Stardust - Link to thread 2 on pg 1 - Page 85

Originally posted by: cant.be.assed.

You know i was supposed to update RHT today but i guess i have to do this now and postpone the update... sigh...

Originally posted by: Sanaa629

awwh..bechari 😲...I've stopped believing you..update RHT on the weekend..then I can comment properly on it as well..😆

And you're talking as thoughit'll take you ten hours to comment!!! it'll take you half an hour..and then you can spend another hour or two updating..problem solved...😃

Originally posted by: cant.be.assed.

Damn it didn't work :| It does take ten hours! I am a slow typer plus i point out every single detail😆

Originally posted by: Aanya.

Z. GO AND COMMENT. 😳

Originally posted by: cant.be.assed.

Erm give me the page number, it's not in the title anymore :/😆

First of all, Hats off really yar wat an amazing OS...I loved this OS. Totally Fresh idea and wonderfully written...writ my name in ur fan list dear dat too in CAPS lock...u made me speechless yar toh how will i give u a long comment nw..tell me...😳😲..now lemme try...😉

the way u started i thought Riddhima had seen some murder or something she might be witness but u shocked me by making her rape victim..den the way u showed her emotions, emotional breakdowns, den her fighting spirit, details of dat Bas**** , you didn't encounter Riddhima as rape victim frequently...too good...writing on such a concept and reaching the point were reader actually relate to the characters and story is really commendable... OS of Riddhima being a victim of rape, den not missing any details be it dat night or in court room and Armaan playing the role of the lawyer of the rapist is key points of this OS...u didn't made it sound like some episode of daily soap, all the court sessions looked like real case and this is the thing which makes this OS stood ahead from the rest of OS's.

The way you've importance to every character be it Riddhima, Armaan, Rahul or dat Jerk Sahil is truly superb..

i cant explain how much i loved Riddhima's character, u portrayed it so flawlessly and beautifully...her fears, her pain, all the nightmares she used to get every night, the way she can't speak all that she wanted to in the court'.the way she stood up' for herself and her friends.

"There is no way I will stop trying to save people's lives, even when the likes of you try to destroy mine." wat a line..so meaningful and catchy...

"I, I'll get by
I, I'll survive
When the world is crashing down
When I fall and hit the ground
I will turn myself around
Don't you try to stop me
I, I won't cry"

u choose lines which made d scene more emotional...

Armaan' OMG...love him...kya lawyer h yar...i never saw in lawyer avatar toh it was totally new and superb change for him...He was the true hero of this OS... Even though, in starting he was doing his job as he's been payed to fight from Sohail's side, he did felt bad for Riddhima... He does what his heart directed him to do...he was doing dat for his father...this is what I truly appreciate in his character dat he did felt guilty...

Muskaan and Rahul' loved both of them...they supported her so much...every single time...the best friends anyone could ask for...They did all that was in their limits...stood for her...Always supported her, never letting her feel down...muahhh

And Sohail'kya kahu iss kamine ke liye mann karta hai itna maru na saale ko ki duniya se dafa ho haye... he was such a b*****d...jerk...jitni galia du kam hai... why people like him still exist in this world cant they just go to hell...but according to me living on earth is same thing phewww...

I m so happy dat Armaan finally gave clue to Rahul ...which helped Rahul to win the case and send dat Kamina Sahil behind the bars...😊

the end of OS was perfect but still if u have time do write epilogue...would love to read...

i just loved this OS...do ryt more Sanaa...Your writing style, the concept, the characters is really amazing and awesome...

You wanted long comments on this na see i tried my best to give u longgg comment, I hope I gave you one...😳. Yeshhh This is the longest comment I've ever wrote for any OS/FF...claps for me too...😉. But credit goes to ur OS which made me so restless to comment...This story truly deserve lost of comments and likes

Lots of love

Jannat