Chahat -2(Raj and Naina) Updated pg. 64 Part 39

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Uffaq

@Uffaq

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Posted: 9 years ago

#401

Story is going superb n new entery is amazingly gud waiting for nex update n pls pm me as well

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arpita25

@arpita25

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Posted: 9 years ago

#402

A big sorry for being that late.
Just perfect one.👏 A perfect and dashing entry of MJ aka Viraf.👍🏼 A perfect choice for the role of Raj's brother.👍🏼 MJ is really smart.😉 I just loved these pics you used from the original show and his entry with mud was just awesome. He remember these names of Naina and Alekh.😉 He has some doubts and now he will get the sufficient time to clear his doubts.😉 He was welcomed by Alekh in the Academy and he wanted to ask many questions but it was not a suitable place for it.😊 I am happy to see that Naina finally realized her mistake that she was every time got busy with her life never tried to know about Raj's life but Raj to as usual Raj hai he never minds.😊The greatest shock of MJ's life he got when he saw his brother.😲 Raj knew about it that it's coming and he was really worried 🤔 but this time Naina became his strength as usual and he was now tough to fight with the situation.😊 It will be tough to convince MJ 😔 and waiting for Tara's entry. continue soon.

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Arti Bhardwaj

@saiaarti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#403

Tqqq soon much for updating...

Amazing update... Super...

Tqqq for accepting my request and updating ur fic...

It's a treat for all RN fans...

Now waiting for more updates...

Plzz update soon and complete ur fic...

I m a big fan of ur story and u r amazing writer..

Plzz continue soon and do pm me...

This time I didn't come to know that u updated it fit that's why got late in commenting.

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rkchandni

@rkchandni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#404

Hey vartika I have to read this fic of urs from the first part so give me some time I will surely read it n.comment on it thanks n love chandni

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 9 years ago

#405

Originally posted by: kajalkalwani
Great update. Lets see how raj hides his identity amazing update loved it

Hey dear yeah it's gonna be tough for him. Thanks for reply 🤗

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varshita

@varshita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#406

Great update 👏 and sorry for being late.

MJ here and it's obvious that Raj would be worried because it's tough for him to control himself in front of his brother. Jis bhai ko us ne pita jaise pala ho us k saamne apne aap ko rokna mushkil to hai hi.🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

Naina is there to support Raj at every part and he needs it the most right now.Only Alekh except Naina knows the truth so he can very well understand his situation.

I just loved the stylish entry of MJ. Kashmir and Gulmerg that too with picture just perfect. 👍🏼

MJ is really very smart and brave just like his brother. He knew so well that he is getting orders for new posting.😉 😉😉 😉 😉 😉 He immediately recognized Naina's and Alekh's not only names but by their faces. 😉

I don't think Raj can take this easily as MJ is not going to believe that he is Vyom.😔 It's not easy to convince him. 😒 I loved his dialogue about Naina ki itne khoobsurat hai tabhi to bhaiya ko pyar ho gaya tha in se.

Let's see how Raj handles the situation.😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 Update very soon.

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 9 years ago

#407

Originally posted by: RNforever
superb yr

thank u 😊 😊

raj ne sach kaha aj se phele RN ki life me sirf naina ki problems he toh thi toh raj ke bare me kase pata hota usse ...

I know that's why I mentioned it here. 😉 😉

koi nhi ab dekhte h kya kya hota h naya
ab toh maza aayega MJ ki entry kuch toh dhamal karegi

I am sure it will be up to the expectations. 😊 😊

MJ naina alekh ke bare me janta h ...
naina ko kisi aur ke saath dekhna acha nhi laga usse ...

Obvious hai Raj se jo itne baar suna bhi hai us ne.😉 😉 He wanted Naina with his brother na?

MJ shocked h raj ko dekh kar hope kuch gadbad na ho wase raj ka bhai h kuch gadbad hone bhi nhi dega ...i m sure

Bilkul but itna asaan nhi hai MJ ko samjhana. 😉 😉

lovely update

thank u 😊 😊

plz try to update soon

I will do it for sure. 😃 😃

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#408

Originally posted by: Shaina_b
Too good!!!Awesome!!!!Mind blowing!!!!
thank u dear 😊 😊

Good that Naina threatened to tell of Huda's exploits to Anvesha and that put him in place!!!!
😆 😆 😆 us k liye yahi sahi hai 😆 😆

So Naina did figure it out that Mrityunjay is related to Raj by his surname and made Raj admit it!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
Haan varna to Naina ko pata hi nahi chalta. 😆 😆

Mrityunjay's entry in flashback was fabulous and just magnificent!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
thank u 😊 😊

I simply loved his entry from the mud and the way you described it was like hearing it in voice-over!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
😊 😊

I actually felt like it was a scene I was watching in a show instead of reading it!!!!
oho thank u it means my effort was fruitful. 😳 😳

The comparison with Lord Shiva was very good as Mrityunjay is our modern day Shiv!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
You feel it in that way. 😉 😉

It was the perfect dramatic entry of a dashing new hero and the brother of Raj!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
thanks 😊 😊

The words of Raj were very well placed and reminded me of Shahrukh and Hrithik in K3G!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
😆 😆

You used the pics from Ek Boond Ishq very well and fitted them so well into the narrative!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
Thanks dear for your support in that. 🤗

He is successful in his mission and after all how can Raj's brother be any less!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
Jis ka source of inspiration hi Raj raha ho vo to aage badhega hi.

Just like Raj, he also shares the credit with his team aur wakai Raj ki parchhain hai, intelligent and perfect!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
True

So Mrityunjay knows about Naina and Aalekh!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊
Yes he knows 😊 😊

Naina finally realized that she was too busy with her own problems and never tried to know about Raj!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔
Finally she realized the truth 😛 😛

But of course Raj being Raj didn't mind and passed it off saying the situation was not right back then!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Ye bhi hai but I do agree that she never asked Raj about him.

Raj is really worried about how Mrityunjay will react on seeing him and it will be very difficult for both of them!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔
He should because he is not gonna give up that easily. 😉 😉

It is good to see Naina support Raj at a time like this like a true better half as he really needs her now!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊
Aur kya now it's her duty to support him, kabhi apne duniya se bahar aa k kuch soche aur kare? 😛 😛

Aalekh ko toh sab pata hota hai and his suspicion about Mrityunjay is proven right!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆
Baba alekh ki Jai Ho 😆 😆

So Raj ne Naina ke baare mein kayi baar bataya tha Mrityunjay ko aur woh sab samajh gaya tha!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛How cute!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
Bilkul apne bhai ki dil ki baatein MJ acche se janta hai. 😊 😊

Mrityunjay's feelings on meeting the love of his brother's life Naina was very well expressed!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏
thanks 😊 😊

I loved his thought that she is so beautiful and that is why Raj had fallen for her!!!!❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

No doubt in that.😉 😉

Mrityunjay is shocked on seeing Raj and he is definitely not going to believe that he is not Raj!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲
Aur kya kaise maan le ki vo us ka bhai nahi hai.

Waiting for Tara's entry as naam Tara hai toh hogi toh woh Mrityunjay ki hi!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊
You know Tara MJ k alawa kisi aur ki ho hi nahi sakti 😉 😉