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sonia1000

@sonia1000

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Yaar it was awesome. And plz stop degrading yourself u r an awesome writter

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innocenteyez92

@innocenteyez92

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

hey zeenia...very nice OS..plz continue soon n do pm me.

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nyctophilia

@nyctophilia

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Zeenie 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

This has to be the Best Surprise Ever For me....🤗 🤗 🤗 U don't know how much happy i m today 🤗 🤗

This is wat i always dreamed for The SR i loved.....😭 😭For a few mins i was back to those beautiful days....❤️ ❤️

The last para of the OS i cud actually imagine that scene in Sid's Penthouse....❤️

I Love U my Soul Sis....🤗 And ya Don't call ur self a Terrible Writer!!! U are a Brilliant Writer ⭐️ 👏

Waiting for the next part....cont soon...🤗 🤗

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pragati

@Pragzie

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

I hate to admit it .

But i kind of like the Riddhima you have portrayed in your OS .

Zeenie di 🤗

This is an wonderful OS . I love it to the core . You are absolutely mad for feeling that this isnt great and that this will pathetic infront of other writers . You are madder for writing my name in the fantastic writers list .

You are more madder because you made Riddhima to be so nice in this FF =(😆 i love to hate her !

Wonderful piece of writing ! I could visualize each scene infront my eyes . I could understand Sid's anger ,his pain , his happiness when he forgot about his harsh reality and his twinge of annoyance at being called "Another man " in Riddhima's life . His angst at the memory of Lonavla incident .

Riddhima's satisfaction and happiness radiated throughout the OS.

Sid without shirt☺️ how could not Riddhima just forget all her problems with physical closeness ? I loved the last part it was so full of passion yet so full of love😳

Cant wait for another OS or a FF!

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Veena

@-veena.shona-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

heyyyyyyyyy zeenia
jst read d part
pls add me 2 ur pm list
Veena

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Moumi

@_Moumi_

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

ok now i guess i can atleast say something coz i was too shocked after getting ur pm😆

and nikammi how dare u tell urself a terrible writer!!! if this is called terrible writting then i would love to read this sort of terrible writting everyday😳

u hv beautifully potrayed Sid's emotions yaar...

The pain, the anger everything was just marvelous

and the flashback part was really good especially the last part😳

really wanna know what happens next so plzzzz continue soon😳

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Sudha

@ssdtvgojan

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What a awesome suprise !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Zeeeeeeeeeeeeeee, 🤗🤗🤗Loved it so much.

I am so happy that u have decided to write a OS on SR.............And don't call yrself terrible i know b4 too that u r awesome and i really loved the way u have expressed it.👏👏😃

I am sooooooooooooooo happppppppppppppy that one more awesome writer is added into our SR family...................I can proudly say the BESTEST of WRITERS r from Siddhimaland..............I know many now hate Ridz and also the love of Siddhima has lost its essence cos of various reasons..............But still somewhere deep inside of most of the SRians, We love our SR journey😛.

Zeeeeeeeee, Loved the way u have expressed Sid's feelings and loved everything....................Awesome.😃

Happy that Armaan is out of SR's life...............Also looking forward to yr awesome OS.

The romance of SR😳😳😳

Keep Goinggggggggggggggg 👏👏👏👏👏

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Anushka

@PraSha_SidMa

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#28

ZEENIA!!! 🤗

Yaar. You hv some explaining to do. 😆

HOW COME THIS IS ONLY YOUR FIRST TIME 😲? AND HOW COME YOU'RE SO GOOD IF THIS IS ONLY YOUR FIRST TIME 🤔???

Srsly, I am experiencing a bit of jalan here! 😒😵

But srsly, that was just wonderful 😃! It was so..... so there if you know what I mean ☺️! Totally natural and with the flow ! I LOVED IT!!!! 😍

I won't say that continue it becoz it's your choice if you want to or not . But remember, I will always be on the lookout for more of your writings from now! 😉

Keep rocking yaar!

Anushka 😎

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.Shiva.

@.Shiva.

Elite

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#29

zeenia🤗 it is too good re, it is too hot and i am so likeing your FF, amazing👏👏👏👏
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StarshineHues

@StarshineHues

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#30

OMG Zee-Zee this is FABULOUS !! 🤗 🤗 How come you haven't written before ? Seriously ? I love it !! I love the entire update, esp the SR scene. They were so cuteeeeee !! 😆 😆 How can you think you're terrible ? I came OL after ages, and this was such a wonderful surprise in my dabba. Totally loved it, and PM me whenever you update. 🤗