Chahat -2(Raj and Naina) Updated pg. 64 Part 39

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desaiprachi07

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Sorry couldn't comment there on time. Here comes my comment.😊 MJ ki entry wowww jhakas 👏...I just love him in that Military attire. It is a perfect choice and that too with the pictures suits the situation.👍🏼 MJ is always ready just like Rajveer. There are many similarities between them which make them brothers.😉 His senior is really impressed with him a lot.😊 So he is going to face MJ.🤔 He has already heard the name of Alekh and Naina.😉 He has reached to PMA and was welcomed by Alekh. 😃Naina ko dekh kar koi bhi keh sakta hai ki kisi ko bhi is se pyaar ho jaye. MJ was shocked to see Raj in front of him 😲 and let's see what happens in next part when they confront.😕 Naina should have accept that she never tried to know Raj and his life.😔 Now it's time to know him and support him.😳

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: varshita
Great update 👏 and sorry for being late.
thank u 😊 😊 and don't worry about that. 😉 😉

MJ here and it's obvious that Raj would be worried because it's tough for him to control himself in front of his brother. Jis bhai ko us ne pita jaise pala ho us k saamne apne aap ko rokna mushkil to hai hi.🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔
Bilkul sahi kaha Versha. Itna asaan nahi hoga Raj k liye ki apne saamne vo MJ ko dekhe fir bhi apne bhai ko apne gale na laga sake. 😭 😭

Naina is there to support Raj at every part and he needs it the most right now.Only Alekh except Naina knows the truth so he can very well understand his situation.
And he will support Rajveer no matter how the situation is? 😊 😊

I just loved the stylish entry of MJ. Kashmir and Gulmerg that too with picture just perfect. 👍🏼
Thank u.😊 😊 You know it's a beautiful place.

MJ is really very smart and brave just like his brother. He knew so well that he is getting orders for new posting.😉 😉😉 😉 😉 😉 He immediately recognized Naina's and Alekh's not only names but by their faces. 😉
Yes afterall us ne Naina aur Alekh k baare me itna suna jo hai Raj se aur bhai kis ka hai? 😉 😉

I don't think Raj can take this easily as MJ is not going to believe that he is Vyom.😔 It's not easy to convince him. 😒 I loved his dialogue about Naina ki itne khoobsurat hai tabhi to bhaiya ko pyar ho gaya tha in se.
Kisi ko bhi ho jaye na? Yes you are right MJ ko manana...

Let's see how Raj handles the situation.😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛
You will come to know that in next part 😉 😉

Update very soon.

thanks a lot 🤗🤗

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arpita25

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Posted: 9 years ago

#423

Abhi tak tune is ko update nahi kia? I thought you updated it. 😔

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 9 years ago

#424

Originally posted by: arpita25
Abhi tak tune is ko update nahi kia? I thought you updated it. 😔

Bus abhi karne ja rahe hoon.😊 😊
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Vertika Srivastava

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Part 39:-

In Lucknow Head Quarters:-

"Come in Captain Doc. Shukla."

Captain Doc Tara Shukla

"Jai Hind sir." Captain Tara Shukla saluted.

"At ease Captain. Aap k new posting k orders aa gaye hain."

She asked excitedly, "Kahan pe sir?"

His senior smiled, knowing so well her habbit to behave childish sometimes. "Tara control your self. You have to join Pune Aacdemy in this week."

"What??? Itne door." She said making a face.

"Tara don't over react hum tum ko Siyachin ya Laddkh nahi bhej rahe hain."

"Sir vahan to mai ja bhi nahi sakti aakhir mera cold se panic attack last mission k baad se." she said making a sad face.

"Hmmm koi baat nahi, tab Pune is better for you."

"Off course sir."

"So leave and get ready for your new posting." And after saluting she exit and was as usual talking to herself. "To Tara bacchu ready ho ja life k ek new adventure k liye. Pune...naam to accha hai ho sakta hai jagah bhi acchi ho. Bahut suna tha Bunty se is jagah k baare me. Bus ab vahan pe milne wala staff bhi yahan ki tarah accha ho bus."

Back to Pune:-

This was the greatest shock for MJ and whatever his eyes were seeing it was unbelievable for him. "Welcome Capatin Shekhawat in to our team." MJ was unable to speak a word neither hid could respond. He was in state of shock. "Captain Shekhawat?"

he was called numerous times when finally he responded when Alekh shook him. "Yeah...ah...bhaiya...", came out from his mouth.

It now seemed more tough for Raj as he heard this word bhaiya after a long time. He just wanted to rush to him and hug him tight and tell him that he is not alone his bhaiya is here with him. He never left him but he chose to control his emotions instead. After all he was master in controlling his emotions,"Excuse me."

"Bhaiya aap zinda ho." He said tears brimming in to his eyes.

"Excuse me Captain, kaun bhaiya kis ka bhaiya?" Vyom asked.

"Aap mere Rajveer bhaiya hain aur kya?"

"Captain aap ko bhi vahi galatfehmi ho rahi hai jo kabhi Captain Alekh, Captain Naina aur Captain Huda ko hue thi. I am Major Vyom Rathod." He said with determination because he knew that only with such determination he can face MJ otherwise it will not take MJ long to understand what the truth is.

"Nahi mujhe koi galatfehmi nahi hai na hi meri aakhein kabhi dhokha nahi kha sakti hain aur mai kabhi apne bhaiya ko pehchane me galti nahi kar sakta."

"Aap galti kar rahe hain bus face ek jaisa hone se aap koi galat andaza mat lagaiye."

"Mai kabhi galat nahi ho sakta. Aap mere bhaiya Rajveer Singh Shekhawat hi hain." He has a determination in his voice which disturbed Rajveer but Naina held his hand to give him her support.

MJ rushed to Vyom and hugged him tight. "Bhaiya...kahan chale gaye the aap mujhe aise akela chod k? Aap ko pata hai...aap k bina...kaise...", his throat chocked because of excessive emotions. It moisten everyone's eyes there. It was getting tougher for Raj aka Vyom to held his emotions. He too wanted to hug his brother back but he couldn't do that. Now finally everyone knew that he is brother of Rajveer Singh Shekhawat.

To bring MJ out of his emotional condition he spoke toughing his voice,"Captain hold on yourself...yahan hum sab ek seceret meeting karne k liye assemble hue hain na ki aap k doubts ko clearify karne k liye. Aur better hoga ki aap apne personal equations aur emotions ko alag rakh kar yahan team k saath plan execute kariye baaki baatein hum baad me bhi kar sakte hain."

MJ realized what is he doing but his heart still was not ready to accept that he is not Rajveer. He left him with teary eyes and Naina comforted him. "Mrityunjay...hold yourself. You are a true soldier and I know for you nation and your duty comes first."

MJ looked at Naina for a moment. He cleaned his tears. "Aap sahi keh rahi ho."

"Good for you Captain." Vyom said turning away. Alekh was feeling really sad for MJ as only he knew the truth. Soon the meeting begun. "Welcome Captain Mrityunjay Singh Shekhawat in our team." Proud was evident in his voice. Proud of his brother being a true soldier. "Aap ko kaafi had tak Col. Chauhan se details pata chal chuki hongi. Aap k alawa jaldi hi hume ek Captain Doc. Tara Shukla bhi jaldi join karengi. Filhal mai aap ko apni team se introduce kara deta hoon."he introduce him with everyone telling him who is playing which role in Academy. Coming to Naina he said, "She is Captain Naina Singh Rathode."

MJ was surprised to know her name. "Aap to Captain Naina Singh Shekhawat hain na?" Naina smiled and cleared her doubts,

"Yes Captain, I got married to Major Vyom Rathode." One more shock he got but he thought it better to keep quite. Raj could clearly read the disappointment on his face. "I think it's enough for today." He ordered everyone to disperse.

MJ was still lost in thoughts when Alekh come to him. "Chalein?"

"Haan jaroor." They reached to his room. "I know aap pareshaan hai kuch baatein soch kar. Apun ye kehna chata hai ki aap ko koi jaroorat ho to apun ko fauran yaad kar lijiyega."

MJ smiled. "Pata hai Captain Alekh, bhaiya aap ki is language ki bahut baar baat karte the."

Alekh smiled back, "Apun janta hai Captain."

"Hey call me Mrityunjay."

"Kuch bada naam nahi hai aap ka?" both smiled.

"Theek hai than call me MJ." MJ said.

"Ye apun k liye theek hai."

MJ smiled back, "I think abhi mujhe facuilty se bhi milna hai."

"Apun milayega na aap ko shaam ko sab se." He said.

At Raj's room:-

When Naina entered in her room she found Raj standing over a window lost in some thoughts. She went to him, "Kya hua?" It was just came out of her lips and he hugged her tight sobbing. "Naina..." She could clearly understood his heart condition. After sometime he got relaxed. First time Naina has seen his this side.

"Mujhe to pata hi nhi tha ki aap kabhi rote bhi ho."

Raj gave a sheepish smile. "When it comes to Mriyunjay mai apne aap ko rok nahi pata hoon." He said placing his head on her shoulder.

"I can understand Raj.Par mujhe abhi bhi lagta hai ki itna asaan nahi hai MJ ko convience karna. Maine us ki aakhein padhi hai bahut saare sawal hain us ki aankhon me."

"Mujhe pata hai Naina ki ye bahut asaan nahi hone wala hai but jab tak ye misin nahi khatam ho jayega mai apni identity reveal nahi kar sakta. Is mission k liye hi mujhe Vyom banana pada hai."

"Kahin MJ ko kisi se kuch pata chal gaya to?"

"Aisa nahi hoga. I will take care of that." He dialed a number and told what to do.

MJ's room:-

He was still restless from when he met Vyom Rathode.No matter what anyone or Vyom says his heart is still unable to believe that he is not his brother Rajveer. "Mera dil maane ko taiyaar nahi hai. Koi baat hai...vo bhaiya hi hain...un ki aankhein bata rhi hain ki vo bhaiya hi hain." He dialed a number.

"Jai Hind Sir."

"Jai Hind Captain Shekhawat."

"Aap ye jante the sir?"

Knowing very well what MJ is saying he knew it is the best to ignore the truth, "Kya, kis bare me aap baat kar rahe hain Captain?"

"Sir mujhe pata hai ki aap ko sab pata hai...par aap bhi."

Col Chauhan stopped him, "Aap mujhe batayenge baat kya hai?"

MJ closed his eyes as if he wanted to make him and his heart what is the truth, "Major Vyom Rathod."

"Yes he is your reporting officer in this mission. Any problems with him?"

Knowing very well his answers. "Sir bhaiya zinda the aap ne bataya nahi mujhe." He complained.

"Bhaiya...excuse me."

"Yes sir, vo mere bhaiya Rajveer Singh Shekhawat hain." He said with full determination in his voice.

"Ye kya keh rahe hain aap Captain? Vo Major Vyom hain...Vyom Rathod."

"No sir...I don't know bhaiya kis vajah se apni identity hide kar rahe hain par mai aur mera dil bus ye janta hai ki vo mere bhaiya hain jo mare nahi zinda the."

"Control your emotions Mrityunjay. I know tum Rajveer se bahut pyaar karte the aur Rajveer tumhari zindagi tha but sach yahi hai ki Vyom ka bus face Rajveer jaisa hai vo Rajveer nahi hai. Tumhare liye bhi yahi better hoga ki jitne jaldi ho sake tum is baat ko samajh lo aur maan bhi lo."

"But sir..."

"Maine jo kaha hai us par dhyan dijiye Captain aur haan aap ki kisi bhi harkat se is missin pe koi aanch nahi aani chahiye."

"Fine sir. Jai Hind." MJ hung the phone in disappointement.

"I know sab mujh se ye chupa rahe hain fir bhi mujhe pata hai ki mujhe sach ka pata kaise lagana hai." He dialed a number.

"Yes sir."

"Major Vyom Rathod k baare me mujhe saari details chahiye."

"Sir, ek army officer k baare me?"

"Ya, it's urgent."

"Fine sir."

Rajveer and Naina:-

"To is mission k baad aap ko apni pehchaan vapas mil jayegi?" Naina asked curiously.

"Haan Naina maine seniors se baat ki hai is baare me. Vaise bhi tum ne aur baki k sab ne mil kar Naveen ko aur mujhe innocent prove hi kar diya tha to ab ye better hai ki mujhe apni asli pehchan vapas mil jaye."

"Mai bhi yahi chahti hoon."she said smiling..

"Thank u Naina."

"Kis liye?"

"Mere tum logon k saath na rehte hue bhi tum sab ne jis bravery se mujhe aur Naveen ko insaaf dilaya us k liye." Raj said putting his both hands on her both shoulders.

"Aap jante hain na mera Academy aane ka ek hi mission tha bus bhaiya ko insaaf dilana. Maine aap se milne k baad hi ye jana ki mujhe bhi apne aap ko ek accha soldier banana hai. Apne ko sabit karna hai. Tabhi mai bhaiya k saath hue injustice se un ko free karwa k un ko justice dilwa paaongi. Sach kahoon to aap ne meri life ka direction hi badal diya aur mujhe bahut kuch sikhya. Phir ek din aisa aaya jab aap bhi mujhe humesha k liye chod kar chale gaye. Tab meri himmat aur badh gayi aur maine faisla kar liya ki ab aap dono ko innocent prove karna hi meri life ka ultmate motive ban gaya. Bus aap ka pyar aur vishwas ki takat thi aur bhaiya ka mujh par yakeen jo maine kar liya aur mere saare doston ne bina kisi cheej ki parwah kiye mera saath diya." Raj felt proud for not only her but for all his cadets who made him a successful teacher who gave best officers to Army.

"I am proud of you Naina." Hugging her tight.

Tum Mile Toh Mehaki Baarishein
Tum Mile Toh Jaagi Khaaishein
Tum Mile Toh Rangon Ka Hai Silsila
Tum Mile Toh Jaadu Chha Gaya
Tum Mile Toh Jina Aa Gaya
Tum Mile Toh Main Paaya Hai Khuda

Next day:-

It was almost three in morning when someone knocked Naina's room. She got up and opened the door. "Alekh tu yahan is time?"

"Haan...mere saath chal."

"Kyoun sab theek to hai? Neelu to theek hai na?Kahan?" "Sab theek hai bus tu chal na apun batata hai kahan." He bought her to his quarters where fully awake Neelu was waiting for her. "Aaiye aaiye madam aap hi ka wait kar rahe the hum."

"Par itne subah kyoun?"

"Come and sit here." She made her sit besides her and uncovered a big plate put on a table. Naina saw many things in that plate. Sindoor, bichiya(toe ring), payal(ankelte), a beautiful red saree, mehndi, a set, chudiyaan, alta(color which is applied in feet) with sweets, dry fruits and much more things were kept in it. She was anxious to know what was that, "Ye kya hai Alekh?"

"Ye sargi hai." He said smiling.

"Sargi, kaise, kya?" she asked further.

"Neelu tuicch samjha is ko."

Neelu smiled and said, "Naina karwachauth pe nayi bahu k sasural waale I mean us ki saas apni bahu ko sargi deti hai. Sargi is a sort of blessings with all belongings of suhag with fruits and dry fruits etc. Aap ko subah is time ab yahi khana hoga aur is k baad hi aap ka vrat start hoga." Naina has tears brimming in her eyes, "To tum logon ne ye sab mere liye kiya?" she was touched.

Alekh smiled, "Nahi...hum ne bus arrangement kiya. Hum se ye sab karne k liye kisi aur ne kaha tha." She asked curiously, "Kis ne?"

"Inhone." And he opened the curtain and someone appeared from that.

At Pune Railway Station:-

"Hey bahgwan ye train bhi itne subah subah le kar aati hai. Ab kya karegi Tara bachhu? Is time to mujhe nahi lagta koi conveyance milega Academy k liye." She was thinking when a few of potters she spotted. "Suniye bhaiya mujhe Pune Miltray Academy jana hai kya koi conveyance milega abhi?"

"Abhi to madam subah k teen hi baje hain abhi koi bhi conveyance nahi milega. Vaise bhi vo jagah city se thoda vahar padti hai.Aap ko subah tak kuch nahi milega station pe hi wait karna padega."

"Thank u bhaiya jee." She said and turned as usual talking to herself, "Ab to wait karna padega subah hone tak yahan Tara bacchu." She said and was searching for waiting room when a man came to her. "Madam jee aap ko Pune Miltary Academy jana hai?"

She turned and found a man, "Haan jee bhaiya."

"Apun aap ko vahan tak le ja sakta hai."

"Oh thank you bhaiya par abhi to andhera hai mai subah hi nikloongi. Mera itne raat me Academy pahuchna theek nahi hai."

"Apun chod dega aap ko madam."

"Nahi bhaiya mai subah hi jaaongi." She said.Finding the waiting room she entered, "To Tara bacchu ab kuch der yahna wait kar lete hain subah hote hi Academy k liye niklenge."

A man called someone, "Sir...ek news mile hai."

"Kaho...subah subah kyoun phone kiya hai?"

"Sir yahan ek ladki aayi hue hai Pune Central Railway station pe aur us ko PMA jana hai."

"To?"

"Mujhe laga aap ko batana sahi hoga."

"Bewkoof ho sakta hai kisi ki relative ho vo. Dekhne me kaise hai?"

"Seedhi saadhi ladki type."

"Tum sab ek number k gadhe ho subah subah phone kar k bata rahe ho ki koi ladki aayi hai PMA k liye. Koi bhi ho sakti hai na. Rakho phone aur koi kaam ki khabar ho tabhi mujhe phone karna."

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Shaina_b

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Posted: 9 years ago

#427

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

So now we have Doctor Captain Tara Shukla's entry!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

She seems to be the exact opposite of Mrityunjay!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛

Where Mrityunjay is serious and disciplined, Tara is bubbly, talks to herself and seem more on the lines of Shalini!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Lagta hai in their serious atmosphere, they always get a smiling and sweet doctor!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

It was so emotional when Mrityunjay called Raj bhaiya!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Jahan Aalekh aur Naina ko pata hai wahan Mrityunjay ko bhi pata chal jata toh kya ho jata??😕 😕 😕 😕

I don't know how Raj controlled himself when Mrityunjay hugged him!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

Mrityunjay is disappointed to see Naina had gotten married as he clearly sees her as his brother's true love!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

It is nice to see Aalekh and MJ together!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Here Raj is also crying because it is very difficult for him to hide himself from his dear brother!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Chahe jitna bhi dimaag se kaam le for this mission but as the dialogue goes "Baat jab Bhai ki hoti hai na toh dimaag nahi sirf dil kaam karne lagta hai"!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

As expected, MJ refuses to believe Vyom is not Raj and is definitely not convinced by Col. Chauhan!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Now he is going to dig into Vyom's past and it won't be long before he gets to the truth!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

It was lovely the way Naina described how Raj had motivated her!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj is so proud of her and his cadets and it was sweet to see him thank her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

The song is very nice!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

It was sweet when Aalekh took Naina to Neelu who gave her the sargi for Karva chauth!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

I am sure Raj is behind the curtain and I hope he is fasting with her!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Tara reached Pune at 3 in the morning but it is good she thought to wait till light for the journey to the academy!!!!

It is good that they do not find Tara to be a threat and this can come in handy!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Edited by Shaina_b - 9 years ago

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treta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#428

superb update dear,continue soon & thnx for pm

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PRIYANKA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#429

awesome update dear..👏👏

loved RN scene.....

superb understanding between RN..

Cont soon..

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RamAayeHain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#430

Read whole story in one go

It was amazing awesome fabulous and fantastic

I really loved it

Please continue soon and pm me too please

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