting a happy ending 😳😆

And yes I will always be an SR pankha and I hate sad endings!

Originally posted by: Liashna

Awesome Zeenu!!!!!

A bear hug yaar🤗........ Wow, I sigh, so beautifuuly written!!!! Keep it up!!!

Is it really the first time u r writing or you are a novelist???? I guess, you are the latter as this OS is just toooooo GOOOOD

But as we say, Human Beings are Greedy, i want u to continue ur OS!!!!

Update sooon!!!! Please do pm me if you are updating!!!!

Originally posted by: -Sabz-

OMG 😲.....I am shocked, speechless, and mum completely and don't know how to tell you how much I love your OS 😕😳
Well, lemme begin this way...... congrats Zeenu for start writing such a wonderful OS🤗 Honestly your OS is too good 👍🏼. It's simply amazing and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it :)) Awww
I loved the way you expressed Sid's feeling, frustration, pain or whatever you called it......it's simply touched my heart. I can so feel his pain and desire to be with his wifey, RIddhima. Thank god Arman baba left 🤣
By the way, how did you manage to hide your talent till now? 😆. I wish you would have started writing it ages back, so I could have taken an advantage out of it coz I love reading FF/OS😉
I have to admit that you are one of the brilliant OS writers I have come across, so please keep writing/updating and pming me whenever you update 😛

And your kind words are making me blush. I hope you enjoy the next part just as much.

Originally posted by: norzar

hi

wowwwwwww zee, this is an awesome first attempt., enjoyed reading it

well written and you have explained sid's emotions perfectly

do continue, would love to know what happens next.

keep it up

norzar

Originally posted by: bells_10

zeenia🤗

the OS is beautifully written. i can clearly feel Sid's emotions.

plz update soon.