MAANEET SS: THIS IS NOT THE END THREAD 1

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Water

@Water.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#411

From Geet to Maan

It seems like it was just yesterday

When I had you as close as you could be with me

It seems like it was just yesterday

When I used to dream about my life with you

It seems like it was just yesterday

When my life took me away from you

I left you because you broke my heart

I left you because you broke my trust

I left you because you shattered me into millions of pieces

I left you because my heart could not bear all the pain given by you

Each day, each hour, each minute and each second

I was not able to get you out of my mind

I prayed for your safety and your happiness

I prayed that all your wishes and desires come true

Each new dawn reminded me only of you

Each night was spent dreaming only about you

I achieved the highest successes that I could in my life

I achieved my dream of where I wanted to be in my life

But they seemed nothing in compare to my dream of being with you

I feel incomplete without you

I feel unhappy without you

And I have never been able to forget you

I consoled myself by saying that you had moved on

I consoled myself by saying that I was in a better place without you

I masked my hope by saying that I would never meet you

Yet, here I am

Standing if front of you after five long years

And it seems like it was just yesterday

When I was standing in front of you.

My heart is fluttering as I stand in front of you

My eyes are teary as I stand in front of you

The world is slowly fading away as I stand in front of you

My brain seems to have stopped functioning as I stand in front of you

I pinch myself to see if this is a dream as I stand in front of you

But, it is real, you are here in front of me... as I stand in front of you

And it seems like it was just yesterday

When I was standing in front of you.

Edited by Water. - 13 years ago

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#412

"Not even in her dreams she has thought of meeting Maan again like dis. dere eyes locked instantly nd dey couldn't see anything but each other. The world around dem seems to be still. Lots of emotions were playing in both of their eyes; Happiness, Love, pain, anger, restlessness, loneliness. He just stood dere dumbstruck looking at his Angel right in front of him. tears has started forming in both of dere eyes. he instantly wanted to hug her close, to complain her y she left like dat"

Very nice update Aakriti… At last they both met….good emotional writing… pl update very very very soon… Thanks for PM.

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NH1971

@NH1971

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#413

Awesome super loved it thanku

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#414

phew .. man that was loong ...

but I loved it .. t'was awesome ... and lady no more big pangas now ... no MUs at all ... bohat pain shain ho gaya ... uff itnay time se saddy updates aa rahay hain .. abhee happy ones mangta hai ...

Wo miley hai ek baar fir saath judne ke liye ya miley hai mil kar bichadne ke liye ... they better have met for "saath judne ke liye" otherwise another gabbar will be ready to torture u .. samjhi tum ...

next update kab mil raha hai ... cant wait now ... its ur fault .. why did u stop at such a crucial stage ... u better update super soon ...

and yes I am giving u dhamki .. 😈

love

Sana

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Anu

@anuandavi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#415

That was a very very long update. It was awesome. Finally they met. Hope Geet comes back to him. Both r suffering a lot due to this lambi judai.

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mysteriousmilli

@mysteriousmilli

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#416

Thank you Aakriti for giving such a awesome update...

please continue soon...

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sweet scorpio

@sweet scorpio

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#417

just read the remaining parts!

awesomeee!!!!!

loved it!

continue soon!

thnx 4 the pms!:)

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#418

for the long update

So finally Geet back in India to fulfill her dreams 👍🏼

And Maan is the MD ... interesting ! I'm very eager to see Geet's overt response ; wanna see whether she will be the same emotional or she has evolved . To take decisions with mind as per situation ; revealing her vulnerability or not ???

Loved the update 👍🏼

Thanks for pm ...