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Hey Everyone! Guess who's Back. ya its me. i know i had waited u all a lot. but now m back nd next update would be on in an hour. i came back last nite nd has started working on update from today early Morning. its almost finish nd soon i'll be update.

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Hey my Lovely Readers. thanx a lot for ur overwhelming Response so far. m really very happy dat u guys like my Previous updates nd i truly Love ur Opinions nd Coments on dat. thanx a ton Guys for such a support. nd sorry for making u all wait for 1 week almost but nw m back so without making u all wait any more m going to update d Part 20 of my SS. hope u all will like it too. pls feel free to criticuise if u all dnt like it.


PART 20:

Dat night Geet couldn't able to sleep peacefully. The thought of going alone wid Maan was bothering her. His closeness always affected her nd now going alone dat too at dis Long journey was bothering her. She was packing her bags half-heartedly, though dere's no need to pack but Maan suggested her as dey r going to see d Land nd if everything goes fine den may be dey have to stay over dere for 1 day to complete d formalities.

On d other hand Maan was packing his bag wid full excitement. Finally he was getting chance to go wid his Geet alone. U never know may be dis journey changes dere Lives nd dat change would be for Gud. He was never so excited in dese 5 years like he was now. if he can den he would make d sunrise now only, but due to nature's rule he has to wait till morning. He laughs at his own condition as he was behaving like a small kid who is excited to go for a picnic next day.

Savitri Devi came over dere to talk to him but seeing him so much happy she couldn't able to say anything. After so many years she was seeing him so much Happy derefore she dnt want to disturb her Grandson's private moment wid his Love. she looks one last tym to him nd makes her way towards Mansion..

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Next day Geet was sitting in her Living Room having her coffee wen she heard d Door bell. Her heart beat rises knowing who it can be. Her heartbeat rises just by thinking of him but den she calms down herself nd takes a deep breath

Geet (to herself): Geet relax! Dnt act like a Teenager. U r a matured Girl nw so behave like dat. he's only Maan not a filmstar dat u r getting nervous like dis. so just calm down nd take a Deep breath. Ok

She said nd goes to open d Door. As soon as she opens D door she saw Maan standing over dere. He was not in his usual office attire infact was wearing Black shirt nd Blue Denim jeans. Top 2 buttons of his shirt was open exposing his chest making him looks Hot. She just stood dere looking at him without blinking her eyes. Maan just smirks slowly seeing his affect on her nd he was actually enjoying it. Geet's throat went Dry not knowing wat to say. Maan waves her hand in front of her nd dis is wen she came back to her senses nd she realizes wat she was doing. She was Drooling openly on him. she blushed wen she reralize dat which was not unnoticed by Maan. He just wanted to kiss her Red Cheeks at dat moment but he controlled himself. Geet quickly looked other way to regain herself.

Maan: Wat happen Geet?

Geet: umm... Wo... nothing...

Maan: ok, den wont u ask me to cum inside

Geet: NO!! I mean to say dat lets go otherwise we'll get late

Maan: C'mon Geet. its just take 4 hrs by Road nd we r going by Car so it'll take less tym. We'll reach dere on tym.

Geet: Ya but...

Maan: ok fine it seems dat u didn't even bother to ask even a Coffee to Ur "Partner"

She looked at him wid her eyes wide listening to d Word "Partner". Maan quickly understands wat meaning she has taken out

Maan: I mean Business Partner. It seems dat u don't want to offer even a coffee also to me

Geet: No its not like dat. Come inside

She said nd he came inside nd gets himself seated on one of d couch.

Geet: tum baitho, main tumhare liye Coffee bana ke lati hoon.

She said nd left for Kitchen to control herself. As soon as she reaches to kitchen she holds d counter tight to control her emotions. She mumbles to herself while preparing coffee

Geet (To herself): Wat d hell I was doing. I was Drooling on him dat too in front of him. Den wats d difference between me nd dose Bimbos who Drool on him?

"u knw wat he still affects u" Said her inner voice

"No he don't" she said

"ok den y r u staring at him like dat. u r behaving like u r teenager nd has seen a hot Rockstar. Nd u r blushing too wen u realize dat u r drooling on him"

"Shut up its not like dat. I m not blushing. It's just because m seeing him in formals after so many days datsy got distracted. Dats it"

"O really dats y u were saying few mins back dat u r drooling on him"

"Shut up dnt confuse me ok. Its not like dat. stop confusing me nd dis Maan y does he have to come in dis Attire? Can't he just come in his formals?"

"Like in dat way he won't affect u?"

"I said na dat I won't get affected by him in any way. Stop saying dis again nd again dat m getting affected by him"

"Geet u knw wat u have gone Mad. Seriously dis Maan has made u Mad. U r Madly in love wid him. Before also nd nw also. so better accept it."

"u knw wat I think u r mad datsy saying all dis. everything has been over between us nd nothing can be done like before. We r together just for dis project. So just stop talking about him nd let me concentrate on my Project."

"U have to accept it Geet. Sooner or Later u have to accept it dat u cant stay away from him"

"Just Shut up nd Go otherwise..." She couldn't speak further as she saw Maan standing behind her leaning on d Kitchen Door, smirking. She immediately looked away nd turned her back to him nd pretended to make Coffee

Geet: Hey Babaji! Kahi isne sab sun to nahi liya na. O god! Pls save me from dis embarrasement.

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Maan couldn't able to sit alone at d Living Room without her. It's just been 1 minute dat she has gone to kitchen but it seems an hour to him. He wonders hw he spend 5 whole years without her. He thought of going to kitchen to her, but den thought wat if she dnt like it. But den he shrugged off his thoughts. He can go to her in kitchen nd if she'll ask anything den he'll give her an excuse dat he has came dere to tell her d kind of Coffee he drinks. Maan Singh Khurana nd giving excuses well no one can believe it. If it was 5 years back den he's sure dat everyone can believe d fact dat he gives excuses but nw no one can believe dat MSK is giving an excuse just to go near her Lady Love. He smiles nd makes his way to kitchen.

As soon as he reaches over dere he heard Geet's voice. He stops right at Door nd found dat she's talking to herself. He smiles at her behaviour.it was her habbit to talk to herself nd to which he always makes fun of. Nd nw even after 5 years also her Habbit haven't changed. He just leans against d Door nd listens to her Blabbering. He smiles wen he heard her talking to herself like someone was present over dere. Suddenly he saw her getting turned nd stopped in mid-way. He haven't said anything nd kept looking at her which makes her nervous nd she immediately turned back to make coffee

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Geet's mind has stopped working wen she saw him standing over dere. Wat d hell is he doing over here, she thought but didn't wanted to show him so she makes a straight face nd pretended to make d Coffee. She pours d Coffee in d mug nd puts 1 cube of sugar in it. Exactly d way he likes, Black Coffee wid one cube of Sugar. Maan notices all dis nd was happy dat she still remembers her choice.

He straightened himself nd started moving towards her. She can feel him cuming near him which was making her nervous but she continued to stir d spoon to distract herself. Maan was moving slowly towards her nd finally stands behind her while she continues stirring d spoon to control herself. He was so close to her dat she can feel his warm breath on her neck. She closes her eyes to keep her control on herself; her hold on spoon was loosening yet she didn't leave it. Maan slowly snakes his one hand around her waist nd from other hold her hand which was holding spoon giving her goosebumps. His touch was sending Shiver down her spine. She turned her head to look at him nd found him looking at her intensely. Dere faces were just mere inches away. Both looked at each other's eyes nd gets lost for sum moment, wen finally Maan spoke

Maan: Geet, if u'll keep on stirring like dis only, den it'll take whole day nd my Coffee gets cold

Dis is wen Geet realizes dat she'still holding d spoon even wen its work is over. She quickly leaves d spoon nd looked In front. He brings his face more closer to her Ear still holding her by her waist nd slowly whispers

Maan (whispers): if d Coffee is done den can we go back to Living Room

She just nodded absent minded, not able to register wat he was saying; she was too lost in his scent, in his proximity. She didn't even notice dat he's still holding her hand. Maan smirks seeing her like dat. no Matter hw much she denies d fact dat she don't love him, dat his closeness didn't affect her but at d end of d day he knows dat she still Loves him in d same way like before infact more den dat.

Maan (whispers): Lets Go den.

He said while softly brushing his lips on her earlobes sending her shiver down her spines nd leaves her hand nd took d Coffee, slowly loosening his grip from her waist, freeing her nd moves away. Geet takes a sigh of relief feeling him leaving her. She quickly regains herself nd looks at him. He could notice her blush but pretended to be not noticed. He smiles nd makes his way towards Living Room. After sumtym she too goes towards Living Room

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Maan nd Geet were sitting in d Living Room. Maan gets himself seated beside Geet. Geet notices it nd shifts a bit away from him. None spoke to each other. Maan could understand y is she so quiet. Already dere relationship is going thru a very Weak Point nd after d moment dat dey shared few mins ago she will definitely feel awkward wid him. But he has to do sumthing to make her talk nd break dis silence. But he couldn't able to think of anything so he decided to let it be like dis nd continued sipping his Coffee

Maan: Coffee is nice

Geet: thanx

Maan: you still remember the kind of coffee I prefer?

Geet: Its not easy to forget everything

She said calmly but Maan understand d meaning hidden behind those words, derefore he decided to not to speak further. Both was having their coffee silently, engrossed in each other's thoughts. But Maan wants her to speak. Finally an idea struck to his mind nd he smirks knowing dat dis would definitely work.

Maan: umm Geet

Geet: ya

Maan: Wo.. I was thinking sumthing

Geet: Wat?

Maan: Wo actually Geet, one of my friend is a psychiatrist by Profession so I was thinking dat if u consult him once

Geet: Psychiatrist? But y Maan? I dnt need any psychiatrist.

Maan: Geet u dnt know, but aisa hota hai. Patient ko khud pata nahi hota ki use psychiatrist ki zarurat hai ki nahi.

Geet: Maan kya bol rahe ho. Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha. Y do I need a psychiatrist? Main to zyada stress bhi nahi leti.

Maan: Geet, its ok sab theek ho jayega. First tell me r u having difficulty in sleeping at nights?

Geet (to herself): isko kaise pata (den to Maan) ya, y?

Maan: ok. Nd do u sumtymes feel irritated or or having lack of concentration

Geet: ya, but y r u asking all dis.

Maan (slowly): Wo.. u r suffering from Schizophrenia na

Geet (shocked): WAT???? Schizophrenia?

Maan: ya

Geet: R u mad? Who d hell has told u dat I had Schizophrenia?

Maan: Geet isme batane ki kya baat hai. I myself has observed it

Geet: Wat? Maan u know wat u r out of ur mind. Main tumhe kis angle se Schizophrenia ki patient dikhti hoon.

Maan: kis Angle se? ok u urself told dat u had sleeping problem in nights nd u get irritated too nd ya not to forget yun is tarah se akele me baatein karna like u r talking to sumone visible like u were talking in d kitchen; dis all r symptoms of Schizophrenia

Geet: Shut up Maan. It was not because of Schizophrenia; it was all because of u. Because of u m doing all dis

Maan (raising his eyebrow): Because of me?

Geet (realizing wat she has said): ya. Wo u get me engrossed in so much work dat sumtymes I get irritated nd all dis happens

Maan (smirks): o really?

Geet: ya.

Maan: ok but still u consult a psychiatrist. U knw may be u think dat all dis is because of stress but d fact is its because of Schizophrenia

Ok now Geet cant take dis anymore. He was continuously calling her patient of Schizophrenia. She start hitting him on his Shoulders while he just tries to defend himself

Geet: u called me Schizophrenic, hw dare u?

Maan: Geet, Geet stop. I was just kidding

Geet: No. its not funny. U mean it literally. I'll not leave u.

She said while continuously hitting him. Finally Maan hold her both of his hands nd pinned her against d Sofa to make her stop while he on top of her. Both were lost in each other's eyes. She looked at him nd her mind stopped working wen she saw him so close to her. Dere faces were just mere inches away. Her throat went dry not sure wat to say or wat to do. D whole room was silent only d sound of dere thumping heart is audible. He could feel d sounds of her rapid heartbeats. At dat moment Maan just wanted to kiss her, to tell her hw much he love her, hw much is he craving for her. he looked into her eyes from one eye to another searching his love. Geet's Breath was getting heavier. His intoxic scent was making her insane. It was getting hard for her to conrol herself. He moves his one hand towards his face nd slowly caress her face wid his fingers giving her Goosebumps. She closed her eyes feeling his soft touch. But soon realization struck her nd she opens her yes instantly nd looked other way. Maan realizes wat dey were doing nd he too instantly gets up form her nd stands. Geet too stands from d couch nd looked other way. Both were embarresed for d situation, Geet more. Not sure wat dey should say to each other. Both turned to each other at d same tym to say sumthing. Finally Geet spoke to him.

Geet: Coffee is finish. Can we go nw?

Maan: ya. Sure

He said nd dey both headed outside d home towards his car.

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It was 2 hr. when dey both left from Mumbai nd has covered almost half Distance nd were on Highway now. Geet notices dat Maan was continuously attending d calls dat comes from office. She never allowed dis to anyone specially him to talk while driving whether if he was using Bluetooth also. She can see his sincerity towards work. In dis 2 hrs he had atleast attended more den 50 calls telling Adi about wat to Do nd wat not; den telling to his secretary to postpohne which meeting etc etc. she smiles seeing him like dis. she was happy to see him so much dedicated towards work. He was definitely not d same Maan dat she knows; dat Maan has never taken anything seriously, neither his studies nor their relationship. She frowned thinking of their relationship at past but den look at Maan who has completely changed now, who is now serious towards everything; towards his work, his goal nd may be towards dere relationship also. But wait wat was she thinking, y is she thinking about dere Relationship. She shrugged off all her thoughts nd den again looks at Maan who was still on call

Maan: ya Adi, ask Mr. Mehta dat we'll attend d Meeting next week for sure. Ya nd also ask him to...

He couldn't complete as Geet has taken out d Bluetooth from his Ear nd disconnects it. She was tired of seeing him on call nd it was getting on her nerves now derefore she takes out d Bluetooth from his ear nd cuts d call while Maan gave him an angry glare

Geet: Wat?

Maan: wat have u done?

Geet: wat had I done now?

Maan: y had u taken out my Bluetooth. Can't u see dat I was on important call?

Geet: ya. From last 2 hrs ur every call was important. But enough nw. nw u r not going to take anymore calls

Maan: Geet pls. let me take dis one. Acha promise dis will be d Last one. See its really important.

Geet: no.

Maan: But Geet...

Geet: Maan I said no means no. u know Na dat I don't allow anyone to talk on call while driving; specially u. there's no chance m going to allow u to talk on call during Driving. Definitely not. I won't allow u to talk on call during Driving at any cost.

Maan (stopped d Car nd looked into her eyes): y?

Geet: Becoz I Lo... (she left her sentence in middle realizing wat she was about to say)

Maan (leaning towards her while still looking in her eyes): Bolo Na Geet. y? Y u dnt want me specially to talk on call while driving?

Geet (Looking in his eyes): Because I...

Maan: Because u wat Geet?

Geet (quickly looks other way): Because m sitting here wid u, nd derefore I dnt want u to talk on call nd concentrate on driving, as we r at Highway nd lack of concentration can cause to accident.

She said all in one breath without looking at him once because she knows dat she cant able to say anything if she keeps looking into his eyes. Maan looks at her for a while knowing very well dat she was lyieng because she has not said all dat while looking into his eyes. he knows y she stopped him to talk on call while driving, because she care for him like before. Before also she never allowed him to talk on call while driving even if he was talking to her also nd today also she's d same. But he didn't understand dat y is she denying her own feelings wen both of dem knows dat wat was she saying was nothing but an excuse to cover up her emotions. He sighed nd looked at d Road.

Maan: Geet Dnt worry. I'll be careful while driving. Nothing wrong will happen

Geet (irritated): Fine u dnt want to listen to me. Den here's ur Bluetooth (she said while handling it to him) Do whatever u want. Waise bhi tumne meri baat suni hi kab hai jo ab sunoge

She said nd looked outside d Window. Maan can only smile on her dominating nature. Even she dnt know dat she's still showing her Rights on him unknowingly. He keeps d Bluetooth at Dashboard making sure dat she notices it. Geet looks at it from corner of her eyes nd smiles inwardly but pretended to be unnoticed. Maan shakes her head nd smiles nd again started to Drive

Another half an hour has been passed but Geet didn't spoke anything throughout d Journey while Maan was just stealing glances of her. Her silence was continuously disturbing him. He wanted her to speak to him, whether it's for anything; but nothing clicked to his mind. Finally he remembers sumthing nd smiled. He looked at Geet who was still looking outside d window.

Maan: Geet

Geet: ya

Maan: wo... I was thinking to play sum music as its getting hard for me to concentrate on driving wid such a quiet atmosphere. Nd waise bhi Kisi ne kaha hai ki "Wenever u feel alone or gets frustrated on sumthing start Listening to music. We'll get relax for sum moment"

Geet looks at him remembering sumthing familiar. Dis was d thing she use to say to him. Somewhere she felt happy dat he still remembers wat she use to say; But couldn't able to think y is he saying all dis nw

Geet: So r u feeling alone?

Maan: Well, not really but since u r not speaking a word sop it seems dat m driving all alone

Geet: Nothing like dat, wo I was thinking sumthing

Maan: o really wats it?

Geet: nothing important.

Maan: ok as u wish, so can I switch on d music

Geet: Maan, since wen u need to seek anyone's permission

Maan: u r not anyone Geet

Geet looked at him in both surprise nd awe but den quickly looked down knowing dat she'll lose herself again. Maan takes it as her consent so he switched on d FM of his car nd surf thru d stations to hear sum good songs. Finally he stops at one station nd raises d Volume of d Radio. D song has just started derefore he moves back nd listens to d song

Kehne ko Jashan-e-bahara hai
Ishq yeh dekhke hairaan hai

Kehne ko Jashan-e-bahara hai
Ishq yeh dekhke hairaan hai

Phool se khusboo khafa khafa hai gulshan mein
Chupa hai koi ranj fiza ki chilman mein

Sare sehmein nazare hain
Soye soye vaqt ke dhare hain
Aur dil mein koi khoyi si baatein hain

Kehne ko Jashan-e-bahara hai
Ishq yeh dekhke hairaan hai

Phool se khusboo khafa khafa hai gulsan mein
Chupa hai koi ranj fiza ki chilman mein


Geet looked at Maan as soon as she heard d Song, but he was pretending like nothing happened nd looked towards Road. She said nothing neither changed d channel but quietly looks outside d Window. Maan looks at her but seeing her looking outside d Window he agains concentrate on d road. He smiles inwardly as dis Song totally suits to dere present Condition.

Geet too feel conscious as d Lyrics of d song going as dey were pouring out dere Feelings infact more of Maan's Feelings but yet she didn't have courage to change d channel.

Music...

Both thinks of all d beautiful moments dat dey had spend in dere past. Dere cute fights, his pampering her. Geet's concern towards Maan everything. Den thinks their Present situation; Where dey r now. Their current relationship just like unknown strangers as she said earlier

Kaise kahen kya hai sitam
Sochte hai abb yeh hum
Koi kaise kahen woh hai ya nahi humare
Karte to hai saath Safar
Fasle hain phir bhi magar
Jaise milte nahi Kisi dariya ke do kinare


Maan again looks at Geet wid d hope dat she looks at him once so he can atleast make her understand dat he means dis lyrics literally. He can clearly sees it in her eyes d concern, d Love towards him but Everytym she covers up her emotions wid her cold Attitude towards him.

Dere was once a tym wen dey were together like two bodies nd one soul nd now dey were going in two separate ways. They were going together yet not together.

Pass hain phir bhi paas nahi
Humko yeh gum raas nahi
Seeshe ki ek diware hai jaise darmiyan

Sare sehmein nazare hain
Soye soye vaqt ke dhare hain
Aur dil mein koi khoyi si baatein hain

Kehne ko Jashan-e-bahara hai
Ishq yeh dekhke hairaan hai

Phool se khusboo khafa khafa hai gulshan mein
Chupa hai koi ranj fiza ki chilman mein

He again looks ahead at d Road. Corner of his eyes were burning due to distance between dem. Dey both were so close yet so far. He don't want dis, he never wanted dis nd neither she. But yet today dey both r in dis condition just because of his one small mistake nd her not giving him another chance

D atmosphere around dem was so pleasant, so lovely. She always wanted to spend tym wid him in dis kind of environment where dere is no one to disturb dem; just d two of dem nd today wen all dis is happening den also she's not happy due to distance between dem nd dis environment is also not helping dem in any way but only making dem remembering dere old memeories.


Music...


Geet can't take dis anymore. D lyrics of d songs were making her feel uncomfortable, derefore she decided to switch off d radio. She extends her hand to switch it off. At d same tym Maan too extends her hand to change d station as he can feel Geet's comfortableness nd dis is wen dere hands touched. Both looked at each other for some moment nd den bring dere hands back nd looked other way


Humne ne jo tha nagma suna
Dil ne tha usko chuna
Yeh dastan humen vaqt ne kaise sunai

Humjo agar hai gumgin
Woh bhi udhar khush to nahi
Mulakato mein jaise ghul si gai tanhai


Both remembers wen dey first met each other at dat moment none of dem has thought dat sumday dey'll fall in Love wid each other especially Maan. But later he realizes dat he has fallen in Love wid Geet at d very first sight of her but today everything has changed, dere relationship has again gone to d same place from where it has started or more back from it.

He was in pain nd so was she. Pain of staying away from each other; Pain of his Remorses; Pain of her hurt heart. May be datsy still dey cant be wid each other in d way like dey were 5 yrs back. Hw badly dey both wanted to have everything like before but she knows dat nothing can be like before.


Milke bhi hum milte nahi
Khilke bhi gul khilte nahi

Aankhon mein hai baharein dil mein khilza


They both looked at each other. Both Love nd Pain can easily be seen in dere eyes for each other. His eyes search to see only Love in her eyes but has just seen d reflection of her hurt nd broken heart.

Sare sehmein nazare hain
Soye soye vaqt ke dhare hain
Aur dil mein koi khoyi si baatein hain

o hoo Kehne ko Jashan-e-bahara hai
Ishq yeh dekhke hairaan hai

Phool se khusboo khafa khafa hai gulshan mein
Chupa hai koi ranj fiza ki chilman mein

He looked away from her not able to see pain in her eyes. She also started looking outside d Window wiping d drop of tear dat has formed at d corner of her eyes nd takes a deep breath to control her emotions.

Both were quiet just lost in each other's thoughts. Nothing was helping dem; neither dis Romantic Aura nor Music nor anything else. Infact all dis seems to be meaningless to dem. D fragnance of flowers, d aroma of environment everything due to d Distance dat was between dem.

May be dats wat dere Destiny has stored for both of dem but really? Is it wat dere Destiny has stored for both of dem? R dey both has gone so much Far from each dat dey can never be together? All dis thoughts were running in dere minds as d song came to an end.

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Finally Maan switches off d Radio. He knows dat nothing is going to help dem right now instead will bring back d hurtful memories to her which she was trying to forget. His thoughts were distracted wen he heard d Geet's cell phone ringing. Geet didn't noticed it as she was too lost in her thoughts. She came into her senses wen Maan shrugs her shoulders

Maan: Geet (while shrugging her shoulders)

Geet: Ya wat happen?

Maan: nothing wo ur cellphone is ringing. (He said while pointing towards her cell phone)

Geet: oh sorry! I didn't notice.

She said nd picks up her cell from Dashboard. A wide smile spread on her face wen she saw d name flashing over dere. It was Armaan's call. Hw much she needed dis tym to talk to him, because she knows dat dis tym it was he only who can make her feel better. Maan noticed her smile nd was happy also dat finally she smiled but he wonders whose call was it which makes her smile dis much. He was very curious to know. In d meantym Geet picks up d call.

Geet: Hey! Hws u? U knw hw much I missed u?

Armaan: o ya! Datsy u haven't called me in last 3 weeks. It seems dat my Kiddo has forgetten me after going to India. It's been 1 month only since u have gone to India nd u have changed dis much

Geet: Correction its 1 month nd 1 week. Nd waise bhi same goes for u also. if I haven't called den u too haven't called me nd nw blaming me. U knw wat tum ladko ki problem hi yahi hoti hai, u guys never accept ur mistakes nd always blames us

Maan alerts as soon as he heard dat she was actually talking to a guy. As far as he knows her she never talks to any guy so freely other den him nd Yash or her friend Armaan den who could it be to whom she was talking. He knows dat dis cant be Yash for sure otherwise she wouldn't have complaint of not calling from 3 weeks; den can it be Armaan, but den he shrug off her thoughts thinking dat if it would be Armaan den she would have taken his name once but she didn't. he was so curious to know dat to whom is she talking.

Armaan: o ya! Now its d mistake of we guys? U knw wat u all r d same always blames us like we r d biggest sinners.

Geet: Awww mere Baby ko bura lag gaya. So sad! (She said nd giggles)

Maan was actually feeling jealous. First of all she was talking to some other guy so freely while wid him (Maan) she always be quiet nd secondly she was talking like she has very close relation wid dat guy. God knows who's he?

Armaan: ya has lo! Tum bhi has lo. Nobody cares for me

Geet: arey kya baat hai jo aaj itna bhadak rahe ho. Mood kharab hai?

Armaan: ya

Geet: y?

Armaan: Wo... I had fight wid Shilpa

Geet: Wat? Fir se? nw wat happened?

Armaan: Wo... Actually I had visited to her hospital to give her surprise nd she was on duty infact was handling an emergency nd I just barged over dere asking her to cum wid me. She refused but I didn't listened nd finally she shouts at me nd asks me to leave from dere. Mujhe gussa aa gaya so I also said her dat I'll never talk to her in future

Geet: Den?

Armaan: After dat she called me numerous tymes to apologize to me infact has send me text also but I didn't replied so she also get irritated nd stopped calling or msging me nd now...

Geet: nd now u r realizing ur mistake dat u had overreacted dat tym

Armaan (slowly): ya

Geet: u'll never change. Always over-react. Main waha se aayi nahi ki tumne problem create kar di.

Armaan: Ab sorry to bol raha hoon na.

Geet: Sorry, first make everything mess nd den say Sorry. Acha main baat karu usse?

Armaan:no u dnt talk to her

Geet: but y?

Armaan: I wanted to handle it myself

Geet: den y did u told me?

Armaan: wo I wanted to share it wid u. so I called u. Anyways u tell hws everything over dere? Everything is fine na

Geet (slowly): ya

Armaan: is Maan is wid u?

Geet looked at Maan who was looking at d Road but least she knows dat he was not concentrating on Driving anymore actually he was concentrating on d convo between Geet nd other guy nd looking at her smile from d corner of his eyes

Geet: ya.

Armaan: Kiddo u fine na? I mean u r wid Maan. So r u feeling ok?

Geet: Haan Baba dnt worry m perfectly Fine. Tum ho Na mere saath. Tumhare hote hue mujhe kuch ho sakta hai.

Ok now it has added more fuel to Maan's burning heart. his curiosity was only increasing to know about d person on d other side at whom Geet has dis much trust dat she knows dat she'll be safe wid him. Yes he accepted d fact dat he was jealous from d guy whom he even don't know

Armaan: Dats like my Devdas. Love u Devdas nd miss u.

Geet (smiles): Love u Too nd miss u too my...

She couldn't able to complete as Maan takes d phone away from her nd cuts d call. Dats it he cant take it anymore not especially after listening Geet saying Luv u to sumone else. He was burning so much in jealousy just by thinking d fact dat Geet, his Geet in in Love wid sumone else. He wonders hw will he able to tolerate if she herself will told him dat she's in Love wid someone else


Armaan looks at his cellphone by d sudden disconnection of call but den he thought may be its due to network Problem. So he shrugs his thoughts to other side nd starts thinking of way to manofy Shilpa.

Geet gives an angry glare to Maan for disconnecting her call like dis but Maan didn't cared nd looked ahead as if nothing happened. He was feeling so relieved dat she's not talking on phone anymore but Geet she needs as explanation for his sudden weird behaviour; to come between d conversation between her nd her Best Buddy. Maan looks at her den again looks at road wid a smile on his face which irritates her more

Geet: Will u bother to tell me, y did u do dis?

Maan: Wat?

Geet: dnt act innocent Maan, u very well know wat u had done?

Maan: but wat I had done Geet

Geet: y did u cut my call? Do u knw to whom m talking?

Maan: no I dnt nd I dnt even want to know

Geet: dis is not d answer of my question. Tell me y did u cut my call

Maan: because I was not able to concentrate on driving

Geet: Wat rubbish?

Maan: ya, I was not able to concentrate due to ur continous blabbering nd BTW y r u getting so much hyper? U too had cut my call nd said not to talk on call while driving infact my call was important one

Geet: I said dat for ur benefit only as u were not able to concentrate on Driving due to d continous calls nd for ur kind information I was not Driving ok nd hw can u say dat my call was not important

Maan (mutters): Ya. Dat I could see (den to her) I was getting disturbed nw also due to ur dose Lovey-Dovey talks wid dat guy

Geet: wat? Do u have any idea wat u r saying?

Maan (looks at her): ya very well.

Geet: No u dnt. U knw whose call was it? I was talking to...

She said nd stops in mid as she saw a Truck cuming towards dem nd Maan was not able to see as he was looking at her. her eyes widened in Horror nd she instantly screamed.

Geet: MAAN LOOK AHEAD!!!!!

He instantly look ahead nd saw d sight in front of him. He quickly turned his steering wheel to change d direction of d car to avoid it from colliding it to d Truck. He looked at Geet who was hell scared.

Maan: Geet, pareshan mat ho. I'll not let anything happen to u.

Geet looked at Maan who was trying his best to control d car. She could sense dat he didn't care for his own life but for only hers. She silently prayed dat everything turned to be fine nd dey both get safe nd if not she den he gets safe from dis Accident

Geet: Pls Babaji! Dnt let happen anything to Maan. Take my Life instead but pls Maan ko kuch mat hone dijiyega.

She silently prayed nd opens her eyes to look once again at Maan nd suddenly Maan turned his car sideways nd last she hears d sound of CRREEEKKK!!!!! Wid her eyes closed not sure dat dey were still alive or has reached to heaven.


OK so dis is it guys. nw tell me hw many of u wanted to throw Jutis nd Chappals on me for u all at worst Cliff hanger but wat to do. aadat se majboor hoon. Gabbar i had fulfilled ur Both wishes. u were missing Armaan na so i had included him nd showed Maan jealous also. now better comment soon. hope u all r going to like dis Part. Dis whole part is full of Maaneet so i better want Long comments. Pls Feel Free to criticise if u all dnt like it. Hit d Like Button if u all like it nd Do Leave ur Comment/criticism. its necessary.😊


P.S. Forgive me for my weird Imagination of song Sequence


Luv Aakriti😊😊

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Next - THREAD 2

Edited by aakritisri1111 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Aakriti So finally i got tym to comment. Sorry couldnt able to comment yesterday itself. But hey m the Third one to comment wow i actually secured 3rd Position. Chalo kahi to top 3 me hoon😆.

Anyways nw cuming to ur update well Do i need to say dat it was super-duper Rocking update. i guess no as u urself realize it by now after reading so many amazing comments till nw. u r really an Awesome Writer Dear.

I was totally engrossed in d update while reading nd can actually visualise everything nd i truly loved d Geet's loving nd caring nature towards Maan. I know True Love can never stop caring no matter how much differences r there between them but at d end of the day, Geet truly loves Maan nd u had showed it beautifully over here. even in her anger also her care, her Love can easily be noticed over here.

nd ya not 2 forget the song sequence. it totally suits over here nd d cond. of Both Maan nd Geet has been beautifully shown infact more of Maan's. i understand from wat he's going through but i also know that its not easy to forgive someone who was so close to u nd yet breaks your heart.

Nd ya dat jealousy part well as being a guy i totally understand wat Maan was feeling at dat tym when Geet was talking to Armaan. he was burning in jealousy man! nd to be frank any guy would feel jealous if he saw her lady love talking to sumone so freely. so Maan's condition can easily be understood over here. infact i can see his face in front of me.

But wait y did u leave it at d cliff hanger yaar. that accident part was really scary but for one thing i m sure dat nothing wrong will happen to dem until dey both r wid each other and especially to Maan until Geet is with him. i m sure that they both will turned out to be safe.

Well dis is it. wow i really speaks a lot but wat to do ur FF make me comment so much. Loved it nd waiting eagerly for next part. pls continue soon.
Edited by lovemyangel - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh ho, u have already updated, and I am still posting waiting msg.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear wow loved that u filled the update with maaneet moment for this u deserves a and also hate u for leaving us in cliff hangerhope that nothing happens to geet and maan

i want to give u a complement u r an awesome writer

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